Shivi TS : A Letter | Completed - Page 6

It was so damn sad but beautiful at the same

time💔

oh god, can you please now

write something with a happy ending 😳 Please?🤗

I neeeeed Happy Ending Shivi

It was beautiful and heartbreaking at the same time. You've penned it down amazingly. Raavi's confession part was so touching and the way you portrayed Shiva's side was really nice.

After reading this work, I just realised how much I got attached to the notion of 'Shivi'. I got stuck the moment I registered that Raavi is no more.

Waiting for another Shivi story from you.

One side live is truly painful yaar

It was very disturbing and so much painful to read it

And she is dead and he had no feelings for her

This sinks my heart

Written with passion

Write more

Much love

Jen

Originally posted by: maanmeet1

omg....she is dead....😭

unrequited love gives pain but he didn't love her....ever...🥺

can't imagine dem separated.....

Yes she is😔

Yes unfortunately.

I understand.

Originally posted by: Shivi_forever

It was very emotional and painful ending😭

Raavi died, Shiva was never in love with her🥺

It was very beautiful piece, one sided love is so painful😭

Yes😔

Thanks a lot

Originally posted by: funny_fubar

This was a very beautiful concept. The Ts was very well written. Left me feeling a tinge of sadness 😭

Thanks a lot ❤️

Originally posted by: kitm

Amazing....very emotional 😢😢😢😢

Beautifully written ❤️❤️❤️

Thank you so much

Originally posted by: Foxii

It was so damn sad but beautiful at the same

time💔

oh god, can you please now

write something with a happy ending 😳 Please?🤗

I neeeeed Happy Ending Shivi

I understand how that feels.

Hehe yes I have given one in Tere Dar Par Sanam and Rewriting Our Story too....umm...may have a happy ending...

Originally posted by: MeeraWrites

It was beautiful and heartbreaking at the same time. You've penned it down amazingly. Raavi's confession part was so touching and the way you portrayed Shiva's side was really nice.

After reading this work, I just realised how much I got attached to the notion of 'Shivi'. I got stuck the moment I registered that Raavi is no more.

Waiting for another Shivi story from you.

Thanks so much.

Bold: I understand how that feels because it's happened to me as well - only the couple was different.

Originally posted by: CarpediemRose

One side live is truly painful yaar

It was very disturbing and so much painful to read it

And she is dead and he had no feelings for her

This sinks my heart

Written with passion

Write more

Much love

Jen

It is very but it's equally beautiful.

I remember this verse I had written a long time back which is kinda what I took as a theme for this story -

Ek tarfa pyaar sirf dard deta hain

Yehi sab maante hain

Par ek alag nazariye se dekhe toh

Iski khoobsurati se khudko waaqif hota paate hain

Muqammal nahi hua toh kya

Mohabbat toh mohabbat hi hoti hain

Muqammal na hone se kya sacchi mohabbat ghat jaati hain?

I understand.

Thank you ❤️