Sleepless nights - A ShiVi OS - Page 3

Originally posted by: GrilledCheese

uff.. loved this! Raavi's heart and brain conversation was too funny 😆

And Shiva's last dialogue ☺️

Thank you ❤️ Glad you like it. Since I got a good response on 'marriage masterplan' for Raavi's heart and brain conversation, I used it here too.

Originally posted by: RainbowChaser

The ending left me in splits 😂

This was amazing

Thanks a lot for reading ❤️

Originally posted by: frnd_ship

Trying writing bonus scene or part to show how Raavi becomes mainka to broke bachelorhood of her saint Shiva

Thank you for reading ❤️ I am planning to write a second part and update soon.

Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes

Wow.lol I did not see that dialogue coming. Loved that aag did I taraf se hai and both have knowledge of it!

Thank you so much ❤️ Shiva is bold in everything and let him be bold here too 😛 Yes, they both are very passionate

I am a fan of Kathir-mullai. They had bold dialogues in the serial. I remember one of their conversations. Both come to their bedroom after completing Raavi's godh bharai. Kathir will ask Mullai to sleep. Mullai will comment right away that if they keep on sleeping like this, how they will celebrate their godh bharai 😂

I am eagerly waiting for Shiva and Raavi to reach that level of comfortability and love

Originally posted by: JiyaGupta30

Woww.... this was awesome 🤪

Raavi's mind and heart conversation was hilarious 🤣

Loved how she is getting affected by her hottt husband

Shiva's reason left Raavi's mind in real coma...

Thank you for reading ❤️

No one can resist Shiva's hotness and Raavi is no exception 😉

Originally posted by: maanmeet1

after reading i went to chk again if its an OS.......and man it is😔

awesome hai........but i wanted to read more

its funny .......mind and heart conversation

HOT hubby wow

Thank you for the kind words ❤️

I have an idea for the second part and will be writing it soon.

Originally posted by: chandiniebinda

Loooveeeed This…

Raavi’s heart and mind are amazing…

The last part was really good…

Thank you so much ❤️ I am glad you liked it

Originally posted by: MeeraWrites

It's amazing.❤️

Loved Raavi's heart and mind conversation. 😆

The Shiva who never liked to take bath is taking cold shower in the middle of the night. 😆

Shiva's reply at the end. Raavi might have slipped into coma after that.

Thank you so much ❤️

Shiva's status:

Before Marriage - Clean mind but dirty habits

After Marriage - Clean habits but dirty mind 😛

Originally posted by: chinnu_kaku

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Thank you for reading ❤️ I am glad you enjoyed it

Originally posted by: Foxii

Great one... the Last part... 🔥

Thank you so much ❤️