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Posted: 18 years ago
Chapter 17

By now Kathir was coming close to the trio, but his eyes was still fixated on Uma. Hello kathir, eppadipa irukka…china vayasula paarthathu. Kathir smiled at Charu, naan nalla irukken aunty. Neenga ellam nalla irukeengala? We are doing very good, Kathir meet my long lost but recently found daughter Abirami…. Abirami greeted him with a handshake.

Of course Uma pathi naal solla vendiyathilla…Uma greeted him with a faint smile…Kathir held up his hand for a handshake, Uma reluctantly raised her hand. Kathir tightened his grip in her hand and looking at her meaningfully shook her hand , "Nice to meet you again Uma". Uma did not have words….she was tensed, but did not cease to admire him…..his secretive smile, his striped polo t-shirt , the same gold chain on his neck, his intermittent glances….she was so familiar with his mannerisms now........but all this could be someone elses…the thought pushed her back to her sense.

Abirami engaged Kadhir in a conversation about his company was walking in the front. Uma and Charu were walking behind them. Uma had often dreamt about how they were going to meet and how she was going to let him know her feelings…but all that was in jeopardy now….she felt defeated and pathetic. She couldn't stand it anymore…..Kathir was half heartedly listening to what was abi was saying, all his thoughts were on his angel walking behind him like a beaten puppy. His heart went out to her, she does not deserve this, she cannot be treated this way, I have to find a solution to make it right. For now he decided to play along and once he was alone, he would call his parents and let them know.

Abi and kathir looked back and they saw Uma waving to CHaru going in a different direction. Ennamma, Uma enga pora…..abi asked, Etho personal work irkunnu pora. Kathir knew that Uma wanted to avoid him, he looked back and saw Uma looking back at him. The car pulled up and the driver loaded his luggage. He faked a headache and requested Charu to drop him off in the hotel.

After dropping him off at the hotel, Charu's car zoomed towards their bungalow. Somehow charu felt that this was not going to work, she didn't see a positive look on his face when he saw Abi…is it because she is a divorcee? She had to wait ….for his answers.

At the hotel room, Kathir was on the phone with his mother. He was a man of action….he had all plan set in his mind. He told his mom all about Uma and asked her to come and see her and he had no plans whatsoever to meet or marry ABirami. His mom was a pious good woman unlike her dad who thought about business all the time. He wasn't happy with Priya's family after their alliance did not work out. He had heard rumours in his office about Kathir and Uma, but he had no inclination to get them married. One of the business tycoons son marrying a widow…he couldn't digest it. Kathir was begging his mom Sumathi to talk to his dad. Sumathi agreed and said she would call back….his mom called back and happily said that his father had agreed to meet Uma. Kathir was happy….now his next job was to meet Uma and get her feelings straight from her heart…he didn't expect ito the me a romantic meet like how he had dreamt of. He pulled out the gifts and jewellery he had brought for her.

He pulled his laptop out and searched for priya's email with Uma's cell number. He took a nice shower and pulled on his best pair of Dockers and a casual shirt. Room service had just brought in his breakfast He finished his breakfast and all powered up, he dialed Uma;s cell number. Hello….a feeble voice from the other end answered…

U: Sollunga kathir….enna vishayamnu seekirama sollunga, enakku velai irukku. Uma's voice transformed suddenly into a business like tone.

Kathir was silent for a minute…..Uma's heart was skipping a beat……she opened her mouth again to say something when….

K: "Unnai kandai naal olivattam pol ullukulle suzhaluthadi
Unnidathir naan pesiyathellem uyirukkul olikkuthadi
Kadalodu pesa vaithai
Kadikaram veesavaithai
Mazhayodu kulikka vaithai
Veyil kooda rasikka vaithai….."

U: Kathir…kavithai kekra moodla naan ippo illaai…
She forced an irritation in her voice not wanting to give into kathir's feelings.

K: Nee mel uthadu , naan keezh uthadu….mounamagave pesikolvom
Kathir was closing his eyes and repeating Ramesh vishvanathnas haiku.

U: I need to go kathir……
Her voice had toned down a bit.

K: Inrodu unnai paarthu 92 naatkal aaginrana
Inrodu nee ennai 92 murai konrirukirai.

U: Kathir….stop it. Please!
Her voice was feebler……

K: Thengi nirkum unmaikalai vazhiya vital
Kannthu kodukalum saatchiyagividumenru
Nee un kankalai moodiyathi en kangal kandukondana
Kangalil theriyum etho ondru kaati koduthuvittathu unmayin unmayai.

Kathir continued……….he was determined to melt Uma's heart down. ….each and every poetry he recited to her came deep from his heart. He meant every word of it.
On the other hand, uma who was determined so far was beginning to give in….she coulnt keep the sterness in her voice anymore…..she couldn't control her self anymore

K: Naan thandavalathil pootha poo
Nee rayilil varugiraya illai nadanthi varugiraya.?
Nadanthu vanthal nee enakku, rayilil vanthal naan yamanukku

The words pierced her heart…..she was crying, breaking down…..Aiyo kathir….enna kollatheenga…….please…she cried out….all her emotions that were hiding were coming out and kathir understood every bit of it……..he was in in deep emotion as well…..Uma, uma…….he didn't expect words out of her…..he wanted her to cry out ……and let out all the sadness and tension she had hidden within her…….after almost a few minutes Uma spoke up..

U: sollatha ragasiyangal en manak kadalil puthainthu kidakinrana,,,,muthukalai
Avatrai edukkava thodukkava?

She continued
U: Ethu verum pirivalla , maranam enra nadakathin othigai,,,
Naan vittuvitten en nadaga aasayai.

It was Kadhir's turn to cry now……he let all his inhibitions out and he held the phone so close to his lips and cried. He wanted to meet her…..and take her in his arms…….and hold her tight.

U: If you think I love you!
You are wrong. Its something more than that."


Kathir: enakku unna ippave paarkamun uma . I cant wait any longer… 2 varushama ithukkathan kaathirunthen….loosu penne…..itha munname solli irukkalamla…3 maasam munnadi, ippo ivlo prachanaye vanthirukkathu, unkooda pesamatten po!....Kathir was displaying two emotions his love and a sweet anger..

Uma was smiling with tears in her eyes…..enakkum ungala ippave paarkanum kathir…..

They decided to meet at Uma's house .since mama and priya had gone to kancheepuram for a temple visit. Uma was so surprised at how quickly she gave in. She had decided that she would not come between Kadhir and Abirami;s engagement since it might be good for kadhir;s future. Priya had advised her so much….

"Anni neenga kathira vittu kudukka koodathu, ithu nija vazhkai …cinemavo TV serial lo illa….angathan anavasiyama pengal etho thyagam panromra nenappula avanga vaazhkaya azhichikuttu, amblainga vazhkayum azhikaranga, neengalum appadi irukatheenga anni. Oru velai abirami nalla ponna iruntha kooda neenga panrathu nyayam…..aana nichiyama avalala kathira santhosha padutha mudiyathu". Priya;s words though sensible failed in front of Charu madam's love towards Uma. Charu had done so much for her how could she deceiver her this way……But Kadhir's love and his sensuous talk shattered everything. His love proved that nothing else was important for her. She would ask kathir and they would talk to Charu about their love, uma decided and got ready to go home.
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Posted: 18 years ago
************Disclaimer******************

Not all kavidhai's written in the story are my original. These arestuff that I came across when I was browsing,…but stayed in my mind. So please if any of you are the creator of these please email me and I would like to post credits for your creation.
Edited by madumithas - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
Looks like I got in first to this chapter. Good one Madhu. I am glad that Uma is sane and can differentiate between sacrifice and foolishness.
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Posted: 18 years ago
I'm with you Roja. Madhu, there are no words to praise your creativity. Simply wonderdul. Hats off to you dear Madhu! Thank you I love it, is there another chapter today? (Nan konjum romba greedy).

Pat
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Posted: 18 years ago

wow! great chapter madu! it's so full of emotions that i was blown away!👏👏👏

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Posted: 18 years ago
gr8 one Madhu 👏
God bless you 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
Roja.....
Couldn't agree with you more. I hate the way they portray women to sacrifice and hide their problems. If you are sincere and true at something…just go for it with dignity and give it a try. In my story I would have let Durai softened a bit if Abirami had approached him in a different manner with dignity…after all she is a woman and she has the right to chose a man. In fact when I started writing the story…that was the path I was taking…with Durai refusing her gently. But Brinda Das has acted so well…..that I could not portray her to be dignified and gentle. I didn't want to take the route where Uma would sacrifice and give up due to her sincerity towards charu…


Ha....enna relief
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Posted: 18 years ago
I have no word to express your creativity, Madhu. I'm speechless….. 👏

cant wait for the next chapter...
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Posted: 18 years ago
Madhu,
Hats off! you are so talented. I read 2 or 3 times again and again. After that i go to the blog and read again. Today I am going to read from the beginning.
Can't wait to see Uma and Kadhir together.

I am greedy too, can we get the next chapter today? manasu neranju weekendkku poolam. Please...
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Posted: 18 years ago
Wonderful !!!!me too... can we get one more chapter 😉
Have a nice weekend.

suda

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