ShiVi SS- Woes Part 5 page 33 - Page 16

Originally posted by: Khoobsurat123

I missed it a lot thanks for long chapter

Really loved it you have expressed each and every emotions perfectly

Raavi's dialogue her grief this is so beautifully written

Waiting for next chapter

If possible post it soon

Eager to know what happen next

Thank you so much for ua support and khoobsurat words! Means a lot to me and I am glad u liked it.

Will try to update soon but can’t promise anything.👍🌹💐🌺

Originally posted by: ItsmePriya

Mahi...This was heart wrenching...Read it in the afternoon but I could not gather myself to comment here....I actually cried....This was so emotional and heart touching😭❤️

The way you have expressed Raavi's love....her dialogues....they were so powerful and pure....such intensity....Shiva is nothing less than God to her❤️

Thanks for this beautiful update❤️🤗

Priyyyyaaa

Thank you soooo much for reading it dear

I am glad u liked it!

And thank you for ua beautiful supportive words. Means a lot to me!

🖤

Originally posted by: ValleyOfPeace

Haaye badi pyaari timing thi Naira!!!!

Thank you soo much for reading liking and commenting here.

Aur Thank you for ua beautiful words and support!

It means a lot to me🖤

Deserving🌺🌺💜

Shall be waiting for the update, but take your time.

Originally posted by: Swastika34

Areee cliffhanger!!! 🥺

Aise kaise kr sakti ho tum mere saath!! 😭

But this chapter was so deep , so emotional!! ❤️

I loved it!! ❤️

Next part please jaldi update krna !! Please!! 😳

Cliffhanger dena to nahin chahti thi

Par chapter bada ho gaya tha so had to stop😂

Thank you sooo much dear.

Try karungi ki jaldi upload karu next chapter!!!💐🌺🌹

Originally posted by: Foxii

OMG so emotional.

Raavi and her love is so pure. I loved rhe way you described her emotions.

Her life revolves around Shiva.

Gaumbi wasn’t wrong on his part, he means well.

Glad it evoked some reaction from Shiva.

hopefully Shiva will make more progress soon❤️

Thank you for updating this...

I have always wanted to show Gaumbi as father figure kind to Raavi. Did it here finally.

Thank you soo much for being supportive and always commenting here. It boosts my will to write!🌺💐🌺

Originally posted by: Madheart

This is so amazingly written!! Gosh, I could literally feel all their emotions. Trust me, took a lot of time to read it and it was just so worth it, never cried for an ff but this is so emotional and heartbreaking.I took me sometime to recover, al the emotions are conveyed beautifully. I loved how both of them never actually gave up on each other..How I hate waiting. Please update soon..❤️❤️

Thank you sooo much for reading and liking and also for these encouraging words.

I really want someone to show a kind of love that can Trump others in the shows. But its always drama there. So I tried to do it here.🤣

Originally posted by: ValleyOfPeace

Priyyyyaaa

Thank you soooo much for reading it dear

I am glad u liked it!

And thank you for ua beautiful supportive words. Means a lot to me!

🖤

Mahiiiii...

You deserve all love for giving us such amazing updates❤️🤗

Originally posted by: ValleyOfPeace

Sorryyy Nivi! But this one wasn’t that heartbreaking was it? Thank you sooo much for reading it and liking it with beautiful words. I appreciate it💐🖤🌹🌺

Really? I don’t know, I was reading the whole thing and I was fine then that last line of Raavi’s just triggered tears from my eyes. Somehow her helplessness just go through to me in that one line. 🙈

update next part today if possible and update shivi mine today i really love reading your stories. i am sorry i bother u so much but i really love the way u write ur stories. all concepts are reallly interesting i can't help myself from asking for more sorry. update today plz. i know u update part 3 yesterday. But if possible give the next part today. I'm a big fan of ur stories🤗

pls tell me, ye jo likha hai..... uske baad wait kaise kre agle part ka?😭😊🤗