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Hi guys🤗.

I am back with an OS on the current track. Hope you guys will like it

This is a bit emotional so read with that mindset only.

So, this one is unnamed for now. Will edit if something pops up.

Happy reading guys


Shivi OS :


‘Yaa toh yeh kangan de nahi toh Raavi ko bhi leke ja’ Shiva spoke, shocking the hell out of everyone.

‘Shivaa kya keh raha hai tu yeh?’ Dhara interfered.

‘Please bhabhi aaj nahi. Please. Mujhe solve karne do is mamle ko, request karta hu apse.’

Shiva pleaded with her. Dhara kept quiet for the moment.

‘Oh toh matab agar maine tujhe yeh kangan nahi diye toh tu meri beti ko chod dega?’ Prafulla asked.

‘Ek baar mein samajh nahi aati? Kangan de’ Shiva roared.

‘Nahi dungi. Or rahi baat Raavi ki, toh le jaungi main use apne sath apne ghar.’ Prafulla too spoke with equal intensity.

‘Seriously?’ Raavi came and faced both of them. ‘Sharam nahi aati na tum dono ko? Maasi apse yahi kaha tha na ki Shiva se ladna band kardo. Ek kangan mere rishte meri khushio se badkar ho gaye? Mujhse bad kar ho gaye’ She asked her maami.

‘Raavi’ Dhara spoke when she saw tears coming out of her eyes.

‘Nahi dhara di. Aaj faisla ho hi jane do. Pata toh lage ki meri maasi or mera pati kitna mol bhav karenge mera, main bhi toh dekhu.’ She spoke to Dhara before facing her maasi again.

‘Shiva ka samajh mein aata hai ki use yeh kangan kyu itne zaruri hai par aap? Apke liye yeh bas ego satisfy karne ka zariya hai. Yeh sone ke kangan meri khushio, meri jaan se upar hai na? Toh ek kaam karo meri aaj puri kimat laga hi do. Meri maa ke jitne bhi gehne hai na vo sab aap rakhlo or badle mein meri yeh jaan or har haq se mujhe azaad kar do. Pata nahi tha mujhe ki itni asani se main sare karz mita dungi apne, jo apne aaj tak pala mujhe, pyaar kiya. Ab se mere sab gehne aapke hue or yeh jaan yeh zindagi meri.’ she spoke, shocking every single person. There was no one who didn’t break hearing her outburst.

‘Raavi meri beti tu aise kyu bol rahi hai? Tu toh janti hai na ki tu kya mayne rakhti hai?’ Prafulla tried to control the damage.

Raavi didn’t pay any heed and turned to Shiva ‘Or tu. janti hu Shiva ki vo kangan bahut zaruri hai tere liye lekin uske liye tu mujhse rishta todne ke liye tyar hai? Chi yar Shiva. Dil tod diya tune mera aaj. Sach mein.

Kya kaha tha us din khandar mein? Kabhi chod kar nahi jayega, us kabhi ki expiry date itni kam thi? Main nahi janti thi.

Pata hai sabse buri baat kya hai? Aaj hi laga tha ki puri zindagi lad kar nahi bitani padegi tere sath. Puri zindagi? Main bhi na kitni pagal hu, puri zindagi ke sapne dekh baithi par yaha toh alag hi scene chal raha hai.

Ghar se nikalega na tu mujhe? Kis haisiyat se? Kyon Ki pati toh aisi baatein nahi karte toh phir kis haisiyat se.’

‘Raavi sun’ Shiva tried to explain.

‘Chup. bilkul chup. Bahut shauk hai na tum dono ko meri zindagi ke faisle karne ka? Is ghar se na ab meri laash hi jayegi or uska faisla tum dono mil kar karna ki kaha jalaoge.’ she roared like a lioness.

‘Raavi’ everyone gasped for what she just said.

‘Ae Raavi kya bol rahi hai? Aisi bekar batein nahi karte beta’ Suman told her.

She went to her and lied in her lap ‘Nahi maa. Bahut ho gaya. Khilona samajh ke rakha hai sabne mujhe, gudia thodi hu jo jab chaha jaise chaha khel liya or phir fek dia. Mere bhi toh jazbaat hai na maa’ She cried in her lap.

‘Chup. tu kahi nahi jayegi yaha se.’ Suman spoke consoling her.

‘Nahi maa. Is baar main kisi ki baat nahi manungi, main is ghar mein jis rishte se thi usne hi aaj keh dia jane ko. Ab main nahi rahungi yaha. Or is ghar mein kuch nahi karungi khud ko kyuki main nahi chahti ki mere jane ke baad aap logo pe musibat aaye, dil se parivaar mana hai maine ap sabko.’ Raavi spoke. She turned to them for the last time and said ‘Thank you so much mere best birthday ke liye’. She ran from there.

‘Krish uske piche ja or jab tak main nahi ata uske paas rahio.’ Shiva ordered him and he obliged.

‘Kya chal raha hai tere dimag mein Shiva? Or kitna tang karoge us bachi ko?’ Dhara spoke.

But he didn’t reply and ran from there.

***

‘Bhabhi kya kar rahe ho aap?’ Krish spoke trying to stop her from jumping in the flowing deep river.

‘Chod mujhe Shiva..’ She realized what she said changed quickly. ‘I mean Krish chod mujhe please.’

Krish smirked hearing his brother’s name from his bhabhi’s mouth ‘Shivaa. Oho kya baat hai’ he teased her trying to stop her but she didn’t say anything rather wiggled in his grip and cried in frustration.

‘Main nahi chodunga aapko. Shiva ko aa jane do phir yeh marne vala kaam uske aage karna ya use bhi dhakka de sakti ho aap if you want.’ he chuckled, getting a deathly glare from her.

‘Krish bakwas mat kar faltu mein varna Sher ki Sherni ke hatho mara jaega’ he mumbled to himself.

‘Chod mujhe. Kisi ka intezar nahi hai mujhe. Bahut shauk hai na inhe mujhe idhar se udhar fekne ka aaj main yeh kissa hi khatam karti hu, uske baad jise jo dushmani nibhani hai jee bhar ke nibhaye.’

Raavi spoke and this time with all her power she jerked his hand and ran towards the river to jump in.

This time she didn’t think for a mere second and jumped. But instead of hitting the cold water she was pulled into someone’s chest. She smelled his body scent and knew who it was, because now she recognized his body smell.

She stayed there like that, numb not making any movement, her breathing heavy, body shuddering with rage and frustration.

He held her fragile waist and caressed her hair continuously to soothe her pain.

‘Ae Raavi beta. Maaf kar dena mujhe’

Raavi heard her maasi, she shot her head up and saw her maasi standing at a distance.

Shiva’s embrace did wonders and for a few seconds she forgot everything but seeing her Maasi everything flashed in front of her eyes and she pushed Shiva away.

‘Jao tum dono yaha se. Nahi karni mujhe kisi se baat. Ab pachtana tum dono zindagi bhar, jab main nahi rahungi na. Oops pachtaya unke liye jata hai jo apne ho par main kisi ki apni nahi hu yaha’ Raavi spoke turning to the river.

‘Ae’ Shiva held her wrist and pulled her towards him ‘Muh tod dunga ek baar or marne ki baat ki toh’ Shiva’s teeth clenched.

‘Zinda rehne vale halaat chode hai tum logo ne. Chod mujhe?’ Raavi retorted back.

‘Tu jo soch rahi hai vo galat hai Raavi’ Shiva spoke.

‘Sahi kya hai is sab mein Shiva? Jo main galat soch rahi hu.’ Raavi asked, freeing herself from his grip.

‘Janta hu main ki tu hum dono ke beech mein pis rahi hai or yeh baat mujhe bahut tang karti hai ki kangan meri maa ke hai or is maami ne hadap liye. Janta tha yeh nahi manegi.

Or kal jab tu apni is maami se lad rahi thi toh vo sab batein maine sun li thi or jo main soch raha tha usko anjaam dene ka pakka irada kar lia tha maine.

Maine toh jaan bujh ke yeh shart rakhi maami ke age taki vo maan jaye, main janta tha vo nahi manegi isliye maine pehle se ek or kangan banva liye the taki vo ise dekar apni maa ke kangan lelu. Lekin sab ulta pad gaya.

Or dekh teri maasi ne vo kangan bhi nahi liye or maa ke kangan bhi lauta diye’ he showed her the bangles.

Raavi was shocked to hear everything and moreover her Maasi returned back the kangan and in return didn’t take the other bangles as well.

‘Aapne mere liye vo kangan dediye?’ Raavi asked in shock.

‘Ae bhayi toh tujhe kya laga sach mein yeh kangan ya gehne tere se upar hai? Agar mujhe pata hota ki yeh janglee(Raavi glared her while Shiva chuckled seeing this) mera matlab hai yeh Shiva tere liye sahi insan hai toh main us waqt hi maan jati. Mujhe laga tu idhar tang hoti hai isliye maine tujhe ghar le jane ki baat kari. Raavi beta tere liye toh main apni jaan bhi de sakti hu, aage se phir kabhi mat kahio ki tu marna chahti hai ya teri yeh maasi ki zindagi mein gehne paisa zada zaruri hai.’ she cried.

Raavi hugged her tightly and apologized to her.

‘Yahi chahti thi na tu? Ki hum dono ladna band karde? Toh le dedia hum dono ne yeh vaada tujhe’ Maami said.

Shiva too nodded. Though it was difficult for them to not fight so they decided that their fights will not have that intensity now. Prafulla hugged both of them and gave Raavi’s hand in his ‘Le ja apni biwi ko apne ghar Shiva. or dhyan rakhio iska’

Prafulla said, caressing her head.

‘Chal’ Shiva said.

Raavi was still hurt, how could he even say that ‘MAin nahi jaungi tere sath’ she faked anger.

‘Main akhri baar keh raha hu chal.’ Shiva ordered her.

‘Nahi chalungi.’ she replied.

‘Aise kaise nahi jayegi’ he said and picked her up in his arms and walked towards the haveli. Raavi didn’t protest at all.

He took her straight to the haveli and placed her down when they reached their room, Raavi was shocked to see the room decorated.

‘Yeh sab tune kia mere liye?’ she asked, forgetting everything.

‘Vo.. vo maine nahi. Dhara bhabhi ne’ Shiva blushed, he was too shy to admit that. But the moment he heard her conversation with her massi he decided to make her feel special.

Raavi didn’t bother to hear his lame excuse, she knew he did this because why would Dhara di decorate their room.

She saw the whole decoration in awe and turned to see him but she was shocked to see him kneeling on the floor. Within a second she too knelt down and cupped his face ‘Shiva. Kya hua?’

Shiva took her hand in his and spoke ‘Sorry Raavi. Dil se. Maine kabhi nahi socha ki main tujhe kitna hurt kar raha hu vo sab chize karke.’

Raavi too cried with him and complained ‘Tune mujhe ghar se nikala.’

‘Tune marne ki baat ki kaise? Ek baar bhi nahi socha mera kya hoga?’ he said, anger visible in his tone.

‘Jab tujhe nahi padi thi meri toh main kya karti? Or nahi thi Shiva himat yeh sab jhelne ki, ek baar aur dil nahi tutva sakti thi. Is baar main sach mein mar..’

Shiva kept his palm on her lips ‘Aaj ke baad mat bolio aisa. Kaha tha na nahi chodunga tujhe kabhi? Toh nahi chodunga. Main toh permanent solution dhund raha tha in sabka. Main tujhe nahi jane deta. Tujhe sunke ajib lagega or shayad shock bhi par ab tere bina main apni zindagi imagine nahi kar sakta. Bahut koshish kari tujhse dur rehne ki par nahi raha jata.’ He too broke down in front of her.

Raavi was actually shocked to hear him open his heart, she didn’t expect this. She herself can’t imagine her life without him, that's the reason she was ready to end her life.

‘Please chup hoja. Aise nahi rote’ She tried to console him but he instead tightened his hold on her.

‘Please mujhe chod ke mat jaio Raavi’ Shiva pleaded.

Raavi broke the hug and wiped his tears and spoke ‘I promise Shiva yeh life mein jo kuch bhi ho, tujhse jitne marzi jhagde ho par main tujhe chod kar nahi jaungi or na hi dobara jan dene ki koshish karungi’ Raavi promised him.

Shiva felt happy hearing that promise, he placed a tight kiss on her forehead and hugged her again.

‘Ruthna manana ho gaya ho toh hum bhi aa jaye? Cake khane?’ Krish shouted from outside.

Both blushed hearing him, they quickly wiped each other's tears and got up.

Shiva opened the door to find the whole family standing there. They saw Shiva carrying Raavi to the room so they stayed away for sometime so that they could talk in private.

Krish stormed inside and hugged Raavi, Dhara too hugged Shiva and then Raavi. Gautam too came and blessed the couple followed by Devta, Maa and Prafulla-Anita.

Raavi was so happy seeing her whole family together, this was indeed her best birthday.

‘Chalo ab cake kato na. Bahut der se control karke rakha hai’ Krish spoke impatiently.

Raavi went near the table and called Shiva with him to cut the cake, everyone hooted for them teasingly but they didn’t mind it. They cut the cake. Raavi took the first piece and fed Shiva and then she fed Suman and everyone else.

‘Mil gayi khushiyan Raavi?’ Dhara asked, teasing her.

‘Ha di mil gayi’ she blushed.

Dhara and Gaumbi gifted her a necklace while Suman gifted her cash. Prafulla gifted her cash and clothes.

‘Shiva tu kya laya hai?’ Krish asked.

Shiva took out a box and handed her ‘Happy birthday Raavi.’

Raavi opened it to find a beautiful bracelet in it, she gasped seeing it ‘Bahut sundar hai Shiva.’

And she was about to hug him when Dhara-Gaumbi coughed and they both blushed.

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So, how was it guys?

I hope you guys liked my take on this track.

Will see you soon guys. Till then take care guys. 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Yup I liked it a lot🖤

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This is an amazing take on the scenario ..itna anticipation badha diya hai kal ke liye

It is very well written. 😳

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Loved this ❤️ Raavi ka dil shiva ne💔 lekin wapas bhi achhe se ❤️. Written so beautifully. Shivi are love

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Yeh aise aise OS na umeedein badha rahe hain meri!😆

Itne acche se likha hai, I really loved this!❤️

Par mujhe Shiva ki adbhutness pe doubt hai, uske paas itna dimaag hai lagane ko?!🤪

I seriously wish that something like this happens in the show but god knows what kaand has the PS makers planned for us now!

The conversation that they had, Maami giving up those kangans, it's such a beautiful dream.

I just wish ki kuch aisa hi ho kal.

Agar Shiva ne phhir kuch faltu ka kiya na!🤬 Then I will read this OS again and calm myself😆

Thank you for writing this, it's gonna help me a lot tomorrow.

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So beautifully written!

Raavi's breakdown was heartbreaking but so glad that Maami and Shiva both mended their ways and came together just for her ❤️

Hopefully we get to see something like this onscreen tomorrow

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really enjoyed reading this!!

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Beautifully written ❤️❤️❤️

Loved it 😍😍😍...after reading this OS I am feeling positive about today's episode 😊😊

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Loved this! I know this won't happen in the show and hearts are going to break tonight. Thanks for giving us this Wonderful treasure in the meantime that can give us some assurance!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Loved this so much❤️❤️

Raavi's breakdown...omg you have put it down so well...it made me emotional😭 Poor girl💔

I loved how Mami and Shiva resolved and came together for Raavi❤️

I dont know what we will be getting in the episode today...but I really wish something like this happens😃


This was so beautifully written🤗

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