~~SS: My Darling~~CHAPTER 4-FINAL CHAPTER(PAGE 11)

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Hi Friends...i have come with a another stupid story to torture u,all...i know clearly,it should not be done...but cant resist myself...so,dont mistake me..ok...


this SS revolves around our beautiful pair KR...not any other characters...only our KR...this STORY includes only few parts...so no need of worrying...


CHAPTER -1

It was a evening time...chill winds were blowing...In Laxminagar street,the very first house belonged to him..it had vast,well decorated main gate...she unlocked the gate n went inside the home ..later,she advanced towards his room on tiptoe..


"Excuse me,Sir..",Raji's sweet voice came out in a very childish way,while opening his room's door


but there was no response from the opposite side..she waited for some mins...


But Meeting with no success,Raji herself entered inside the room n locked the door...while turning back,her brownish eyes caught one beautiful sight which made her to smile a little...there he seated like a cute kid leaning over the sofa with his closed eyes...she silently proceeds towards him with her long hands folding at her back...though raji moving quietly,he could hear the slight sound of her's golden anklets clearly.


"Hello,Mr.Karthik Sir,can u hear me?"Raji once again called ,standing near to him..


It seemed that,Raji called his name out of her abundant love on him...Karthik relished this moment very much as he could hear his name coming from his darling's reddish lips...but he didnt respond to her..


Raji cant control herself... but she has to ,as she was the one who had committed a mistake,..biting her lips,she tried to maintain patience...her lips becoming more reddish becoz of her girlish act...decisivly,she touched the karthik's arm with her soft hands slowly...but the very next moment,he gave a hard push in her hand forcefully n glared at her...raji was in a state of shock,for she didnt expect this sudden blast..her body shaked a little by his blow...automatically her brownish eyes filled with silver tears...her eyes were shining like a star...quickly,she rubbed her tears with a shawl to hid that from karthik's vision ...


Finally karthik began to spoke without noticing the Raji's eyes "dont u have any sense?...I dont even wish to see ur face...get out of my sight right now"..his words attacked Raji like a pierceful sword...


swallowing her saliva.Raji replied calmly "i know...its my mistake..i am extremely sorry for that..pls forgive me ,Sir"Raji pleaded him...now she had become normal as its her duty to soothe Karthik..


"sorry??...whether all problems get solved by asking this word "sorry"?...huh?answer me..no one can understands the pain of the affected persons...me too experienced it well,now...so ,there is no use in talking anymore...u can go now..."Karthik roared...


"aama ,ivan periya singamakum...moonchiya paru...gorilla mathiri irukan...aana singam maathiri garjanai panranam...sagikala"Raji thought to herself with a little bit anger...


"i catched ur mindvoice,Raji..."Karthik said in a fraction of a second without even looking at her...


Raji become dumbstruck on hearing that.."how he can read my mind this much fast" Raji asking herself with her mouth wide open...


"close ur mouth otherwise mosquito may go inside "Having said so,Karthik glanced at raji with his mischievous eyes...Raji obeyed his order soonly...



After a pause,Karthik asked Raji..."hmm...so,u nicely pretending before me...am I right? ...his voice become rougher now...


"No sir...absolutely no...even I dono how to act...Sir..."Raji replied softly by twisting her lips...


Karthik spoke in his mind"what an acting,Raji..u dono how to act?...that too before me?...are wah...ur name should be in the list of persons receiving Oscar Award...hmm...but u missed that chance"


having thought so,Karthik slowly lifted his head n admired her...her lovely face with her captivating eyes urging him to exonerate her soon...but when he recollected the memories of past 2 hours,his BP was increasing swiftly...now he gave a death glare at her...Raji perplexed more by his changing countenance...


"Sir...i can underatand ur anger...but pls listen to my explantions for once...that's enough for me"Raji pleaded him again,looking down..


"i dont want to hear ur silly reasons...its a utter waste of time...dont try to pacify me with ur tactics...i wont fall in ur trickery-nest...u can go now,pls"Karthik replied strictly...


"rombathan thirmiru...naan enna solla varenukoda theriyama ivane pesikittu irukan...oruthi evalothan irangi porathu...thappa oothukittachu...manipum kettachu...ithukumela enna venumam intha korangu payaluku"Raji spoke to herself annoyingly...after a second "ada kaduvule...thevaiyilama pesitome...ivan kandu pidichuruvaane",she worried about her stupidity..


"hmm...rombathan thitra pola enna"K asked in a mocking voice...


"No sir...ennathan thittikittu irunthen.,ungala po eppadi.?.."Raji exclaimed..


A wide grin appeared on Karthik's right lip on hearing Raji's words...


After a pause,."Sir, ithuthan last time...hereafter I wont repeat this mistake...i have learnt a good lesson from this...pls pardon me,Sir"Raji begged him...


"No way...u definitely deserve a punishment..no excuse for that...understand?"Karthik said in a rage...


"Pls sir... dont torture me... I cant stand ur anger...its affecting me more..."Raji replied with a fear...


"dont u have ears...better wear ear-trumphet for my sake...my throat had becoming dry because of ur stupidness..just stay away from me...n u will get the severe punishment for sure..no change in it.."Karthik yelled at her...


"All right...i will move now...before that accept this Kiii...."Raji didnt even finished the sentence...


on hearing that half-spelled word , karthik's eyes got widened in surprise... hurridly he stood up from the sofa n shouted at Raji. "What??...Kiss...what the hell u r saying,Raji?...Do u think I would become flat for that...no chance"


"Oops sorry sir...i have pronounced the word wrongly...i was about to say the word,Gift...not Kiss...u have mistaken me,Sir..."Raji said in a cool voice...


"oh man...ethuku ivalavu avasaram...athuvum...arivukettavana iruka...kovama irukela ...appuram ippadiya pesarathu..ithula scene vera...porumaiya ava solradha kettukirualam...ippa paaru ava sirika pora unna paarthu. ."Karthik blamed himself for his idiocy.


At the sametime.."ohoho...rombathan yosikaaran kurunga paya...intha aasailam iruka avanuku"Raji thought to herself with a naughty smile ...


karthik noticed the grin at Raji's face...he ashamed of himself...to change that situation,he began to talk with a rough n tough face...


"Gift?for what?.."Karthik asked Raji with a suspicious face...


"for u only,Sir...this gift named as apology gift"Raji said proudly...


"hmm... I am not going to accept ur gifts...anyway show it to me...lets see "Karthik ordered her...


Raji showed her hands before him...that sight had left him totally flabbergasted...immediately he burst out laughing without even conscious of the situation he was going through...


Raji's face lit up with glee on seeing her Karthik's cute smiling face...Her joy knew no bounds,at that moment


To be contd...


Friends...this is my first try in english...so pls bear with my poor english...

I welcome bashing ,criticising...anything...

waiting for ur feedback,Friends...😊


INDEX

Chapter 1

Chapter 2

Chapter 3

Chapter 4(final part)



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks for the another story from you Shiny
I will read and comment back soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Shiny what a surprise thanks for this.

HahHha very nice to read. Karthi and raji arguing and him catching her mind voices was very nice. Why is she calling him sir? And what did she do? Karthiku romba thaan aasa polaa thinking raji was going to say kiss hahahaha 🤣 its perfectly fine congrats on trying ur SS i english enjoyed it... now waiting for next part. Thanks shiny. 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Kalakureenga bro.👏

Again our sweet couple Karthi - raji 😳

Bayangara suspense ah irukke, ore kulappama irukku

ivangaluku naduvula yenna relationship irukku, yenna gift 😕

waiting 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sweet SS bro and that with only our KR. But ore confusea iru. Why Raji calling Karthik sir and what mistake did she do? Any how next updatele terium . Mindvoice supera iruku pa.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wat a surprise!!! Shiny anna.gud start :D super aa iruku ana konjam suspense aavum iruku.waiting 4 nxt part...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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What a surprise...sweet story :) pls update sooon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow super darling (shiny bro) 🥳👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
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superb start bro. good one
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Shiny, one more story... 👏 .. Wow...

Very nice... Senma suspense. K yaaru, Raji kum K vukkum enna relationship...

KR nalla introduction...

Waiting for the next update...

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