SS:Azhagana Tharunangal :CHAPTER 11(B) UPDATED IN PG 80 - Page 9

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Posted: 10 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: shiningstar77



Hello sis...storya read panniteengala...am vry happy.😃..

unmaiya sollanumna,neengathan ennoda inspiratione😛...enakulam story eluthura idea suthama illai...unga storyalathan iniku etho eluthara alauku vanthuruken...😳..

bhakiyam ramasamy...ya..ya...i know him...my fav too...his story appusamy ,seethapaati would be very funny.😛..oh...naan avara mathiri elutharena...unmaiyava...but avara mathirilam no chance...anyway thanks a lot for ur appreciation.😳..

that line...yes...karthik eppavum ippadithan,engayavathu kilambumpothu intha linea sollituthan kilambuvan...vishnuvum athula kootani...

oh...u have guessed it??...athana neengalam yaaru...😆



aahha! Kala, vandhuteenala ?
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Posted: 10 years ago
#83
Superb Shiny...
Really Loved the way you have interpreted my favourite Perumal...

and Vishnu paadhi thookkathula sonna Ganapathi bappa moriyaa...😆😆... semma...
adhaan indha epi oda highlight...😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweety16

Superb Shiny...

Really Loved the way you have interpreted my favourite Perumal...

and Vishnu paadhi thookkathula sonna Ganapathi bappa moriyaa...😆😆... semma...
adhaan indha epi oda highlight...😉



Thanks sweety...ippathan sonnen,athukula comment panniteenga...😆

oh..ungalaukum avarthan fav aa??pinna yaarukuthan avara pidikathu...aama sweety avarum intha storyla oru char...😳

aama,athu enaku mothala thonava illai...suddena intha line mindla strike aagi,ippa athuthan ellorukum pidichuruku.😛...thanks once again sweety...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#85

CHAPTER - 3

Amaithiyana veedu...athai sutrilum marangal...chillendru kaatru...iyarkai azhagugal ellam antha veetai sutri irunthana...verandhavil 50 vayathuthakka manithar utkarnthu paper vaasithu konduirunthar...

"bakiyam...adiye bakiyam...seekarama kappithani kondu vaadi...ivalavu nerama kondu vara"....manushan aluthukittar...

"inthaganpa...coffee kudinga"...antha kuralai kedathukum antha manusan mugathil oru santhosam...pinna magal kuralai kettal entha appavukuthan mazhichyaga irukathu...


ivathan intha storyoda heroine...saanthamana mugham,palichudum kangal...ethilum porumai...ithuthan namma raji,,

"ennada ithu,nee kondu vanthu kodukara...unaku kaalam vazhika poguthu,amma enga ponada?"...r's dad

"appa,appa...amma ulla velaiya irukanga...appuram naan ungaluku coffeelam kondu varalam ...ithula enaku kaal vazhika pogutha??...pongapa innum ennai chinna papava treat pannikittu."...raji than appavai parthu ketal...

"ada,ennda kannu ,unaku 40 vayasu aanalum nee enaku kuzhanthaithan...therinchuko...seriya??."...meesai

"amamma...nee eppavume engaluku kuzhanthaithan.onne onnu kanne kannunu iruka engaluku" ...ithu raji ammavin kural...

rajiyin santhosathuku alaveillai ..aval kankalangi vittal...

"love u amma ,appa".....raji avargal iruvarayum hug pannikitte sonnal...

raji parentsum..."love u da chellam "


"serida,laxmi enga aalaye kaanom...eppavume neenga rendu perum sernthuthana poveenga"...meesai questions R

"aamampa...iniku lateathan poganum...etho officea cleanpanraangalam...athan ava konjam latea varennu sonnapa."..

"appana seri,nee poi rest edu" R's dad

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now 8.45am...


"amma,...seekarama...luncha seekarama konduvaama"....laxmi ammavittum kenchikittu irunthal..

"itho vanthutenma...intha...unaku pidicha vendaikai poriyal vechuruken...ithu rajiku...avaluku pidicha carrot poriyal..ava virumbi saapiduvala " ....sollikitte L's mom rendu boxa laxmiyidam neetinal...

"thanksma...u r sweet mom...naan rajiku pidichatha senchukodunu sonna udana,kondu vanthuteeye" saying this L kissed her...

"chellam,inga paaru,parthu roada cross pannu...methuva po...puriyutha...rajitayum sollu itha"...L's mom advice pannal.

"Aamada,parthu pathirama po...office velaiyalam confidenta,virumbi sei...undertand?"...ithu L's father...

"kandipa unga solpadi nadanthukaren amma,appa...rajikum sollidaren...appa naan kilambarenma...bye."..solliikitte L scootya start pannal...

"bye ma"ithu L's parents in chorus

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rajiyum,laximiyum 7th stdla irunthu thick friends...intha friendship collg,ippa office varaikum thodaruthu...ivanga mattum illai...ivanga momsum chinna vayasula irunthu friends...RL r MBA graduates...marketing-related fieldla oru perfectaaana postla irukaanga rendu perum ore companyla...


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time 9.00 am

laxmi reached raji's house

"hello appa...eppadi irukeenga"...laxmi asks meesai...

"ada,laxmi...vanthuteeya...enna etho neraya naal parkatha mathiri nalamlam visareekara...dailythana enna parukra."..meesai siruchukitte ketar...

"aamampa...aanalam ketakanumla...athu en kadimayum koda"....L says proudly...

"samathu ponnu...naan nalla irukenma ...po...ulla poi un frienda paaru".....meesai

"okpa"...saying this laxmi went inside the home...

"laxmi...eppa vantha??...naan kavanikave illai...sorrydi"....raji

"hmm...nee unn drawingla busya irunthurupa...correcthana naan solradhu"...L questions R...

"hihi...aamadi...sorry...seri va roomku polam"...raji laxmiya koopital...

"irudi,naan ammava parkalai...parthutu vanthudren...neepoi readyaagudi"....laxmi

"seri...seri...parthutu va"....raji moves from there

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"amma...eppadi irukeenga...nalama?"...laxmi raji momta ketal...

"ada laxmi...vanthuteeya...unnathan thedikittu irunthen...ithopaaru unaku pidicha kesari panniruken...intha saapidu"r's mom anboda sonnal...

"enna,kesariya...thank u ma...kodunga naan oru pidi pidichuren"....laxmi replies happily...

"wow...super tastema...chanceaillai.....i like it very much"...laxmi...

"unaku pidikumennu raji panna sonna...innum konjam dabbala pottu tharen...mathayanam saapidu...sariya??"r's mom kusiya sonnal...

"kandipama...naan saapidaren...appuram unga freindum rajiku pidicha disha koduthurukaanga."...laxmi shows the box to r's mom..

"kalakarale aval"...seri diwali purchalem eppa panradhunu ketaya avalta?."....R's mom questions L.

"ada,maranthe poiten paarunga...neenga eppa sonnalum okvam ammavuku...appuram enna sweet seiyarathunu ungalta pesanumam...phone panna sonanga kalailaye."...laxmi says..

"appadiya...appa nalaike kilambidalam...appuram naan phone panni pesaren avaluku ok?"...R's mom...

"serima,appa naan rajiya poi parkaren...after getting permission from R's mom L enters raji room...n their chatting goes on


"raji...onnu ketakanumnu irunthen...namma renu kutti engadi...aalaye kanom??"L question R

"aamala...kanla thenpadave illai...iru aamava ketpom"...saying this R ask mom about renu...

"antha kuutha en ketakara...nethu neenga nightla velila poiteengalam. Avalta sollama...antha kovamthan... neenga poi ava roomla paarunga...angathan iruka ava"...R's mom


RL went to renu's room...

anga partha,kathavalam thiranthu,bed,pillowlam naala pakamum kidanthu,choppu samanlam sithari poi,roome alangolama irunththu...aanal renu berrow adiyil ummnu paduthu kidanthal...aval vera yaarumillai(RLoda chella puppy)

"renu chellam,ennada ithu ippadi paduthuruka...engaluku evalavu varuthama iruku theriyuma"...R says sadly..

"aamamnda thangam...naanga unta sollama ponnathu thapputhan...athuku ippadiye moonchiya thookikittu vechurupa engalta vaada kutty"....ithu L..

renu avargalaye parthu kondu irunthal...


"innum saapidave illaiyame nee...nee maatum complan kudichena...unaku neraya choopu samanlam laxmika vaangi tharuva...unake theriyumla avathan supera select pannuvanu."...R ask renu with affection...L too smiles at raji's words

renu methuva velila vanthu RL naduvil utkarnthu kondal...aval iru kaikalai avargal kaimeethu vechu lighta sound koduthal...ithu ava samathanam aaitanu solra vidham...

RLuku romba happy...

"ithuthan namma renu...samathu kutty...so cute puppy"....laxmi avalai konchikondu irunthal...

"renu,vanthu complan kudiva...samathula"....Raji

renu samatha vanthu complanai kudichal...appuram RLa parthu than vaalai aati kondu irunthal...appuram nandraga vilaiyadinal...

RL siripin satham antha araiyai nirapiyathu...

RLum officeku jollya kilambichachu


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next day...


"ennaga readya...naangalam readyaayachu...innuma neenga readyaagala?...seekaram"... R's mom meesaiyai virati kondu irunthal

"itho vanthuten...seri kilambalama"...meesai

"renu,inga paaruda thangam...naanga velila poi dress eduka porom...unakumthan...seriya?...nee samatha irukanumam...akka seekaram vanthuruvenam...ok? R ask renu...

"uuunn...uunn."....renu athagu thalaiyaatuvathu pola sound kuduthal...raji avalai thatttikoduthu kilambital...

"appa,laxmiyum,avanga parentsum pilayar kovilla join pannikarangalam...naama ippa kilambalampa"...R says to meesai...

"appadiya...appa seri...naama kilambalam vaanga."...saying this he starts the car...

laxmi parentsoda sernthu kadaiku vanthachu...

RL,avanga moms nera saree sectionku poyachu...


RL Dads renduperum chairla utkarnthukittu

"aama,unga kadaia vera aala parthuka sollirukengala?" L's dad questions meesai

"aamanga...ivanga eppa purchasea mudipaanganu theriyathu...athan vera oruthana parthuka solliruken...

"iniku mattum illai..diwali muthina naal varaikum ivanga purchase mudiyathu...enna naan solradhu?meesai questions L's dad with smiling face

"correcta sonnenga ...athan naan iniku officeku leave pottuten...leave innum poda vendivarumla...athayum MD taa solliten...avarum ok sollitar"...Ls dad siruchukitte sonnar...

"aama namma velai ninuponna koda paravaillai,ivargala thirupthi paduthinala namaku periya nimathithan,enna naan solradhu... meesai

"haha...romba seri,ivanga santhosama irunthangana,namma santhosama iruka mudiyum"L's dad


In saree section...

all four r busy in choosing the saree for them...

"raji...neethan enaku saree edukara...solliten"...L

"ethukudi,naan unaku pidikathatha eduka poren...venamdi"....Raji pleads...

"othai venuma unaku...nee enna select panalum enaku double ok."..L thittavattma sonnal...

"seri...seri...select panren...appa nee than enaku select pannanum...intha deal okva?."...Raji

"triple ok.di"....Laxmi


RL oruvaliya sareeslam parthu,sareeya select panniyachu...rajiku laxmi eduthathu rose colour,laxmiku raji eduthathu violet colour...rendu perukum saree romba pidichu pochu

avanga momsum sareeya select panniyachu


"ennanga,vaanga unga rendu perukum edukalam,naangalam select panniyachu."...R's mom said to meesai n l's dad

oruvaliya,selectionlam mudinchatha,seri vaanga pogalam"Meesai


Gents section...

eppavum appakaluku rendu daughtersthan select pannunvanga...ippayum athethan...


"appa,neenga intha vaati pant n shirt potakanum,okva?R

"ada,enaku athalam othu varathuma,veshti sattaiye pothum enaku"meesai pleads

"mudiyathu,neenga itha than potakanum"raji pidivathamaga sonnal

"ennanga ithu maghal select panradhe pottukarathe oru alathiyana santhosam,serinu atha eduthkonga"L's dad

"hmm...pottukaren,ippa santhosama chellam",meesai asks raji...

"my sweet appa"raji says happily


"appa,ungaluku intha colourthan supera irukum,okva?"L

"nee etha select pannalum ok,pothuma?"L's dad...

"that's my dad"L


"avangala parthayadi,naama rendu peru inga irukomnu konjamavathu kavanikarangala,"....L'mom,...

"aamamdi,avanga magal solradhathan eduthukaranga...appa naama ethuku...aanalum appa-ponna ippadi parkarathu romba santhosama irukudi"R's mom

"correcta sonna,enakum happythan...avanga santhosamthana namma santhosam."..L's mom says proudly...

R's mom agrees it with a nod


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KV home

"dei,enaku konjam boost koduda,tireda iruku...sema velai officela iniku"V

"intha,nee kepenu therinjuthan naan boosta vanthaudana pottu vachuten"K replies V

"thanksda...appuram eppa naama diwali dresslam edukarathu."..V

"inikuthanda...seekarama poi readyaagu"K orders V

"appadiya,sarida...aama eppavume naama bombayla poithana diwali kondaduvom,intha vattai mattum ennda ingaye irukalamnu sollite?" V questions K with a doubt

"aamamda,intha vaati venkioda irukanumnu aasaiya irukuda,athan...ammakukoda konjam varuthamthan...but avangala samathanam panniten oruvaliya...ammavalayum inga vara mudiyatham appavala...neraya work irukam"..K varuthamaga sonnan...

"serida,athanala enna,naan un koda irukenla,jamaichuduvom diwaliya...ok? "V cheer up K

"okda,aama unga amma inga varalayada?"K

"atha en ketkara,intha appavala vantha venai...avar engayo ooruku poganumam,ammavum avarodathan irukanumam

romba conditionlam podraru...pilaiya parka konjam varakudatho...appadi enna velai avarku?"V nonthukittan

"serida...freeyavidu...avangaluku velai irukuna naam enna seiya mudiyum...seri ready aagu,purchase panna polam"K

"okda,itho 5 minstla ready aaidren"V seekaramaga roomku ponnan...


THODARUM



KV Diwali purchase in next chappy












Edited by shiningstar77 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86
Firstly thanks for the early update😃
Awesome Shiny loved Raji's and Lakshmi's intro and their parents bonding with the children and each others relationship. Soo cute to see. The diwali purchase loved how the dads accept what the daughters say. The dog scene was sooo cute lakshmi and rajis dog aww soo nice to see their bond and friendship. loved it
Karthi Vishnu going shopping too? is there any other reason for karthi staying here and not going to Bombay???

Thanks shiny

Now waiting for the next but take your time thank you for this one...😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#87
thnks for the quick updates shiny bro 😊

First of all sry for not commenting for previous one as i got some work now i read the 2 chapters continuously it's a mind blowing one 👏👏

R's mom & dad r lovable ones 😊 R's dad love for his daughter was clearly stated in this one line " yen ma neen coffee kondu vara kaal valika pogudhu "

RL bond of friendship was very nice ❤️ R' mom lakshmi kaaga kesari seiyaradhum , L's mom R kaaga carrot poriyal seiyaradhum ore paasa mazhai dhaan ponga 😆

yennada ivvalavu affectionateah irukkuraangalenu paartha R & L' s mom are also friendsah 😛 adhaane paarthen 😃

at dress shop pavom gents romba pulambalsah irundhuchu adhulayum R's dad oda dialogue thaan highlight "iniku mattum illai..diwali muthina naal varaikum ivanga purchase mudiyathu...enna naan solradhu? as he said in mocking tone 🤣

On RL's purchasing session appadiye yennaku pul arichuruchupa 😳😳

RL friendshipah paartha romba sandhoshama irundhuchu oruthar innoruthar mela vechirukka affection was very lovely ☺️

paara namma KV yeppa paarthalum Boosteh kudikiraanga ohh appo " boost is the secret of their energyah " irukkatum irukattum 😆😆

ohh they r also going for purchase ah upto my guess KV meets RL accidentally on the shop 😉 nu nenaikiren paarpom yenna aagudhunu

by the way as usual same question dhaan pa when is ur next update ❓
Edited by sizzling78 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: devilz94

Firstly thanks for the early update😃
Awesome Shiny loved Raji's and Lakshmi's intro and their parents bonding with the children and each others relationship. Soo cute to see. The diwali purchase loved how the dads accept what the daughters say. The dog scene was sooo cute lakshmi and rajis dog aww soo nice to see their bond and friendship. loved it
Karthi Vishnu going shopping too? is there any other reason for karthi staying here and not going to Bombay???

Thanks shiny

Now waiting for the next but take your time thank you for this one...😳


Thanks u so much,sis for ur comments😳...

ya,i thought of updating on sat only...but that day there came some important work...that's why only...n its my pleasure too for updating quickly...

ya,appa magal pasatha inga sollanumnu aasaipatten...athan vilaivuthan ithu...

ya,that dog scene...u liked it?...that's what i needed...i love dogs too😉

KV shoppingku poranga...but RLa parpangalanu theriyala😆...athan sonnene,karthiku venkioda irukanumam intha diwaliku...athan😳

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Shiny, super update...

Very natural... Nicely narrated... RL intro nalla irundhadhu..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Super Shiny.. Oru chennai pondy bazaar pona effect...
Nice...

Bonding between the families is excellent :)


Pls give us quick updates :)

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