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Posted: 10 years ago
#81

Sorry bro late comment pannuradhuku exams nadukudha adhan konjam busya irunthutean

Superb update bro 👏👏 Indha KR ennaku romba pudichi irukku paravalla karthik romba porumaiya raji pesuradha kettutu irundhan...

Raji soo cuteee 😳 Oh.. theriyama thappu panna kutty sorry nu sollanuma? Karthik mathiri ennaku theriyadhu bro...

Appram bro karthik table vachi iruntha sorry eduthukutana? Heroine mudha mudhala ava kaiyala hero ku kudthudhahu

Raji-lakshmi-susan friendship nice to see...

Koushik - Abishek avlo nalavanungala da neenga

Vishnu sonnadhu 100% correct KR ku naduvala adhe adhe 😉

Bro eppa next update?


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Posted: 10 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: abinayaabi

Sorry bro late comment pannuradhuku exams nadukudha adhan konjam busya irunthutean

Superb update bro 👏👏 Indha KR ennaku romba pudichi irukku paravalla karthik romba porumaiya raji pesuradha kettutu irundhan...

Raji soo cuteee 😳 Oh.. theriyama thappu panna kutty sorry nu sollanuma? Karthik mathiri ennaku theriyadhu bro...

Appram bro karthik table vachi iruntha sorry eduthukutana? Heroine mudha mudhala ava kaiyala hero ku kudthudhahu

Raji-lakshmi-susan friendship nice to see...

Koushik - Abishek avlo nalavanungala da neenga

Vishnu sonnadhu 100% correct KR ku naduvala adhe adhe 😉

Bro eppa next update?



Its ok,Abhi..no problem..
Thanks a lot for ur comment.😳

karthik raji sorrya eduthukittan...atha vara partsla solluven..ok..😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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CHAPTER 4

Friedns,intha part konjam aruvaiyathan irukum...avasarathula type pannathu...adjust panikonga...pls..


Time: 3.15 pm...its a tea time for all


In canteen:


laxmi:ada ada ada...enna arumaiya iruku intha coffee...chaceaillai..

koushik:enna laxmi,ore nallula namma office canteen coffeeku rasigai aaiteenga pola..

abishek:aama...avanga solradhula irunthe theriyalaya ithu evalavu unmainu...

laxmi:aamapa..ennamo theriyala ennaku intha coffee romba pidichu pochu...pazhani annanoda kai thiramiye thanithan...

susan:serithan..appa pazhani annaukulam fans vathutaanga paarunga..(looking at other members except laxmi)

raji:aama susan..athuvum theevara fan..

all burst into laughter...

laxmi:ada rombathanpa panreenga ellorum...oru coffee pidichurukunu solla kudatha?

Koushik:laxmi...neenga tharalama sollunga...aana naangalum ungala kalaichukitte irupom...itha neenga kanduka kudathu...

susan:supera sonnenga...koushik..

laxmi:seri neenga kalaichukitte irunga...itho vanthudren.


Having said so,laxmi got up ...

susan:engadi pora..

laxmi:coffee kudikathan..

abishek:ippathana kudicheenga...

laxmi:aama ...ippa second time kudika poren..

raji:laxmi...enna solreenga...venam laxmi...rombalam coffeeya kudika kudathu...en appa adikadi solvaaru itha...udambuku nalathu illai laxmi..

susan:nalla sollu,raji...aana madam, thana avalavu seekram maathipalanu theriyala...

laxmi:hmm..raji...susan solradhu unmaithan...ennala takkunulam maatika mudiyathu en pazhakatha..

raji:maathikonga laxmi konjam konjama..illati unga health than spoil aagum..

laxmi:hmm try panren...seri itho vanthudren irunga..


Having said,she tried to move..

susan:yei...ippa engadai pora..

laxmi:yemma...naan konjam biscuits vaanga poren..sudu thaniyavathu kudipen thavira,kandipa coffeeya kudika maaten ippa...pothuma.?.

raji:hahaha...ithu pothum,laxmi...

susan:.romba samatha irukala namma sonna peche kettu...

All laughed including laxmi...meanwhile,raji took her cellphone n shocked..


raji:cha...enna kaariyam pannitom..

laxmi:en raji,pathara?enna aachu...

raji:paaru laxmi...naan lunch timela phonea silent modela pottutu,appadiye maranthu poiten,atha eduthu vida...appa neraya missed calls kuduthurukaaru...

susan:enna raji nee,seri...tension aagatha...ippa poi appata pesu po..

koushik:aama raji.poi pesunga...appa neenga phoenea edukathanala bayapada poraru ennamo ethonu..

laxmi:aama...poi pesu raji...naanga inga wait panrom..

abishek:but kavalapadatheenga...laxmiya naanga coffeeyalam kudika vida maatom...okva.??

laxmi gave an angry glare at him...raji smiled..

raji:seri...naan poi pesitu vanthudren...time aachuna,neenga kilambunga...naan vanthudren...

laxmi:ok...pesitu vaa...


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raji moves from there n rushed to the balcony..there stands one person, enjoying the pleasant weather...on hearing some anklet sound,he lifted his head to see who it was..

that person mv:ivala.??.inga ethuku vara??konjam kuda enna nimathiya iruka vida maata pola..


raji came to the corner n dialled the no without even aware of someone's presence near her...ie... her BOSS.. .he stood in the other corner of balcony..


raji:cha...thappu panntenne..appa ethuku phone pannirupaaru??...kalaila thana pesinom..ennava irukum??..

meesai came on the line..her boss avoided listening her talk...but raji's voice was very louder,so he couldnt escape from that..


raji:hello appa...raji pesarenpa...

meesai:rajima...ennama nee...ethanadava try panren...phonea edukave maatengra..

raji:sorrypa...naan phonea silentla pottuten...athanpa...

meesai:ethukuma..silentlalam podra...appa, nee phonea edukathathala bayanthu poitenma oru nimisathula...thunimaniyalamkoda eduthu vechukittane paarthko..

raji:ethukupa thuni maniyalam eduthu vecheenga?

Meesai:vera ethuku..anga varathukuthan...

raji:appa..

meesai:aamamma...phone varalainu try pannikitte irukaratha vida naane nera vanthurulamla..

raji:appa...ennapa neenga...seri athaiku phone panniruka vendiyathuthana..

meesai:ada ava phoneaye eduka maatengarama unna maari...veetu phoneum repairku poirukunu nethuthan sonna...athan naane kilamba ready aaiten..

raji:sorrypa...ungala romba tension padutheetenla..

k's mv:appava mattuma ,ennayum serthuthana tension panra

meesai:appadilam illaima...nee chinna ponnu...unaku vivaram pathathu..athan enaku bayame..

raji:appa...naan onnum chinna ponnulam illai..paarunga...eppadi perusa vazharnthu nikaren...

meesai laughs..

k's mv:aama...aal vazhrunthurukara azhavau moolai vazharalai...

meesai:rajima...nee evalavu vazharnthalum...unaku evalavu vayasu aanulum...enaku nee chinna ponnuthan..

raji:appa..

meesai:aamada kannu..enaku paathi samathamthan antha puthu oorula unna velaiku vida..aana enna panradhu nee aasai pattutiye..

raji:appa...ennapa neenga..

meesai:aamama...oru samayam enaku manase ketka maatengathu...vayasu vantha ponna,ippadi thaniya velaiku anuparathu nallathu illainu en manasu sollikitte iruku...

raji:appa...enpa ippadi solreenga...naan enga thaniya iruken..athaioda than iruken...

meesai:athaioda than iruka..aanalum enaku bayam irukuma...vena onnu pannen...pesama inga thirupi vanthudren...appa iruken unaku...naan unna kanla vechu paarthukurenma...enna solra,,

raji:mudiyathupa...mudiyave mudiyaathu...neenga patta kastamlam pothum...inime naanthan ungala paarthupen...ungaluku thevaiyanathu paarthu paarthu pannuven...paarthukitte irunga...oru naala illa oru naal ,naan periya aal aagi ungala en kannukulla vechu paarthupen..

k's mv:aama ivala kankaanikave oruthar venum...ithula iva appava kanukulla vechu paarthuku poralam..hmm..aana nalla thoughtthan...parava illai..

meesai started to sob..

raji:appa...

meesai:...

raji:appa linela irukeengala??

meesai:irukenma..

raji:appa.azhareengala??

meesai:illaima..athalam illai..

raji:illaipa..neenga azharenga...unga pechulaye athu theriyuthu...ethukupa azhareenga??..

meesai:ellam unna ninachuthanma..

raji:enna ninacha ??...ethukupa..

meesai:pinna...ippadi oru ponna pethathuku naan puniyam pannirukanuma...

meesai began to sob again..

raji:appa...azhatheengapa...pls...enaku azhagaya vartuthu...

karthik shocked a little on hearing that...

meesai:illaima..naa azhalalai...

raji:nejamma.?

Meesai:nejama...itho kanna thodachukitten.

Raji:nalla appa...ippathan enaku thripthiya iruku...neenga enna pathi kavala padatheengapa...naan romba boldaana ponnu...seriya??

k's mv:correctthan...bolda irukarathunala than en cabin varaikum vantha..aana konjam vai jaasthithan

Meesai:athu pothuma enku...nee thairiyamavum irukanum...gavanama irukanum...

raji:seripa..

meesai:haan ketka maranthutene...unnoda velai seiyaravangalam eppadi pazhakaranga?

Rai:appa...neenga namba maateengapa..ennoda irukavangalam romba jollya pesaraangapa...romba anbavum irukaanga...appuram en rendu boss um...romba nalla nadanthukaranga...


on hearing that word,boss...karthik's face gave a surprise expression..

raji contd:athukumela...ennoda mothal boss,athaavthu enga temaoda captain nu sollalam..

k's mv:naan captaina??..entha kapalku captainu therinchukalama?

raji:avar romba perfecta irukaaru...nallathu solli thararu...karara irunthalum...avar romba nallavarpa..

k's mv:romba nallavar a??...naana??...serithan..

meesai:appadiya...romba santhosamma...ippa enaku etho manasu konjam amaithi aana maathiri iruku...

raji:aamampa...enaku inga neraya friends kidaichurukaanga...athanala neenga varutha pada venampa enna ninachu..

meesai:serima..varutha padalai...haan...appuram athai veetuoda address theriyumla..

raji:haan..theriyumpa..

meesai:anga poi sernthathum enaku phone paanuma..

raji:kandipa panrenpa..

meesai:nalathuma..appa phonea vaikaren...romba neram pesintomla..

raji:aamampa..timee aairuchu...vechurungapa...bye..

raji hung up her call...her face shone with her bright smile after her convo with her dad...with this joyness,she turned to her leftside...her brownish eyes caught the sight of her boss,who was leaning over the wall busy with his phone...but really he was pretending as if playing with his iphone after raji finished talking...raji walked towards him fastly n stands before him...


raji:sir...neenga enna panreenga inga...

karthik lifted his head to have a look at her..

karthik:naa...

raji:puriyuthu sir...neenga enna sola vareenganu puriyuthu...inga konjam mind relaxationkaga thana vanthurukeenga...correcta sonnena??...pinna evalavu neramthan antha computer screenaye uthu uthu paarthukittu irukarathu...athukum mela fileasa athanayum check pannanum...thazhai valikumla...

karthik:seri..

raji:enna ketaka vareenganu enaku theriyum sir...nee inga enna panrathana??...appata pesikittu irunthen sir..phonea vera silentla potena..athan appa enaku missed calls kuduthathu enaku theriyala...ippathan paarthen canteenla coffee kudikum pothu..athan pesninen...appaku lesa bayanthutaaru...naan samathanam panniten..


k's mv:itha naan unta ketkavae illaiye..

raji cont:appuram appa namma offica pathi ketaru...ellame supernu solliten..namma team,neenga,vishnu ellorayum pathiyum solliten...

k:raji..

raji:sir...sorry sir...neenga enna thitta vareenganu puriyuthu timea ippadi vettiya pokaranu...kavala padahtheenga sir...naan canteenla irunthu nera inga vanthen...en coffeeya koda kudikalai..micham iruku..ippo nera en seatku poidren micha coffeya kudikama...seriya sir...inime intha thappa panna maaten sir...sorry sir...varen sir...


having said,raji left the place...

k:enna ithu...iva maatum enta vantha..pesina...kilambi poikitte iruka..avale questionayum keetu bathilum sollikira...enna oru varthai koda fulla pesa vidalai..aana karthik...unaku enna aachu...iva mokka podratha nee en ivalavu neram ninnu ketukittu iruka?...seri illaiye...hmmm...

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Its 6.oo pm...All was ready to leave home...


laxmi:raji...eppadi pova..

raji:busla than..

laxmi:endi office cab irukula..

raji:illai laxmi...konjanaal busla poitu appurama office cabla poren..

susan:appadiya?...seri...appa kilambalama ellorum

koushik:ok...kilambalam..


vishnu came there..


vishnu:enna ellorum kilambiteengala?

Laxmi:aama vishnu

vishnu:hmm...seri iniku ungaloda day eppadi irunthuchunu sollunga...office eppadi,ella stafssum eppadi..?

laxmi:enaku ellame romba pidichuruku vishnu

susan:enaku mukiyama ennoda cubicle pidichuruku

koushik:enaku canteenthan pidichuruku..

abishek:ennaku office vasala ulla tea shopthan pidichuruku...

vishnu:super...super...koushikodathutha highlight...

all smiled...

vishnu:seri raji...neenga sollunga,ungaluku enn pidichuruku inga..

raji:unmaiya sollanumna ,ennaku namma teama romba pidichuruku vishnu...

vishnu:oh...good...good..

vishnu:super guys..ithe jollynessoda nalaiku santhikalam...neenga kilambalam...


Vishnu vacate that place saying this..


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In K's cabin..Vishnu enters..


Vishnu:karthik...kilambalama?

Karthik:haan ...kilambalamda..

vishnu:dei...iniku unaku maraka mudiyatha nallula..

karthik:appadiya??...appadilam onnum illaiye...enna special iniku...

vishnu laughed louder with his agmark style..

karthik:vishnuuu...enna romba seendi paarkura...

vishnu:serida...serida..kochukatha..ennana..

again.vishnu laughed...

karthik:seri...nee ipadiye sirichukittu iru...naan kilambaren...

he was about to leave..

vishnu:ennana..raji unna romba pidichurukunu sollranga..

karthik was shocked..

karthik:enna solra v

vishnu:illaida ..avanga namma teama pidichurukunu sonnanga...

karthik:hmm...unna...

vishnu:ennada ...emanthutaya??

karthik:vishnu...nee vaiya moodraya illaiya?..palarnu vechuruven paarthuko..

vishnu:seri..seri...innonum iruku...athu ennana...

karthik:nee rombathan scene podra...poda..

vishnu:dei...dei...iruda...solren...athaavthu neeyum,rajiyum. Iniku...

karthik:vaya moodu vishnu...rombathan pesara...enakum,rajikum ennada??...haan??...etho kovila paarthom,ippo officela en teamla iruka...avalothan...neeya ethayavathu attu thanama karpanai pannikatha..seriya??

vishnu:oh..appa onnum illaiya unaku..naanga nambitom...

karthik:neenga nambuna nambu,nambati po...ippa enna aala vidu..

vishnu:iruda...ethuku intha topica pathi pesum pothu ivalavu kova padranu naan therinchukalama?

Karthik:enna..intha topica pathi pesarathu enaku pidikalainu artham..

vishnu:pidikalaiya?...illai...

karthik:vishnuuu

vishnu:ada ethukuda ippadi kupidra enna...enaku kaathu nalla ketkumda seriya.?

Karthik:kaathu ithalam corrrecta ketkume...aana ketka vendiyatha ketkaathe..

vishnu:haha...seri...seri..gandavatha..vaa polam...

karthik:athu...vaa kilambalam...


KV came near the steps...there came raji...vishnu winks at K...but karthik didnt even react to that n remained silent..All proceeded towards the road..


KV started his bike n ready to drove...Accidently,karthik eyes look at bus stand ,which was opposite to office...there stands raji with her handbag,refreshing with her attractive smile..


K's mv:hmm...ivalavu neram aagiyum freshave iruka...eppadithano ithalam...aama nee ithuku ithalam paarkura.. saying this,he patted his back head for his idiotic thinking...


But who knows what has been decided by the God..


to be contd...


Edited by shiningstar77 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#84
Shiny, surprised to see the update today..

Thanks for the surprise...

Appa- Raji conversation -very nice.. Clearly shows her innocence... Balcony la ninnu avvlo sathammava pesurathu. Ayio ayio... Idhula bold naanu nu Vera appa kitta scale solrathu, very interesting..

Idellam Karthik Vera kettuttu appapo MV Vera... Enna nadakka poguthunu laarkalam...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#85
A very practical update, its interesting to see the way K is observing R in different lights. Its nice to see the way R is getting into the team, her friends making her feel comfortable and confident. K's admiring conclusive note on Raji's looks ...does it indicate the beginning of whats coming. mmm...enna nadakkuthunu paakkalam. thank u Shiny for a very realistic update. 👏👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86
Bro superb update hahaha raji superb and care for L is nice
Team enthu is really depicted well
Moreover karthik is attracted by raji

Nice flow of story lines bro hats off to you 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice bro 👏

Raji - Meesai bonding as usual good

Karthi's MV nice

Raji too innocent

Karthi avanai ariyamaleye raji ya note pannite irukkaan

A feel good update bro...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 3...

Great Great Great Update Bro !! 😃

And my prediction was correct to an extent... I thought Raji would go in the cabin and talk as if she isn't hurt by Karthik's words and would speak with innocence... Oru alavukku correct ah? 😛

Ellam okay... Ennaku pudicha vishayam nnu sonnengala? I figured it out..

Mentioning Kaththi right? Hehe... 😉

Anaa adhukku Karthik kudutha reaction... Huh... Fine Fine... But the movie was the first thing that came to mind... 😛

Tell Raji to go watch the movie soon okay? Hehe... 😆

Hmm... The team members seem really friendly... Nice... Karthik and Vishnu vaiyum indha team la friends ah soon serthukonga... 😛

Haha... Cubicles scene was great... Ore paasa mazhai... That too on the first day... 😆

You know... Canteen scene la highlight KV oda food dhaan... Haha... Really lunchbox la kudukura maadhiri eh you selected the dishes... 😆

Vishnu nalla friend-u... Hehe... Karthik ah left and right kalaikuraan... 😛

Really Super Update Bro... 😉

Edited by SushK16 - 10 years ago
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Chapter 4...

Again Really Super Update Bro... 😃

Lakshmi enna maadhiri polaye coffee vishayathula... Hehe... 😆

Ennaku Starbucks romba pudikum... I mean I adore and enjoy the coffees there... Eppo ponaalum two to three cups of coffee vaangi kudichutu dhaan varuven... Amma thittuvaanga... But Appa buys it for me... Hehe... 😉

Raji and Her Dad's phone convo... Ore pasa mazhai again... Appo Appo Karthik mind voice um nalla dhaan irundhuchu... 😆

Achacho Raji so cute and innocent... Super ah pesura with a free mind... 😛

Vishnu... Super Friend... 😆

Karthik sirichaa nalla irukkum... Write like that soon bro... 😛

Last part was really cute... K noticing R without realizing... 😆

A really lighthearted Part Bro... 😉
Edited by SushK16 - 10 years ago
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Super duper update bro... Thanks for update bro...

Lakshmi tell truth ma namba pazhani coffee ya pudikudhu? Namba friends ku evalo akkarai lakshmi mela... Adikadi coffee kudikadha ma... 😆

Raji & Dad's convo was very nice... Messaiku romba paasam ponnu mella and raji kekkava venum ellar kittayum paasatha alli kotturava dhan ana indha scene highlight naduvulla karthik mind voice dhan chance illa...👏 Adhuvum karthik nallavara ? naana? en karthik unnalayae namba mudiyalaya...

Raji yeppa ennama pesurra vaaiya valikadha ma... paavam karthik... karthik life long nee raji mokkaiya nee kettu dhan aganum escape agavae mudiyadhu...😉

Vishnu nee dhan correct ana friend namba karthiku...

Last scene semma... 👏👏

Aduthadhu enna nadakumo? waiting...





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