KR FF: My dear sir part 26 updated in page 104 - Page 45

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Posted: 10 years ago
Whatte Wonderful update...

K is a lively human being with a tough exterior... His feelings Have been expressed well...


He waiting To hear his name was stunning...

Ellam Irukku next day morning...


Avanga laaliye wait panna mudiyadhu;) engala wait panna vechudadheengs please...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautifulll update akka! Loved it...thank u sooo much for ur time first of all. this raji is damn cute and i love the way how u describe her talktive nature "..Raji was keep on talking about anything and everything on earth" haha and my fav part of this chapter was when they both walked in the night...so sweet of raji to be there holding his hand..theres something so nice about this scene ka..beautifully written indeed...claps for u :) and i really like this dialoque "today he smiles often,may be mazhai varum" That last scene i've no comments aka :P valakem poleh pinni eduthutinge ponge such a romantic writer u are omg lol ..thank u again and goodluck for the next chapter :)

P. S.. For me "karthik sir" is still sounds so much better :(
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Posted: 10 years ago
thanks for the update akka
raji is so cute and innocent and bubbly really like her character

karthi admiring her was cute

the way he opened up to her about his mum was really nice finally he is opening up and raji too

candy floss and thrisa scene loool her innocence and the love she has for animals and plants is so nice to see like karthi says

karthi and raji, the kiss and karthis reaction to it after hmm not sure how he is going to react to her now :/ worried if he will push her away but lets see

raji first time calling him by his name was a little different at first so used to hitler and karthi sir

the flashbacks karthi got hope he remembers soon about raji its killing me to see that he doesnt but keeps getting flashbacks :( seekrama serthu vachudunga pleasee

all in all nice update, with the flashbacks and the current i was able to remember the previous scenes u mentioned and realised straight away what karthi was thinking... each part is still in my mind which shows how great of a writer you are so thank you for this wonderful part :)


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Posted: 10 years ago
Thank you Kala for the update. It was awesome to read KR like this and a much needed relief from the actual show these past couple weeks. This part was full of KR and I loved it. Right from the start to the end, everything was really nice. Raji eating all that junk food oh my goodness lol! Her reaction to dark chocolate was relate-able, I also don't like dark chocolate lol. I'm such a foodie when you mentioned the food it just made a link with me. Like I had pizza today and when she took the ice cream it reminded me of a flavour I tried at my friend's house that was so good. The last part was pretty intense *wink wink*. Looking forward to the next one.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update, Kala.. Raji, very childish and innocent. Karthik, Iron man- but the way he recalled his mother was awesome.

Very nice update... Thank u..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: muthucheenu

Kala, awesome update!! It was just so beautiful to see K share his thoughts so openly. It was just so perfect when he describes to R how he is reminded of his mom and similarly R saying that she is reminded of being with her dad. Such love between a couple I feel will always let them love each other endlessly, forgiving each others mistakes and admiring each others acts including any pranks they may play or hurt they may cause. You are brilliantly bringing out the love buried deep within K out and good to see that he makes no effort to hide it from her.

To top it all, the last few lines about how R feels about the day with her sir is just sooo touching...if its a dream I never want to wake up. Perfect expression of beautiful love!! Way to go Kala!!! Thanks a million!!! 👏

Btw, one question, does candy floss remind him of anything from the past?

thank u muthucheenu for ur comment..

and about ur doubt..
that name candy floss nothing to do with the past..he was just comparing her fluffy pinkish face to candy floss...the name raji had given to the puppy...he reminded of that name may be because of the recency effect..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Ramya05

Whatte Wonderful update...

K is a lively human being with a tough exterior... His feelings Have been expressed well...


He waiting To hear his name was stunning...

Ellam Irukku next day morning...


Avanga laaliye wait panna mudiyadhu;) engala wait panna vechudadheengs please...


thank u ramya 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sivania02

Beautifulll update akka! Loved it...thank u sooo much for ur time first of all. this raji is damn cute and i love the way how u describe her talktive nature "..Raji was keep on talking about anything and everything on earth" haha and my fav part of this chapter was when they both walked in the night...so sweet of raji to be there holding his hand..theres something so nice about this scene ka..beautifully written indeed...claps for u :) and i really like this dialoque "today he smiles often,may be mazhai varum" That last scene i've no comments aka :P valakem poleh pinni eduthutinge ponge such a romantic writer u are omg lol ..thank u again and goodluck for the next chapter :)

P. S.. For me "karthik sir" is still sounds so much better :(


thank u sivania..
and about ur P.S...😆😆
yes i too liked her karthik sir more ..
but on that day he was not like her previous serious sir or her present arrogant hitler ..so she might have got confused i think..😃
Edited by kalabhas - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Gayathri30

thanks for the update akka

raji is so cute and innocent and bubbly really like her character

karthi admiring her was cute

the way he opened up to her about his mum was really nice finally he is opening up and raji too

candy floss and thrisa scene loool her innocence and the love she has for animals and plants is so nice to see like karthi says

karthi and raji, the kiss and karthis reaction to it after hmm not sure how he is going to react to her now :/ worried if he will push her away but lets see

raji first time calling him by his name was a little different at first so used to hitler and karthi sir

the flashbacks karthi got hope he remembers soon about raji its killing me to see that he doesnt but keeps getting flashbacks :( seekrama serthu vachudunga pleasee

all in all nice update, with the flashbacks and the current i was able to remember the previous scenes u mentioned and realised straight away what karthi was thinking... each part is still in my mind which shows how great of a writer you are so thank you for this wonderful part :)



hi gayu,
thank u for ur lengthy comment ma..
oh u r so restless about Karthik not getting his memory back..?😆
avangala seekiram serthu vaikanumaa?
i have no problem maa..i am ready to unite them in the next part itself..
but that would be the last part of this story ..is it ok for u..?
so much of drama coming on the way ma...pls..wait pannungo..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Smiles-20

Thank you Kala for the update. It was awesome to read KR like this and a much needed relief from the actual show these past couple weeks. This part was full of KR and I loved it. Right from the start to the end, everything was really nice. Raji eating all that junk food oh my goodness lol! Her reaction to dark chocolate was relate-able, I also don't like dark chocolate lol. I'm such a foodie when you mentioned the food it just made a link with me. Like I had pizza today and when she took the ice cream it reminded me of a flavour I tried at my friend's house that was so good. The last part was pretty intense *wink wink*. Looking forward to the next one.


thank u smiles..
it seems..somebody resembling MDS raji is hanging around here...very interesting...😃

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