Shivi FF: Drunken Confessions, Bonus Shivi content, pg.5 (finished) - Page 4

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Posted: 4 years ago
#31

Such great 3 shots! But have to say last one was my favourite!!! Shiva teasing Raavi was so much fun 🥰

I was blushing while reading their text exchanges 😆

I want to know what happened after they went for some privacy 🥺


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Posted: 4 years ago
#32

Fantastic chapter. ❤️

Shivi are so adorable.

Yaar, why did you end it there ?

It was getting interesting. 😆

Shiva's teasing mode was hilarious. 🤣


"Family time bohot hua"🤣


"Hot?"

"Not" 🤣


I cracked up. 😆


Do continue.... at least one more chapter.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Loved it! Apart from Shiva, loved her confession for DevTa and Krish. Now, hopefully, Rishita will be off of Raavi's back! And loved how her true Shiva's confession was in the bedroom a d he didn't brush it away. Haha I didn't expect him to tease her so openly. But loving every bit of it. Wish there was a little more continuation. We have no problem with you getting carried away.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: MeeraWrites

Fantastic chapter. ❤️

Shivi are so adorable.

Yaar, why did you end it there ?

It was getting interesting. 😆

Shiva's teasing mode was hilarious. 🤣


"Family time bohot hua"🤣


"Hot?"

"Not" 🤣


I cracked up. 😆


Do continue.... at least one more chapter.


Achha fine. I’ll post one last chotu sa part 😆


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Posted: 4 years ago
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Shiva teasing Raavi in front of all....enjoyed this story very much❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#36

Gazab🤩🤣💛

Don't end it here. We want continuation. Abhi toh maza aana shuru hua hai. Let's get to know what happens in the bedroom please.. 😜😂

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Posted: 4 years ago
#37

Amazing and very funny ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#38

Because all of you wanted to know what happened in their bedroom 😂



Shiva caught the pillow and threw it back at his maami ki behen ki beti. She caught it and walked over to where Shiva was standing. She hit him on the head with it.

“Yeh kya tha? Sab kya soch rahe honge.” She fake-cried.

“Kya sochenge? Hum pati-patni hai, bhai-behen nahi!”

Raavi blushed at his pati-patni comment. She did the mistake of looking over at his torso and she couldn’t stop her smile. How did she never know how hot Shiva was before this? She had never seen him shirtless before their marriage. Suddenly she felt his arms pining her against the wall. She blushed hard.

“Toh ab conversation puri kare?” Shiva asked.

“Kaunsi conversation?” Raavi seemed puzzled.

“Tune bhaang peeke dil ki baat bata di. Ab meri baari.”

Raavi’s heart started pounding loudly. She had not expected this. What would he say? She didn’t want to hear it if it were bad. And knowing Shiva, it can’t be all good. He couldn’t dislike her all that much since he promised not to leave her, but he was still a jangli bhootnath.

“Maami ki behen ki beti.” Shiva started. “Raavi felt her breath hitch. “Chipkali toh tu hai hi, par chipkaliyon ki beauty queen. Itni buri bhi nahi lagti mujhe. Aur hot...” This evil person stopped there.

“Hot kya?? Kya?? Main bohot hot hu.” Raavi said.

Shiva looked her up and down as if assessing her. “6/10”

“Ae gadhera. Main 11/10 hot hu.”

Shiva rolled his eyes and Raavi pushed him back. He started laughing and even though Raavi was mad, she couldn’t resist his laugh. She decided to prove him right then and there how hot she could be. Perhaps even take revenge for his earlier behaviour .

She pulled him by his arm and switched places with him. Now she was pining him to the wall. She put her hand on his chest and stopped him when he tried to move. With her other hand, she traced his face with her finger.

“Tu hot aur main bhi hot, toh der kis baat ki?” Raavi said. “Aaj raat bas tu aur main iss kamre mein. Toh iss raat ko thodi yaadgaar bana le?”

Shiva had not expected matters to escalate so far. Had this maami ki behen ki beti gone completely crazy? Or was she still intoxicated? He was getting scared. Raavi kissed him on the cheek, then she kissed him on the neck. Shiva had to remind himself to be in control, not to get carried away, but Raavi was making it very difficult with all the kisses she left on his cheek and his neck.

“Ab bol, main kitni hot hu?” She asked him in a seductive voice.

“11/10.”

Raavi laughed and pushed him away. “Dekha! Aise lete hai badla.”

Shiva couldn’t believe what a little minx his wife was. He wouldn’t let her win this one. She had embarrassed him more than once today and he wanted revenge. He grabbed her by the waist and pulled her close.

“Raavi.” He whispered in her ears, and it had the exact reaction he had been hoping for. Raavi shivered listening to her name from his lips.

He traced her lips with his fingers. Raavi closed her eyes feeling this touch. He slowly descended his lips to hers, keeping it only half an inch from hers. He opened his eyes to look at her face and he saw the most beautiful sight he’d ever seen. Raavi had her eyes closed, but her cheeks were rosy and there was a hint of a small smile on her face.

Shiva left her. Nope, their first kiss had to be special. This didn’t feel right just yet. He didn’t mind losing this one. They had their entire life to take fight and take revenge on each other. He’ll win the next time.

“Chal maan leta hu ki tu bohot hot hai.” Shiva said.

Raavi was slightly disappointed he didn’t kiss her, but she was surprised at his sudden forfeit. “Chal main bhi hosho aawaz mein accept kar leti hu ki tu bhi bohot hot hai.”

“Haa hot toh aap dono hi ho.” Shiva-Raavi both turned to see Krish at the door. He looked shocked as he took in the scene before him, and Shiva’s face which was covered in lipstick marks. “Mujhe laga aap dono safe ho, par Dhara bhabhi ne thik hi kaha tha. Ab knock karke aana jana parega. Mere brahmachari bhai tak ko bhi nahi chora aapne. Next time se please darwaza bandh rakhna. Main abhi bhi bachha hu.”

Saying this, he ran away, leaving the couple embarrassed one more time.




Edited by ananya269 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
#39

Now this was funny. Krish always makes them embarrass.



Beautiful story❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#40

And that is the difference between Raavi and Rishita !

Rishita scolded Krish for barging in, but Raavi got embarrassed and felt it's funny instead ! Bechaara Krish ! Bacha akele hai, sab bahiyon ke kamre mein babhi bhi haai ab 😂😂


Great job ! ☺️♥️


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