Here is Part 3 of the story... Well, the story would move somewhat... Depending upon what you are expecting... Anyway, read and share your feedback friends! 😃
FYI : All parts are created with equal contribution from Sush and me!
Part 3 :
Lakshmi : Ey line la irukkiyaa? Sathame kaanom?
Raji : Oru nimisham iru... He came into the room...
Karthik : (Mindvoice) Kadupu aagudho? Ennakum appadi dhaane irukkum... Cha...
He takes his phone and leaves from the room...
Raji : Poiyaachu... Ippo sollu...
Lakshmi : Ketutaara?
Raji : Moraichuttu poradha paartha appadi dhaan theriyudhu...
Lakshmi : Sari vidu... Let's stop this talk...
Raji : Apparom Lakshmi... Semma tired ah irukku... Naan sleep panna poraen... Neeyum thoongu... Veetukku ponaa udane call pannu...
Lakshmi : Okay di... Amaa nee parthuko... Naan apparom ah call pannuren...
Raji hung up the call after saying bye...
The next day... Everyone go to Vishnu's flat for the paal kaaichura' rituals... And are back...
After a few hours... Someone knocks on the door...
Raji : Vishnu va irukkum oh... But en kadhava laam thatitu vararu... Let me go open the door first...
She opens the door... Both are dumbstruck for a second to see each other...
At the same time...
Raji : Lakshmi !!!
Lakshmi : Raji !!!
Both hug out of happiness...
Raji : Nee eppadi di inga?
Lakshmi : Idho pakathu flat ah dhaan book paninen... But neeyum inga irupaa nnu theriyaama pochu... Surprised...
Raji : Amaa... Evalo happy ah irukku theriyuma... Childhood la irundhe namba onna dhaan irukkom la... And it continues now as well...
Lakshmi : Ya... Sari veetukulla laam koopida maatiyaa?
Raji : Cha... Shock la marandhutten... Ulla vaa... Ellarukkum intro kudukuren...
Raji takes L to the living room, where everyone was seated...
Raji : Athai... Mama... Iva dhaan en friend, Lakshmi...
K mom : Adade... Vaa ma... Eppadi irukka?
Lakshmi : Nalla irukken Aunty...
K mom : Sari ma... Raji nee iva varaa nnu sollave illa?
Raji : Ennake theriyaadhu athai... Ippo dhaan dhideer shock... Namba pakathu veetula dhaan irukka... Edho ketkuradhu kaaga vandhaa... Appo dhaan therinjadhu...
K dad : That's great ma... Rendu perum ippaiyum pakathula irukka poreenga... Sandhosham...
RL smile...
K mom : Amaa... Inimel kavalai illa... Adhaan Vishnu vum irukkaan la... Nambi naanga Banglore kku pogalaam...
Karthik : (Mindvoice) Ellam en neram... Shabbah...
K dad : Dei Karthi... Ennada silent ah irukka?
Karthik : Onnum illa pa... Padichuttu irukken...
K dad : Ennadhu nee padikuriyaa? Raji veliya mazhai varudhaa nnu paaru...
Everyone laughs...
Raji : Sari sari... Edhukku di vandha?
Lakshmi : Inga post office la address change pannitu vandhen... Enga mail laam varum nnu ketka vandhen...
K dad : First floor la Mailbox Area irukku... Anga unnoda flat number mailbox la every morning 10 am kku mails laam varum... Larger items door deliver paniduvaanga...
Lakshmi : Thanks Uncle...
Vishnu calls Karthik and asks him to accompany him to go to the bank...
Outside while Vishnu was waiting for K... Lakshmi comes from KR's flat...
Vishnu : Hi... Neenga enga inga?
Lakshmi : Adha naa kekkanum... Neenga eppdi inga?
Vishnu : En friend inga dhana irukkan adhan naanum inga irukken...
Lakshmi : Adhe mathiri dhan naanum... En friend inga irukka adhan naanum ingey vandhutten...
Vishnu : Oh.. kk.. Yenga naa ethir flat la irukken... Neenga enga irukkinga?
Lakshmi : Pakkathu flat la Vishnu...
Vishnu : Oh neenga dhaana adhu... Okay... Apparom unga friend enna solraanga?
Lakshmi : Unga friend enna solraaro adhe dhaan... Naan pudicha muyalukku moonu kaal puraanam dhaan...
Vishnu : But romba smart nga... Correct ah nadika vendiyaa edathula perfect ah act pannuraanga...
Lakshmi : Pinna family kaaga kalyanam pannitu avangalukaaga sandhoshama irukka maadhiri nadika dhaane seiyanum...
Vishnu : Hmm... But ivanga rendu perum maaruvaangala nnu doubt dhaan...
Lakshmi : Paarpom... But over time maara chance irukku...
Vishnu : Yeah, but... Rendu perum ippadi verukuradhu kku karaname--
Karthik : Enna machan ready ah? Polaama?
Vishnu : Hmm, polaam da... Bye Lakshmi, apparom pesalaam...
Lakshmi : Hmm, bye...
After a few hours...
In the terrace of KR's flat...
Karthik stood leaning on the wall listening to music in headphones...
Raji comes up there to hang the washed clothes on the clothesline...
Karthik : (Mindvoice) Nimadhiyaa thaniyaa kooda irukka mudiyala... Cha...
Raji : (Mindvoice) Unnaku mattum dhaan moraikka theriyuma? Engalukkum theriyum...
Karthik : (Mindvoice) Nethiku night dinner la enna laam panina... Adhukku ippo revenge time...
K takes out his headphones and plays a song...
"Unnai Paartha Pinbu Naan Naanaga Illaye..."
Raji realizes that he is trying to irritate her...
Karthik : (Mindvoice) Unna maadhiri nallavan ah irundhu ippo irritate pannuren paaru...
Raji takes her phone and plays...
"Unnai Partha Pinbu Dhaan En Vazhvil Sodhanai Kaalam..."
Karthik : (Mindvoice) Hmm, not bad... He plays "Enakkae Enakkaa.. Enakkae Enakkaa.. Nee Enakkae Enakkaa.."
Raji : (Mindvoice) Idhukellam naanga asara maattom... She plays "Kannodu Kanbathellam thalaivaa... Kangalukku sondhamillai... Kangalukku sondhamillai"
Karthik : (Smirks) He plays "Ennavale adi ennavale... En idhaiyathai tholaithu vitten..."
Raji : (Mindvoice) Unna ippo tholaikka poraen paaru... She plays "Po Po Po Nee Engu Vaena Po... Po Po Po Nee Onnum Vaena Po"
Vishnu : (Enters) Sabaash... Sariyaana potti... (Claps)
Karthik : Dei... Nee eppada inga vandha?
Vishnu : Pattu potti starting la irundhe naan inga dhaan irukken...
Karthik : Fraud-u... Ippadi ottu ketkura...
Vishnu : Naan enga da ottu ketaen? Naan nalla theriyara mathiri ninnu dhan kettu rasichittu irundhen... Neenga dhan pattu potti la naan irukkaradhu kuda gavanikkala...
Raji : Enna vishnu friend ah paarka vandheengala?
Vishnu : Illainga... Sister ah parkka vandhen...
Raji : Sister ah? Jo vai ah solreenga? Ava keela irukka paarunga...
Vishnu : Jo illainga...
Raji : Appo vera yaaru?
Karthik : Ayieeeya... Romba nadikaadha unna dhaan solraan...
Raji : Yaaru nadikkura? Nee dhaan ivalo nerama nadichuttu irundha...
Karthik : Amaa amaa... Nee dinner la nadichadha vida naanga perusa nadichittom paru...
Vishnu : Dei.. Ennada idhu eppa parthaalum sandakozhi ah theriyureenga?
Karthik : Unnaku ivala pathi theriyaadhu da...
Raji: Unnaku maatum enna pathi theriyuma? Nonsense... Anaa nee eppadi ndra full biodata vum ennaku dhaan theiryum... Nee paninadha therinjum unna kalyanam pannikiten paru... Enna sollanum...
Karthik : Appadi naan enna paninen? Nee adha partha?
Raji : En panina nnu unnaku theriyadha? Nee panna neriya vishayam ennaku mattum dhaan theriyum... Adhellam sonna unnaku dhaan mokkai aagum...
Karthik: (Mindvoice) Ayyo... Ennatha therinju vechu irukka... Namba neriya bulb vangi irukkom... Adhula edhu nu theriyalaye...
Raji : Enna mokka vangunom nu yosikkuriya?
Karthik : (Mindvoice) Athaadi... Manasulla nenaikuradha solraale...
Raji : Manasula nenaikadhadhaiyum solluven...
Karthik : Idhukkelam naanga bayapada mattom... Sari ennaku vellai irukku naan kelamburen...
Raji : Adhaane... Nee dhaan kozhai aache... Aambala nnu sollikuradhu kku unnaku endha thagudhiyum illai...
Karthik : Ey... Over ah pesinaa, apparom palaar nnu onnu arainchuduven...
Raji : Enna da, pesum bodhu kai neetuviyaa? Enga kai ah thooki paaru, un mookai naan odaichuduven...
Karthik : Ratchasi... Engaiyaavadhu poi thola...
He storms off the place... Raji leaves after him...
Vishnu : Shabbah... Ivanga kooda irundhaa naan paithiyam aaga vendiyadhu dhaan... But ivanga rendu perthukulla vera ennamo laam irukku... Raji solradha paartha appadi dhaan theriyudhu... Enna nnu therinjaa dhaan serthu vaikka mudiyum... Paarpom...
The Next Day...
K mom : Karthi innaiku Office poreengala?
Karthik : Amaa ma... Romba naal leave eduthaachu, innaiku join pannanum...
K mom : Raji enga?
Karthik : Room la dhaan irupaa...
Raji : Morning Athai... Naan breakfast cook panni vachutten... Neenga adha saapidunga... And lunch kku cook pannanum ah or shall I leave?
K mom : Nee kelambu ma... Lunch enga moonu perukkum dhaane... Naan cook pannikuren...
Raji : Hmm okay... Thanks Athai...
K mom goes to the kitchen...
K goes to the room... R follows... She goes in and closes the door...
Raji : (Snaps) Oru nimisham...
To be continued...
Precap :
The negative version of KR continues...
What's waiting at office?
Stay Tuned...
~~ Sush and Abi ~~
