ShiVi SS- Woes Part 5 page 33 - Page 14

Beautifully penned down

awesome loved it

raavis love for shiva❤️

update next part soon plz

Omg so heart wrenching

So emotional 😭

Loved it ♥️❤️❤️ you penned down every emotion beautifully 😍😍

Thank you for the beautiful update 😘😘😘

This goes down in my favourite list of FF’s ❤️

The emotions touch a raw nerve ❤️

Loved it.

after 1st update I wanted severe punishment for raavi but in 2nd one I saw her so broken and shattered that I wanted to shield her from all the sorrows and in 3rd one I am feeling so proud of her love grit and determination.....dono ne shiddat se pyar kiya hai....kisi ne pehle kisi ne baad mein but pyar to tha hai rahega

my heart kept breaking into millions of pieces as I continued to read the update further....this anguish, angst is heart wrenching.....these 2 have some other level of devotion for each other.....we can just be spectators, appreciate the bond....

I was hopeful that he would would hold her hand the moment she complained about gaumbi....he did....he is coming back

life moves on wala para was so heartbreaking but true....no matter what life moves on.....everyone moves on .....its strange but it is what it is.....

I wish I had your talent...I would have truly showed u how I am feeling but I don't....this is going in for my all time favorites......thank you for writing this.....

I hate cliffhangers 😁😁😁once again beautiful update... The wait is worth to read this story...

Wonderful update- Raavi’s quiet penance for Shiva is so poetic as a parallel to the Shiva’s quiet penance for Raavi all his life. I also love that your stories are not quick fixes- it takes place over months or years, so the progression and depth of emotions makes sense.

Me digs this better than ghost pottery making 👍🏼

Originally posted by: funny_fubar

Wonderful update- Raavi’s quiet penance for Shiva is so poetic as a parallel to the Shiva’s quiet penance for Raavi all his life. I also love that your stories are not quick fixes- it takes place over months or years, so the progression and depth of emotions makes sense.

Me digs this better than ghost pottery making 👍🏼

I am really glad u liked it Ri. I want them to go deep in emotions. Shiva’s love was his silence and actions over the years. Raavi’s love is her words, her unloading of years of hurt and wait.

Originally posted by: NephilimByHeart

I hate cliffhangers 😁😁😁once again beautiful update... The wait is worth to read this story...

Thank you so much Shivangi🌹🌹

Originally posted by: AsadZoyaILU

awesome loved it

raavis love for shiva❤️

update next part soon plz

I an glad you liked it dear

Thank you for loving the story so much

Will try to make it soon but can’t say anything for sure