ShiVi OS: Bubblegum - Page 2

Wow 🔥

Did not see that coming. Haha and the last line was unexpected. Looks like Shiva managed to have the cake and eat it too.😆

That was just 🔥

Taking things to the next level in ShiVi FFs 🤣

Loved it Ashuuuu! ♥️

THIS WASS SO GOOOD ,CAMT WAIT TO READD MORE OF YOUR STORIES😏💓

Originally posted by: milkcakejamun

Wow was this steaming and hot! LOVED it! ❤️

Never thought of "neanderthal-ism" as a description for Raavi, but I love it, especially considering the situation.

Considering your username you probably would understand, but growing up, I read a couple of Harry Potter fanfics (never wrote for HP though), and I always loved bubblegum stories. This OS brought me down memory lane 😆

And my god, if this non 18+ story is like this, I can't wait for your 18+ stories! In terms of writing critique, I think your writing totally suits my taste, so nothing to change there!

Ahhh, thank you so much Milkwa <3 I feel Raavi has a lot of characteristics and we're yet to see more as the show goes on haha but I love that you're a potterhead. I severely toned down this OS so yes my 18+ ones are about to be next level ☺️

*tagging people that expressed interest in reading my stories 😳, I'd love for you all to check this one shot out*

Originally posted by: vivpri

Awesome update 👌👍 last line cracked me up 😂🤣

thank you so much jaan <3

I think remember seeing it in some show and I was like I have to have a scene where Shiva steals the gum from Raavi's mouth while kissing her.

*tagging people that expressed interest in reading my stories , I'd love for you all to check this one shot out*

Originally posted by: katheriene

Amazing update

Shivi's moment was hot🔥

Loved your writing

thank you so much!! I know we'll never get something like this in the show but I think ShiVi fighting is hot too lmaooo

*tagging people that expressed interest in reading my stories , I'd love for you all to check this one shot out*

Already did, Ashu! It was bomb ♥️♥️

Originally posted by: raindropsroses

That was just 🔥

Taking things to the next level in ShiVi FFs 🤣

Loved it Ashuuuu! ♥️

Whoa!! Nicely written👏👏

Loved reading it❤️

Restrained steaminess, good pace setting and generally good flow. Very much enjoyed reading it . Do give us more ShiVi to fawn over.

This one shot was really good! 🤍

Love it!