Mere Brother Ki Dulhan a Shivi FS Part 4 (Complated) on pg 11❤️ - Page 6

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I have decided to divide part 3 in to A and B parts... hope you all don't mind it

Enjoy reading Hope you all will like it and it's worth your waiting....

With Love Malika 💓

Mere Brother Ki Dulhan Part 3 (A)

"Mujhe shaq tha, aur abh confirm ho gaya hai!" Shiva gets started by the voice and turns back to see who is this and gets shocked...

Shiva in himself: Oh teri!.... Kahi issko sab kuch sun toh nahi diya...

Shiva struggling to find a word: Woh....Gombhi, aap yaha? Kuch chahiye tha aap ko?...

(Yes the person is none other than Ghombhi)

Ghombhi comes near Shiva with stern look and placed his hand on his shoulder...

Ghombh: Aye Gadhere! Kya keh raha tha abhi? Phirse bol...

Shiva fake smiling: Kuch... kuch bhi toh nahi... woh Gombhi... mujhe na store jana hai woh Kaka ka phone aaya tha, so bye!

Shiva literally running as faster as possible...but...

Ghombhi: Aye Gadhere Rukh!

Shiva stops on his track and turns as now he can't escape from his brother...

Shiva: Haan Gombhi bol na kya hua?

Gombhi comes near him with little smirk but soon his smirk turns in to fake smile...

Ghombhi: Hume?... Hume kya ho sakta hai Shiva... Hum toh bhilkul thike hai, happy hai... Tum mujhe chhor, khud ko bata?... Konsi villain ke baare mei baat kar raha tha, jo tumari MamiKiBehenkiBeti ko tumse pura ek din ke liye juda kar raha hai? (lifting eyebrows teasingly)...

Shiva nervously: Nahi Gombhi... aisa kuch bhi toh nahi hai...

Gombhi: Tujhse kya lagta hai Shiva?... Mein kya aandhi hoon?... mujhe kuch dekha hi nahi deta kya?... Shiva why do you think that I don't know that You love Raavi?....

Shiva's eyes widened with shock: What!... Bhai aap... aap ko kaise pata?

Ghombhi: Bhul gayi kya? Mein teri bada bhai hoon, aur mujhe tum teen bandaron ke baare mei sab kuch pata rehta hai...

Shiva: Kab se?... I mean since when you got to know that I'm in love (being embarrassed)...

Gombhi: Mujhe toh shaq bachpan se hi tha, jab tum jaan bhuj kar Raavi ko pareeshan karta rehta tha, you were so happy when she defended you from Maami's scoldings... you used to admire her silently when she comes to home... Your every day started with Raavi and ended with her only, baat jaghda ki ho ya phir kuch aur...Chalo thik hai, mein tumhe aur pareshaan nahi karne wala... chalo chhor dete hai yeh sab Shiva aur bata mujhe aage ka plan kya hai?... Did you confessed her? (being excited)

Shiva hesitantly: Haan Bhai... shaadi ke din...

Gombhi with surprise: What? aur what did she say?... Did she reject you.... tum na bhilkul tension mat lo mein baat karti hoon usse....

Shiva: Arey nahi nahi bhai iss ki koi zaroorat nahi hai... woh... Raavi ne toh reject nahi kiya but... accept bhi nahi ki... so... But don't worry bohot jald Raavi mujhe apnayegi(smiling confidently)

Gombhi feels proud of his brother and patts his back: Don't loose hope mere bhai... I'm sure Raavi will love you too one day... Mujhe aur Dhara ko dekh keise hum dono ek hogaye the aur humari love story ko bhi tum sab achhe se jaanti hai... Mujhe na Tum aur Raavi ko dekhke Meri aur Dhara ki relationship dekhayi deta hai... but with some differences....

Shiva: Arey Bhai Tum aur Dhara bhabhi ki relation toh beyond comparison....

On which Gombhi shakes his head negatively...

Ghombhi: Arey kyu nahi... kya pata aap logo ki relationship humari se bhi ziyada perfect ho?...

Shiva: Shayad aap thik keh rahi hai bhai...

Ghombhi: Aur ek baat Shiva... tum na Dhara ko sab sach bata do naa, nahi tho woh bichari khud ko dosh de bethi hai ki tum dono ki zindagi barbaad kardi hai....

Shiva smiles by Gombhi's words and nods his head in a yes...

Ghombhi: Abh Chalo Shiva tune aur Dev ko milke Raavi aur Rishita ko Maami ke ghar le jana hai naa... jao aur jaldi se tayaar ho jao... aur yaad rakhna koi bhi tumari biwi ko tumse utha ke nahi jane wala hai... ek din ki toh baat hai, kal wapas aa jayenge tumari biwi (winks at him teasing) aur phir jitna chaho chipakti rehna tumse koi kuch nahi bolega...

while Shiva blushes lightly: Kya Bhai aap bhi... while Gombhi smiles widely huging his brother...

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Shiva gets ready in 5 minutes and sits on his bike waiting for Raavi to come....

Shiva: Yeh Chipkali kyu itna time le rahi hai tayaar hone mei?... Waise bhi mujhe kuch achha nahi lag raha hai... jaise ki kuch bura hone wala hai... Yaar Shiva, don't think too much everything will be okay...

He brushes out all bad feelings in his mind and looks at the time being frustrated...

Shiva annoyingly: Aye MamiKiBehenkiBeti kaha gum hogayi he?! Jaldi karo!!!

On which Raavi rushes out hurriedly followed by Rishita and Dev....

Raavi: Aa rahi hoon baba chillao matt!... Lo aagayi, abh khush? Chalo chalte hai Maasi Maa intezaar karr rahi hongi(exitedly)

While Rishita and Dev looks up being surprised by Raavi's changed behavior...

Rishita: Dekh Dev Raavi toh bhilkul normal hi behave kar rahi hai... Drama queen banke gumti rehti thi...abh dekho... I know she is up to something... woh na apni maasi se mil ke meri khilaf kuch soch raha hai....Mujhe lagta hai ki, woh yeh sab jaan bhuj ke kar rahi hai... tumhe jealous feel karne ke liye...

while Dev shakes his head at Rishita's words...

Dev: Kya bakwas kar rahi he tu Rishita?

Rishita: I swear Dev waha kuch na kuch hone wala ha mere sath(worriedly)... Dev mujhe nahi Jana hai kahi bhi... please Dev chal na Maa se baat karte hai ki, woh mujhe iss ladki ke saat na bejhe...

While Dev rolls his eyes being annoyed...

Dev: Bas karo Rishita!...

after that Dev turns to Shiva: Shiva! we will go first... tum aur Raavi follow us ok?

while Shiva just nods and looks up at Raavi...

Shiva: Yaar Chipkali uss Maami ke ghar jaana zarooro hai kya? Mujhe achha nahi lag raha hai... please mat jao naa... Tum toh jaanti ho na mein uss Maami ko bhilkul pasand nahi karta...

Raavi just laughs lightly by his cute antics...

Raavi: Nahi Shiva hum aise badhaon ki baat ko disrespect nahi kar sakte... aur for your kind information, Maasi Maa abh tumari saas hai so give her some respect...

Shiva: Respect?!... woh bhi Maami ko?!! Mera joote keregi uski respect!...

Raavi pouts cutely: Kya Shiva tum bhi! Woh log meri family hai... at least for me please?... (with puppy eyes)...

Shiva gets lost in his wife's cute eyes for a moment... but somehow composes himself...

Shiva: Haan, haan thik hai... sirf tumare liye chipkali... Achhe se de the hai, Mami saas ko respects ta ki woh zindagi bhar ke liye yaad rakhe(smirking)...

Raavi gets confused by his words: Kya bola?

Shiva: Kuch nahi... chalo achhe se beth...

while Raavi sits comfortably holding his shoulders and they drove off to the Maami's house...

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After some time they reach to Maami's house where Maami welcomed them happily...

Maami: Arey meri bachhi aagayi tum?...

Shiva fake happily: Aye Maami saas keise ho aap? aur aap ka kanghan?

while she looks up at Shiva terrified and immediately hides her hand...

Maami smiling nervously : Shi... Shiva beta kaise ho tum... sab thik hai na... Aap log andar aao na... Rishita and Dev are also here...

They interned in the house where Rishita and Dev are sitting having tea...

Dev: Arey Shiva aagaye tum log?

Maami: Beth na Shiva Raavi mein chai laati hoon tum dono ke liye...

Shiva: Arey nahi Mami Saas hum log chal the hai... heina Dev plastering fake smile and signing him to get up...

Dev: Haan haan Maami chalte hai hum... waise hum sirf Rishita and Raavi ko drop karne aayr the, so...

Maami: Ohh okay koi baat nahi...

Shiva: Maami Saas (pressing first word) apni khangan tayaar karo as a gift for Raavi...

while Maami fake smiles going backwards and immediately went to sit with Rishita, while Dev and Shiva head toward entrance to go back to the Pandya Mantion with Raavi who followed them till their bike...Dev drove back to Pandya Mantion without waiting for Shiva as he has some meeting which Gombhi informed him on the phone call...

Raavi: Shiva!

calls Raavi rushing toward him while Shiva turns to her giving wide smile....

Shiva: Haan MamiKiBehenkiBeti bol...

Raavi: Woh... thanks for dropping me and take care see you soon...

Shiva: Arey don't thank me chipkali... after all tujhe toh pura haq hai mujh par...for you I can become anyone you want to... (watching her intensely)

While Raavi blushes lightly and bends down her head not able to bear his intense gaze...taking it as a chance to romance Shiva comes close to her face and lifting her chin up with his finger he look in to her eyes lovingly... but suddenly his face expression becomes strict...

Shiva: Aur haan, ek aur baat, tum na yaha waha mat jaya karo ta ki kisi ki buri nazar na lag jaye tujh par....Aaj kal kisi se bhi barusa nahi kar sakte...jab biwi itni khubsurat hai toh buri nazar toh. lag jayegi naa... aur khaas kar aadmiyon ka...tum sirf meri chipkali hai and I don't like when someone looks at you...

Raavi looks up shocked by his possesivnes and gets happy for a moment and smiles admiringly... but composes herself and beats his shest with her fist while Shiva winches in pain...

Raavi: Aye gadhere! Tu pagal hogaye hai kya?...kya baat kar rahi ho?... Dekh mujhe achhe se Shiva... Yeh sindoor aur mangalsutra kis liye pehen li meine...Didn't you remember that you had marked me as your wife for a life long...

Suddenly Raavi realizes what she just blurted and gets embarrassed and looks away scolding herself in mind as she didn't understand why she said so... after a moment she looks up to find Shiva who is watching her with wide smile of happiness...

Shiva: Kya?... Kya bola... phirse bol na(leaning to her)...

Raavi pushes her blushingly: Jao na Shiva... mujhe kuch nahi kehna... with this she runs toward the house blushing more, leaving grinning Shiva behind...

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One man is shown watching them from far and talking with someone through the phone....

Man: Yes boss... they are here...

Boss: Did you saw her?

Man: Yes she went inside after talking with her husband...

Boss angrily: Keep an eye on her... when you get a chance you should kidnap her and bring her here to my house did you get that?

Man: Yes Boss

After that boss cuts the call and looks up to his phone's screen where hd see a photo of the girl....

Boss angrily: My girl very soon you will be with us and answer my each question... Tune mujhe dhoka diya hai... now it's time to payback....

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Raavi inters in the house smiling widely...

Raavi with sudden realization: Mujhe kya ho gaya hai? Why I'm blushing like a mad by Shiva's words and actions... aur why did I say those words to Shiva.... Oh god abh woh mujhe tease karega... aur why my heart is beating with so much speed... Yeh sab kya ho raha hai...Raavi sambhal lo apne aap ko... God please help me...with these throughs she wents to her room and there she finds her Maasi Maa sitting on the bed waiting for her...

Maami: Arey meri bachhi aao aao mujhe tumse baat karni hai... beith yaha...

Raavi: Haan Maasi maa kya baat hai... aur Rishita kaha hai?... (sits near Maami)...

Maami: Woh ladhki tayaar ho rahi hai... aaj maine ek puja arrange ki hai aur tujhe bhi tayaar hona hai... but usse pehle mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai...

Raavi: I know Maasi Maa aap kya bolna chati hai... yahi na.. ki mein kese reh rahi hoon Shiva ke sath... Did he hurt me... Shiva bohot rude hai... gawar hai... He doesn't respect you.. Why don't you divorce him and all right Maasi maa?

Maami shocked: A.. Arey nahi nahi Raavi aisa kuch nahi hai...

Raavi: Don't lie to me Maasi maa.... I know that you don't like Shiva, but I swear he is not like what you think of him... he is very nice person, supportive, humble, mujhse kabhi jooth nahi bolti, Mujhe respect karta hai, apna responsibility ko achhe se nbhana aata hai usse... and If you say anything wrong about him I swear I will leave you right here itself and wapas apni husband ke paas chala jaun ga... aur aap se kabhi baat nahi karunga... So please give proper respect to my husband...

Maami gets shocked hearing her pricing Shiva and calling him as his husband and looks terrified by her anger...

Maami: Raavi maine kuch nahi bola naa... shant ho ja meri bachi.... in herself: Shiva ne toh puri tara se bighat diya hai mere phul jaisi masoom bachhi ko... dekho kis tarah se defend kar rahi hai Shiva ko... ohh bhai aap kya hoga meri Raavi ka...

Raavi shakes her bringing back from her throughs and asks what through eyes...

Raavi: Maasi maa kaha kho gayi hai aap?

Maami: Kuch nahi Raavi... chalo chalthe hai hume mandir jaana hai naa...pooja ke liye... maine already sab tayaar kar ke rakhe the...

Aur woh Rishita ko bhi inform karna hai....

Raavi simply nods and they wents out and informing Rishita they head to the mandir...

They didn't even noticed a car following them...

Phone conversation between Boss and Goon

Goon: Hallo Boss, woh ladki mandir ke taraf jaa rahe hai, lekin aakele nahi ek ladhki aur aaurat hai uski paas.... we are following them...

Boss: Good! Plan yaad hai?...

Goon: Yes Boss!

Boss: Good... he cuts the call...

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Rishita Raavi and Maami sitting in the car....

Raavi and Maami talking randomly while Rishita sits uninterested....

Suddenly their car broke down in the middle of the road and Maami send driver to find a mechanic while the trio sitting waiting for driver to come back with mechanic...

As a chance one car stops right in front of them and they look at the car confused...

But their confusion turns into big shock and they get scared and hugs each other in fear standing close to each other, when they saw a group of man coming out from the car with sticks, guns.... and surrounding them...

Rishita scared: Aap. log kaun hai? Dekho... paas matt aa nahi toh...

Raavi: Chup ho jao Rishita...

Maami comes in front of them trying to protect Rishita and Raavi...

Maami: Aye paas matt aa nahi toh marr dalun gi... Don't you dare to touch my daughter...

One of the goon smirks nearing her... while they goes backwards... pulling Maami by her elbow Goon pushes her a side and she hits her head on the rock laying on the ground... while another two catches Rishita and slaps her hard and pushes her hard in posses she falls down hitting her head and she too falls half unconscious ... while Raavi looks on scared and bends down on her knees and cries asking them to leave....

Raavi: Please Bhaiya chhor dijiye na hume... please... I beg you kuch mat kariye...

One of the Goon comes near Raavi and beats her with stick on her head making her fall down holding her head....

At that time Driver come back and saw a scene in front of his eyes with shock... luckily he hides behind a tree before they could notice him... after some time they drove off taking one of the girl with them... watching the car disappeared he rushed toward his car and saw Maami and Rishita lying unconscious... within no time He gets bottle of water from the car and sprinkle it on Maami on which Maami gets back on her senses looks around....

Driver: Ma'am are you okay?

Maami: Meri bachhi... Raamu Raavi kahan hai...

Raamu: Ma'am they had kidnapped Raavi.... Meine apne aakhon se dekha hai how they took Raavi with them...

Maami looks up being shocked and panics looking around not knowing what to do while tears make a way to flaw from her eyes...

Maami crying: Meri bachhi.. Raavi... aur Rish...

Before completing her sentence her eyes fall on Rishita who is lying unconscious 2 - 3 meter away from her and she with the help of Raamu comes near her... taking her head on her lap she starts patting her cheeks while Raamu sprinkle water on her face on which Rishita slowly opens her eyes.... she gets up with sudden force and looks around...

Rishita in shocked state: Aunty Raavi.... Raavi ko... Inn logon ne Raavi ko kidnap kar diya hai!...

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At the store Shiva is seen roaming there and here being restless while Gombhi is going through the list, checking what necessary things should be done... He lifts his head and saw Shiva all worried as he still didn't get what he asked for... he sensed there was something which is bothering him...

Ghombhi: Shiva kya hua? Is everything ok? You seem so much worried?

Shiva restless: Pata nahi Gombhi, mujhe naa bohot gabrahat ho raha hai Raavi ko leke...Kahi uss Maami ne ya phir Rishita ne kuch aisa waisa nahi bol raha hai... Mami ki toh koi bharusa nahi hai... Woh toh mujhe bhilkul pasand nahi karta... our wo Rishita...

Gombhi: Arey Shiva shant ho jaa... aisa kuch nahi hai... Why don't you call her?...Phone hai naa tumare paas... Dekh na, uski awaz sunn ne ke baat saari tension dhur ho jayega (smiles teasingly)....

Shiva: Thik keh rahe ho Gombhi abhi phone laga deti hoon uss MamiKiBehenkiBeti ko...

With this he takes his phone and dailies her number and waits for her to answer... while Gombhi shakes his head at his brother's antics... after not getting answer he looks up at Gombhi...

Shiva: Bhai Raavi phone nahi utha raha hai...

Ghombi: Arey Shiva, uthayegi, todhi der baat phir se try kar, shayad koi kaam mein busy ho... on which Shiva simply nods....

at that time they hear a voice...

"Ghombhi! Shiva!" the duo turned around to see the owner of voice and their eyes widen with shock finding Rishita running toward store with so much difficulty....only one word escaped from their mouth...

Gombhi and Shiva in union: Rishita?!

Within no time Ghombhi and Shiva rushed to her and catches her before falling....

Ghombhi panicked: Rishita!... tum iss halat mein.... What happened?.. Yeh choth kaise lagi?... Hua kya hai?....

Shiva shakes her: Bol na Rishita!...

Rishita looks up and gulped in breath to calm down herself but she couldn't as the horrible incident that happened sometime ego keep on flashing in front of her eyes making her burst in tears....

Rishita sobbing: Woh... woh... Shiva... Raavi...

Shiva's heart skipped a beat in fear hearing Raavi's name....

Shiva: Kya... Kya hua hai Raavi ko?...

Rishita: Woh Some goons kidnapped Raavi... with it she narrated everything what happened with them....

While Gombhi and Shiva's eyes widened with shock...

Gombhi worried: Aur Maami?... Maami kahan hai?

Rishita: Maami went to Pandya house to inform everyone.... Maybe they are in police station now...

Paying no heed to Rishita and Gombhi, Shiva immediately rushed to his bike.... but before he could reach he was stopped by Gombhi who pulled him by his elbow and turned him toward himself....

Ghombh: Shiva Rukh! Kaha ja rahe ho?

Shiva not even listening him properly, he was looking like a mad who had fallen in trance... Shiva: Mujhe Raavi ke paas jana hai Gombhi, usse meri zaroorat hai, mujhe Raavi ko bachhana hai abh! Hathye meri raaste se! ( with anger filled eyes)...

On which Gombhi slaps him hard bringing back to his sense and shakes him angrily....

Gombhi: Are you mad Shiva?! You don't even know where is she and who had kidnapped her!...Kaise bachhaega usse?.... Woh log tumhe maar dalega agar tum akeli jayega....

Shiva jerks his hand and shouts on the top of his voice: I don't care Gombhi! Mujhe sirf Raavi ko bachha na hai!...

Rishita comes in interrupting: Mujhe pata hai woh log kaun hai.. as I had heard their phone conversation...

While Gombhi and Shiva look on...

Shiva immediately turns to her: Kun hai woh log Rishitha?...

Rishita gets scared of Shiva’s anger filled eyes and struggles to speak

Rishita: Woh... woh... Shiva woh log...

Shiva gets irked: Speak up Damn It!

Rishita closing her eyes and in a one go: My Dad!...

After what she looks up to see his reaction... and gets terrified by his look... Suddenly

Shiva's eyes darkened as if some beast intered inside him and his hand formed in a fist shouting only one name in his mind...

"Janardhan Seth!"

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