ShiVi Drabbles, D10 updated pg 14 03/07/21[Completed] - Page 7

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Posted: 4 years ago
#61

loved each of the story.....pls keep writing more......m waiting for the continuation......

my personal fav is ice cream kiss and raavi's diary and reply.......but can u pls write on it more

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Posted: 4 years ago
#62

This was amazing pooh, i just read all the drabble post, and i am a little disppointed because they were just not enough...

Well good things are never enough right??

Now about the drabbles, mann they are beyond cute and adorable, and my favorite one is "eyes", we got to see father shiva, I think my heart skipped several beats there☺️...

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sparklle801

This was amazing pooh, i just read all the drabble post, and i am a little disppointed because they were just not enough...

Well good things are never enough right??

Now about the drabbles, mann they are beyond cute and adorable, and my favorite one is "eyes", we got to see father shiva, I think my heart skipped several beats there☺️...

Thanks u so much, love!❤️ You made my night!🤗 Its because of all you lovely people out there that I'm able to write these little scribbles of mine😆 I'm glad u enjoyed it and don't worry we all will get our daily dose of ShiVi in this forum. Whether its from my works or the other lovely authors here!🥱

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Posted: 4 years ago
#64

Superb 🤩🤩🤩🤩


How cute shiva teasing his chipkali 🥰🥰🥰

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Hey Guys, Pooh here! Its time for another ShiVi drabble. So, This drabble was inspired by a comic I saw on YouTube. Let's jump right into it~


First Love


8 year old Raashi wants to find out her father's first love.


Raashi was curiously staring at her father. Her father was doing some work regarding the store. Her mother was in the kitchen. This would be the perfect time to ask her father.

Shiva saw his daughter pouting at him, meaning she wants to ask something but don't have the courage. He chuckled. His daughter was exactly like his wife and he is so glad about that.

"Raashi?" He called her, beckoning her to come sit with him.

"Yes Papa!" She came and sat next to him like the obedient child she was, to her father of-course.

"You want to tell me something?" He asked gently.

Raashi gasped. Her father knows everything.

"Yes Papa.... I wanted to ask you something." She asked hesitantly.

"You know you can tell me anything."

She nodded. She looked around and asked in a soft voice.

"Papa, who was your First Love?"

Shiva looked at his daughter surprised. His First Love?

"Tell me Papa.... Who was it?" Raashi pressured him.

"My First Love...." Shiva trailed off as he stared into space. Raashi looked on expectantly.

He smiled.

".... Was your Mother!"

Now it was Raashi who was surprised. Her father's first love was her mother?

"Mama? Mama was your First Love? Why?" Raashi was curious.

He again stared off into space and a certain warm emotion enveloped him.

" Your Mother and I were enemies since the time we met. We always fought with each other. But somewhere along the way, I fell in love with her. She was the person who awakened that feeling in me. Our marriage was not expected but we overcame the hurdles of problems together. True, in the beginning, it was not pleasant." He sighed a bit melancholic as he looked at his daughter.

"But as time went by, we understood and trusted each other. Her smiling face gave me strength. My love for her was unrequited for a while but then she accepted me for who I am. She cherished and loved me very much... and I loved her back just as much. And still do..." He was smiling brightly now.

"And then we had you, Raashi! Our most precious Treasure!" He hugged his daughter.

"My First love was, now and always will be your mother."

Raashi hugged her father back tightly smiling happily.

"I'm so happy for you, Papa!"

It was a wonderful Father-Daughter Moment.


But what they didn't know was a person was behind the door with tears in her eyes. It was not tears of regret or guilt or sadness but tears of peace and eternal happiness.


Yeah, And that's it. Was it good? Did you guys like it? I really want to see a baby moment with ShiVi, but seeing the pace of the serial, I gotta wait atleast 3 years.😃 Or maybe they would surprise me and not make me wait. I'm crossing my fingers on that. 🤪 Let me know in the comments on what you guys think and show some love. Thank you for taking the time to read my scribbles. ❤️ I hope you have a good day.🤗 Toodles!


D8 - pg 13

Edited by PoohNotFound - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
#66

ahh this was so beautiful and pure

I love this concepts you write on - they're so special!

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Posted: 4 years ago
#67

Beautiful and sweet 💕💕

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Posted: 4 years ago
#68

Beautiful os❤️

Loved Shiva and Raashi's cute conversation

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Posted: 4 years ago
#69

This is as beautiful as always.. 💙💜 so pure.. Loved it

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Posted: 4 years ago
#70

Loved all of the drabbles. ❤️

They are so cute and beautiful.

You've penned down them amazingly.


Looking forward to read more of this ShiVi series.

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