Suljha lenge uljhe rishto ka maanjha ~ ShiVi (ft. family) - Page 4

Originally posted by: raindropsroses

NEHA! Hats off to you! ♥️
Please continue to give us such beautiful stories! Yaadon ki baarat was playing in my head as I read the ending!

Thanks a lot🤗

that song was playing in my head too while writing the scene😆

Originally posted by: CheerlessIM

Some words are not enough for this chapter .

It is so deep n heart touching 💓

You described so well 👏

Teeno bhaiyo ke life me dhara aur gaumbi ki jagah , Itne upar hai aur wo kitne jyada hurt hoge ye soch kar ki unko khushiya dene wale unhi ke karan dukhi h

😓

It was so emotional seeing shiva n dev's reaction and they don't even know , what should they do to reduce the pain they were feeling 😢

The priest that helped shiva , I am thinking like he was actually God's avatar to show him the right way 🤔

Will you update the next chapter?

I m more than eager to read this story .❤

thank you so much🤗

this is just an OS, I don't plan on extending it, but you're welcome to read more of my stories. Thank you once again❤️

which song is the title based on?

Great work. 👏

Loved every bit of it. ❤️

You penned it down amazingly.

Felt like bas padti rahoon yeh story. 😆

It was so heartwarming. The dialogues you've written for every character was perfect; so much of authenticity.

It's one of the best Pandya Store ff that I've read so far. More power to your pen.

Thanks for such an amazing treat. 🤗🤗

Do write such stories. I would love to read them.

Written perfectly ♥️♥️

And the tittle is so apt 👏

Originally posted by: Unique.Sheep

which song is the title based on?

You don't know??

It's this

https://youtu.be/YKcmMmJlKNk

Originally posted by: MeeraWrites

Great work. 👏

Loved every bit of it. ❤️

You penned it down amazingly.

Felt like bas padti rahoon yeh story. 😆

It was so heartwarming. The dialogues you've written for every character was perfect; so much of authenticity.

It's one of the best Pandya Store ff that I've read so far. More power to your pen.

Thanks for such an amazing treat. 🤗🤗

Do write such stories. I would love to read them.

Thank you so much🤗

Originally posted by: Fah_huq

Written perfectly ♥️♥️

And the tittle is so apt 👏

Thank you❤️

This was so beautiful Neha. This, the way it was written and the way you managed to describe everyone's emotions is really heart touching!!. It made me so happy to read this piece because of the way everyone slowly came to a resolution.

I really liked the family aspect of this and really does show that things can be resolved with proper communication.

Thank you for writing this piece, probably one of my new favorite one.

wen r u updating this