ShiVi SS ~ Deewangi [Ch 1, Pg 2, 23/7] - Page 2

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Posted: 4 years ago
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I was wondering how Shiva's character would be in this based on the first paragraph

Looks like all of them have their own motives 😆

Maza aayega

Will be waiting for the update

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Amazing.....great start ❤️❤️❤️

Can't wait to read the next update 😊😊😘😘

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Posted: 4 years ago
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It's interesting.

Do continue soon.

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Chapter 1

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Shiva glared daggers at the girl standing in front of him. How dare she behave like this.

Shiva!! Kya kar raha hai?? Hatt saamne se.

His temper flared even more at her words. As if he'll do what she's saying. He will always stand between her and Dev. She won't be able to save her relationship. Not for long. His brother won't be able to handle her. And what does she think she was doing?? Hugging Dev so tightly that too in his store.

Ye Pandya store hai tera bedroom nahi.

Shiva snapped at her irritated as the scene keeps coming in front of his eyes. He felt like killing his own brother.

Aur Dev mera boyfriend hai.

Shiva gritted his teeth at her declaration. He knows that very well. Her madness for Dev hurts him and he always channels that hurt into his anger.

Exactly! Boyfriend hai pati nahi. To apni limits me reh.

Shiva said warning her and smirked inwardly at the way her eyes flared.

Pati ban ne mein der lagegi kya usey?? Ek baat Dhara di se kahungi to rishta bhi pakka ho Jayega.

Shiva saw red as soon as she said that. No way in hell. He grabbed her arms harshly and pushed her to the nearby wall. If she really thinks that he would let any of this happen then she's the biggest idiot of Somnath.

Mere marne ke baad.

Shiva said bending slightly to her height and they both got engaged in a glaring session. Shiva knows she won't back down or surrender and that will make his win even more better.

To tu marne ki taiyaari kar le Shiva. Kyuki bohot jald main tere ghar aaungi. Teri bhabhi ban Kar.

Shiva snorted at her declaration. She'll come to his home alright, but not as his sister in law, in fact she'll be his very own wife even if he has to kill Dev.

Mere marne se jyada mujhe kisi ko maarne ki taiyaari karni hai.

Shiva said moving more close to her and she backed more to the wall with a gasp. Shiva smirked as he realised that Dev's girlfriend or not, she's still affected by his proximity.

Tu mera kuch nahi bigad sakta.

Shiva grabbed her hand and pulled her close to him while bending her hand behind her back.

Dekh lenge.

He whispered too close to her face and she winced as he tightened his hold on her hand slightly.

Shiva!! Chhod usey.

Shiva moved back still glaring at Raavi as Dev pulled him away. He gave one look to Dev and turned to move towards the back room.

I am really sorry Raavi.

Shiva looked at Dev at his words as clenched his fists as he saw Dev softly massaging her wrists. She just kissed Dev's cheek with a smile and left the store and Shiva stormed out of the store towards his home instead. He has no wish to hang around Dev lest he manages to kill him.

Shiva stopped as he saw his tree and ran towards it. He took out his phone as soon as he climbed and sat on the tree. He smiled slightly at the picture of hers he still has in his phone. It was of 2 years ago. He was very happy that day as he was finally getting his own room and they all had celebrated the addition of four more rooms in Pandya House. And as always his Chipkali had come with frames for all three of them. The problem was she has no good picture with him, so they got a picture clicked without fighting. Even though he put his Bhabhi and Gaumbi's picture in the frame, he still has this picture in his phone. They both looked so close here in this pic as he had his arm around her bare waist while her head is on his chest with her one hand on his chest and other around his neck.

Chipkali!! Bhabhi banegi tu meri?? Aisi halat kar dunga na ki mere alawa koi khayal hi nahi bachega tere paas, na dil mein aur na hi dimag mein.

Shiva whispered tracing his fingers softly over Raavi's picture. She's his and he won't let anyone come in between them, not even Dev or ther happiness.

Jitna pagal main hu na usse jyada tujhe kar dunga. Waada hai ye Shiva ka.

Shiva said determined about his decision. Its time to make himself clear about his Chipkali. Dev has to back off now. Enough of this girlfriend boyfriend nonsense.

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Raavi huffed annoyed at her Maasi's. First that bhootnath challenged her and now her Maasi is giving her a hard time.

Main kuch nahi jaanti Maasi, apko Dhara di se baat karni hogi.

Raavi snapped irritated and sat on the couch gritting her teeth at the pain in her wrists. Her bhootnath is getting too violent with her and she has to reign him.

Arey bhai abhi to tere aur Dev ke rishte ko ek saal bhi nahi hua. Abhi se kya jaldi padi hai?

Raavi looked ahead narrowing her eyes at her Maasi's words. She huffed as she remembered his threat. Does he really think he could do anything to her?? She's not a damsel in distress who needs a Prince Charming to save herself. If Shiva's fire then she's the storm. The same storm which could make fire uncontrollable if it's combined with it, but if it's against the fire then the fire won't hold any chance against the storm.

Mujhe Dev se jald se jald shaadi karni hai.

Raavi said to her family with a firm look and got up to move towards her room.

Kuch hua hai ke??

Raavi smiled sweetly at her Maasi's question. Of course something has happened. Her Shiva has happened.

Haan Maasi, pyaar hua hai mujhe. Poora Somnath jaanta hai ye.

Raavi said with a dreamy look and grinned at the double meaning of her own words. Whole Somnath knows how madly in love she is but they don't know the man of her dreams. Everyone thinks that she's obsessed with Dev but her heart and soul belongs to Shiva, just Shiva.

Accha theek hai chale jayenge hum kal subah.

Raavi frowned at her MaasaPa's words. Why are they waiting for tomorrow??

Kyu?? Abhi kyu nahi?

Raavi asked and saw her MaasaPa shaking his head while Anita Di chuckled at her.

Phone pe baat karenge ne pehle.

Raavi nodded at her Maasi and almost ran towards her room. She laid down on her bed after closing the door. Raavi opened her phone's locked folder and looked at the pic with a soft smile.

It's Shiva's picture in which he's laughing his heart out at something Krish said. He's standing at the door of the Pandya Store in just his red vest and pants looking like a model. She smiled as she kissed her phone closing her eyes. He's her madness. She could do anything for him and only he could handle her.

Shiva Pandya!! Main bhi dekhti hu tu kaise rokta hai mujhe tere paas rehne se. Agar Dev se shaadi bhi karna pade na to wo bhi kar lungi main par tera peecha nahi chhodne wali.

Raavi whispered to the picture and sighed at her thoughts. She stroked her wrist softly. She loves when he comes close to her, even though its just to fight.

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Krish came out of his room only to stop in his tracks as he saw Dev sitting on the stairs at the porch. What's wrong with him??

Krish moved to kitchen and took out the bottle from the fridge. He came out drinking the water and sat beside Dev giving the bottle to him.

Kya hua? Aisa pareshaan sa kyu baitha hai?

Krish asked looking at his brother curiously and Dev just sighed taking a sip of water.

Raavi kuch ajeeb behave kar rahi hai yaar.

Krish rolled his eyes at Dev's problem. This man can't even handle his own gf?? And by the way when did any man find his gf normal??

Girlfriend hai teri, ajeeb hi lagegi wo tujhe.

Krish said with a slight grin and saw Dev shaking his head. Dev turned to look at him as he put the bottle on the floor.

Aaj dukaan pe achanak mujhe hug kar liya wo bhi itna tightly.

Krish chuckled at Dev's words unable to understand why his brother is being so idiotic.

Abey isme ajeeb kya hai?

Krish asked and saw Dev glaring at him. Okay, did he say something wrong??

Yaar hum wo typical girlfriend boyfriend nahi hain. Aise usne mujhe aaj tak kabhi pehle hug nahi kiya.

Krish raised his eyebrows at the latest information. This is weird. The madness Raavi has for Dev is something else. Why has she been staying away from him from last 8 months when she's his official girlfriend?? What's going on??

Ho sakta hai wo comfortable ho gayi ho ab.

Krish said confused and saw Dev rolling his eyes. Okay!! He has to find out the whole story now.

Krish poori baat sun.

Krish nodded at Dev's words and looked at him curiously.

Usne mujhe hug kiya aur Shiva shop me enter hua.

Krish stiffened as soon as Dev said that. Since Raavi became Dev's gf, Shiva has changed. He's become more volatile, violent and angry, specially around Dev and Raavi. He knows that Shiva didn't talk to Dev properly since Dev announced his and Raavi's relationship last year.

Zinda hain na dono??

Krish asked worried about both of them. If Shiva has changed then Raavi has changed. There's a madness visible in her eyes which was never there before. And their fights became dangerous too.

Haan yaar, but Shiva ne bohot bura behave kiya Raavi ke saath.

Krish sighed hearing Dev's words. This is nothing new for them. They have always been at each other's throats since childhood but their fights never had the insanity. But all that had changed last year.

Dev!!

Both Dev and Krish got up hearing Dhara Bhabhi's voice. Looks like something has happened.

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Dev moved to Dhara Bhabhi's room along with Krish and frowned as she looked towards him all excited.

Bhabhi, aapne bulaya?

Dev asked and sat on the bed in front of her along with Krish.

Haan. Maami ka call aaya tha. Wo log kal ghar aa rahe hain.

Dev looked at his Bhabhi startled at her words and turned towards Krish only to see him all tensed.

Kyu??

Dev asked trying not to panic at the huge smile on his Bhabhi's face. He has no idea why but he sure he won't like whatever is going to happen.

Teri aur Raavi ki shaadi ke liye maa ko manane.

Dev's eyes widened in shock and Dhara Bhabhi moved out of her room all excited. Dev got up from the bed and came out to the porch again. Why do they all even think about marriage??

Shaadi?

Dev whispered with a frown on his face. He's just with Raavi because he doesn't want any type of relationship right now. He doesn't love her. In fact he always considered Raavi as his friend.

Dev, tu theek hai na?

Dev shook his head in a no at Krish's question. How could he be alright?? What's this happening in his life??

Ye shaadi ki baat ekdum se kaha se aayi?? Wo bhi Raavi se?

Dev asked and saw Krish looking at him worried.

Pakka Shiva ne hi kuch kaha hoga aur bhadak gayi hogi teri gf.

Dev closed his eyes irritated as he remembered their morning's interaction at the store. He can't marry Raavi. He just can't.

Main usse shaadi kaise kar sakta hu? Main usse pyaar nahi karta.

Dev said almost panicked and saw Krish gaping at him.

To usey gf bana ke kyu baitha hai gadhede?

Dev looked at Krish tensed as soon as he asked it. At that time this felt right, but right now he's feeling like he's putting himself in fire.

Taaki aur koi mere peeche na pade.

Dev replied and stiffened as he remembered Shiva. If Shiva got to know about this who knows what will happen. He doesn't want to lose his brother. Last time when he announced his relationship with Raavi Shiva became distant from him. Who knows what will happen this time.

Ab kya karega?

Dev shrugged at Krish's question unable to think anything and just turned around only to feel something struck his face, and he fell back on the ground. He blinked his eyes moving his face in pain and looked up only to see Shiva standing in front of him furiously with a gaping Krish beside him.

Dev got up taking deep breaths only to double over in pain as Shiva punched his stomach. Dev felt as if he'll lose his breath as Shiva punched him again and he fell down with even more force.

Shiva!!

Krish shouted and Dev crawled back as Krish grabbed Shiva's waist. But Dev could see that Shiva is ready to kill him today.

Dev flinched in pain as Shiva sat in front of him and pulled his collar harshly.

Kya kar raha hai, mar jayega wo.

Dev closed his eyes taking deep breaths as he heard Krish's voice from beside him. Dev knew Shiva will be angry, but Shiva's not just angry, he's out for blood, Dev's blood.

Iske uss Chipkali se shaadi karne se accha hai ki ye mar hi jaaye.

Dev opened his eyes and gulped at the expression on Shiva's face.

Shiva sun to....

Krish tried to intervene again but stopped as soon as Shiva glared at him.

Tu beech mein mat pad Krish.

Shiva snapped at Krish and Dev flinch at his loud voice. Dev's breath stopped and heart started hammering loudly as soon as Shiva directed his gaze towards him.

Aur tu kaan khol ke sunn le Dev. Agar tu uss mami ki behen ki beti se shaadi ka khayal bhi apne dil me laaya na to uss khayal ke saath saath tujhe bhi jalakar raakh kar dega ye Shiva.

Dev took a deep breath at Shiva's low voice and finally relaxed as Shiva turned around to leave. He just can't believe Shiva hates Raavi this much.

Wo girlfriend hai meri Shiva.

Dev said in a soft voice as he doesn't want to make Shiva more furious than he already is. Shiva turned around with a blank face but then his face changed to a wicked smirk and Dev looked at him all panicked. What will he do now??

Biwi nahi banegi par wo teri. Na iss janam me aur na hi agle kisi aur janam me.

Shiva said in a final tone and stormed out of the house leaving both of his brothers rattled to the core. Dev knows he's going to be dead, either Shiva will kill him or Raavi will do the honours.

Dev!!

Dev winced at the pain that shoot through his cheekbone as soon as Krish touched it.

Itni nafrat kyu??

Dev asked totally disoriented by what just happened but Krish's words confused him even more.

Kuch aur hi hai ye Dev. Itna pagalpan sirf nafrat mein nahi hota.

Dev sucked in a breath as he got up from the floor. He sat on the couch thinking about what Krish just said as Krish went to bring an ice pack for him.

Could this be possible?? Is their something else in Shiva's heart for Raavi?? He has to find out before they both make him a scapegoat and kill him amidst their fight.

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That's it for this chapter. See you all soon.


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Posted: 4 years ago
#15

Raavi is being confusing😆

But I am loving it🌹🌺🌹

More!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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oh boy.....madness unleashed....😆

these 2 idiots should confess but nahi....dusron ko maarna hai, pareshan karna hai....and when the thing would get out of hands to confess karna hai....


krish the smartest one⭐️👍🏼

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Posted: 4 years ago
#17

Amazing update👏

Shivi's madness has started😆

They love each other lekin dusro ko marne and ek dusre ko irritate karne mein jyada interset hai🤪

Poor Dev😆

Krish is the smartest bachha

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Posted: 4 years ago
#18

Awesome update.

Shiva's madness is scary but I like it.

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oh god!! bechara Dev. i can't stop laughing imagining shiva is ready to kill dev for raavi🤣


awesome update❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Bura phasa Dev!! Bali ka Bakra bann gya hai bechara!! 🤣🤣

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