Burning For Her - A ShiVi OS - Page 2

Originally posted by: vivpri

This cannot be the end! Please continue 👌😃

Aww thank you!! If I think of something, I’ll def continue 😊

Originally posted by: raindropsroses

Damn 😍🔥

Please continue this, want to see how Raavi feels 🙈

Haha thank you 😊 I was inspired by Kanwar’s pic 😂 If an idea comes to me, I’ll try and write Raavi’s POV as well!

Originally posted by: milkcakejamun

Wow! This was great! Like the others have mentioned before, absolute 🔥!

Love how we were able to get an inside look into Shiva's thoughts! ❤️

Thank you!! ❤️ So happy that everyone liked it!! Yep, something about all that pent up tension and spark between Shivi made me think of Sleepless Nights at Malabar Hills so I thought to do a rewrite! I really enjoyed writing about Shiva and his thoughts!

Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes

Wow. There's got to be part 2 for how Raavi feels.

Thanks! Yep that seems to be a common request. If I can do justice, I’ll def write it!!

Originally posted by: katheriene

Amazing update😊

It was very hot🔥

Continue this, it is very interesting

Thank you 😊 Glad everyone liked it!!

Originally posted by: SlytherInMe.

Ahhhh this was so hot ☺️ His thoughts had me totally blushing!!

Please continue this in Raavi's pov and then have them act on their feelings 😉

This was amazingly written, I loved it <3

Haha omg your username reminds me of Draco 😂 I love it! I really enjoyed writing from Shiva’s POV! Glad it came across as intended 😉 I’ll def try and write from Raavi’s POV and knowing me as a writer, I’ll eventually take it to the next level. If not in this story, then the next haha Thank you for the lovely comment ❤️

Originally posted by: Foxii

Second everyone here... so so good and it screams for a second part, Pleaseeee ♥️

Thank you ♥️ If I can do justice, I’ll def write a second part 😊

Originally posted by: hedwig_potter

I am begging you, please write a second part.

This is so good! Well done👏👏

Aww thank you 😊 I’m so so happy with the response!! If an idea strikes me, I’ll def continue!

Amazing.. would love to read more..

Raavi is smelling sweet and soft but what about himself.. shochha hai shiva ne.. week tak nahta nahi hai.. bechara Raavi.. when he adjusted pallu for Raavi during kidnapping scene.. all Raavi woul be thinking about deodorant spray 🤣🤣🤣

Originally posted by: Roroo

Amazing.. would love to read more..

Raavi is smelling sweet and soft but what about himself.. shochha hai shiva ne.. week tak nahta nahi hai.. bechara Raavi.. when he adjusted pallu for Raavi during kidnapping scene.. all Raavi woul be thinking about deodorant spray 🤣🤣🤣

Thank you! Haha trust me I was thinking the same thing while writing 🤣🤣 Well he’ll be taking cold showers more often now so that should take care of things 😉😂