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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Foxii

Excited for the full part

Thanks dear 🤗

Part 3(A) is up😳

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Posted: 4 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: CheerlessIM

Awwwwwsome update😍😍😍😍😍


Ab to janardhan seth nhi bachega


Cont soon

Thank you so much dear 🤗😛

Next part will be updated tomorrow or Monday 😳

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Hii dear 🤗

Yeah I'm working on it right now but need some more time to finish 😳 Hope you will wait 😃

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Amazing update👏

Loved Shivi's moment❤️

Gaumbi knew Shiva loves for Raavi😊

Raavi is kidnapped😲

Waiting for next

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Posted: 4 years ago
#65

Hii guys I'm back with next part of my story 😳

Hope you all will like it 😛

Sorry for grammatical mistakes in advance....

Enjoy reading and do tell me how was it 😳


Mere Brother Ki Dulhan Part 3 (B)

Janardhan's man bring unconscious Raavi to the some unknown place and tied her up to the chair blindfolded... and calls him...

While Janardhan is seen sitting in his room waiting for the call... his phone rings and he immediately takes it putting near his ears....

Goon: Boss aap ka kaam ho gaya hai, ladki humare paas hai...

Janardhan smirking: Great!...How is she?... uski photo kheech ke bejh, mujhe dekhna hai...

Goon: Ok Boss wait a minute...

Goon takes of blindfold from the Raavi's face and took her photo while Raavi is still sitting unconscious...

Janardhan's phone beeps bringing him back from his thoughts with in no time he unlocks his phone's display to take a look at the message and his eyes widened with shock and he immediately calls back...

Goon: Yes Boss...

Boss angrily: Aye gawar! Meine kya kaha tha aap logon ko? Yeh woh ladki nahi hai you stupid!...

Goon shocked: Kya? Woh ladki nahi

hai matlab?...

Boss: Matlab woh Rishita nahi hai Damn It!

Goon: Sorry Sorry Janardhan Sir galti ho gayi hai... abh kya karen ge iss ladki ko?...

Janardhan: Aye kaha na maine, mere naam mat lo, Why again and again repeating the same mistake... Yeh achha hua ki woh log behosh the, jab tum mere naam liya tha while kidnapping agar kisi ne sunn liya toh bohot problem ho jate...

Flashback is shown where Rishita in half conscious state listened everything with wide eyes being in shock...

Rishita in herself: Papa! (tears rolled from her eyes) Why papa why?...

But then she again pretended to be fully unconscious so that no one could notice her...

End of flashback...

Janardhan: Aur haan kisi ko kuch karne ya batane ki koi zaroorat nahi hai... I will manage... Tum log achhe se dekna uss ladki ko ki woh bhag na jaye...

Goon: Yes Boss...

Janardhan cuts the call and looks at his phone smirking evily... Pandya Brothers abh aap ka khel katam... humara har aapmann ka badla lunga mein... wait and watch....

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Gombhi and Rishita enters Pandya house to find Mami scolding Dhara while everyone stayed in tension....

Maami: Dekh Dhara, what you have done with my child?... Meri phul jaisi bachhi ki zindagi barbaad kar di aap logon ne, pehle Dev iski dil thoda, phir bhi woh bichari toh aapni mannti hai tum sabko, bachpanse leke aaj tak Raavi ne aap sabko defend karti aayi mujhse, aur aap ne kya kiya? Uski shaadi uss gawar Shiva ke karadi, kyu kyu ki Dev tho Rishita se pyaar karta hai, and what about Raavi's feelings then, kisi ne socha iske baare mei? ... Aur abh dekh kya hogaya hai, Rishita...

before she complate her eyes fall on Rishita...

Maami: Yeh lo aayi gayi hai Maharani...

everyone looked at Gombhi and Rishita who come and stand near Maami...

Ghambhi: Dekhiye Maami, I understand your frustration, but right now we should save Raavi... We will talk about it later....

with it he turns to Dev and Krish...

Gombhi: Krish, Dev tum dono chalo mere sath, Shiva ko humari zaroorat hai, Woh akele gaya hai Janardhan ke ghar... Before he could do anything we should stop him before he do something after which he will regret... as he was very angry and furious when he drove off to the Janardhan's house, he didn't even listened to me for once.... I'm sure he can do anything when he is angry...

On which Krish and Dev nodded and they went hurriedly....while everyone just agreed....

Suman praying: Haye Bagwaan mere bachho ki raksha karna... Sahi salamat Raavi ko ghar le aaye bas aur kuch nahi chahiye mujhe...

Dhara cosoling Suman: Maa aap chinta mat kariye, sab thik ho jayega, dekhna

on which Suman and Rishita nodes with teary eyes as Rishita was feeling very guilty...

Maami: Raavi safe hongi, jab woh uss Shiva se alag hoga...

Dhara looks on shocked...

Suman gets irked by her words: Aye Prafulla, chup ho ja, koi kisi se aalag nahi hogi, I won't let that happen...

While Maami continues: Suman behen, please aap samaj nahi rahi ho, Raavi ko iss rishtey se kuch nahi milne wala sivay dhuk, taunts of this Rishita who always finds a way to insult my bachha, why don't you just get them divorced?... Aap chahe ya naa chahe mein Raavi ko iss an chahe rishtey se aazad kar ke rahunga...Bhar mei jaye yeh family ka honor and everything which caused my Raavi to suffer....

Suman: Prafulla dekh, mein jo bolti hoon woh zaroor hoga yeh baat pakki hai... koi divorce nahi hoga... Tu kya Mere Shiva ki Gauri ko isse aalag karna chahta hai...chal kar ke dikha, mein bhi dekhti hoon, keisa aalag karega(they look at each other challenging)...

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Shiva's bike stops right in front of Janardhan's house with sudden break...

while watchman sees him getting down from the bike and heading towards him with anger filled eyes...

Watchman tries to stop: Hey you... stop...

before he could complete, his hands were tied up with Shiva's scarf and he pushed him hard on his shest...

Right after that Shiva kicked the entrance door and was welcomed with another group of Janardhan's people who come running with sticks... one of them tries to beat Shiva with stick, but he couldn't as Shiva held it tightly and give a hard punch on his face while he fall back wincing in pain... taking his stick he started fighting with the rest of the goons... after some time they were laying down in pure state on which shiva gave a evil smirk and walk ahead...

"Aye Janardhan Seth! Bahar Nikhal!"

shouts Shiva on the top of his voice entering into Janardhan house with goons following him whom Shiva had beaten black and blue...

Janardhan comes out of his room hearing the voice and get shocked to find Shiva standing right at the door with blood shoot eyes....

Before he could say anything or react Shiva reaches him within no time and pulls him by his collar and gives him hard punch on his face ....he again pulls him by his collar and looks straight into his eyes...

Shiva angrily: Janardhan! Bol where did you hide my wife?!

Again punches hard: I swear I will kill you right here, if something happens with my Raavi!.... I swear I will burn you alive...

Janardhan holds his hand and pushes it of freeing himself.... and wipies the blood from his mouth and smirks...

Janardhan: Agar tum mujhe mardaloge toh aapni pyaar biwi se kaise milegi ha?... Kyu ki humse alawa koi nahi janta hai ki kaha hai teri biwi.... agar biwi se milna hai toh, meri ek shart ko puri karni hogi...

Shiva looks up: Kaisa shart?

Janardhan: Pehle promise kar... Chal thik hai, koi promise nahi chahiye, main bata deti hoon... Waise bhi tumhe karna hi hai, agar biwi safe chahiye...

Shiva gets irked with his confidence and he really wanted to punch him once again, but controlled himself as right now Raavi's safety mattered him more....

Shiva angrily: Maine pucha kaisa shart Janardhan!

Janardhan: Shiva Pandya, tum dono bhai, mere ghar aa ke mujhe insult ki hai! You should pay for it no?... So here is my condition... kaan khul ke sunn lo... Tumhe meri joote ko aapni zubaan se saaf karna hai...

Shiva looks up in shock...

Janardhan: Don't look at me like that Shiva, biwi ko bacha na hai toh jaldi kar, meri time waste mat karna....

Shiva gritted his teeth and closed his eyes to calm himself... as he closed his eyes Raavi's smiling face flashed in front of him... and he opened his eyes and glansed at Janardhan

Shiva: Apni Raavi ke liye yeh Shiva apna jaan tak de sakta hai...

With this he gets down on his knees... while Janardhan enjoys watching Shiva helplessness and smirks as his plan is working...

Shiva looks up at Janardhan with evil smik on which he looks on confused...

Shiva: Aur apni Chipkali ke liye yeh Shiva jaan le bhi sakta hai...

with this Shiva pulls Janardhan's legs to himself in process making him fall on his back... within no time Shiva pulls up Janardhan and beats him on his face multiple times till he gets half unconscious and he pushes him on the floor... turning him around he keeps his one toe onbth back of his head pressing his head between his toe and the floor...

Shiva: Aapni maut ke liye tayaar ho jao Janardhan Seth!...

"Shiva Rukh!" shouts Gombhi from behind stopping him....Krish and Dev also reached there after Gombhi and gets shocked watching the scene jn front of them and Shiva's new avatar....

Shiva: Nahi Gombhi aaj toh mujhe koi nahi ruk ne wala I will kill him right here...

Watching Shiva's angry determined look he gets more tensed...

Ghombhi: Please Shiva aisa mat kar, Jane do issey...

Shiva: Bola na maine nahi Ghombi, issey toh jawab dena padhega...

Krish joins: Haan bhai, please leave him... Bhabi ke liye Jane do issey...

But still Shiva didn't listed their pleadings....

Ghombhi: Shiva, Police will handle him... Chhar do...Shiva!....Tujhe Raavi ki kasam...

Shiva immediately stops hearing Raavi's name and turns to Gombhi Krish and Dev...

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On the other hand Raavi opens her eyes slowly and looks around to find herself tied up in to chair and gets scared remembering the kidnapping incident....

Raavi shouts: Koi hai! Bachao!.. please... (crying)... Shiva...

Some of the goon comes hearing her shout...

Goon: Aye ladki chup kar!

Raavi: Please Gunda Ji!... while Gunda looks on confused...

Raavi: Woh, main aapki naam nahi jaanti hai naa iss liye....Sorry... Mujhe jaane dijiye na please... Maine kuch nahi kiya hai, kyu mujhe kidnap kiya gaya hai?... I beg you...

Goon: Koi tujhe yaha se jaane nahi dega... tum yahi pe rahogi, jab tak Boss ka phone nahi aati samjhi!...

With this he leaves from there....

Raavi tensed: Abh kya karun mei... please bagwhan ji mujhe madat ki jiye... kaise bachaun khud ko?...

She looks around and some idea sticks her mind and smiles widely....

Raavi shouts: Gunda jii!... Gunda jii!... Yaha aao na please!...

Goon comes here annoyed and looks at Raavi with questioning eyes...

Gunda: Kya hai! Chilla kyu rahi ho?

Raavi: Woh, Gunda jii....mujhe washroom jaana hai... please, please, please... I can't....

Gunda: Nahi hai washroom yaha... chup chap beith!....

Raavi shocked: Kya? Washroom nahi hai matlab?... Abh mein kaise....please kuch kijiye na... I promise I won't escape.... (with puppy face)

Gunda: Thik hai, but I won't untie your hands....

Raavi: Lekin how can I... with tied hands... please untie them....kaha na maine I won't escape... (forwarding her hands)....

Finally Gunda agrees and they went outside

and he followed her till washroom and she went inside while Goon wait for her outside.... Raavi gets thinking of how to escape from the goons... and walks here and there tensed...

At that time they hear some noise as if some fight was going on and the Goon left to check.... taking it as a chance she slowly peeped outside and saw no one there and she immediately rushes out...

And there she saw Him... her savior, her husband Shiva fighting with goons along with Ghombi, Krish and Dev... He is here, for her, as always...Sudden realization hit her and she finally understood her feelings about Shiva, She got the answers to her each question, her confusions... and wide smile appeared on her face and she starts walking slowly toward him while their every moments flashed in front of her eyes... from their childhood to the present... And she runs to him... few steps away when she was about to took his name someone come from behind and hit her hardly with stone right on her head and it's start bleeding... after what she runs faster as much she can holding back of her head....

Raavi: SHIVA!

Shiva turns around hearing Raavi's voice and gets happy tears watching her come running toward him... but her happiness vanished turned in to cry as he saw her face getting all red because of blood falling from her head which clearly pained his heart... As they neared each other she felt like her legs were not moving and she collapse right on his arms giving a sweet smile before going completely unconscious...

Shiva panicked : Raavi!(patting her cheeks) ...Aakhe khol!... Raavi please... Main yaha hoon, tujhe lene aaya hoon... Please Chipkali aisa mat kar...Khol na aakhe!....Ghombhi!...(crying bitterly)

The trio looks up at Shiva and gets shocked finding Raavi laying unconscious with blood all over her face... Gombhi immediately rushes toward them while Dev saw one of the goons running away throwing the stone behind... and he went out chasing him...

Ghombi: Raavi!... Krish ambulance bulao jaldi...

Krish nods and and immediately dialed the number and gives all necessary information....

Krish: Ghombhi ambulance aa rahi hai... they will reach within 2-3 minutes...

Ghombhi: Shiva don't worry... Raavi ko kuch nahi hoga...

Shiva nods and cries huging Raavi tightly...

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Precap: Raavi is sitting in the hospital room surrounded by family members...

while Shiva enters and sits near her and cups her face....

Shiva: Chipkali tumne mujhe bohot darraya...

while Raavi looks confused and asks...

Raavi: I'm really sorry, but do we know each other? on which Shiva looks on shocked along with everyone...

That's all for now guys....

Hope you all enjoyed reading...

Thank you so much for waiting my story and loving it 😊 ❤️ ❤️

Stay tuned for more twists....

Edited by Malika1993.06 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
#66

OMG!! These two chapters were so interesting!!

I love the love Shiva has for his MKBKB and the way Raavi is with him❤️

Gautam knows😆 The brothers' conversation was cute!😳

But my fav are always ShiVi scenes!

Rishita ka drama kahin khatam nahi hota and Dev is just Dev🤣

Maami ke kangan!🤣🤣 Maami is definitely gonna lose them one day or the other🤣

But the best part was Maami Saas🤣🤣

Oh, Raavi got kidnapped😒

Shiva is definitely gonna kill Rishita's dad for this and it seems that Raavi got hurt pretty bad too.

@precap - amnesia?! Oh, poor Shiva. But maybe he can take this as an opportunity to make her fall in love with him all over again😳

Excited for the next chapter!

Edited by bhavna101 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: katheriene

Amazing update👏

Loved Shivi's moment❤️

Gaumbi knew Shiva loves for Raavi😊

Raavi is kidnapped😲

Waiting for next

Thanks dear 🤗

Part 3 (B) is up enjoy reading 😛

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Posted: 4 years ago
#68

Updated do check it and let me know how was it 😛

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Originally posted by: bhavna101

OMG!! These two chapters were so interesting!!

I love the love Shiva has for his MKBKB and the way Raavi is with him❤️

Gautam knows😆 The brothers' conversation was cute!😳

But my fav are always ShiVi scenes!

Rishita ka drama kahin khatam nahi hota and Dev is just Dev🤣

Maami ke kangan!🤣🤣 Maami is definitely gonna lose them one day or the other🤣

But the best part was Maami Saas🤣🤣

Oh, Raavi got kidnapped😒

Shiva is definitely gonna kill Rishita's dad for this and it seems that Raavi got hurt pretty bad too.

@precap - amnesia?! Oh, poor Shiva. But maybe he can take this as an opportunity to make her fall in love with him all over again😳

Excited for the next chapter!


Edited comment!😳

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: bhavna101

OMG!! These two chapters were so interesting!!

I love the love Shiva has for his MKBKB and the way Raavi is with him❤️

Gautam knows😆 The brothers' conversation was cute!😳

But my fav are always ShiVi scenes!

Rishita ka drama kahin khatam nahi hota and Dev is just Dev🤣

Maami ke kangan!🤣🤣 Maami is definitely gonna lose them one day or the other🤣

But the best part was Maami Saas🤣🤣

Oh, Raavi got kidnapped😒

Shiva is definitely gonna kill Rishita's dad for this and it seems that Raavi got hurt pretty bad too.

@precap - amnesia?! Oh, poor Shiva. But maybe he can take this as an opportunity to make her fall in love with him all over again😳

Excited for the next chapter!

Thank you so much dear for loving my story 🤗

It's really great feeling ❤️ I'm not pro in writing stories actually 😆 but trying my best❤️ lots of love thanks once again 😳


Stay tuned for more interesting twists😉

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