Shivi TS: Pyaar ya fikar?...dono. Pt3 pg4 *completed*

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Hey you guys! So Here, I present you my 1st one shot about shivi...previously I wrote Shivi ft Progression in collab with my friend @S_verma....its about the current track, and also the new montage is actually very deep & meaningful; I will be writing more after my exams get over i.e. after august end, but as i wanted to add my imagination in some SHIVI scenes after yesterday's episode I've written an OS...enjoy reading!!❤️

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It was indeed a long day for Shiva today as his day started by working for making

room for his beloved Gombi & Bhabhi, and then as he had a violent face off with Janardan regarding the property papers

He arrived home, he looked tired, bathed in sweat, his clothes were dirt; blood oozing out from sides of his lips and his right

hand injured, he even had some minor injuries.As he entered he sees everyone waiting for him, but his eyes drop his Raavi who was pacing around in the

aangan and muttering things to herself, playing with corner of her dupatta, her face was extremely tensed; he gazed at her as he entered but got disturbed as

everyone rushed to him, she stood still as everyone rushed to him blocking his way. She saw him, she stood still as everyone had everyone rushed towards him by now,she

quickly got the first aid kit & waited as Gombi & Dhara &nDev were inquiring him about what happened.

(dev-dev,Dhara-D,G-Gombi,S-Shiva,R-Raavi

D:Yeh kya halat bana rakhi hai Shiva tune...mana kiya tha na maine tujhe...

G:Shiva bola tha na sambhal ke

Dev:Us Janardan ko to msi dekhta hu

S:Arre rehne dena Dev kaam hogaya(hands papers to Gombi)

D:Arre Raavi tu udhar kyu khadi hai...kabse itni pareshan thi ab jab aagaya hai to dur khadi khadi dekh rahi hai, aaja aake is bandar ko patti karde

aur fir fresh hoke tum dono khaana khane aajao

Raavi nods & goes near Shiva.Everyone disperses to let them alone for a while.

R:Shiva...tu thik hai na?dekh kitni chot lagi hai...chal tujhe davai lagaa deti hu

(Grabs his left hand while he first looks her widened eyes, as he felt good but as he is being cold and rude with her

purposedly he pushes away her hand harshly)

S:Bola tha na dur reh!Nahi chahiye teri fikar...(starts moving away but Raavi again grabs his hand, this time with all her force)

R:Dekh Shiva zid mat kar chal...pleas(her eyes are teary and she looks hurt)

(In their room,she makes him sit & starts cleaning his wounds and blowing softly on it as she was so engrossed she didn't realise as she went near him

but Shiva was gazing her, as if he was searching something in her eyes or maybe he was into an internal turmoil of might she must be feeling or what

exactly does she wants, he could see care and affection for him in her eyes but maybe his mind was not able to accept these facts. While cleaning the dried line of blood

near his lip she was blowing air and was too close that it felt like she was going to kiss, as she realised she separated herself and stood up.)

R:Hogaya...garam paani rakha hai naha lega to fresh feel karega aur dard bhi kam hojayega

(Shiva was staring her continuously but looked away immediately as she spoke and waled off.In the shower,he remembered that since diary kaand, he has been very rude to her,...

no, not only rude but cold, extremely cold...but what kind of a person she is, she was literally ready to give her jewellry for arrangement of money; she was trying to

help him though he was being very rude and cold to her;she never let anyone recognose but was really hurt, he thought.He again thought that this is maybe one of the reasons he

didnot deserved her...after the shower as he was going to kitchen he overheard Raavi and Dhara's conversation)

D:Shant hoja Raavi tujhe to pata hai na Shiva esa hi hai...aur uska gussa to sirf tu hi sambhal sakti hai...aur sab to Raavi nahi hai na?Chal ab ro mat aur yeh lo tum dono khana kha lo

tune bhi to uski fikar karne mein kuch khaya hi nahi hai subah se...

R:Par Dhara di aap batao na mai kya karu, voh bandar to mujhse baat hi karna nahi chahta, mai kitni koshish kar rahi hu par yeh gadheda to mujhe sunta hi nahi

D:Raavi, tu koshish mat haar...ekdin tujhe samjhega voh, usse bhi teri bohot fikar hai...aur bhaagega kahan voh?kahi nahi jaayega

Arre Shiva tu aagaya...chal aaja khana kha lo tum dono mai ma ke per ki maalish karne ja rahi hu...Aur Raavi isko haldivala dudh pila dena zakhm jaldi thik hojayenge...

(as she leaves, she sees his hand injured)Ek aur baat, Raavi ek kaam karegi?aShiva ko khana khila

S:Bhabhi mai kha lunga koi zarurat nahi is chipkali ko bolne ki

D:Shiva tu na chup hi reh! Tu na bohot manmaani kar raha hai kisiki baat sun bhi liya kar

S:pan bhabhi...

D:bola na chup...tujhe meri kasam(walks away)

Raavi comes with plate and starts feeding him,that too exact morsel he would be eating normally if he ate by his own...how minuetly she had observed him, he wondered.

R:kaisa bana hai?

Shiva doesn't answer as he is staring her face and lost in his own thoughts.

R:Shiva tujhse puch rahi hu..kaisa bana hai?

S:han...hann thik bana hai...Vese yeh bata tune khana kyun nahi khaya?( as she was about to answer, he breaks her and continues) haan sabko dikhane ke liye ke mujhe bohot fikar hai,mai bohot pareshan hu....par yeh sab natak mere saamne to mat hi kar...

R:chupkar Shiva tujhe kuch nahi pata

S:mera hogaya tu kha le...

Shiva stood up and started walking.She grabs his wrist stopping him from walking off.

R:Oye hero ruk!Haldi wala dudh to pike ja...varna Dhara di tere saath saath meri bhi class le legi

Shiva removes her hand and starts walking hastily like a kid does.

S:dekh chipkali mai nai pinevala voh tujhe jo karna hai kar...

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To be continued in 2nd part.

I've really packed schedule so i broke this os into two parts.sorry

Hope you guys liked it...Ik its more kind of lame but I found it cute.Anyways all honest reviews are appreciated.Happy reading!

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Lovely! What will it take for him to come around?! Hope Raavi manges to convince him soon!

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Loved it. ❤️


Waiting for the next part.

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Wow this is amazing! Beautifully written🤩🤩 Cannot wait for part 2 !!

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Love it! Looking forward to the next chapter ❤️

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Beautiful dr

Costume soon

Do write more

Interesting title

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Looveed this…

Cant wait for the next chapter.

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My baby glad to have you here☺❤....ab gadar machega na🤣..and look at the excitement level for part 2..

I assure you all next part will be unloaded soon😉😘

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I will definetly try to update soon...its written but typing is left lol

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Originally posted by: S_Verma

My baby glad to have you here☺❤....ab gadar machega na🤣..and look at the excitement level for part 2..

I assure you all next part will be unloaded soon😉😘

Haha..how well you know me...definetly gonna update soon and write more ff or ss or ts but after somedays

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