Pandya Store|Episode Discussion Thread #23|Pickles, Oil and 813 Rupees - Page 12

Originally posted by: ValleyOfPeace

Kaas they would replace their writers with u.

We would get such cute scenes everyday.

Well... I don't know about cute... I wouldn't be aiming for any of that actually. Instead, I would re-write Pandya Store to be very different, aiming to bring out a different version of every actor which ITV has not really seen before. Star Plus would probably fire me before they hire me, but here is how I would change the romantic equations between the three couples:

GauRa

They would follow the trope of best friends falling in love. Since there is a 10 year leap, they would have a sweet, tooth-rotting romance filled with GauRa sharing domestic chores. They have a strong and stable relationship, and they will never doubt each other, even if an unwanted third wheel like Anita enters. Dhara would allocate responsibilities equally among the 3 brothers as she helps Gaumbi in the store and at home. The major issues these two would face would be to accept the new daughters-in-law, solving store crises, planning for a future family, and solving the issue of Dhara's mother.

DevTa

They would follow the trope of a woman being the dominant one in the relationship. I am tired of ITV showing stay-at-home bahus who do nothing but cooking. It's an insult to all the working woman out there. Rishita, in my version, would be the more intelligent out of the two. She would be the one giving all the ideas to the Pandya family, on how to expand their business, and who to contact, I'm assuming as Janardhan's daughter she would know plenty of business contacts. Dev would support her in her dreams and be fine with the idea of having a wife who was more successful than him. The major issues they would face would be to navigate through their new relationship (now with more responsibilities), issues regarding expanding the store into a chain store, bringing ShiVi together (as they feel guilty for what happened in the wedding), and changing Janardhan's mind.

ShiVi

They would follow the trope of two childhood frenemies falling in love with each other. The only thing I would change in their relationship would be to have ShiVi be best friends prior to Shiva's father's death. However, after his father's death, Shiva pushes Raavi to the sidelines. He feels guilty about pushing her away, but he also feels guilty as her family was a contributor to his father's death. Despite 'hating' her, he quietly watches her growing up (cue to longing stares), and despises how she is crazy about his brother. Once they get married, they would have an angsty, steamy romance filled with longing stares, childhood memories of what they once were, and confusion over how their marriage would proceed. Cute, in their equation, only enters once Shiva confesses his love to Raavi.

So yeah, I don't know about cute... but I could give you angsty, romantic, comedy for ShiVi. Oh, and for the love of god, I would have ointment scenes 🤔

Originally posted by: bhavna101

Yeh sach mein time table mein daala hai ya mere saath mazak kiya because I am thinking of making a schedule?!🤣🤣

Sach me!! Khana khaungi abhi.. uske baad 9.30-10.30 pm mera updates padhne ka plan hai

Originally posted by: mpks1

Esha🤗 I know you sincerely want to see a different kind of love story but am sorry to say, you are not going to get it😆I really like the different scenarios, analysis, predictions you make but writers of this show have decaying brain cells, this is all they got😆They will never give us what we want.

No you are absolutely right!! Thank you! 🤗 Honestly at this point I know I’m not getting that story 😆 it’s just sad because there was so much potential *sigh*

Originally posted by: ItsmePriya

Okay I am signing off now guys...

dont complete too many pages of the EDT....already have homweork pending🤣

Will be back soon with today's dose....sad that i need to sit and watch the episode again😆

Episode dekhne aurr apna thread update karne ke baad na, kitchen nightmares ka uncensored episode dekh lena. You'll enjoy Gordon Ramsay🤣 kya mast band bajata hai!🤣

Originally posted by: GrilledCheese

ML used to give updates for the episode before the danda kaand.. but after that we all started skipping DevTa and GauRa too.. so updates nahi bache 😆

the post is still there in the hope that we start watching the whole episode again 😆

Also, we used to go slower than 1 EDT per day, so there would be multiple episodes discussed per EDT.. aaj kal wo bhi nahi hai 😆

I generally don’t fast forward. But I have never written updates before. I can pitch in if needed.

Originally posted by: ValleyOfPeace

Aur jo eaada is baar kiya hai ki dhamaka baaqi hai and all?

His words seem so anticlimactic after these lukewarm episodes

kal hua na shiva aur maami ka bada dhamaka😆

throughout this kangan track and shiva borrowing money track we will keep seeing such dhamake 😆

But on a serious note, our problem is that the makers are shooting random pyaare pyaare scenes and random dhamakedaar scenes, but are unable to connect them into a consistent, coherent storyline. They are totally depending on the actors' acting capabilities and the popularity of ShiVi to run the show. It looks like they don't have a story anymore, in which case scene chahe jitna bhi pyaara ho ya jitna bhi dhamakedaar ho, it will just fall flat 😕

Originally posted by: ItsmePriya

Thank god❤️

Tujhe laga main abhi jaa rahi hoon😆

Aawww🤗

Originally posted by: bhavna101

Abhi musibat thodi zyada badh gayi hai🤣

I have 3 on-going ff's, one drabble series, and so many ideas to write on! And then I have so many interesting stories to comment on. Aurr mera saara kaam bhi online hota hai, aankhein dard hone lagi hain, posture kharab ho gaya hai🤣 And my me time is getting shorter.

So yeah, I need a system for this.

this is so true!

Originally posted by: mpks1

Hope he doesn't break her ankle😆

this reminds me of the way he thumped her back 🤣

How did Dev manage to do his MBA without any money? Did Gautam pay for his grad school as MBA costs lot of money? Also did he go from home?😆