Shiva and Raavi SS:love is blind. Chapter 14 updated on page 44 - Page 29

This one was so beautiful and so painful! My heart goes out for Raavi ❤️ and you write ❤️❤️

Loved it.

It's painfully beautiful ♥

Ravi's entire journey is very well described.

The girl has gone through lot 😢

Update the next part soon ♥

Nicely written! My heart breaks for Raavi! Why oh why?💔💔😢😢 Arghh.

And MU here too. Can't wait to read the next part!

DEVIL'S EPITOME

CRASH!!!

Blood everywhere,people running to her was the only thing Raavi could make out as her head was spinning so bad that she couldn't comprehend the state in which she is.Keeping her hand on her stomach,all she could do was pray for her child…….

Raavi stopped for a jiffy and looked around her surroundings and was pleased to see the harrowing faces of her guests.She smirked in victory as she saw pain ripple through their faces and slot in their hearts.To others,she might be a dark horse,a villain,If she was a villain,then she merrily is a person whose tragic yet beautiful story hasn’t been told yet.

She wanted them to feel the anguish she felt,heck,still feels through her heart and her entire body.It is sporadic,yet everytime it hurts the same it did 2 years ago.The pain of losing things which kept her sane.IT coursed through her body at an inhuman speed.Showing her memories of the her past self,one that was jolly and naive.Many a times,in the dark hours of night,when humans slept peacefully and the demons roamed around to spread their evil,did Raavi sat near her window and wondered, “what could have we been?”.This question haunted her days and stole her sleep in the nights.She finally answered it 6 months ago by telling her mind,heart and soul “What is gone is gone,and will never come back.Our past teaches us to not repeat the mistakes that have put us in this misery.I will rise,rise so high that there will be no way to look down or back”

She snapped back from her thoughts and resumed her work of descry torment on their faces and find solace in it to calm her heart which was burning in vengeance to retribution.

HE looked at her and in an instant figured out that this wasn’t either Raavi Pandya or Raavi Narayan.This was a dark shadow that had taken over her body and her soul which once held nothing more than love for him and his family.He isn’t contradicting of the sins he had committed and was ready to take each and every punishment she gave,even if she condemned him to hell,he would,without any hesitation take it for his sins were already eating him alive and he figured out he wouldn’t live for a long time.Yet,what hurt was the constant reminder that she had changed because of HIM.He had pushed her to change herself so drastically.She,no doubt was still beautiful and physically just the same,but what had changed and utterly horrified him was her aura and her very soul.Earlier,Raavi had a soul of an angel,one that would make everyone near her at the least.happy.

Now,something dangerous radiated from her.The very minute she stepped in the room did the atmosphere change.It felt as though the temperatures dropped and the weather outside too,behaving rather abnormally.Shiva knew very well that these were coincidences,but he could not deny the power and wrath that radiated of her.Many could not see,but Shiva did and was mortified to find that she was the epitome of the devil.her face showed disgust,ruthlessness and utter loathing as soon as she stepped into the room.perhaps,she felt it too.A different aura which was ridiculously familiar,distant like hers,yet not quite her.She first set her eyes on the family members and looked as though she couldn't care less,but Shiva could see under her mask and bring out the mild surprise at seeing them.Then her eyes landed onto him.For a few seconds she did not moved,nor did he,in the fear to lose contact,but then she snapped out of it and a sinister look plastered on her face which showed the things she was crafting in her mind to make him suffer.

Even after all this he refused to believe that she changed because of the accident and her leaving the house. No,there was another reason,there had to be another reason

He knew that this Raavi was not his,yet,they both had accepted the way they were 3 years ago.If this was a new shade of Raavi,then so it be,He will accept her and love her because,no matter what,both of them knew that in the end,they would be in each other’s arms……

Plucking her courage,Rishita said“Raavi,were-were you ok after the accident??”

Ok?,oh well she was far from ok.The accident was just the start. “no”.Raavi did not want to suffer in her memories alone.If she was to perish,then she damn well take the people who had made her suffer too.Raavi met Rishita’s eyes and said,in a voice which spoke danger “What is the hurry,the last part of my story is yet to be told”.with a meeky voice,krish asked her, “bhabhi did someone else get hurt too??,you look quite sad and empty about it” she looked at the youngest one,and replied with a sweet smile,yet it made her features more ominous “Yes Krish,you see,I lost my child in that accident” With several gaping faces,and one taking a sharp breath,she began with her tale again…

FLASHBACK STARTS

WARRIOR

Raavi opened her eyes with much difficulty and looked around her surroundings to see that she was in a plain white room with pretty much nothing in it except for an air conditioner and expensive wines kept on the table.The room was big,yet empty,Royal yet boring.Then it hit her.All the memories came flashing back.Shiva throwing her out,her surprise,Shiva hugging that girl and then her accident.

By instinct,she put her hand on her now flat stomach and her heart dropped. “No,this can’t happen,no please pleas-”.And she burst into tears.Screaming like an insaniam convertunt mulieres.Her demented screams were heard by Prafulla and she came running in,only to be met with a helpless condition.

There,in all her misery,was Raavi.Screaming,thrashing and crying.It almost looked as though she was possessed.Her misery and agony came undone after much suppression.

Right then,the rain started pouring and the wind started howling.It was now clear that even mother nature was crying for the crestfallen girl.They cried as Raavi let out her pain for she had paid an exorbitant amount in this life.The wind howled and the rain poured the entire night for the angel who was dead,and in fear of what would become of her…..

NEXT DAY

The sun did not shine today for it feared that the woman who was now sleeping would suck out every inch of warmth from it.Instead,the winds and the rain woke Raavi today.

Her eyes did not open slowly.Rather,she opened them in one snap,and the glint in her eyes would make anyone run away to the opposite direction.Her eyes were full;full of disgust,wrath,madness,betrayal and vengeance.A sense of firmness was too there in her eyes.for what,would be revealed later….

Prafulla came and stood just before her angel’s door.She did not know how she should talk to the girl who had,perhaps,lost everything she had loved except for her.She knew,she had to talk to her know,ensure that she was at the bottom line,physically ok.Emotionally and mentally,it would take years for her to heal because she had lost a part of her own body,her child,her ray of hope in this cruel world.

The reality is, you will grieve forever. You will never ‘get over’ the loss of a loved one; you will learn to live with it. You will heal and you will rebuild yourself around the loss you have suffered. You will be whole, but you will never be the same again. Nor should you be the same, nor should you want to.”

Raavi looked at herself in the mirror and smirked.She looked beautiful,but evil and dangerous and she down right enjoyed it.No longer would she be the good girl,the angel.She was the devil.If there was any supreme evil on Earth,she would be that.Merciless,cold,cruel,selfish and so much more.She relished those words,and her eyes shined when she thought she would be it.

She frowned when she though how would she do the deeds here when her family is here.They would not let her change her temperament for they would think she would hurt herself.They would stop her and eventually she would hurt them when she’ll snap.She could not afford that.Devil,she is,but even she has her duties as a family member and she ought to do that.So she found a way dost(to do in old english) her duties…

Putting the last bag in the car,Raavi took a final look at her family,her real and only family for they were the ones who stuck till the end with her.She managed to put out a smile for them and wave.

It had not been easy to convince her maasima.During their conversation,prafulla started crying and forced Raavi to stay with them for her mental health was not excellent.She asked Raavi why was she punishing her for other’s sins.Why was she leaving them.Raavi’s eyes almost teared but she gathered herself and Prafulla and told her about how shifting to an another place would heal her faster and after much pleadings,Prafulla,still reluctant ,agreed.

She sat in the car and looked at them one last time before the the car pulled away…

Looking ahead,Raavi promised herself she would never look back,never bow or let anyone take control of her life.Her journey to become unstoppable had begun and god help that person who came in between her goal.

That day the angel in Raavi died,or say,went into an eternal sleep.What came out was no good,but the devil on Earth.

That day pulchra domina sine misericordia rose inside her

And that's that!!Raavi's sinister side is finally out and so is the tragic death of her unborm baby.SHiva's determination and Raavi's transformation does deserve an applause.I have used some words in latin,if you would want the translation,please tell me to do so.suggestions are always welcomed!!!

The questions for today's chapter:

1.How was the writting??I am trying to use some different words that would look good on the story.

2.Yours thoughts on today's chapter??

With this,I end the chat for today.,Take care and love you all!!

Emmasky/Celeste

This was so heautifully written and so painful.

Shiva really needs to work a lot lot to bring Raavi back.

It was very beautiful written update👏

Raavi's pain was beautifully described👏😭

Shiva will need to work a lot for bringing Raavi back

They unduly blamed her for one child's death and yet they ended up being the cause of another's.

I don't know if I can even say this is Karma. 💔

It was beautifully written! I can't help but want more. ❤️

HII!!I thought i'll just give the translation of pulchra domina sine misericordia it means:beautiful lady without mercy.I hope you all understand how this is ralted to the context of the story

Oh the irony. They've pushed her to this limit and can't balme her. Losing a child is 💔. Shiva has mountains to move before the Raavi he knew can make a reapprance (if she will ever).

Like the writing. Can you please explain what that red phrase at the end meant? Tried googling that red phrase, but it said lovely lady. I'm pretty sure that's not what it translates to here from context clues perspective.

Edit: haha, just saw the above post. Thanks for that! Now it makes sense. Without the last bit, it had a different meaning.

Thanks!

Originally posted by: Aurorathedawn

HII!!I thought i'll just give the translation of pulchra domina sine misericordia it means:beautiful lady without mercy.I hope you all understand how this is ralted to the context of the story

Oooohhh like La Belle dame sans merci!!!