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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Ramya05

Super ma... Kv bonding is really nice and great... Kr... Semma...


Thanks Ramya sis...

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Vasubadri

Nalla update. Really a long one. Karthikoda udhavugira manapanmai therigirathu. I would expect a same,lengthy update on KR also, at least once. Shall I ? I know you can.


Thanks Vasu mam.😳..

kandipa...i will give a long update full n full with KR alone...but wait for sometime,mam
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: abinayaabi

Thanks for the update bro 😊

sorry bro latea comment pannauradhuku

fantastic update bro vazhakkam pola kalkittinga bro 👏

karthik enna soluradhu nu theriyala enna oru nalla manasu idhu idhu idhudhan karthik 😳

enga thappu nadanthalum adha thatti kekkuradhu yaru ku enna help venalum pannuradhu idhudhan karthik

KV friendship👏 vishnu eppavum karthik kudavae irukkan

KR scene lovely rendu perukullaiyum enna oru azhagana feelings ennaku romba romba pudichu irunthuchu

waiting for ur next update


Thanks Abhi...😳

its ok ma...now commentedla...no worries...

will update soon


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Posted: 10 years ago
Finally padichuten! 😃 Installments over 😆


Super update Shiny... 👏 KV friendship is sooo cutteee!! 😛


U portrayed K as a really fantastic person... 😳 Great!


KR scene was adorable... 😛 Very cute... 😉


Keep updating... Two weeks?!?
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SushK16

Finally padichuten! 😃 Installments over 😆


Super update Shiny... 👏 KV friendship is sooo cutteee!! 😛


U portrayed K as a really fantastic person... 😳 Great!


KR scene was adorable... 😛 Very cute... 😉


Keep updating... Two weeks?!?


Thanks Sush😃...

konjam worknala two weeks kalichunu sonnen... time iruntha .parkalam
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Posted: 10 years ago

Nice updates Shiny..

KV bonding is so sweet. V is so childish.

And K treating him with fatherly affection.

good going👍🏼

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sathyakrs

Nice updates Shiny..

KV bonding is so sweet. V is so childish.

And K treating him with fatherly affection.

good going👍🏼


Thanks Sathya sis. for the comments...


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Posted: 10 years ago

update adutha week than...konjam worknala...sorry 😭
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Originally posted by: shiningstar77


update adutha week than...konjam worknala...sorry 😭


no problem shiny😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

CHAPTER 6(A)

Frienda,oruvazhiya update panniten chappya...eppadi irukunu sollunga...😊


Maalai velai...sooriyan marayum neram...kaatru chill endru veesi kondu irunthathu...raji veethiyil scootyil sendru kondu irunthal officela irunthu...


"ada paavame...enna iniku ippadi pasiguthu enaku,nallathana saapitom mathyanam...appuram en ippadi??...oruvela neraya work paarthathala irukumo?...irukalam...seri hotelku poi nalla saapittu vidalam...illati thalavazhi vanthudum...."R sollikonde than scootyai oramaga niruthi vittu krishnaa hotelku nadanthu sendral...


hotelkul enter aayachu...aanal ange sema kuttam...ella tablesum nirambi vazhinthathu...idam irukaa,illaiyanu theda vendi irunthathu...avalavu per saapittu kondu irunthanar...rajiku sema shock...aana aval than kan paaravaiyai ella idathilum seluthinal...ella idamum full...aanal.,kadaiseela oru tablea oru seat kaaliyaga irunthathu...rajiyin kangal virinthana...aanal adutha nodi,sogam avalai suznthu vittathu...en endral atharku ethiril oru nabar saapitu kondu irunthar...avar mugam theeriyavillai...avar bin paguthi than therinthathu...


"enna ithu...yaaro oruvar angu irukaare...anga poi utkara vera kuchama iruke...enna panradhu...cha...ippa paarthu pasi vayitha killuthe...kadavule..."R polambinal...

"seri...inga venam...namma vera hotelku poi saapidalam..."R solikonde ange irunthu nadaka aarambithal...


aanal theedernu avalai etho oru sakthi thaduthathu..."ada narayana...ennala ithukumela nadaka mudiyaathu polaye...pasi uyira vaanguthu...eppadi naan scootya ootikittu porathu"R nonthu kondal...

oru mudivaga..."seri...anga poi utkaarnthu saapiduvom...vera vazhi illai..."R sollikonde antha kaali idam nooki nadanthal...aanal aval sendrathu kaali idathai nookiya?... illai avalin avanai nookiya??...

raji angu poi utkaarnthu kondal...kangalai nimirthiya pothu...aachariyam...avalal pesa mudiyavillai...kangal antha velaiyai seithana...ange aval KARTHIK utkarnthu iruthan...avan rajiyai paarthathum kushi thangalai...azhagaga sirithan avanin avalai paarthu...


"nallavela...manam maari inga vanthu utkaarnthutom...illati karthika paarkura innoru chance kidaichurukuma?"R than kanavalaigalil mithanthal...

"Hi Raji...eppadi irukeenga...?"K asks

"haan..nalla iruken karthik...athu seri...neenga enga intha pakkam?"R karthikidam ketal...

"inga enna naan dance aadava vanthuruken... vera ethuku ...saapidathan..."K kurumbaga sonnan

"ada...rombathan...comedyakum??..."R moraithu kondu ketal...

"haha...athalam illainga...summa oru funku than..."K

"appuram vera enna vishayam"K

"oru vishayamum illainga...theedernu pasi vanthuruchu...athan inga saapida vanthen.."R

"appadiya??..en??...mathyanam saapidalaiya??..."K

"illainga...nalla saapitachu...aanalum ennanu theriyala...pachichu tholaithu..."R varuthamudan sonnal..

"appdiya??...naan onnu keta kochuka maateengale.."K sirithukonde ketan...

"enna?"R

"illa ungalala pasi poruka mudiyaatho?"K asks with a smile..

"athalam illaiye..."R sirthu kovathudan sonnal..

"naanga nambitom"K

"illai karthik..unmaiyathan..."R kovathudan lesaga kathinal

"seri...seri..kochukaatheenga...summathan keten..."K

"paravaillai...naan thappa eduthakalai"R..


k smiles...raji coffee order pannal...


"ennathu ithu...chappathi,vadai...nalla full kattu katrenga pola.?...aana enna kindal panreenga..."R kovamudan sonnal karthik saapdrathai paarthu..

"athu illainga...mathyanam saapidalai...athan..."K konjam illuthan...

"enna?...saapidalaya?...en?..ethuku?...enna problem?"Raji pathari poi ketal...

"irunga irunga..ethuku ivalavu tension...onnum illai...kalaila saapada kativechen ...aana kondu vara maranthuten. pola..officela baga thiranthu paarthathukappuram than nyabagam vanthuchu"K

"en..ippadi panreenga??...konjam carefulathan iruka kudatha...saapadu vishayathula ippadiya irukaarathu...seri...canteenla saapida vendiyathuthane?"R kavalaiudan ketal...

"illainga...cantenla ella saapadum kaali aairuchu naan varum samayam...work mudichu vanthathula konjam late aairuchu..."K

"seri...canteenlathan saapadu illai..vezhila poi saapida vendiyathuthana?"R kelvi ketal karthikidam...

"correctthan...aana appuram saapitukalamnu work panna poiten avasarama...enna konjam heavy work irunthathu..."K kavalaiudan sonnan...

"enna ithu...ippadi solreenga...enaku suthama pidikalai ithalam...solliten..."R kovathudan sonnal...

"seriga kochukaatheenga...inime ippadi pannamaaten...seriya?"K anbodu ketan...

"inimel illai...eppavum ithu maathiri panna kudathu...athuseri...ithu eppavum nadakutha...illai ithuthan mothal thadavaiya?"R athigarathudan ketal...

"illainga..ithu rendavathu vaatiya nadakuthu..."K konjam thayakathodu sonnan...

"enna?...second timea?...irukatum...vayaraa nirapama appdi enna velai kidaku...innoru vaati ippadi nadantha enaku keta kovam vanthudum...solliten.."R kangalil kovam anal paranthathu


karthiku santhosama thangalai...

"seri...appadi enna velai panrenga...enna postla irukeenga?"R

"Internal Auditora iruken,Raji"K

"enna,Internal Auditora?...supernga...auditornale konjam strain pannanumla moolaiye use panni?"R

"aama...correctthan...iniku athan over work aairchu..."K

"hmmm...seri...seri...athukunu saapada cut panna kudathu...ithu keta pazhakam..."R

"aama...apuram,.neenga sonnathuku enna meaningnu naan therinchukalama?"K kurumbudan ketan...

"enna?" R

"illai...ivalavu kovathodu,kandipodu enna warn panreengale...atha keten..."K than kangalal azhaga sirithu konde ketan...

"athu vanthu...athu vanthu...ellam oru akaraiyilathan..."R sollu both thadumaarinal...


K sirithu vittan aval sonnathai kettu...pinna,avanin aval sollum poi koda avanuku inithathu...

"appadiya??...unmaiyaveva?"K kangalai uyarthi ketan...

"aama...unamiayvethan...ithalam enaku suthama pidikaathu...inime itha neenga maathikanum...purinchutha?"R konjam kandipudan sonnal...

"kandipa raji..unga pechai meeruvena...inime correcta timeku saapitruven...ippa santhosama?"K azhagaga ketan

"ithuthan enaku venum...ippa am very happy..."R ..raji mugathil thaan vetri petrathu pol oru siripu...


raji coffeeyai rusithu kondu irunthal...karthikum vadaiyai saapitu kondu irunthan..theedernu..

"ennanga ithu...?"K lesaga kathinan...

"enna...enna aachunga"R pathari poi ketal...

"illai..ennta avalavu kovam patteenga...ippa neenga athe thappa seiyareenga..?"K konjam athatalave ketan..

"naana...enna panninen..naan maatum thane coffee kudichukittu iruken..."R pavampol sonnal

"hmm...athulathan probleme...agora pasini sollitu coffeeya kudichu kittu irukeenga...athu eppadi unga pasiyai pokum?haan?"K

"illainga...athu vanthu..."R

"shuu...pesa kudathu...innum neraya order panni saapidunga...solid foodsa..understand..?"K

"enna ipadi miratreenga...methuvathan solradhu..."R pavampol ketal...

"athu eppadi...enakum unga mela akarai irukumla..."K finally spoke that word...

"appadiya?"R

"aama...ungaluku en mela akarai irukuna...enakum irukumla...appathana correcta irukum..."K said proudly...


rajiku santhosam thaangalai athai kettu...

"haha...seri...naan tiffin order pani saapidren...okva..?"R santhosamaga ketal..

"athuthan raji...saapidunga...pasikuthuna saapida venama..."K


rajiyum karthikum vayaraara saapitanar..sila nimisham kalichu...

"karthik..ungala onnu ketkanum...neenga saapadu katti vechen soneengale...appadina..neenga thaniya irukeengala?"R

"aama Raji...naanum ,en friendum thaniyathan irukom...amma,appa bombayla irukaanga."K.

"en neenga bombayku polai?"R

"hmm...venki pakathulaye irukalamnu than..."K

"what?...neenga enna solreenga...enaku puriyala"R

"Tirupathi venki pakkathulaye irukalamnuthan avar kovil pakkathulaye thangirukom..."K amaithiyaga sonnan..

"wow...karthik..unmaiyaveva?...super...super...romba perumaiya iruku ungala paarkum pothu"R kushiyaga sonnal..

"thanks...aama,ungaluku en perumaiya iruku enna paartha?haan?...naan therinchukalama?"K kurumbaga ketan...

"haan...athu vanthu...ennanga neenga ethukeduthalum cross question kettukittu...ponga...naan inime ungalta onnu ketka maaten.."R kovapaduvathu pol nadithal

"seri..seri...inime aapadi ketka maaten...athukunu kelvi ketakama irukaatheenga...u continue..."K

"hmmm...unga familya pathi sollungalen"R

"enga family small familythan...appa,amma ,appuram naan...avlothan.."K

"so sweet...appa neenga veetuku chellai pillainu sollunga?"R

"aama..kutty pillai..pattu pillai,pavazha pillai...ellame naan than en parentsku..."K


raji sirithu vital avan sonnathai kettu...

"seri,enna pathi ivalavu visarikareengale,ungala pathi konjam solrathu"K

"en veeetula motham naalu peru...appa,amma,naan,appuram engaloda renu kutty"R

"so cute...aama antha renu kutty yaaru,unga sistera?"K(avanukuthan theriyume renuva pathi...but rajitta ketkanumnu aasai)

"aama..ennoda kutti thangachi...en chella puppy kutty ...ava.romba samathu...samatha Vilaiyaaduva,samatha saapiduva,samatha kuzhipa...aana romba settai pannuva...aaana antha settaiyum romba azhaga pannuva..."R sollikonde ponnal...


karthk aval pesarathai rasithu kondu irunthan...avalai paarkum pothu oru chinna kuzhanthai pesuvathu pol irunthathu...

"ennaga...naan ivalavu pesaren...neenga onnum solla maatengreenga.."R karthikai paarthu ketal...

"haan...appadilam illaiye...."K

"pinna ethavathu sollunga..."R

"oru vaarathaila sollanuma...beautiful family ungalodathu...loved it..."K

"enna...loved it a?appadina?"R...ithu rajiyin turn karthikai nondrathuku...

"illai...appadi sollalai...ivalavu amsama familya enaku pidichurunu sonnen...athavathu oru puppukuttya ivalavu anba paarthukara familya enaku pidichurukunu sonnen...hehe.."K oru vazhiyaga solli mudithan...

aanal rajiku theriyatha avan thadumaatram...avaluku pidithirunthathu...

"Thanks...en familya pathi perumaiya sonnathuku..."R

"athalam ethukunga...en manasula patatha sonnen...avalothan.seri neenga enna panreenga?."K

"Naan Financiera iruken...."R

"hmm...supernga...ithu periya velaiithan...."K

"aama.konjam appadithan..."R

theedernu wathchai paartha..raji,"seri,kilambalama...pesinathula time ponnathe theriyala..."

"oh...kandipa kilambalam...appuram ippadi ethitpaarama meet pannalam...enna okthananga?"K siripudan ketan...

"neenga irukeenga paarunga..."R sirithal sollikonde...

"aamanga naama thirumba meet pannuvomnu thoonuthu...athan ivalavu confidencea sonnen"K

"naanum antha naalkaga kaathukittu iruken..."R

"enna...enna sonnenga...en kaathula seriya vizhalai...."K

"haan...illa...athirstam irunthal paarkalamnu sonnen..."R samalithal...


Karthik aval sonnathai kettu sirithu vittan...Raji muraithal...appuram rendu perum sirithu kondanar oruvarai oruvar paarthu...

"seri,ethula poveenga...scootylaya.?buslaya?.."K

"scootylathan poven...ippathan enaku fresha irukunga...thalai vazhiyum suthama illai...ellam ungalalathan..neenga than enna nalla saapida vecheenga..."R perumaiyaga sonnal...

"ada...ennanga neenga...ippadi pesareenga...unga thalaivazhiya pokkurathu en kadamai allava"K kurumbudan ketan..

Raji siridhu vetkapattal avan pesinathai ketathum...

"seri...kilambalama?"K

"oh...kIlambalam...vaanga"R


KR iruvarum kilambi vittargal...oruvarku oruvar thangalai pathi therinthu kondanar...avargalin aananthathuku alave illai...intha santharpam innoru murai amayuma endru avarkaluke theriyaathu...aanal intha tharunam eppozhuthum amaiyum allava avargal vazhkai muzhuvathum...


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Saturday evening...


In Bala Old Age Home...


Laxmi vegama vanthu kondu irunthal ulle...anga iruntha supervisor mam aval varuvathai paarthal...


"laxmi,ennama ithu...ethuku ivalavu avasaram??...methuvathan vaayen..."Mam...

"illa mam...latea aairuchu...athan...seekrama vanthen...prayer aarambichuteengala?"L

"illaima,athukuthan innum time iruke...vaa ulla pollam...athuum methuva...seriya"Mam sirichukitte kettanga...

"ippathan nimathiya iruku...ok mam,methuvave polam...vaanga"L


laxmi n supervisor mam prayer hallku sendrargal...ange ella muthiyavargalum utkaarnthu irunthargal...laxmiyum avargal pakkathil poi utkaarnthu kondal...supervisor mam munnadi poi utkarnthal...perumal silaiku poojai aarambika pogirathu..


sila nimisathil poojai aarambithathu...ellorum manathara perumalai vanaginargal...theepaarathanai kaatinar perumalaku...ellorum kaikoopi vanginar...laxmiyum kankalai moodi vanagi kondal...kanai thiranthathum aval munnadi...athavathu sirithu thalli. Oruvarin thalai thenpattathu...athai engayo paartha maathiri irunthathu laxmiku...seriyaga ninaivu varavaillai...2 nimidam kalithu ellorum angu irunthu kilambave...laxmiyum kilamba thayaranaal...eluthathuthan thamatham antha thalaiyin sonathakaararai kanavillai...kan imaikum nerathil sendru vittar poolum...laxmiku emmatram...aanal athai sattai seiyamal prayer hallai vittu veliye vanthal...supervisor mamidam etho pesikondu irunthal...


sirithu nerathil muthiyavargal irupidam vanthal...vanthu paarthavaluku athirchi...koda aananthamum kalanthu vanthathu...aval kangal athai unarthiyathu...aval kanda kaatchi enna vendral...periyavargal ellorum oruvarai sutri utkaarnthu irunthargal...antha manithar vera yarum illai ...Vishnuve than...avanai sutri iruntha anaivarin mugathilum siripu...siripu...siripu mattum than nirainthu irunthathu...


"enna ithu...ellorum ivana suthi irukaargal...athuvum romba santhosamai...romba periya aalthan pola"L than manathil ninaithu kondal...

vishnu pesa aarambichan...

"inga paarunga amma,appas...enna venumnalum enta thayangama kelunga,seriya...onnum kavalaipadatheenga...,inga ulla ellorkum kadavul thunai irupaar...avara vida periya sontham namaku yaarum kidaiyaathu...neenga ...unga veedu,pillaigal,ethapathiyum ninaikaahteenga...seriya...fereya,jollua irunga...enna okva?"V

"kandipada kanna"ellorum chorus pottanar...


vishnuku santhosam thangalai...laxmiku aachariyam thangalai...aval kangalai simita mudiyavilai avalal...aval paarvai vishnu meethe pathinthu irunthathu...aval suya ninavuku varuvathaku sirithu neram pidithathu...appuram aval anga irunthu sendru vittal...veliye supervisor mam oruvaridam pesi kondu irunthal...laxmi, mam arugil sendral...

"enna laxmi,ethavathu pesanuma?"Mam

"amma mam..."L

mam thanodu pesi kondu irunthavari anupi vittu laxmiyidam thrumbinal...

"enna laxmi...enna pesanum...solluma"Mam...

"illai mam...ulla ellor kodayum oruvar irukaare...avar yaaru...regulara inga varuvaara?"L

"ada .naan unta solla maranthutenma...avar peru Vishu patel...intha homeku avar neraya help pannikittu irukaar...avar mattum illai,avaroda sernthu avar friendum varuvaar inga...very good boysma...chinna paasagathan...aana manaso romba perusu...intha kalathula yaaruku ippadilam manasu varum sollu,neeyum rajiyum maathiri ivanga rendu peru...avan friendku etho tight workam...athan ivar mattum vanthurukaar...appuram eppavum eveningthan varuvaanga rendu perum"Mam solli mudithal...

"wow...mam...appadiya...romba happya iruku ketkum pothu...inga ullavangaluku help panna innum rendu peru vanthurukaanganu ninaikum pothu thirupthiya iruku..."L

"aama laxmi...enakum santhosama iruku...ivanga rendu peru vanthale pothum...ellorukum kushi aaidum...mukiyama vishnu sira paarthaudana...avar romba neram pesi santhosa paduthuvaar ivanagla..."Mam..


laxmi amaithiyaga kettu kondu irunthal...vishnu mel avaluku mariyathai kodi konde ponnathu...mam laxmiyidam pesivittu sedru vittal...laxmi methuvaga nadanthu kondu irunthal...aval pinnadi yaaro varuvathu pol satham...thirumbi paarthal...avalin vishnu...aval kangalil mazhichi therinthathu avani paarthaudan...


"ennaga...neenga inga...eppadi...neengalum regulara varuveengala inga..."V

"aamam...athuseri neenga eppadi...?"L

"aamanga...vaaram thavarama sat,sun inga oru trip paathiri vanthuruven en friendoda..."V...

"hmm...romba periya manusanthan..."L avanai praise panni pesinal...

"athalam illainga...etho engalala mudinchathu...avlothan...athukum mela...ivangala paarkum pothu en manase vazhikum...intha vayasula ivanga inga vanthu kasta padanuma?...sollunga...paavama irukum ivangala paarkum pothu...romba kasta padraanga.. inga ivangaluku help panni ,care eduthakaraanga paarunga,avangathan periya manasukaaranga...naangalam onnume illai..."V


laxmiku aachariyam vishnu pesinathai kettu...vishnu melum thodarnthan...


"ungalukum theriyumnu ninakaren..inga ulla paathi peru panakaranga...vasathiya vazhnthavanga...aanal ivanga pillaikalo atha keduthu nasam pannitanga...sothukaga aasai pattu petha aamava kalutha pidichu vezhila thallirukaanga...itha oru amma solli enta azhuthaanga...innum evalavo kodumaiyana vishayamlam iruku...athalam solla virumbalai...pethu,valarthu aalaagina parentsa takkunu eppadi avangala thooki poda mudiyuthu??...ivangala inga thavika vittutu avanga nallathan vazhunthuruvaangala?...inga irukara oruthar oruthar kathaiya keetale en rathame kodhikuthu..."V


Laxmi amithyaga avanai paarthu kondu irunthal...

"ennanga...appadi paarkareenga onnum sollama?"V

"illa,oru jollyana mansukaraanukum seriousa ,emotionala pesa varuthuenu paarthen..."L

"hmm...jollya iruka vendiyathuthan...kasta padravangalai kushi padutha vendiyathuthan...but avanga nilamaiya ninaikum pothu enaku vazhikumnga...atha namma ninachum paarkanum evalavu jollykarana irunthalum"V

"hmm...romba azhagathan pesareenga...seri...romba feel panatheenga...pillaigal kaivitta enna...?ivargala kadavul paarthupar...ivargal ellorum avarin kuzhainthaigal thane ?".. ethuku kavalai padreenga...amaithi aagunga"L

"hmm...seringa...naan tension aagalai...jollya iruken...seriya?"V

"good...enaku ithu pidichuruku..."L

"enna?...pidichuruka?...yaara?...etha?..."V santhegathudan ketan...

"unga pechu pidichuruku...inga irukara periyavangalai pathi kavalaipadrathu pidichuruku...atha sonnen,,,"L kathinal lesaga

"oh...Thank u...thank u..."...appuram...ungala onnu ketkalam...thappa ninachuka maatengale.."V

"enna?"L

"illa,Unga peru ennanu Naan therinchukalama?"V

"hmm...therinchukalame...en per Laxmi..."L

"enna per sonenga?...enna per sonnenga?...thirumbavum sollunga?"V

"Laxmi..."L

"thirumbavum...pls..."V

Laxmi muraithukonde "Laxmi...Laxmi...pothuma...ithukumela sathama solla mudiyaathu..."L


Vishnuvuku antha perayai ketathum etho aagayathil parapathu pol irunthathu...paakathu veetu maamai sonna sol ninaivuku vanthathu..."unaketha Laxmi varuvada.."maami sonnathai V rewind panni paarthan...avanukul etho oru santhosam...


"Hello...Hello...Vishnu...muzhichukittuthan irukeengala?..."L

"haan...aama ...muzhichukittuthan iruken..."V sirithan than dream worldla irunthu...

"appadi naan enna puthusa pera solliteenu ivalavu sinthanai?"L

"athu illainga...Laxminu sonna Mahalaxmi thana...athuvum ellorum mahalaxmi maathiri irupeenganu thana solluvaanga oru ponna paartha...atha ninachukittu irunthen..."V sirithan sollikonde...

Laxmi lesaga vetka pattal...

"rombathan think panreenga..seri unga peru...?"L avan per therinthum avan vayal sollavathi ketkanum pol irunthathu...

"en peru Vishnu...nalla irukula...?"V kangalai uyarthi ketan...

"haan...nalla iruku...."L


vishnu sirithan athai kettu...laxmiyum athil sernthu kondal ...theedernu mazhai pidithu vittathu...athuvum sema mazhai...VL anga iruntha our hall vasalla poi othungi kondargal...old age home perusa irupaathanal...takkunu vantha vazhiye sella mudiyavaillai...avalavu thooram nadanthu vanthurukaanga...hall vera potti irunthathu


"enna ithu ..theernu ippadi mazhai peiyuthu...erichala irukunga?"L nonthukondal...

"ennaga...neenga...ippadi solreenga...mazhai namaku varaprasatham...athu varum pothu naam manathara varaverkanumnunga..."V

"hmm...correcthan..inime ippadi sollamaaten."L...vishnu sirithan...

arai mani neram aaitru...appothum mazhai nikka villai...vantha vazhi muzhuvathum mazhai neer thengi nirambi vittathu...parkave oru kuzham pol irunthathu...


"evalavu neramthan ippadiye nikarathu...bore adikuthu.."L

"enna panrathu Laxmi...ouch...per solli kupidalamla...?"V thayagathodu ketan...

"hmm...thaaralama..athukuthana per vechurukaanga..."L

"correcta sonnenga...ennayum per solliye kupinga...ok...seri ippa namma enna pannalam.hmmm...haan...oru idea.."V mandaiyil bulb erinthathu...

"enna Vishnu...enna idea..?"L aarvathodu ketal...

"naama paper kappal viduvoma intha thannila?"V kushiyaga ketan...

".paper kappala?.haan seri...jollya irukum..vidalam...aana paperku enga porathu...?"L varuthathodu ketal..

"atha pathi kavalaipadatheenga...en pocketla oru naal sheet paper iruku...ethukum use aagumnu vechurupen ethavathu eluthurathuku...atha use pannikalam ippa"V


laxmyum samathithal...VL iruvaram paperil kutty kutty kappal seithanar...naalu kappal seithu vittanar...

"seri...ippa naama vidalama.?...ungaluku onnu,ennaku onnu...yaar kappal firstu pogutho...avangathan winner..okva?"V

"double ok,vishnu...start pannalam..."L santhosamaga sonnal..


VL ore nerathil kappal vitanar...iruvarin kappalum methuvaga sendru kondu irunthathu..rendu perum athaye parthu kondu irunthanar,yaar kappal first poga pothunu...rendu peru kappalaum ore levela poi kondu irunthathu...yaar kappalum vegamavum illai...slowavum polai...


"ennnaga ithu..rendu sernthu poi kittu iruku..."V

"aama...athathan naanum paarthukittu iruken..."L

"hmm...ithula oru winner kidaiyathupolanga...pesama rendu perum winnernu arivichuruvom...seriya?"V

"haha...seri...unga ishtapadiye nadakatum.."L


V innoru kappalai vittan...athu thannerkul muzhgi vittathu...

"anga paarunga Laxmi...naan vitta kappal muzhgiduchu...inime atha naam parka mudiyaathu..."V siirthukonde sonnan...


laxmi avan pesarathai rasithu kondu irunthal...kappal vilayatthu azhaga mudinthathu...aanal mazhai innum vidavillai...theedernu Laxmi phoneku oru call vanthathu..

"Hello...appadiya..avasarama varanuma...itho varen,.."L sollikonde phoneai cut seithal..

"ennaga..ena aachu..en pathatama pesareenga?"V

"illainga Vishnu,.officeku thevaiyana sila booksa order paniruthen...athu vanthurucham ,,,ippa vantha correcta irukumam...innum konja nerathula shopa close panniruvaangalam...melum naan nalaikulla athula iruntha sila points eduthu kandipa mon kudakanum..."L

"ada appadiya...appa neenga poyaanuma?...aana eppadi poveenga...ivalavu mazhai peiyuthe..'V kavalaiodu ketan...

"athanga..enakum theriyala...buslathan vanthen...aana ippa ippadi porathu...?"L varuthapattal...

"seri irunga...naan poi oru autova kuttitu varen...ingaye wait pannunga..."V kilamba murmattan..

"vishnu...eppadi poveenga...kudai koda illai..."L

"athanala ennaga...paravaillai...eppadiyum naanum bikelathan poyaganum...appa nanaiya maatena..neenga freeya vidunga ..itho vanthudren..."V sollikonde velliyil oodinan...


laxmiku aachariyathuku mel aachariyam...sila nimisathil vishnu oru autovai kuttitu vanthan...


"vaanga laxmi,erikonga autola...naan supervisor mamata sollikaren neenga kilambinatha pathi..kavalaipadama ponga...office vishayamla...athan...."V

"seringa vishnu...naan kilambaren...aana neenga ..."L illuthal

"ada enna pathi kavalai padatheenga...mazhai ippa varaikum vidra mathiri illai...athanala paper kappal viduven illati ulla poi ella amma,appasta utkaarnthu aratai adipen...pothuma?"V sirithukonde ketan...

"appana seri...paarthu irunga...naan varen,..."L kurikonde autovil erikondal..


autokaararidam vishnu paarthu ootumpadi sonnan...laxmiku manam illai anga irunthu poga...aanal poiaaganume...vishnuvidam irunthu vidai petral...vishnuvum santhosamaga vazhi anupi vaithan...laxmi autovil irunthu takkunu veliya paarthal vishnuvai nooki...ange innum vishnu nindru kondu irunthan..thalaiyai ulla vittukumbadi laxmiyidam saikai kaatinan...laxmiyum athai meeravillai...aval manathil etho puthu vithamana aanantham...

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Iravu neram...

TIME 10.00 pm...


Mazhai innum vittapadillai...sema mazhai kotti kondu irunthathu...

In Raji's Home...


rajiyum ,renuvum utkaarnthu irunthargal...raji etho sinthanaiyil muzhgi irunthal...renu ball vilayadi kondu irunthal...takkunu raji renuvidam...


"renu kutty,unaku onnu theriyuma...naan oruvarai paarthenu sonnela unta...avar romba nallavara irukaar...very cuteum koda...avara enaku romba pidichuruku ippalenthu...ennanu theriyala...avara innoru murai paarka maatomanu kavalaiya iruku. ippakoda..avar ninaivave iruku renu...thirumbavum avarai naan parpena,renu?..."R renuvidam than manathil ninaithathai solli kelvi ketal...


renu kutty than vaalai aati kettu kondu irunthathu raji sonnathai kettu...aval keta kelviku ...than kutty kaiyai thooki "aamam"solvathu pol aval kaiyil thattiyathu...rajiku santhosam thangavillai..renuvai thooki konjinaal...

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In Laxmi's Home...


"innum mazhai ninna paadillaiye...vishnu veetuku poirupaara?...onnum theriyalaye...hmm...aana romba samathu paiyanathan irukar...aama laxmi,nee en avarai pathi ninakara...thappaache...summa paduthu thoongu..."L thanidame pesi kondal...


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In KV home...


Vishnuvin room...


"hmm...oruvazhiya veetuku vanthachu...laxmi veetuku poirupaangala...hmm...avanga peru en peroda poruthuma iruke...seri...atha ninachu unaku en vishnu santhosam?...ennanu theriyalaye...oru puthu feelinga iruke avala pera keta udana,avalta jollya pesina udana..seri po...athalam onnumillai...seriaaidum..."V thankullaiye pesi kondan...


Karthik's Room..


karthik venki photovuku ethiril poi nindru kondu...


"Venki...unaku theriyaathathu illai...rajiya paarthen...aanal thirumba thirumba en avalai paarka vechennu enalu theriyala...athuvum avala enaku pidicha maathiri feelings romba varuthu ippa...seri atha maranthuduvomnu paartha...avala paarkara santharpam amainchukitte iruku...appa raji than en lifela vara poravala?...ennoda manasu avalukutha sonthama?..naan panra kaariyam serithana?...unaku okva?...itha naan un porupala vittuten...enna neethan vazhi nadathi sellanum.."K


Karthik bedla poi paduthu kondan venkita pesittu...aanal Venki sirithathu pol irunthathu avan pechai kettu...pinna avar siripuku artham nalla signal thane...


THODARUM


Edited by shiningstar77 - 10 years ago

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