Shivi FF: Mission Impossible (Part 3- Pg.11) - Page 7

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Posted: 4 years ago
#61

hardik is a good hearted but smart person too....dont let him make fool out of himself.......


i can understand mami but dhara to is ready to sacrifice their lives for bet?😲


raavi forgot dev

she knows shiva's touch😳

m too excited for their falling in love process but not the orchestrated one.....

raavi already loves him.....lets see about shiva......

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Posted: 4 years ago
#62

Your first line was the first line of Pride and Prejudice

Prafulla and Dhara are too similar.. Dhara will lose hardik to Anita and Prafulla will lose Raavi to SHiva.. chalo acha hai 🤣

I can't wait for the moment when maami loses the kangan though 😈

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Posted: 4 years ago
#63

This Dhara is love 😁

This track is so so enjoyable !

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Posted: 4 years ago
#64

Nice update 👍😅


Kya shart h dhara jeetne ke liye Mami ki beti ko phasayegi .


Aur Mami dhara ke bhai ko 😂😂

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Posted: 4 years ago
#65

It keeps getting interesting with each part..... 😊😊

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Posted: 4 years ago
#66

This story just gets better 🤗 great update 👍.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: barbieflora

First of all, P&P ka quote was 😍

Baki padhke bolti hu😆


Edit: bapre Dhara toh plans banane mein Bonnie and Clyde ko bhi peeche chod de🤣

Mami toh Hardik-Anita ki OG shipper hai.

Tubelight Raavi ko hua Gadhere Shiva se pyaar. Kya Tubelight jalegi? 😆


Abhi aur bhi planning and plotting baki hai behen 🤣

Tubelight jalne mein time toh lagta hai. You know.


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Posted: 4 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: Hanyshah

Oh my god ! Aisa nahi hai, ki do do behen ek mandap mein shaadi hogi 😂😂😂😂😂


This is soo hilarious !! Maami finally using her plotting skills at least for something good ! And it’s a relief that she chose to focus on Anita first, and left Raavi well enough alone for the time being. It just gives Dhara time to work on her masterplan 😂😂😂


Shiva shiva, kitna bhi chupa le. He can’t help but come and ask Raavi how did she forget Dev’s birthday 😂😂

Tripping her to catch her ? Pass ane ka bahana hai kya ? 😂😂😂😂😂

Aur Gadheri nee seedhe jawab diya, ki this is all SHIVA ki shaadi ki chakkar mein 😂😂 No lie, just honest truth. And still this both tubelight doesn’t understand 😂😂😂


It didn’t even cross Shiva’s mind that why is this Chipkali trying to stop him from getting married. Just because he himself doesn’t want to. Akkal kab ayegi is bandhar ko? 😂


And Raavi, this girl is still under the impression that she’s saving him from emotional blackmail and all the unsuitable vultures out there coming for Shiva 😂😂😂😂 She didn’t even realize she FORGOT DEV’S BIRTHDAY ! When he was suppose to be the most important Pandya brother for her. And all this because she was focusing on Shiva. And Gadheri phir bhi samaj mein nahi aaya kabhi 😂😂😂😂

What in the world 😂😂😂


Please have Dhara create situations where they will come close. Like asking Shiva to drop Raavi home. Or maybe taking her to the market to buy something. Shiva for once helping Raavi when someone else teases her and maybe Raavi accidentally seeing this for the first time ? 😍😍😍


This is so much fun. I know it’s wrong that this is all coming out from a bet, but at least both Dhara and Maami are working towards love and not a force marriage. I can’t wait to see Maami’s face once she finds out Raavi has fallen for Shiva and it’s too late for her to do anything 😂😂😂😂😂😂



I love your long comments 🤣

Both Maami and Dhara are going to create such situations. Bachho ki life mein full on interfere karne wale hai dono. 🤣


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Posted: 4 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: DesiiiiGirllll

Love love it both Dhara and Mami are attacking each other’s family for bride/groom 😂😂😂😂

Raavi ki tension 🤣

Bechari is goi g nuts as to how casually Shiva said karni padegi 🤣


Waitinggggg for next update 🥺



Dhara aur Maami hi hain asli khiladi 😎🤣


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Posted: 4 years ago
#70

Part 3

Dhara knew one side of the story. Now she had to know about Shiva’s feelings. He was a closed box, and she was the only person who could understand them. The trick was were his eyes. They said everything. Did he love Raavi back? As far as she could tell, he had more feelings for her than he showed. Dhara went to serve him his morning tea and sat beside him to get some gossip.

“Shiva main Raavi se bohot naraz hu.” Dhara said.


Shiva seemed surprised for a minute. “Kyu kya kiya uss maami ki behen ki beti ne?”


“Dev ka birthday bhul gayi batao. Aur kehti hai Dev se shaadi karni hai. Usne toh thik se wish bhi nahi kiya Dev ko. Pandya parivaar ki bahu aisa thodi karegi.”


“Bhabhi, uski shaadi main Dev se hone nahi dunga. Woh iss ghar mein aayi na toh main…”


Dhara knew he had gone to his I hate maami ki behen ki beti mode. This line of questioning didn’t help. She had to try something else. Dhara had another idea.

“Haa par shaadi toh use karni paregi. Dev se nahi toh kisi aur se. Maami ne shart jo lagayi hai ki Raavi ki tujhse pehle shaadi kara degi. Aur tu toh maami ko jaanta hai. Ek baat thaan leti hai toh bas woh karke rehti hai.”


This time Shiva was tongue-tied. Dhara rejoiced seeing it. She could see the confusion in his eyes. He obviously didn’t want his maami ki behen ki beti to marry someone else.

“Uss chudail se kaun shaadi karega?”


Dhara sighed. Her devar was useless. “Somnath ki sabse khubsurat ladki hai woh. Koi bhi kar lega.”


Shiva was again tongue-tied and as Dhara could see, slightly annoyed too. “Uss maami ko bhi kaam nahi hai. Bakwaas karti rehti hai.”


Shiva got up and went for a bath. Dhara pouted. This was the best she would get from him. But according to her, Shiva liked Raavi too. But it was going to be hella difficult to convince him of that. She wondered who would accept their love first. Raavi was a little blinded by her so called love for Dev, and Shiva was blinded by his hate for Maami. Perhaps Raavi. Shiva was going to need to be convinced. Only Raavi could convince him of this.

***


Hardik came to their house in the morning to return their dabba. Prafulla had cleverly asked Anita to pack some paneer makhani for Hardik. She told her to give it in a steel dabba rather than plastic containers so that Hardik would have to come to return it. As soon as Hardik came, Prafulla managed to convince him to stay for tea. He sat down and she got Anita to make him some more delicious savouries. Hardik didn’t hestitate too much before eating it.

“Waise tum khana bohot achha banati ho.” Hardik complimented Anita.


“Thanks.” Anita blushed.

Prafulla smiled as her plan was working. Soon, she would win this bet, and get all Dhara’s wedding jewellery. She had her eyes on that necklace for a long time now. Hardik asked her about her leg and she groaned in pain. Raavi suddenly came down and was surprised to see Hardik there. She sat down with them and started to look at the scene before her curiously. Prafulla knew her Raavi was a spy for Dhara. The girl had no loyalty towards her. She had to do something.


“Ae Anita, bazar se kuch saamaan lana tha. Jaa jaake le aa.” Prafulla said.

“Ji phui. Main bas change karke jati hu.” Anita said.


“Hardik beta, ise zara market chorr dena.” Prafulla said. “Tere ghar ke raaste hi padhta hai.”


“No problem. Tum ready ho jao,”


Anita quickly got ready and left with Hardik. Prafulla sighed in relief. A car ride together would be so romantic. She only hoped they would talk a little and fall in love. Then Prafulla’s eyes moved to Raavi who looked mad.

“Mujhe achhe se dikh raha aap kya kar rahi ho.” Raavi said. “Yeh sab thik nahi hai.”


“Ae Raavi chup kar. Yeh sab na karta parta hai. Jald se jald tum dono ki shaadi karwa du toh shanti milegi mujhe.”

“Maasi, shaadi toh nahi hogi. Aap Anita di aur mujhe force nahi kar sakte.”


“Tu toh chahti hai woh Dhara yeh shart jeet jaye. Humesha Pandya parivaar ki side hoti hai tu.”


“Nahi iss baar na main aap dono ke iss bet ke khilaf hu. Shiva ko shaadi nahi karni but Dhara di apni zid pe ari hai. Bechara mera Shiva!”


“Ek minute. Dhara ne kahi ladki dhoond toh nahi li?” Prafulla looked shocked.

“Nahi par dhoond rahi hai.” Raavi frowned.


Prafulla thought she had time. Dhara was almost matching her pace. She had to get Anita and Raavi married quickly. It was time she started looking for a suitable guy for Raavi too. She was not ready to give up her kangan! It was the only thing she had. Raavi was going to be equally tough. She wasn’t going to say yes easily.

***


“Ae maami ki behen ki beti!” Shiva called her.

Raavi was roaming in the market when he came upto her. She had come here to spy on Anita di and Hardik. Chances were that Hardik had left after dropping Anita, but Raavi didn’t want to risk it. She wouldn’t let this marriage happen. Hardik bhaiyya seemed like a nice guy but he has been a bachelor for too long. He could just as easily fall for Anita. Raavi also knew Anita’s love for Gautam was mere infatuation, something born out of stubborn regret. She could take a u-turn just as easily. Raavi was going to have to intervene and stop anything before it happened.


“Yeh kya chal raha hai? Maami ne kaisi shart lagayi hai? Tu shaadi kar rahi hai?” He asked in one breath.

“Nahi Shiva. Na main shaadi karungi aur na main teri shaadi hone dungi. Tu fikr mat kar. Mujhpe chor de.” Raavi said.


“Par yeh humari shaadi ko leke kyu padh gaye hai?” Shiva asked.

“Dhara di aur maasi be bohot raita faila diya hai. Kuch nahi kar sakte.”


Raavi suddenly spotted Anita and Hardik drinking coffee at a cafe. She gasped loudly. Things were worse than she thought. Shiva was looking at her confused. She quickly walked upto then to confront them. Anita looked a little nervous but Hardik smiled at them. Shiva followed her and was confused to see Anita and Hardik together.

“Arrey Raavi Shiva tum dono bhi baitho na.” Hardik smiled. “Actually Anita ko jis shop pe jana hai woh abhi tak khula nahi. Toh maine kaha thodi coffee pi lete hai.”


“Aapko toh kaam hoga na Hardik bhaiyya. Agar kuch important ho toh aap jaa sakte ho. Main wait kar lungi Anita di ke saath.”


“Nahi aaj koi kaam nahi hain.” Hardik smiled.

Raavi frowned. But it was Anita who saved her. “Dukan khul gaya hoga. Main chalti hu. Tu bhi chal mere saath Raavi. Aur Hardik, thank you so much mere saath wait karne ke liye.”


“My pleasure.”

Anita and Raavi left. Raavi looked back at Shiva and saw him sitting down with Hardik and talking to him. She smiled and left.

Edited by ananya269 - 4 years ago

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