SUNO CHANDA|ARSAL-JIYA|TS:AFTER THE SCREEN FROZE|UPDATED:20/6/18

Posted: 7 years ago
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Hey guys, Assalaam-o-alaikum, Namaskaar...
It's Aazeen here, with a BRAND-NEW-Two-Shot on ArJiya...
Suno Chanda had made me crazy, and thus I decided to write an OS about the Ever After.
But in my emotions, I started flowing so much that I lost track, and it went way beyond the limit of reading as a One Shot.
There are a few readers who prefer shorter work, and get bored reading a long piece of writing...
Thus, I have split this OS in two parts...
They are all consecutive posts one after the other.
Those who wish to read in one sitting can read just in continuation, others can break and read...

POSTING PART-1

TS: After The Screen Froze

ArJiya OS: After the Screen Froze

Arsal: I love you!

Jiya: I love you too...

Jiya had lowered her eyes after confessing her heart directly to him. It was awkward as well romantic. She had never thought that she'd fall head over heels in love with him. But despite all the fights that ensued between them, the fact remained the same; there wasn't anyone in this entire world whom she could give her heart away, and trust her life with; except for Arsal. And in spite saying that she didn't want to have rukhsati with him, she didn't regret an ounce marrying him, and shifting her life along his.

Arsal smiled back, and lightly touched her earring... "Aisi muskuraati-sharmaati kitni pyaari lagti ho... Dekho, kitna ghussa kar rahi thi, Jhumka bhi toot gaya tumhara, mujhse ladte-ladte... he had picked up the broken piece from her lehenga spread all over the bed.

Jiya touched her earring in horror, while looking at the broken piece in his hand- "Ya Allah! Ye jhumka mere hi haathon tootna tha...? Taaiji ne koi nava katta khol lena hai ye toota hua dekhke... Waise hi amma ne unse keh keh ke walime ka set bhari uthwaya tha... Arsal, shaadi ke baad mera pehla hi din bigadne wala hai... Main kya kahungi unse... Jiya desperately tried joining the two pieces.

"Relax Jiya! Main kal subah hi jaake sunhaar ke yahan se usko judwa dunga haathon-haath... Main hi toh gaya tha uthaane tumhare liye jewellery. Tum ek-aadh din amma ko taal dena... Pata bhi nahi chalega unko... Tum tension mat lo bas... Arsal had his arm around Jiya...

Jiya swished out a worked up breath at his comforting words- "Thank you Arsal... Tum kitna badal gaye ho... Kabhi mera koi bhi kaam nahi karne se leke, mere bina bole meri pareshaaniyaan door karne tak; tum waise bilkul nahi ho, jisse maine Dadajaan ki zidd ke aage nikaah kiya tha...

"Phir se tum'? Arsal was mildly irritated again. But didn't pick up to a huge anger..

"Achha... Achha... Theek hai... Aap... Aap bohot badal gaye hain Arsal... Jiya smiled at his smile returning...

"Pehle tum ye jewellery utaar do, isse pehle dusra jhumka, haar ya teeka toot jaaye... Arsal smilingly helped Jiya take the earring off.

Jiya protested at the gooey feeling she felt at his touch, but on him not budging she gave up as well, just a small smile lingered her lips- "Ek aur jhumka toot jaaye, toh tum... I mean aap wo bhi jhudwa deejiyega... Nahi? Jiya gave him a loving smile.

"Ye maqlooq toh aapke hukm ka taabedaar hai... he gave her a small salute... "Aapki khushi mein hi meri khushi hai... Arsal bent to open the side drawer to pull out some papers, and handed over to her.

Jiya's mouth opened in astonishment, and then fell a bit, but the confusion still written over her face- "Do tickets? London ke liye? Arsal...

"Shhh... he kept a finger on her lips... "I know exactly, how much you had wanted to study ahead. Just pursue before you are bundled up with other responsibilities. Arsal had not given her a chance to say anything else.

"Par Arsal, meri baat toh... Arsal didn't let her talk any further. He was way too much into proximity for Jiya to even react. He had taken away the papers and kept them back on the side table, maintaining the same proximity.

Being inches apart, his breath mingling hers, he hushed a small- "May I? The drooping of her eyelids and the blush rushing on her cheeks gave him an answer, as he bridged the rest of the gap... Jiya's mind was fogged up, she didn't want to remember anything, she didn't talk anything. Just wanted to follow his lead, to wherever he takes her.

She felt her heart pounding with drum rolls into her chest with the onslaught of love showering on her. Though she had accepted Arsal as her husband long back, yet to complete the marriage was another thing. She thought she was nervous. But her partner in crime since ever, was now her partner in this marriage, and he made things smooth for her here as well. Amongst a few things that she remembered was his soft cooing, him asking her permission with grace, him asking if she felt alright, and of course, he wiped her tears yet again. She has forgotten the count of the number of times he had been the shoulder she had relied, ever since she had realised her love for him. This wasn't anything unusual he did, except that they no longer were partners in crime, but literal spouses in every meaning of the word.

Arsal had nestled her to his chest, like the most prized possession till date; last he had done this to her pictures in his drawer. Inadvertently, his legs came and rested over hers, truly caging her in his love... She didn't protest. She really didn't mind, or she was very tired; he didn't know. But, Jiya's soon deep breaths indicated that she was asleep. He smiled at her sleeping figure. Planting a tiny kiss on her head, he closed his eyes as well...

The next he realized was when he heard Bee-jaan's sound from somewhere. She was talking to Shahana, who was welcoming her Nagina chachi. All the three ladies were loud enough to wake the whole house up, but not Jiya, who was still sleeping soundly... He woke her up slowly... The first thing was Jiya being cranky- "Kya masla hai Arsal, kyu utha rahe ho mujhe. Meri neend puri nahi hui hai... Tumhein uthna hai toh uth jaao na, mujhe kyu pareshaan kar rahe ho? she cried.

"Jiya, ghar mehmaano se bhara pada hua hai. Aur mehmaan sunaayi de rahe hain mujhe... Mujhe tumhare sone se koi aitraaz nahi hai, par tumhein aaj jaldi uthta hua kisi ne nahi dekha, toh tumhari shaamat zaroor aa jaayegi... Main tumhari bhalaayi ke liye keh raha hoon... Arsal explained her politely.

Jiya got up from the bed, stamping her feet, grumbling- "Achhe naatak hain... Sabke saamne pretend karo, ki aap bilkul fresh ho, aur aapko koi pareshaani nahi hai... she stormed towards the washroom.

Arsal, stuffing his palms under his head kept looking in her direction, smiling at her... He closed his eyes in capturing all the moments with her; in his heart forever; not to realise that he was back to sleep, since he had spent two nights in a row having lack of sleep, the first one being waiting in the lawn for Jiya all night.

The next he knew, he was harshly woken up by some water splashing on his face- "Amma!!! Arsal sat up with a start.

"Amma nahi, aapki biwi... Mujhe nahaane bhej kar, janaab khud aaraam se so rahe hain... Waah-waah! Jiya had her hands at her hips, one hand still holding a glass of water.

"Neend lag gayi meri... Sorry! he got up from the bed, straight to the washroom, while Jiya began dressing. It was never her style to wear jewellery and all, but Arsal gave her these bangles, and she loved them, just she wore them instantly. Her wedding ring, new earrings, and a chain, made her look perfect. Her eyes looked puffy; she decided to apply something to conceal that, while Arsal was out of the bathroom, combing his hair, he passed on a smile at her through the mirror- "Main baahar sabke saath baith raha hoon, tum aa jaana...

Jiya smiled at him, while he came out, greeting salaams to everyone outside. The first question that popped out of Shahana's mouth was- "Jiya nuh, kitthe hai? Khuda na khaasta tum dono ne raat bhar mein ek dusre ka katl toh nahi kar diya? everyone in the hall roared with laughter.

"Amma, tu vi aiwayi kuch vi dass deti hai. Maine kyu katl karna hai apni votti da... Arsal was embarrassed, though he knew, all were pulling his leg... "Taiyyar ho rahi hai... Aati hogi... Ladkiyon ko pata nahi kitna time lagta hai...

Jiya could hear laughter from outside, she knew, once she joins, even she wouldn't be spared, or even more been embarrassed... Blush crept up her face... She is not going to answer anyone... She smiled to herself. Once she was ready to come out of the room, did she hear collective screams of his mother and her mother, followed by both their fathers, and even Bee-jaan. They were scolding Arsal for something. Jiya rushed outside, to be greeted by her mother, Naeema; ready to slap her- "Yeh zaroor is Jiya ki chodi hui koi shay hai...

"Chachi, ye aap kya kar rahi hain... Usne kuch nahi kiya... Arsal stopped Naeema just in time.

"Amma, hua kya hai, aap sab itne ghusse mein kyu hain? Jiya was nonplussed.

"Jiya, ye London jaake padhne ki tumne kaun si nayi shay chodi hai? Mera B.P. low ho raha hai beta... Nazakat spoke.

"Baba, main Arsal se kal hi iss baare mein baat karna chaah rahi thi, par mauka nahi mila... Jiya clarified.

"Baat kya karni hai Jiya, tum padhne jaaogi, bas! Ye mera faisla hai. Arsal was firm.

"Waah beta waah! Shaabaash! Saari duniya se ladke tumne isse isliye shaadi ki thi, ke apni shaadi ke sabse khoobsurat pehle 2 saal tum dono do alag alag vatan mein guzaro... Jiya tumhe nazro ke saamne nahi dikhti toh tumhare halaq se ek niwala nahi utarta, uske bina kaise guzaaroge ye saal...? Aawara majnu bane phiroge yahan se wahan... Bee-jaan introduced him with reality.

"Toh main usse milne chala jaaya karunga beech-beech mein! Arsal said sheepishly.

"Aur factory kaun, tumhara baap sambhaalega? Jamshed was now astonished, therefore he asked.

"Abba, ab tak aap aur chacha hi toh sambhaalte they na factory... Arsal put forth a fact.

"Dekho beta, ab tak tumhare abba aur main sambhaalte they factory, lekin ab unki bhi umr ka lihaaz karo, aur meri sehat ka bhi... Humare paas koi 4-5 bete nahi hain ki Arsal na sahi toh dusra beta dekh lega... DJ abhi bohot chota hai. Ab waqt ka taqaaza ye hai ki tum Factory sambhaalo aur hum tumhari madad kar denge... Iss ghar ko ab tumhein chalana hai... Nazakat tried to explain this to Arsal as politely as he could.

"Par Jiya... Arsal began again, to be cut down by Jiya herself...

"KOI MERI BAAT SUNEGA??? Sab apne-apne fatwey jaari karte jaa rahe hain... Koi mujhse poochega ki main kya chaahti hoon? Jiya's eyes were popping out in anger.

"Main wahi toh kar raha hoon, jo tum chaahti thi... Tum chaahti thi ke London School of Economics se padhaai karo... Ab main bhi toh tumhare liye yahi chahta hoon... Arsal said enthusiastically.

"Arsal, wo baat pehle ki thi... Ab aisa nahi hai... Haan, main padhna chaahti hoon, apna career banana chaahti hoon, par usse pehle, main tumhein chaahti hoon... Mujhe tumhare liye kaam karna, tumhara khayaal rakhna... remembering something, she added instantly- "Aapka... khayaal rakhna, achha lagta hai mujhe...

Arsal wanted to smile at her small efforts, but there was a bigger issue at hand. Their thoughts were contradicting yet again... "Toh tum bataao, dono kaise mumkin hai...

"Guys, if you don't mind my interrupting. It was Sherry who joined the family in the room for discussion. "Maine Jiya ko pehle bhi yahi suggest kiya tha, aur ab phir yahi suggest karunga tum dono ki problem ke liye, Yahan Karachi mein kayi colleges LSE se affiliated hain. Both LSE and these colleges follow the same syllabus, and pattern. Since, she has already cleared for LSE, usko yahan par admission aaraam se mil jaayega. Iss tarah Jiya yahan aap sab ke saath bhi reh legi aur uski education bhi continue rahegi...

"Waah mere bhai! Kya idea diya hai tuney!Arsal patted Sherry's back. As he looked up at Jiya to ask her opinion. The bright smile on her face told him that the idea went well with her. "Toh phir set hai, Jiya Karachi se aagey padhegi. Aur main factory sambhaalunga. Theek chacha, abba? asked Arsal. To which everyone nodded.

"Bhayi, ab tum dono ke masle-masaail sulajh gaye ho, toh chalein hall mein? Aaj do nikaah padhaaye jaane hain. Sherry-Kinza ka, aur Jawwad Miyaan aur Arbela ka... Chalo sab... Bee-jaan ushered everyone out.

Arsal held on to Jiya's hand while everyone moved towards the hall... "Kya kar rahe ho Arsal, koi dekh lega... Nikaah ke liye jaana hai... Jiya squirmed in his arms.

"Pehle main toh dekh loon apni biwi ko nazar bhar ke... Khoobsurat lag rahi ho... he was playing with her bangles that he had gifted her.

"Thank you... Tum bhi... Jiya said shyly. She didn't know one day, his proximity would make her do things she had never given a thought. But she liked doing it for Arsal, barring to the times she just couldn't control her urge to argue with him.

He pulled her dupatta over her head, as he kissed her hair- "Tumhare liye, main kuch bhi pehen sakta hoon, tum jaisa kaho... Ye pajama-kurta achha lag raha hai aaj? she nodded at his question, that followed by a hug.

"Appi- Sallu Bhaiyya, agar aapka romance ho gaya ho toh aa jaayein, Bee-Jaan bula rahi hain... DJ came with his breaking news.

"Oye! Ab yahan ki news tu bahar jaake na break kar diyo... Arsal shouted.

"DJ, sensitive news break nahi karta... Ye sab aap dono apne room mein karein... Iss baar chodh raha hoon, agli baar se video bana ke family ke whatsapp group mein daal dunga... DJ sprang out of the room before Arsal hits him again.

"Yaar Jiya, Chachi ne kya khaake isko paida kiya tha...? Matlab humari 7 pushton mein itna bada chugalkhor aur blackmailer paida nahi hua hoga... Arsal said.

"Chodho usey, usko bade hoke journalist banna hai... Aap apni factory sambhaalein. Usko uske haalat par chodh dein. Jiya ushered him out, adjusting her dupatta over her head, as she took her seat with the other ladies as Joji Mamu and Arbela Aunty's nikaah began, followed by Sherry and Kinza's. For a change, everyone was happy, and content.

*****************PART-2-BELOW**********************

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Posted: 7 years ago
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PART-2

2 YEARS LATER:

"Lo Jiya, mithaayi khaao... Arsal had come back from factory before time, straight to Jiya who was resting in their room.

"Arsal, na karo... Jo aata hai, mere mooh mein kuch na kuch thoos ke chala jaata hai... Tang aa gayi hoon main... Jiya patted his hand away.

"Arre, khushkhabri hai, mithaayi toh banti hai na... Arsal began telling her.

"Ye main pichle 8 mahino se sunti aa rahi hoon Arsal, khushkhabri hai-khushkhabri hai-khushkhabri hai... Khush ho-ho ke main phool ke gubbara ho rahi hoon... Jiya snarled all thanks to her mood swings that pregnancy caused.

"Arre wo waali nahi meri jaan... ye wali... Arsal put forward a mark-list; her result for final semester, that she had given being all sick and tired, during her second trimester of pregnancy. Jiya and Arsal had a huge fight the day they came to know about her being expectant- "Arsal, tumse sabr nahi hota kya...? 6 mahine aur nahi ruk sakte they? Mere last semester ke exams sar par hain, aur tumhe Bachhe paida karna soojh raha hai? Main exams ki padhaayi karoon ya apni ultiyaan saaf karti rahoon...? Main bata rahi hoon tumhein Arsal, agar main iss semester mein fail hui na, toh Bachhe ke saare diapers tumhi se change karwaaungi... Mujhse na kehna ki mashriqi biwiyaan aisa karti hain aur waisa karti hain... Jiya had been gritting her teeth in anger.

"Mera result??? Jiya sat up straight, coming back to the present, and opened the sheet... She had topped her exams.

"Mubarak ho meri jaan... Tum na hi fail hui, aur na tumhari padhaayi adoori rahi... Arsal sat by her feet, putting pillows under them, for the swelling was still persistent.

"Iska matlab ye nahi hai Arsal ki main aapse baby ke diapers change nahi karwaaungi... Main aapke saath factory sambhaalungi, toh aapko bhi mere saath bachha sambhaalna hi padega, Ji haan! Jiya held her chin high...

"Haan kyu nahi Jiya beta... Naeema had entered their room... Sarcasm written all over her face... "Miyaan hai hi tumhari kidmatein karne ke liye... Purey exams tumne ek taang par nachaaya hai usko. Raat mein tumhe chai-naashta bana ke de, tab tum usko sone nahi deti thi... Subah wo exam hall mein tumhein chodne jaaye, lene jaaye, factory jaaye. Ab jaake usko chain mila hai, toh baby ke diapers ke liye bhi usko hi uthana... Veryyy good! Naeema's face was furious.

"Amma, main aapki beti hoon, aapko mera side lena chahiye! Jiya pouted.

"Aisa hai beta, tumhari maa banne se pehle, main iss ghar mein iski chachi banke aayi thi... Arsal humesha se mera pehla biba bachha raha hai... Naeema concluded. "Chup-chaap kitchen mein jaake, Taaiji ka haath bataao, iss waqt mein itna bhi aaraam karna achhi baat nahi hoti... Kaahil bachha paida hoga nahi toh... Jaao!

"Amma, aap kya kar rahi hain? Jiya tried to dissuade the situation, while getting up from the bed.

"DJ ke school jaana hai... Result aaya hai uska... Taiyyar hone jaa rahi hoon. Naeema said.

"Chachi, aisa theek nahi rahega, ki main aur Jiya chalein jaayein uske school... Uski padhaayi ke baare mein hum dono teacher se zyada baat kar paayenge... Arsal tried to save Jiya.

"Jaana chaahte ho to chale jaao... Par Jiya, dekhna kahin teacher tumhari haalat dekh ke tumhein uski maa samajh ke na keh dein- "Ek Bachhe ke toh ande ubal rahe hain answer sheets mein, apne hone wale Bachhe ko hi kam se kam padha lein... Naeema said. Arsal joined in the laughter.

"Kuch bhi amma? Teacher koi itni badi bewakoof nahi hongi ke ye na samajh aaye, ki ek bachha itna bada, aur dusra bachha ab paida ho raha hai... Main kis angle se do bachho ki amma lagti hoon? Jiya asked.

On getting no response from her mother and Arsal, her mood swings came to the fore, as big fat tears filled her eyes- "Sabko ab main moti lagne lagi hoon... Do bachho ki amma! Arsal, bhoolo mat, jis bhi haalat mein hoon, tumhare wajah se hoon! she went away from the room to the kitchen, where Shahana was cutting fruits for Jiya.

"Haaye, meri nuh! Jiya puttar ki hoya tenu? Shahana got up from her chair, and sat next to Jiya.

"Taaiji, Arsal mujhe moti keh raha hai... Do bachho ki amma! Jiya cried.

"Jiya puttar, tu na mardo ki baton ko zyada hawa mat diya kar... unko kya maaloom, hum kis daur se guzar rahe hain... Aur wo kehta hai toh tu bhi keh deti, haan hoon main 2 bachho ki amma... Wo khud koi Bachhe se kam hai? Shahana cheered Jiya. To which Jiya finally giggled.

"Ye hui na gal, meri Jiya nuh jaisi... Aur ek baat Jiya, main tujhe kitti vaari samjha chuki yaan, Taaiji na bola kar mujhe... teri toh main mummyji hoon na... Shahana cuddled her daughter-in-law.

"Ji mummyji! Jiya smiled.

"Chal furoots kha... Tujhe achha lagega... Shahana encouraged Jiya to eat.

"Amma, furoots nahi hota, fruits hota hai... Arsal joined them.

"Chup kar, angrez ki aulaad. Tu aa akele mein chittar lagaane hai maine tere... Jiya ko kyu rulaya tuney? Shahana scolded him.

"Amma main toh... Arsal never got to explain, his mother bashed him left right and centre, making Jiya smile in glee.

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"Amma, mujhe beti chahiye thi... Jiya pouted when her son was placed in her arms once she was settled into her private room... Jiya went into labour way after completing her 9 months; it had given her enough time to be with Arsal as their company went public. Ever since their marriage, they have been working upon converting the factories into a private limited company, and just recently they had gone into the public sector company, which meant many notches higher the success of their work.

Her due date approaching, all the work was wound up, and Jiya was well prepared at home, when she had started with back pain, that continuously increased over a period of time... The family members had rushed her to the hospital. Arsal had joined them a bit later, delegating the rest of the work for the day; rushing to his wife, who was waiting for her birthing. Arsal didn't dare go inside the room where Jiya was in pain, mainly because he couldn't bear hearing her whimpering in pain, another reason being, he didn't feel right entering when all the other female family members were inside.

Arsal looked at his chachi and amma, when they came out of the room, while he could still hear Jiya's whimpers. He looked surprisingly at them- "Aap log baahar kyu aa gaye...? Jiya ne deliver kar diya kya?... Arsal was very worried for Jiya...

"Khotta hai ye munda... Shahana laughed with Naeema, at her son's idiocy. "Itni jaldi koi bachha nahi hota... Abhi kuch ghante aur lagenge... Tu jaake baith ja uske paas... Shayad uska waqt kat jaaye...

"Hain, amma aur kitni deir... Mujhse toh Jiya ka dard dekha nahi jaa raha... Arsal said to no one in particular as he entered the room... Seeing her at once he knew, she is going to blast a bomb on him...

"Aaiye-aaiye, khaandaan ke wali ahad... Zehnaseebi meri ki aapko finally taufeeq hui mujhe dekhne ki... Jiya was seething at him.

"Jiya, kaisi baatein kar rahi ho, main kitne ghanto se baahar hi hoon... Par achha thodi na lagta hai, sab ladies andar baithi thi, aur main bhi aa jaata... Mere andar sharm-lihaaz naam ki bhi koi cheez hai... Arsal tried to explain logic...

And next Arsal knew was Jiya blasting him, as he had expected... The only good thing that happened was, that her working up, had her breathing in and out deep and hard, which helped her process birthing faster... A few hours hours later, the doctor had sent him out, and took her to the labour room, where she delivered their baby boy...

Coming to the present, Jiya was pouting at her mother... "Pagal ladki... Allah pak ka sukriya ada karo, ki sehatmand aur khushmizaaj bachha paida hua hai... Tumhari tarah ghusse wala nahi... Naeema said...

"Khushmizaaj kyu na ho, aakhir beta kiska hai? Arsal pulled his collar.

"Mera bhi hai, Mr. Arsal Jamshed Ali! Jiya narrowed her eyes.

"Tu fikar na kar Jiya puttar, ye toh humare khaandaan mein chala aa raha hai... Ek ladka, ek ladki aur phir ek ladka... Tumhare Taayaji, Maasooma Phuppo aur phir tumhare abba... Ya tum logo mein dekh lo, Arsal, phir tum, phir DJ. Fikar na kar, agli baar tujhko beti hi hogi, dekh lena... Shahana cajoled.

Everyone burst out laughing at Jiya's expression, with her joining them soon... "Filhaal toh iska naam rakh lete hain Mummyji...

"Haan-haan Jiya, Aquiqa karenge iska... lekin naam abhi rakh dete hain... Bee-jaan spoke elderly.

"Bataayein, bee-jaan... kya naam rakhein? Arsal asked.

"Amal! Allah taa'aala isko apne imaan par, apne maa-baap ke bataaiye raaston par Amal karne ki taufeeq de... Bee-jaan opened her palms in prayer.

"AAMEEN! Everyone chorused.

~~THANKS FOR READING~~

Edited by Aazeen02 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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loved it madam ..
simple yet beautiful ...
a happy happy story ...
❤️
Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: sona_naksh

loved it madam ..
simple yet beautiful ...
a happy happy story ...
❤️

I am so lucky to have you everywhere I write...
Thank you bohot sara, for being there always...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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read it all
very good effort!!! very decent!! hahah!!

enjoyed alot reading it
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Posted: 7 years ago
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enjoyed any TS after a very logn time.. really nice.
you captured all nuances of the character .. well done
Posted: 7 years ago
#8

Originally posted by: SA_nimk

read it all

very good effort!!! very decent!! hahah!!

enjoyed alot reading it

Thank you so very much!
I am glad you enjoyed so much...
It took me real efforts to write this one, comparatively the response was very cold.
I am glad you came and responded.

@bold... I get what you mean there... I can write decent stuff only...😆
Posted: 7 years ago
#9

Originally posted by: girlTalks

enjoyed any TS after a very logn time.. really nice.

you captured all nuances of the character .. well done

I am so delighted to read some responses here...
I had practically lost hope that I would get any comments here...
Thank you so much for responding...🤗

And I am so glad that some work has finally make you read in a long time... I am touched...
Thanks a lot.😃
Posted: 7 years ago
#10
Oh! Thank you!🤗

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