Jo Tu Chahey (HUM) - Imran Abbas, Alizeh Shah, Zarnish - Page 92

Originally posted by: heavenlybliss

Haan matric exams are done at age 16 i know because my cousin is doing them

Wishing your cousin All The Best.

@Prinzess .

This is an absolute delight😃. I enjoyed reading your 2 part khayali .. It shows another happy moments in HashMa's lives. The pregnancy, the graduation, and the get togather. 😊 Such things which we couldn't get to watch , and were dreaming of the happening after the end.

The small disappointment which Mashal got because she had to refuse the job offer shows that you can't get all at once. The way Hashir expressed his caring for her health, and their unborn baby was very convincing. 👍🏼

Their cute interactions make me feel happy. Not every girl get her dream man , and not every man is like Hashir.

Keep it up .⭐️

Originally posted by: awida

@Prinzess .

This is an absolute delight😃. I enjoyed reading your 2 part khayali .. It shows another happy moments in HashMa's lives. The pregnancy, the graduation, and the get togather. 😊 Such things which we couldn't get to watch , and were dreaming of the happening after the end.

The small disappointment which Mashal got because she had to refuse the job offer shows that you can't get all at once. The way Hashir expressed his caring for her health, and their unborn baby was very convincing. 👍🏼

Their cute interactions make me feel happy. Not every girl get her dream man , and not every man is like Hashir.

Keep it up .⭐️

forget finding more men like Hashir in real life, even in fiction/drama world atleast currently theres noone like him (from what I am watching- anyone found any male in recent dramas like hashir?). His soft yet firm spoken nature, a calm within himself, zero bit attention seeking yet scores fully in look and style department too (without ever highlighting it) 🤗. It will take a long time to even come across a Hashir on screen. Until than bardashofy the others and appreciate Hashir all the more.

ps. thank you awida for your super cute fedback.

Originally posted by: Prinzessin1

forget finding more men like Hashir in real life, even in fiction/drama world atleast currently theres noone like him (from what I am watching- anyone found any male in recent dramas like hashir?). His soft yet firm spoken nature, a calm within himself, zero bit attention seeking yet scores fully in look and style department too (without ever highlighting it) 🤗. It will take a long time to even come across a Hashir on screen. Until than bardashofy the others and appreciate Hashir all the more.

ps. thank you awida for your super cute fedback.

I was eager to watch this show first if all because of the ost and then Hashir's character. Also because after watching Imran in KCR n MTNH i wanted to see him something out and out positive. You don't come across a character like Hashir who had 0 flaws. There maybe other positive make leads but they are flawed.

A well.written and well potrayed character - Hashir.

Originally posted by: Chahat_A_Doshi

I was eager to watch this show first if all because of the ost and then Hashir's character. Also because after watching Imran in KCR n MTNH i wanted to see him something out and out positive. You don't come across a character like Hashir who had 0 flaws. There maybe other positive make leads but they are flawed.

A well.written and well potrayed character - Hashir.

yup, even his love/interest in Bisma wasnt a negative character aspect of his, because he never hesitated in telling her off or neglect any aspect of his life/loved ones due to Bisma. 🤗.

On a side note: I always used to go aww whenever he would carry (cheap) grocery bags (not talking about treats/gifts) whilst coming home- a sign of participating in "housechores" and also when he helped Mashal serve food from Abbas treat as if its no big deal (usually single men living with parents and ladies in house dont even know how to do this much).

The more one observes Hashir the more amazing personality traits one finds .

ps.@CAD: hope your final review n khiyali pullaos are still due. Yes JTC has ended since few weeks now but the fever wont be going away soon, especially since noone is coming close to Hashir´s character on screen.

Originally posted by: Prinzessin1

yup, even his love/interest in Bisma wasnt a negative character aspect of his, because he never hesitated in telling her off or neglect any aspect of his life/loved ones due to Bisma. 🤗.

On a side note: I always used to go aww whenever he would carry (cheap) grocery bags (not talking about treats/gifts) whilst coming home- a sign of participating in "housechores" and also when he helped Mashal serve food from Abbas treat as if its no big deal (usually single men living with parents and ladies in house dont even know how to do this much).

The more one observes Hashir the more amazing personality traits one finds .

ps.@CAD: hope your final review n khiyali pullaos are still due. Yes JTC has ended since few weeks now but the fever wont be going away soon, especially since noone is coming close to Hashir´s character on screen.

Sho shorry I agree my last review is way over due and so.my KPs got delayed.

I have all my points ready but more I think about it the more points come to me. I want to say so.much lekin time nahi mil raha. I will try my best and update ASAP.

A character like Hashir doesn't come around easily. A true gem.

Drums roll 😃. I wrote a part 3 (contiued) to my khiyali pullao/OS🤣. However it can not be published openly (due to context) 😳.

So I took all the parts and uploaded it on wattpad with the title Jo tu chahay-Celebration time.

https://www.wattpad.com/myworks/227963509/write/912110592

New part starts with 45min later......

If you have difficulty using Wattpad, pm me!

Originally posted by: Prinzessin1

Drums roll 😃. I wrote a part 3 (contiued) to my khiyali pullao/OS🤣. However it can not be published openly (due to context) 😳.

So I took all the parts and uploaded it on wattpad with the title Jo tu chahay-Celebration time.

New part starts with 45min later......

If you have difficulty using Wattpad, pm me!

🤗

Kindly pm me the link.

Today I am going to type my review so will read from lappy.

Celebration time. 🥳

I am eager to read Hashir Mashal 😉 celebration time. ☺️

Originally posted by: Prinzessin1

Drums roll 😃. I wrote a part 3 (contiued) to my khiyali pullao/OS🤣. However it can not be published openly (due to context) 😳.

So I took all the parts and uploaded it on wattpad with the title Jo tu chahay-Celebration time.

https://www.wattpad.com/myworks/227963509/write/912110592

New part starts with 45min later......

If you have difficulty using Wattpad, pm me!

45 minutes later came 4 days later for me. I'm really sorry for the late reply.

Finally I got to read the above mentioned part and what a part it was.

It was M&B, SR, SD all in one and I have read my fair share of them and more of their likes.

Hashir and Mashal are on fire here.

The best and the shining part of this update was our Hero Hashir. I loved his reply to what Mashal said(even if it was in playfulness) during the condition time. We need more men, more hero, more role models like him. Yet again he proved to be a gentleman. Husband and wife, BF n GF, Partners they all need to know this that the consent of the other party and them being n their full senses is important. Just because you are married husbands cant have their way with the wife without her consent. If husband and wife realize this their will be no marital rape or men and women in general realize this any forceful sexual relationship will be formed.

Hmm when you had mentioned you cannot post this part openly on the forum I thought of sharing a topic with you which is on the IF, A guide to writing an erotica. I have written explicit stuff in my stories and they were within these guidelines so the mods showed no objections we can post hot steaming hot stuff on IF. It's just my point but if you think you would be compromising your story telling or restraining yourself to wattpad toh hai hi.

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Just a little note it's just me my personal problem and nothing to do with any writers' story. I hate it when one address the other as jaan, baby, sweety. if my partner would use this on me I would throw his romance, passion, love on his face.

Once again sorry for the late reply and loved it.

Originally posted by: Chahat_A_Doshi

45 minutes later came 4 days later for me. I'm really sorry for the late reply.

Finally I got to read the above mentioned part and what a part it was.

It was M&B, SR, SD all in one and I have read my fair share of them and more of their likes.

Hashir and Mashal are on fire here.

The best and the shining part of this update was our Hero Hashir. I loved his reply to what Mashal said(even if it was in playfulness) during the condition time. We need more men, more hero, more role models like him. Yet again he proved to be a gentleman. Husband and wife, BF n GF, Partners they all need to know this that the consent of the other party and them being n their full senses is important. Just because you are married husbands cant have their way with the wife without her consent. If husband and wife realize this their will be no marital rape or men and women in general realize this any forceful sexual relationship will be formed.

Hmm when you had mentioned you cannot post this part openly on the forum I thought of sharing a topic with you which is on the IF, A guide to writing an erotica. I have written explicit stuff in my stories and they were within these guidelines so the mods showed no objections we can post hot steaming hot stuff on IF. It's just my point but if you think you would be compromising your story telling or restraining yourself to wattpad toh hai hi.

*******

Just a little note it's just me my personal problem and nothing to do with any writers' story. I hate it when one address the other as jaan, baby, sweety. if my partner would use this on me I would throw his romance, passion, love on his face.

Once again sorry for the late reply and loved it.

Honestly your post got me soooo teary eyed. Thank you so much for celebrating my work on such awsome level. ❤️

SR,SD =? I know MB ad Ive read my fair share of them in life, never knew I would subonciousy be writing on such levels 🤣

green: :D. This was to show that men like Hashir can be dream lovers too (without pre-marital nonesense) and that women like Mashal, if treated right/with patience etc in beginning ( and always cherished outside intimacy situation) can blossom into ideal intimate partners too. Btw I hope/readers also felt the soul connecting emotions 😳/raw love in this part which is very hard to put in words but only felt by them.

Blue: She was serious what she said 😉 (one of the reasons was trust), but Hashir being a gentleman knew how quickly unknowingly the fine line can be crossed and despite her pleading (and begging) he didnt do mouqa ka faida uthana. A huge part of a husband/hero´s real amazingness/idealness gets revealed during intimacy. So yes I wanted to make Hashir stand out in this field too (without appearing boring or creativeless) alongside leave a good message for my readers.

Brown: I have read their guidelines and feel my writing style and extend wont be accepted on IF. But I am open to read a work sample which has been accepted by IF. Do Pm me.

pink:😆. So what pyaar ke names do you find suitable ( in fiction world)?. But yes I dont like using Babe, honey etc especially for characters who otherwise speak very good Urdu. I tried to do some googling on urdu sweet name callings but didnt find much interesting😆. ps. the jaan used here was referred as life not as nickname. If i had used the word zindagi it would have been OTT lol.