Originally posted by: Aurorathedawn
Yeah exactly đ!!,I had learned French so had thought to mix latin and french for some words
Ooo I took French lessons for a week or so. And then I gave upđ
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Originally posted by: Aurorathedawn
Yeah exactly đ!!,I had learned French so had thought to mix latin and french for some words
Ooo I took French lessons for a week or so. And then I gave upđ
Originally posted by: Luvs_SanIsh
đđHeartbreaking Beautiful, want to say moreâŠ..but canât find the right words to express itâŠ.just flooredđ„°đ
Thank you!!glad you liked it!!
Originally posted by: Suparna2210
I just read the whole thing in one go! Loving the story! Cold hearted Raavi is what I crave for since she is too naive. I love her transformation! The Pandyas deserve it! Waiting to see where you take the story! Waiting for update!
wow,you read it in one go??,glad you liked it!!.Yes,considering the fact that the showmakers aren't gonna give us a strong,independant women who can give it back in their faces,i thought why not write my wish as a part of the story.Will update soon
Originally posted by: barbieflora
Ooo I took French lessons for a week or so. And then I gave upđ
oh,well you can learn it again anytime thoughđ.I use my book for latin and french for the phrases i use
When will you update this!? UPDATE SOON PLEASEEEEEEEEEE
STRONGEST PIECE ON THE CHESS BOARD
Raavi Heaved a sigh as she finished her tragic tale.It had been a long and painful conversation,but she did not regret it,no,not one bit.She loved seeing painful emotions in her apparent âguestâsâ.It was almost pleasurable,the pain in their eyes,the so-called remorse.Letâs say,the weaker they get by their emotions,the stronger she gets in her resolve to burn them down.
That day the angel in Raavi died,or say,went into an eternal sleep.What came out was no good,but the devil on Earth.
That day pulchra domina sine misericordia rose inside her.
Shiva could only stare at Raavi and look at the women who rose from hell.No Longer was she the girl who had married him in the altar,nor was she the girl who became his poison,one he knew would kill him,but yet couldnât seem to pull out from whatever stupor she had put him in.This was someone who was buried in the deepest ,darkest pits of Raavi's fragile heart and strong mind.
In that moment,though,Shiva had somewhere started to accept that he will have to try with every drop of blood,even though he might fail dramatically,to bring Raavi back from wherever she was
However,he did not know that,while trying to unbind the rope which had confined his Raavi,he might get choked by the rope himselfâŠ..
Raavi looked around and then became dubious.She had anticipated them to be sad,to be guilty,but here,all she could see was pity in their face,in their eyes.It angered Raavi to no heights âInstead of being guilty,these sorry people are
looking down upon me in PITY??!!.They will pay,and will regret their wrongdoings so bad even after the sun is set,when I rust away,no one in the pandya family will ever forget this incident.I will make sure of that.For now,let me get laid back with them,a little comfortable.After swallowing them in my trap will I show then that there is a reason that folks fear the devil,a reason that the queen is the strongest piece on the chess board.
Rishita,clad in a red embroidered kurti,with little shiny borders which stood out with a plain white kurti,meekly came and hugged raavi,burst out crying.Raavi caught hold of her and embraced her as strongly as she could,crying out as if she is venting out all her anger.Rishita and Raavi murmured in each others embraces,long lost sisters meeting at lastâŠ.
The whole family was in a trance.Bewildered,shocked at the most,happy.Happy to see Raavi back,to see her coming out,to being her innocent self,being the ideal type of girl they wanted her to be.
Dhara,who was dressed in a royal blue saree,came next and hugged Raavi,cryingâŠ.for the loss of her innocent Raavi,her shiva,and of course her baby.She cried for the children not only she,but the women in her arms had lost too.Her pain of a mother without a child,was finally understood by someone,and none other than the girl she accepted as her sister.Raavi too,cried in her diâs arms,for the loss of her child,for the loss of the family she wanted as her ownâŠ.
By the time Dhara was done with Raavi,Krish was already choking on his tears.He looked back at his partner in crime,who once fluttered around like a colourful,radiant butterfly,the girl who was as soft as a flowerâs petal,and of course,the girl whose soul was brutally killed.
At the last thought,Krish completely lost it,running and hugging his sister in law tightly.If someone else saw them,they would think that krish was hurting her by his actions,but the pair of mischievous partners knew that it was their hug,the buddy hug,their sign of friendship.
Dev looked at Raavi and prayed to all gods that she justâŠ.lived a happy life.Slowly,he went and half hugged her and patted her back in a friendly way.Raavi too,smiled with a pinkish-red nose and a half smile on our her now red face stricken with tears.She missed this,the love she felt from them,the fullness her heart felt because of the fact that she had family.
Next came Gautam,with the same eyes Raavi remembered,the eyes of experience,the eyes of truth and calmness.He embraced her and patted her head in an affectionate way,Happy to have his little sister back.
Raavi backed away lightly from Gautam and smile with tears at the guilt stricken suman.Her kaki,her ma.She bent down and put her head on sumanâs lap and the walla broke,it was like years of hatred,the pain,the cruel words came crashing down on both Raavi and Suman,the tsunami of pain was soaked with the comfort they both felt now.
Shiva was horror struck.His senses seemed to have stopped working.He didnât knew what to feel.Happiness that Raavi was not gone,but still there,with them,or the burning fire of guilt,anger and sadness that was burning him inside out.He had killed his child,his child was dead,Gone,without him knowing about itâs existence.Just like that.
And then everything crashed down.Like a giant tsunami on the world.He felt as if he was falling from the highest point on Earth.He felt like he couldnât breathe,the air knocked out of his chest.The pain of everything inking inside him was unbearable,the torture of the highest degree wasnât phyiscal pain,nor was it the mental one,it was guilt.Tthe guit which eats a person inside out,killing them inch by inch,second by second.Sometimes,the feeling was alost no there,while the other time,it hits like a truck.The cycle goes on...pain,troture,numbness...pain,torture,numbnessâŠ
Raavi finally got up from Sumanâs lap and slowly turned around.Only to be met with the black eyes that were piercing her soul.She felt immobilized,her hear speeding at the sight of him.She slowly went towards him,taking small steps,as if she was scared,which she sure as hell was.
Standing in front of him,Raavi looked at the turmoil in his eyes.A flood of emotions in his black eyes.She then noticed something.The fire in his eyes had dimmed,Sure it was there,but still,it was is if something or rather,someone was missing.SHe was sure,that before coming here,he had not fire in his eyes,the fire was extinguished.She felt giddy at the thought that she was the one he was dreaming when the fire had come up in his eyes.
The air in room had shifted happy to tense.All eyes on the broken souls standing in front of each other.Lost in each others eyes.All emotions pent up were finally exhibited through their orbs.Questions,answers,accusations,anger,all was given away through their hearts and eyesâŠ.
No word was spoken between them,just the eye connection between the two was the hope that the two were communicating.
Suddenly,Raaviâs head started spinning.It was as if everything around her was moving at a inhumane speed.She was feeling no weight and her head felt unusually light.The last thing she saw before crumpling in her belovedâs arm was a flash of white and a feeble voice saying
âMumma?â
Everyone hurdled around the girl whose will and legs both,had just given out.Panic rose inside everyone.They had just found their light,were they going to lose her so quickly?
Everyone swiftly moved towards the exist and the next thing they knew,the car was speeding away to the nearest hospital there was.
Amidst all the commotion,no one saw the smirk that adorned Raaviâs faceâŠâŠâŠ...
Hello!!i hope you enjoy this chapter.PLease comment your thoughts about it.What do you think would is Raavi's next move??
P.S:It is around 1:18 in the night heređ
Oh Goddâ€
This was awrsomeđđâ€
I am waiting to see what Raavi will do!!
I am really eager to know what is next.......... Please update soonđ„°
WOW!
Finished it in a go!
Lovely story.
Very angsty.
Just a request though Can you put up an INDEX on the first page with which chapter is on which page?
It is difficult to go through all the pages đł
Interesting update, no words to describe itđ
What will be Raavi's next step