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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Prinzessin1


Honestly your post got me soooo teary eyed. Thank you so much for celebrating my work on such awsome level. ❤️


SR,SD =? I know MB ad Ive read my fair share of them in life, never knew I would subonciousy be writing on such levels 🤣


green: :D. This was to show that men like Hashir can be dream lovers too (without pre-marital nonesense) and that women like Mashal, if treated right/with patience etc in beginning ( and always cherished outside intimacy situation) can blossom into ideal intimate partners too. Btw I hope/readers also felt the soul connecting emotions 😳/raw love in this part which is very hard to put in words but only felt by them.


Blue: She was serious what she said 😉 (one of the reasons was trust), but Hashir being a gentleman knew how quickly unknowingly the fine line can be crossed and despite her pleading (and begging) he didnt do mouqa ka faida uthana. A huge part of a husband/hero´s real amazingness/idealness gets revealed during intimacy. So yes I wanted to make Hashir stand out in this field too (without appearing boring or creativeless) alongside leave a good message for my readers.


Brown: I have read their guidelines and feel my writing style and extend wont be accepted on IF. But I am open to read a work sample which has been accepted by IF. Do Pm me.


pink:😆. So what pyaar ke names do you find suitable ( in fiction world)?. But yes I dont like using Babe, honey etc especially for characters who otherwise speak very good Urdu. I tried to do some googling on urdu sweet name callings but didnt find much interesting😆. ps. the jaan used here was referred as life not as nickname. If i had used the word zindagi it would have been OTT lol.


SR ,SD = Silhouette Romance , Silhouette Desire.


I agree only with Hashir's unconditional Undying love patience trust encouragement can a girl.like Mashal who was raised by Apa ji develop the confidence to express her intimate desires. Again Hashir is the ideal.partner any girl.would wish for.


I.don't prefer any.love names even if it is in fiction world.

Umm if a husband would adress his wife as Biwi pyar se when they are alone.


Oh ok she was serious but its good that Hashir her husband is a gentleman. Not all husbands are like that.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Missing Hashir Mashal.

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Posted: 5 years ago

I miss them too and sometimes watch jtc epis. Still love this duo like before.

btw will you be posting ur last review and khiyali pullaos?

Hashir &Mashal fever is still not gone at all

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Prinzessin1

I miss them too and sometimes watch jtc epis. Still love this duo like before.

btw will you be posting ur last review and khiyali pullaos?

Hashir &Mashal fever is still not gone at all

I shall post the review this Sunday for sure.

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Posted: 5 years ago

no doubt the serial had alot of down moments, headache inducing epis even. And Hashir's character was the only attraction of the serial (alongside some very good dialogues and excellent last few epis, Apa ji, moral).... so imrans statement is partly true.

But I wish he would atleast find Hashir's character good. And yes this is not the first time he spoke negative about jtc.He was already fed up of it during second spell of shooting.

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Hashir and Mashal from the beginning of the episode till the new beginnings of Mr. and Mrs. Hashir.

The episode began with a beautiful and a pious moment where Mashal was on the prayer mat in conversation with Allah. She knew that Rehan was looking for her means Ramsha is looking for her and it is only possible when she visited Hashir’s place. Now Ramsha from the very beginning has held a place of respect for Hashir and she also knows Mashal is in love with Hashir and how much Hashir cares for Mashal, so there was no way she would hide Mashal’s whereabouts from Hashir. Once Hashir knew where she was he and Abbas would not let her stay at the shelter because Hashir has always felt responsible for Mashal and also Abbas being her nice uncle would not allow ghar ki beti to live at a shelter like an orphan. Mashal has finally found a way fo rher dream of higher education can be realized and also she could stand on her own two feet and lead a respectable life. Since Hashir and Abbas would not let her live there, there was a chance of that dream being shattered cause I think the benefactor only sponsored girls who were alone in this world. Mashal shared that worry with Allah but then also left her life decision in HIS hands. Wo khwab Allah ne uski aankhon mein daala tha and if Allah does not want it to come true so be it.

Inside me is a weak heart but behind me is a strong God.

So finally Hashir ki itne dino ki talash poori hui he knows she is at the shelter, drops everything and goes to her.

At the shelter office, we can see his heart through his eyes. He felt guilty and was ashamed that he could not protect Mashal as he had promised Apa ji when the warden said if she had koi apna she would not have come to the shelter. Well from what she knew she was right in saying so but Hashir se zyada Mashal ka apna apa ji ke baad aur koi nahi than a hai. When Mashal comes he was upset that she left home when she was thrown out she did not reach out to him when he has always assured her that he would be within her reach whenever she needed him. He has always been there he was her one constant.Again it showed us his emotions which run deep inside him. If he had known of her love for him even then it would be the same reaction, as a cousin, a protector, now with these two roles another emotion was added he was the man she was in love with and who had fallen for her too. Now coming to Mashal,anyone in her place would refuse to go back to that hell even if she had not found a way to achieve her dream of education and becoming a professional. I now feel in a way it was for Hashir too, when he had said I will find a rishta for you she had said aur kitne ehsaan karenge, she has seen how much he has done and tries to do for her. He was always caught in the middle. He would have to fight his mother and others for her. He would suffer to keep her away from sufferings. So it was for best of both of them that she stay at the shelter. Oh her reaction when he said Apa ji ne mujhe tumhaara muhafiz banaya tha, she was like here he goes again with the farz and zimmedari talk.

When the warden spoke about him being Na Mehram for her he had never thought of something like that. He always saw her as a younger sibling of course the society and people around them did not see it as so. But the makers always showed us as him being a na mehram for her in a very pure and simple way, Mashal rarely went in front of him nange sar. It was not exactly a parda from him but it meant that he is na mehram for her. He had only one way to become a mehram rishta for her where he could do whatever he wanted for her without being questioned of his intentions of fingers pointing at their innocent relationship. He has always been there for her, done everything in his power for her, he wanted her to fulfill her dream, he also got her enrolled in college paid her fees from his own pocket, but she couldn’t attend I guess she was to graduate as Mashal Hashir.

When he said he would marry her it seemed impulsive but he was ready. Her expression there was like WT he wants to marry me, why how? She clearly did not know the details of his break up, his finding he diary and coming to know of her feelings for her, her true love touching his heart and he falling for her. When he spoke about reading the pages of her diary she realized that he knows she is in love with him and when he reminded her about Apa ji saying Kun Faya Kun how jaata hai we don’t know when and how but our prayers are answered no matter how long they take and there she realized he loves her too. She had no idea how she would be welcomed back by Faseeha and Areesha but she trusted him and agreed to marry him.

Their nikaah, when he had said he would marry Bisma without permission if he was forced to do so I had said Bisma ke time baat toh ki hai Mashal ko seedha nikaah padhwa ke hi le aayega and aisa hi hua. When she did not answer for the first 2 times he got impatient also cause she did not say yes with her own mouth sharmana was not enough she could have felt it that way then but then also might have had reservations about going back to that hell as his wife. There she was thanking her lucky stars and here iski jaan sookh rahi thi but when she said yes oh my, had Hashir smiled so brightly ever in the drama? I think not. Mr. and Mrs. Hashir ka first time eye contact hua and it spoke volumes. . He was so proud of her and it was nothing new but it was now in a different light he was now proud to have her as a life partner, a partner who puts others before her, who spreads goodness, good people fall in love with her wherever she goes.

When they were entering his home, his hand firmly gripped her shoulder, she looked at him she was nervous about the reaction but she had faith in him as he was full of confidence that he can and will get his wife accepted by his family. He knew that Faseeha was repenting and wanted Mashal, the niece back home safe and sound but for her to return as Hashir’s wife, it’s altogether another thing. He was holding her, as in I am with her we are together and not like she belongs to me, she is mine(how Faraaz treated Bisma).

The family was so happy seeing Mashal back ki no one registered her red dupatta and questioned about it. It was good that Hashir immediately told his parents that Mashal and he got married at the shelter, good thing there was no how why. Shadi ho gayi good tum khush hum khush. When Abbas gave her money as salami, she looked at Hashir asking for permission, as a wife she respected him and he guided her to take it, cause bade jis tarah se blessing de we should accept it. Faseeha when asked for forgiveness he said ‘ammi’, he knows Mashal deserves to be apologized to by all but Faseeha is his mom too, and he knows more that asking for forgiveness from her giving Mashal, love and respect would heal her faster. Hashir showed he can balance his relations, mom and wife dono ki respect ek baat se rakh li. Again,Areesha ki taraf he encouraged Mashal to go cause she is now older in relation so bade aage chalkar maaf karte hain choto ko, he has taken the role of a husband in a very positive manner, guiding his wife to take the right direction. In olden times they used to sy it is the duty of a husband to guide his wife cause she used to stay mostly confined with 4 walls and did not know bahar ki duniya ab aisa kuch nahi hai but Hashir is playing the role of a husband very well.

He was so happy watching Mashal sitting between Abbas and Faseeha and being showered with the affection she rightly deserved. Again when Shama and Uabid came, Shama asked for forgiveness, I did not like her mention Burhan but she needed that forgiveness for her peace of mind. Mashal suffered a lot but finally she got what she wanted and deserved, love and respect of her elders. To be treated like a family member, their own.

Stolen glances kuch na kehkar bahut kuch keh dete hain. I don’t think there was any harm if family members came to know that Mashal has been in love with Hashir, it would have been cute but then I felt if Faseeha came to know when Mashal and she were alone she would have been really happy,that her son got a wife who is in love with him and not some compromise (other show they might have shown it as such). Well just let me imagine she comes to know later on and tells Hashir he is lucky to have a wife who is crazy about him and to always value her.

Baraat/Rukhsati

When I had seen that BTS video I had thought ye kya tent daal diya hai Mashal par but in the actual scene it was nicely draped. I have never as far as I remember a dulhan being sent away draped in a chadar, here the chadar had a meaning/reason and a very beautiful one. It was a very happy and beautiful moment, something what Apa ji wanted all her life was made possible by her two fav and accha bacchas, they united the family. Not only Mashal got love and respect but also Hashir was accepted by Shama.

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Posted: 5 years ago

A quick point - I read some of the viewers did not like Mashal's dress - well do not think of it that the PH and the dress coordinator did a poor job, it was perfect if we see it as Faseeha's choice. Faseeha tai ki choice aisi hi honi this yes if they would have shown Hashir bring it for her or Mashal was given time to go shopping with Ramsha and they had shown this dress I would have objected cause ye Mashal ki choice nahi ho sakti so she wouldn't go for it also Hashir knows her choice so he wouldn't get it for her.


The chadar that was wrapped around her during rukhsati as i posted earlier I found it like a tent in the BTS video but then when I saw her dress I understood why the chadar was there. There is another point that Mashal rarely stepped out of the house without a chadar so they showed it during her rukhsati too but if you go to see the chadar had a meaning a reason.

Mashal's dress has a wide boat neck and her sleeves were translucent. There is no need for skin show to others, only her husband should she how much ever skin it was showing, baki he can see whatever later on. I liked it when I saw it neatly draped and understood the reason behind the chadar.


Mashal's bright red lipstick I guess it was too loud for Mashal's character but dulhan ko sab maaf hota hai, she had to match it with her bridal look and dupatta. her hair color, that the makers should have discussed with Alizey, if she wanted to color her hair and be in character of Mashal it would have been great if she went for a blend of dark brown and burgundy. the girl who used to cry for not having enough bus fare got her hair colored seemed weird. It was not during the wedding this hair color has been for quite some time now.


SR needs as separate post coming tomorrow.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Chahat_A_Doshi

Hashir and Mashal from the beginning of the episode till the new beginnings of Mr. and Mrs. Hashir.

The episode began with a beautiful and a pious moment where Mashal was on the prayer mat in conversation with Allah. She knew that Rehan was looking for her means Ramsha is looking for her and it is only possible when she visited Hashir’s place. Now Ramsha from the very beginning has held a place of respect for Hashir and she also knows Mashal is in love with Hashir and how much Hashir cares for Mashal, so there was no way she would hide Mashal’s whereabouts from Hashir. Once Hashir knew where she was he and Abbas would not let her stay at the shelter because Hashir has always felt responsible for Mashal and also Abbas being her nice uncle would not allow ghar ki beti to live at a shelter like an orphan. Mashal has finally found a way fo rher dream of higher education can be realized and also she could stand on her own two feet and lead a respectable life. Since Hashir and Abbas would not let her live there, there was a chance of that dream being shattered cause I think the benefactor only sponsored girls who were alone in this world. Mashal shared that worry with Allah but then also left her life decision in HIS hands. Wo khwab Allah ne uski aankhon mein daala tha and if Allah does not want it to come true so be it.

Inside me is a weak heart but behind me is a strong God.

So finally Hashir ki itne dino ki talash poori hui he knows she is at the shelter, drops everything and goes to her.

At the shelter office, we can see his heart through his eyes. He felt guilty and was ashamed that he could not protect Mashal as he had promised Apa ji when the warden said if she had koi apna she would not have come to the shelter. Well from what she knew she was right in saying so but Hashir se zyada Mashal ka apna apa ji ke baad aur koi nahi than a hai. When Mashal comes he was upset that she left home when she was thrown out she did not reach out to him when he has always assured her that he would be within her reach whenever she needed him. He has always been there he was her one constant.Again it showed us his emotions which run deep inside him. If he had known of her love for him even then it would be the same reaction, as a cousin, a protector, now with these two roles another emotion was added he was the man she was in love with and who had fallen for her too. Now coming to Mashal,anyone in her place would refuse to go back to that hell even if she had not found a way to achieve her dream of education and becoming a professional. I now feel in a way it was for Hashir too, when he had said I will find a rishta for you she had said aur kitne ehsaan karenge, she has seen how much he has done and tries to do for her. He was always caught in the middle. He would have to fight his mother and others for her. He would suffer to keep her away from sufferings. So it was for best of both of them that she stay at the shelter. Oh her reaction when he said Apa ji ne mujhe tumhaara muhafiz banaya tha, she was like here he goes again with the farz and zimmedari talk.

When the warden spoke about him being Na Mehram for her he had never thought of something like that. He always saw her as a younger sibling of course the society and people around them did not see it as so. But the makers always showed us as him being a na mehram for her in a very pure and simple way, Mashal rarely went in front of him nange sar. It was not exactly a parda from him but it meant that he is na mehram for her. He had only one way to become a mehram rishta for her where he could do whatever he wanted for her without being questioned of his intentions of fingers pointing at their innocent relationship. He has always been there for her, done everything in his power for her, he wanted her to fulfill her dream, he also got her enrolled in college paid her fees from his own pocket, but she couldn’t attend I guess she was to graduate as Mashal Hashir.

When he said he would marry her it seemed impulsive but he was ready. Her expression there was like WT he wants to marry me, why how? She clearly did not know the details of his break up, his finding he diary and coming to know of her feelings for her, her true love touching his heart and he falling for her. When he spoke about reading the pages of her diary she realized that he knows she is in love with him and when he reminded her about Apa ji saying Kun Faya Kun how jaata hai we don’t know when and how but our prayers are answered no matter how long they take and there she realized he loves her too. She had no idea how she would be welcomed back by Faseeha and Areesha but she trusted him and agreed to marry him.

Their nikaah, when he had said he would marry Bisma without permission if he was forced to do so I had said Bisma ke time baat toh ki hai Mashal ko seedha nikaah padhwa ke hi le aayega and aisa hi hua. When she did not answer for the first 2 times he got impatient also cause she did not say yes with her own mouth sharmana was not enough she could have felt it that way then but then also might have had reservations about going back to that hell as his wife. There she was thanking her lucky stars and here iski jaan sookh rahi thi but when she said yes oh my, had Hashir smiled so brightly ever in the drama? I think not. Mr. and Mrs. Hashir ka first time eye contact hua and it spoke volumes. . He was so proud of her and it was nothing new but it was now in a different light he was now proud to have her as a life partner, a partner who puts others before her, who spreads goodness, good people fall in love with her wherever she goes.

When they were entering his home, his hand firmly gripped her shoulder, she looked at him she was nervous about the reaction but she had faith in him as he was full of confidence that he can and will get his wife accepted by his family. He knew that Faseeha was repenting and wanted Mashal, the niece back home safe and sound but for her to return as Hashir’s wife, it’s altogether another thing. He was holding her, as in I am with her we are together and not like she belongs to me, she is mine(how Faraaz treated Bisma).

The family was so happy seeing Mashal back ki no one registered her red dupatta and questioned about it. It was good that Hashir immediately told his parents that Mashal and he got married at the shelter, good thing there was no how why. Shadi ho gayi good tum khush hum khush. When Abbas gave her money as salami, she looked at Hashir asking for permission, as a wife she respected him and he guided her to take it, cause bade jis tarah se blessing de we should accept it. Faseeha when asked for forgiveness he said ‘ammi’, he knows Mashal deserves to be apologized to by all but Faseeha is his mom too, and he knows more that asking for forgiveness from her giving Mashal, love and respect would heal her faster. Hashir showed he can balance his relations, mom and wife dono ki respect ek baat se rakh li. Again,Areesha ki taraf he encouraged Mashal to go cause she is now older in relation so bade aage chalkar maaf karte hain choto ko, he has taken the role of a husband in a very positive manner, guiding his wife to take the right direction. In olden times they used to sy it is the duty of a husband to guide his wife cause she used to stay mostly confined with 4 walls and did not know bahar ki duniya ab aisa kuch nahi hai but Hashir is playing the role of a husband very well.

He was so happy watching Mashal sitting between Abbas and Faseeha and being showered with the affection she rightly deserved. Again when Shama and Uabid came, Shama asked for forgiveness, I did not like her mention Burhan but she needed that forgiveness for her peace of mind. Mashal suffered a lot but finally she got what she wanted and deserved, love and respect of her elders. To be treated like a family member, their own.

Stolen glances kuch na kehkar bahut kuch keh dete hain. I don’t think there was any harm if family members came to know that Mashal has been in love with Hashir, it would have been cute but then I felt if Faseeha came to know when Mashal and she were alone she would have been really happy,that her son got a wife who is in love with him and not some compromise (other show they might have shown it as such). Well just let me imagine she comes to know later on and tells Hashir he is lucky to have a wife who is crazy about him and to always value her.

Baraat/Rukhsati

When I had seen that BTS video I had thought ye kya tent daal diya hai Mashal par but in the actual scene it was nicely draped. I have never as far as I remember a dulhan being sent away draped in a chadar, here the chadar had a meaning/reason and a very beautiful one. It was a very happy and beautiful moment, something what Apa ji wanted all her life was made possible by her two fav and accha bacchas, they united the family. Not only Mashal got love and respect but also Hashir was accepted by Shama.


1)...alongside allowing her to keep the red dupatta on spoke of his confidence. Previously when he used to bring her home after she used to escape, he would have his arms protectively around her too. So the red dupatta on head was the real deal 👍🏼.


2) ...alongside the "Ammi" statement and hugging his mum in this moment on behalf of Mashal he accepted her (his mother) apology . This shows how well Mr&Mrs have mental understanding also, that he takes such important actions on her behalf and she didnt even protest.


3) All the while keeping her self respect. There were almost no dialogues between them in that scene whilst he was guiding her, only smiles,head-/eyenods, and at one point tiny air kiss which only she noticed


4) I slightly disagree here. Faseeha just recently became better and this is a sensitive topic (that her bahu was in love with her son all along- for some reasons some typical MIL have an issue of this, sometimes they voice it out straight away sometimes not but think this way in heart. Negative points in their sharafat book..). So yes it wasnt/isnt important for Faseeha to find this fact out that she has loved her son since a long time. Within days after seeing how her bahu treats her son as the most precious humanbeing she has ever known, she will get the confirmation that her son isnt living just a compromising marriage but his wife actually cherishes him and than she can still say to Hashir your mentioned line.

Another reason why I dont/didnt want Faseeha to find this fact out was, that Hashir himself didnt even share this information with his father even to whom he was always very close. Again same reason: her reputation. When the overexcited Ramsha was talking there in front of everyone I was holding my breath that please dont reveal any secrets.


5) In modern families sometimes a chadar is draped over to hide the brides gold juwelry from robbers (though its silly if car is decorated indicating bride and groom inside). But obv here it also had the deeper meaning which you mentioned. And did anyone notice with what pride Hashir was standing next to her?!


Thank you so much for your detailed review. Was a treat to read. Now cant wait for the SG review

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