~~Mouna Ragam ff~~ Please note on Pg:87 - Page 27

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Posted: 11 years ago
wow..superb update...
Indha indha Rajiya enakku romba pidichrukku...
very profesional...👏👏 super counter to Angel..
Liked it a lot..⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi Friends,
Kindly let me know if i need to continue or any improvisation is needed in this story as i see comments are decreasing...

I take special time for each and every chapter updation in my working schedule...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anithu

Hi Friends,

Kindly let me know if i need to continue or any improvisation is needed in this story as i see comments are decreasing...

I take special time for each and every chapter updation in my working schedule...


Anithu Sis, thanks for asking for more comments. You're showing Raji in a very different dimension in your story and thats a great strength. I particularly think that your story has a very unique track and that is showing a break up between KR after their marriage and reuniting them unveiling the suspense slowly. The way you switched between the past and present to break the suspense was brilliant. The yet to be broken suspense is what happened on KR's wedding, how did R lose her parents and what happened to K's parents. Nice job Anithu, your imagination needs a special pat. Looking forward ma'am. 👏
Edited by muthucheenu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hii continue with your story please. You have shown raji in a different light and its very interesting to see her like this. Theres still soo much to find out you have written this story with soo much suspense and im eagerly waiting to find out the flash back and the reasons behind it all!! Please continue!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anithu

Hi Friends,

Kindly let me know if i need to continue or any improvisation is needed in this story as i see comments are decreasing...

I take special time for each and every chapter updation in my working schedule...

Anita enna kelvi idhu update pannunga ammu waiting
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Posted: 11 years ago
Anithu plz post the next update which u say will post today!! Im eagerly waiting for the update...love ur romantic story...plz dont stop..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anithu

Hi Friends,

Kindly let me know if i need to continue or any improvisation is needed in this story as i see comments are decreasing...

I take special time for each and every chapter updation in my working schedule...



sis,neenga onnume panna vendam...becoz,ur portrayal of raji n karthik's character is simply awesome.👏...so,neenga onnu mattum panna podhum...updatea seekarama kudunga...that's it😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
Anithu sis , I just love your story . Please update as usual pa. 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
Episode 15

Present:KR home...

Vishnu:Machaaan...ennadaaa..yoskikaraa..bayamaa irukaaa..

Lakshmi:Chee...erumaaa...edha edhaa pesuradhunu ilaaa..

Karthik:Dei..summaaa irendaaa...Naaa yosichadhae veraaa..

Vishnu:Ennathaaa yosichaaa..

Karthik:adhellam unkitaa sollamudiyadhu...neee otaaavai...

Lakshmi:Enaa karthik..Sema romantic mood laaa irukaa polaaa

Karthik:Liteaaa..

Vishnu:Lachu...namaaa...seekram marriage panikkalam..

Lakshmi:Yen paaa..unnakum aasai aasaiyaaa varudhaaa..

Vishnu:Liteaaa..

Lakshmi:Paraaa karthik.,...evanaaa...

Karthik:Amaa lakshmi..vishnu serilaaa...peraaa paiyanaa ungalukku papom..rite aaa..

Lakshmi:Thank You Karthik..

Vishnu:Thambi Karthik...

Karthik:Sollunga Vishnu annen...

Vishnu:Ennaku edho rombaaa try panni...oru figure workout agirukku...Dayavuseithu ennoda kudumbaaa vilaakaaa...un kaiyalaaa anachiradhaa paaa...Hmm...naaan ennaa unna madiri Susan , Angel , Raji nnu work out pannavanaaa..

Karthik:Dei...endaaa...eppo dhaaan andhaa angel problem mudichu..ennoda life start agapogudhu...

Lakshmi:Rajikku mattum...vishnu pesunadhu ketrukanum..

Karthik:Raji engaa Lakshmi..

Lakshmi:Enga amaa raji kku alangaram pannikittu irukaanga karthik..

Karthik:Edhukku

Vishnu:Paathiyaaa lakshmi...edhuvumae theriyadhaa madiri kekuraaan..

Lakshmi:adanae..

Karthik:Enaa nodanae..Enna formalities idhu lakshmi..Adhuvum enkitaa poi

Lakshmi:Karthik..Raji ennoda familylaaa oruthi..so enga amaaa...formalities padi ellam nadakkanumnu solli one houraaa rajiaaa makeup pannirukaanga..

Karthik:Thanks lakshmi...Raji is very lucky to have you people..

Vishnu:Ennadhu...Appo ennapaathaaa manusanaa theriyalayaaa..En vettulaa dhaaan ungalooda first lunch after marriage tomorrow..

Karthik:Dei...edhukku daa edhellam..

Vishnu:Summa dhaan...We are doing for our lovable friends and consider you both as part of our family...avalaudhaaan..ippo nalaikkae ennakum lachukkum neee velaakku pidikumnu naa...pidipiyaa illayaaa..

Karthik:Dei.,...ennoda nameayae change panniduvaa polaaa..

Vishnu:Amaaa mama...

Lakshmi:Iru vishnu unna vechukuren..

Vishnu:Hey thali kitaaa kudumbam nadathalam naaa...nee vechukrennu solraaa..😆😆

Lakshmi:Adaangu...vaaa time aachu vaaa polaaam..

Vishnu:engaa lakshmi...next room kaaa..

Lakshmi:Karthik..ivanaaa summa irukaaa solludaaa..

Karthik:Lakshmi...neenga endhaaa room vittu ellaaa...konchaa naaal marriage agravaraikkum ivanaaa control pannunga...Edhavadhu vibaredhamaaa nadandhiraa pogudhu..

Vishnu:Thank you brother..

Karthik:Welcome Brother..

Lakshmi Amma:Lakshmi..Karthik ayum vishnuayum pooja room kku kuttikittu vaaa..

Lakshmi:Seri maa..Vaaangaa pogalam..Samikumbidaaa..

Lakshmi amma shows Aarthi and KR takes her blessings..

Lakshmi amma:Life laaa romba kastapattuteenga..But all for good..You tend to know the love for another only during sad times..Karthik..Raji..Neenga kastapataadhellam podhum..Eppavum..edhaeamadiri sandhosamaa..orutharukku oruthaar...alavukku adigamanaa..anbodaa irungaa..Seriyaa..

Raji:Kandippa maa..Ennoda ammavaaa pakramadiriyae irruku unga paatha..Thanks ma..

Lakshmi amaa:Raji nee ennoda ponnudhaan.Lakshnmi mattum ilaa..Paaru.amaa solren..unnoda life evalavu azhagaa irukkapogudhunu...Karthik..Ennoda ponnaaa nallabadiyaaa pathukanum..

Karthik:Kandippaa aunty..

Lakshmi Amma:Seri Seri...Time 10.45PM agudhu..Nallaa naaal...Karthik nee roomkku po..Naaan rajiaaa anuppi vekuren..

Karthik:Seri maaa...

Vishnu:Dei nanum kelamburen..

Vishnu Hugs Karthik...and whispers..All the best Machaan..

Lakshmi:Amma namalum kelambelaam..Raji...happyaa unnoda life irrukum..I love you dee..

Raji:Me too dee..neengalaam illanaaa...enga life laaa ennanadandhirukumnae sollamudiyadhu...

Lakshmi Amma:raji...azhakudadhu..Amma solren laa..

Raji:Seri maa..azhamataen..

Lakshmi:Seri Karthik..Raji naanga kelamburoom...Paathu nadandhukongaa seriyaaa..

Karthik-Raji enters their newly decorated room..When both entered the room , Karthik was purely suprised to see the room decorated like this as this is the first time both KR sees this lively and same time feeling a new experience they are going to feel..

When a man loves a woman,
Can't keep his mind on nothing else.
He'll trade the world
For the good thing he's found.

Karthik:Raji You look so sweet in this saree..My favorite..Black with Red designer saree..

Karthik kiss raji with so much love...

Karthik:I am going to Blindfold you and led you to our bedroom...Shall i??

Raji:Well..You need my permission then??

Saying this Karthik tells raji to close her eyes and lift her in his arms...

Karthik:Raji...Unnaku indhaa decoration ellam pidichirukaaa...

Vishnu and Lakshmi has decorated the bedroom with white and red roses and lighted scented candles..

Karthik:I wanted to make this night very special for you. Hope you like it..

Raji:It is so beautiful..Thank you husband...

Saying this Raji kiss on karthik cheeks..

Karthik began running his hands on Raji's face, kissing her as his hands went lower.He then kissed her neck and slowly nuzzled his head on her chest. She began moaning, and raji's heart was beating faster and faster. She sensed karthik was breathing a lot harder too. Karthik was going crazy with desire.Karthik cuddled Raji closely under the moonlight night sky, sparkling with millions of little stars.Raji his arms holding her so tightly and so lovingly, keeping her warm. Her body thrilled in his embrace. Karthik's fingers then tenderly moved from her hair and down towards her chin.Karthik softly moved her head around so that raji was facing him.Raji stared deeply into his eyes for a few silent loving, deep moments, before closing her to the feel of his warm, moist lips upon her own.

His soft lips brushed gently against mine as it probed into her warm mouth with his moist, soft tongue.She felt the joy uprising in her once lonely soul as both kissed deeply and lovingly. Raji felt karthik arms warped around her cold, aching body, warming it up so much and made her feel safe and loved. She felt so comfortable within his welcoming warms, so loved. Her fingers ran through his hair, as they explored each other's mouths. She loved the feeling of his soft hair; it sent tantalizing electricity through her.

The moon captured them completely as a spotlight. Raji was fully offered to Him.She looked at him shyly, smilingly. She saw his eyes focused on mine, looking over the curves of her back. Sometimes she crawled sensuously and sometimes she lay on the ground on his back and meandered of her body in snake-like pattern.But raji wanted to do more;She wanted to show him to the extreme, she wanted to show him how daring she could be for him. He crashed passionately her body against him and melted in a passionate embrace.

Karthik instantly looked her straight in the eye and they both locked, smiling at one another. He leaned toward her slightly and we fell into another very sensual kiss.He took her arms and laid her on her back, straddling over her, holding her wrists, kissing her face with delight. Her breath caught as he worked his kisses to her entire body. Her legs parted more and she arched towards him, anxious for his hunt.

She looked at him with love and she could see all the love he had also for her in his eyes. She smiled at him as she felt his cum jet deep inside her. He leaned forward pressing his chest against her soft bare breasts. He kissed me once again. No words needed, our souls were telling each other through our gazes all that was needed.

Karthik:Raji...I love you...

Raji:I love you like anything Karthik...

By saying this both fell asleep in each other arms so secured...

Karthik:Raji...Time aachu paaru vidhinchiruchu eludhiru...

Raji:Ennakum thookam varudhu...vaa neeyum thoongu..

Karthik:Raji time agudhu paaru..11.00AM agdudhu...unnaku pasikala..

Raji:Ilaaa..Inniku sunday dhanae..

Karthik:Yaroo door knock panraangaaa...iru yaarunu paathutu varen..

Raji:Hey iru naanum varen..

Karthik:Venam..Venam...nee kulichittu vaaa...naaan namaa bedroom door aaa satikuren..Seekram indhaa coffeaaa kudichitu...dresss pannitu vaaa..

Raji:Chee podaaa..

Precap:

Angel tries to harm raji...What happens...Where is Karthik...Vishnu and Lakshmi are in problem..what is that

Stay tuned for more emotional KR...Funny VL and dominating Husband K...








Edited by anithu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
@Friends...Made this update little bit shorter..since love to tell you people the way KR were consumatted😳😳

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