Zalak OS: Unexpected Fate - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago

This is super cute! Great work, very descriptive and vivid!! Loved how you used the aquafina ad!! The dialogue was perfect! Thanks for the PM!

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Nida

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hey ...

This was adorable !!!

I was grinning all the time while reading it ... :)

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Rafia

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Posted: 11 years ago

@Farah, Thanks for appreciating my style of writing😊.

@Iqra, Thanks for taking time to read it. I am delighted that you liked my work. 😃

@Gurmeet4Drashti, Glad you liked it. 😳

@Suri, My friend I can't THANK YOU enough.😆

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Rafia

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Posted: 11 years ago

@Sam_15, I am ecstatic that people whom I never came across are liking my OS. Thanks a lot for the wonderful comment.

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ZumSrK.

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Posted: 11 years ago

Aww this was so wonderful !!<3 love it <3
Fab writing !:)

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mariyam rifna

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Posted: 11 years ago

after reading suri's zalak os yesterday I watchd FM aquafina ad, coz I felt it was suri's os wala zalak in that ad . and what a coincidence, m reading ur os which s absolutely on that FM ad 😲

very well written and awesome, I loved it 😊❤️

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Rafia

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Posted: 11 years ago

@ZumSrK, Thanks for reading it 😃

@Asharkibiwi, Thank U so much for appreciating my efforts. I am glad you liked it 😳

@KaranSGRules, Thank You! 😊

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Hajra

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Posted: 11 years ago

This os was mindblowing

The way you described the scenes was mindblowing

Perfect scenes, perfect background, perfect dialogues.

Please if possible make this os a ss

And please do write more on this adorable couple

Zalak they are perfect

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Linsie

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Suri

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Posted: 11 years ago

Thank You for reading it Linsie...love ya!

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