Eid Contest: Your Eid Story - Page 4

ugh




where r stories
i wana take some idea that
story kaisy honi chahyeah please
any one write the story

Mashal start writting. and we are sure you can write very good, without help or ideas. 😊

Guys start writting as half of the Eid is over.

Originally posted by: euro_pakigal

mmm im not here im invisible.

we all know that n thats y we didnt see ur post in this thread😉😛

OK enuf is enuf....r v gonna c ne stories here?.....u pplz rnt makin me very happy 😡

My Story
Aisay bhi hain meharbaan
Zindagi ki rah main
kay jab milay tu youn milay
jaisay jantay nahin
...gana chal raha tha
Kya Subha thi, main aram say bed par bethi hoi sochoon main gum.
Gum hain kisi ki Yaad mai
yeh dil subh-o-sham
…Ami nay waqat ka ehsaas dilaya tu school jana para Na chahtay howay bhi.
Na janay kyoun Na janay kyoun
Mann Baap kyoun itnay zidi hotay hain
…School say ghar aiiy aur chair par bethay howay usska intzaar kar rahi thi aur sochoon main phir say gum uski jiska saaara saal intzaar kiya aur ab jab wo aya tu iss tarhan kay na aanay ki khabar na janay ka pata. Kya koi ghalti ho gai mujh say??? Soch rahi thi
Rotho ho tu tum ko kaisay manaon
kya karoon tumhara sir khaon ya apna sir khaon???
Kitna socha kay uss say poochon itna intzaar kyoun karwaya, kyoun itna rulaya lakin kya karti poch bhi tu nahin sakti thi na walid sahab jo saath thay.
Dushman Dushman yeh zamana ho gya
humara deedar aur saath nagwaar ho gya
Wo aya aur muskura kar chala gya baghar kuch bolay. Saara din intzaar kiya, school gayi tu bhi usskay baray main sochti rahi kay najanay kaisay dikhay ga. Jab dekhon gi tu kya karoon gi. Khushi say jhoom uthoon gi ya nara lagaon gi.
Mosum hai khushiyon ka
Kahiin pagal na hoo jaon main
iss kaqar jaldi main
Kahiin somosay jala Na doon
Walid sahab gaye tu main nay uss say poocha Ayy chand say mukhray walay itna intzaar kyoun karwaya? Kyoun itna rulaya?
Itna roii
tera intzaar kiya
par tu bekhabar
Aya aur chal diya???
ruk ja ruk ja
Dunda lay kar aati hoon
Ruk ja…
Aur uss nay jaisay he jawab dena chaha hawa ka aik jhonka aya aur main usski awaz sun na payi.
Hawa Hawa Ay Hawa
Baat sunay day
Kahin Aur ja
Kahiin aur ja
Mujhe baat sunay day
Main nay aik bar phir koshish ki kay uss say kahoon kay dobara bata day lakin wo dheet hadi kuch bola he nahin. Bohut mintain keen phir jaa kar jab bolna shuru kiya tu badloon ko garajana yaad agaya aur mujjhe wo gana yaad aya:
Garaj Baras Sawan Ghir Ayoun… kuch dair tu yeh gana gaya aur jab yaad aya kay jawab suna tu bhool he gayi tu baraaish barasna shuru ho gayi aur badal garajana.
Badal Garajtay hain
Ansoo chalkatay hain
zindgian mit,ti hain
Khwab bikhartay hain
Khushiyan milti hain
Zindgiyaan Sanwarti hain
Khaab buntay hain
Nay sapnay jagtay hain
aur Baarish Barasti hai
Jab tak apnay mon par say barish ki bondain hataien utni dair main zulfoon nay mon par apna basaira karna shuru kiya, jab zulfain hataien tu utni dair main wo wahan say chala gya.
Jana kahan gya
Ab kab aay ga
behan nay darmian main toka
itnzaar phir say karna ho ga
tab wo dobara ayy ga
Behan say thodi dair larai ki kay uss nay meray liye samosay nahin bachaiy aur saaray chat pat kha gaii phir wo tang aa kar zameen par zoor say paon patakhak kar chali gai aur main phir say apni duniya main gum, usski talash aur uskay janay ka yaad aya tu bohut dukh howa…
Ay chand tu wapas aa ja. Ay Eid kay chand tujhe dekhnay kay liye sara din intzaar kiya aur tu mujhe baghair batay he chala gya. Phir say gana yaad aya aur gaya
Ay Chand Teri Chandani ki Kasam…
Phir yaad aya kay yeh tu sahi suit nahin kar raha as per situation so changed the song to
Tum tu theray Perdaisi Saath Kya Nibhao Gay
Baraish kay barastay he tum tu chalay jao gay…

Plz Dont Laugh
this is my first eva try
Aji

WOW Aji u got us started......kewl so app eid ka intezar hi kerti rah gayee..cute n creative


ok huz nxt?>

Originally posted by: ~PaKi*PrInCeZ~

WOW Aji u got us started......kewl so app eid ka intezar hi kerti rah gayee..cute n creative


ok huz nxt?>

well i thought Javeria is next

looks like i have to wake her up 😆

WAKE UP JAV...😛😉😆

then do u wana be the last one????

wat okay???
so r u the next person or last???

wat do u mean by dunno
u know u have to
n where r others, Amreen, Saba, Mana, Moona n everyone else