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Posted: 11 years ago
You are good as well as fantastic narrator...

Each line of this chapter is really wonderful. It is so natural and realistic... enjoyed a lot. 😊👏😊

Gift scene was so cute and lovable😉. The way raji handles karthik weakness regarding the scary movie was awesome, both of their expression is well narrated. Hats off to you
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kalabhas


forget about that post...
i will definitely continue with my writing and will try my best to entertain u all..😃

That's good sister...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Kala sis...wow...what a long update with different kinds of feelings👏👏...wonderful sis...

GIFT SCENE:
that gift...hmm...such a good thing...even K gave it for R's sake,there is some hidden secret behind it i think...he want to see her with smiling face always😉...we know it,man...karthik pannathu first kovatha erpaduthinalum,raji avan valila than pora...very nice...hmmm...DVDya parthukutte thongiyacha...sarithan...

KRVL funny moments:
VL planning to celebrate R's B'day...too good...always they r proving us that they r the true buddies for raji...but raji,nallanaal athuvuma ippadiya thongi valiyarahu...enna panradhu,ava kanavula comedy scenesa vanthurukum...antha effect pola...but that call,why raji become so emotional..what incident made her to behave like this to her dad...broke out that secret soon sis...

OMG,karthik...sema sentimental foolthan😆...raji valathu lega vaikanumnu enna thudippu...pinnitan...athe mathiri rajiyum pannita...oruvela ithu etherchiya nadanthucha illa ippadithan pannanumnu nenachala...theriyalaye...aana vechanga paaru rendu perum aapu antha gift matter pathi VL ketkum podhu...sirichu sirichu ennayum aachariya padutheetanga...this what i needed😉...

OUTING SCENE:
that sales girl Kva koppitaudana,enaku thooki vaari potruchu,aiyoo adutha sandaiyanu...but Karthikna karthikthan...sema cool attitude...when he enter casually into trial room without paying any attention to R's word...i was like😳❤️...rajiyum van pechuku maru pechu illai,when he begged her to come with this outfit...sarithan..

MOVIE N DINNER SCENE:
sema comedy intha movie scene🤣🤣...i even thought K is afrading for raji...but athu ippadi irukumnu yaaru kanda...karthik nalla samalikkaran payabadha mathiri...appuram than therinjuthu ivalavu bayanthakoliyanu😆...when he slept like a baby,i admired his cuteness...aiyooo romba samthu payyana irukane...rajiyum athathan think panniiruka..am so proud of raji as she didnt revel that secret to anybody...but ithukuellam moola karanam VISHNU than...illatina K oda intha weakness rajiku therinju irukathu😆

LAST SCENE:

Karthik...truely china babythan...rajitta orimaioda phone pesikkitte irukunumnu solran..even raji didn't denies it...


What...going to stop this update😭.😭😡😡..what r u telling sis,aapdai mattum solladheenga...ur r such a amazing writer...neenga mattum update niruthuneenga enaku ketta kovam vanthurum solitennn...koda alugayumthan😭







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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kalabhas


some of my friends were got hurt due to that post..😲

i really didn't write that post to hurt u all...it was just i felt my quality of writing was decreasing..
its all about my self confusions only.😕😕

i will definitely continue with my writing and will try my best to entertain u all..😃



not some of the friends,,ella friendsumthan hurt aaitanga😭...neenga ungala mathi kamiya edai poda venam...update mattum pannunga podhum...

@bold,well,intha thoughtthan eppavum unga mansula irukanum...seriala parthu noonthu poi irukara engaluku unga storythan oru good medicine...so continue it...yaarukaga illatiyum unga kutti thambi thangaikalukaga story eluthunga...okva😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
Kala sis thanks for the lovely updates . As usual kalakitenga!.
The gift matter of OFFICE serial you have solve it pa. Sis please do not under estimate your talent . You have a huge fan following , please don't disappoint us. Okva.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Kala...just gone thru the last 3 chapters... very nice updates..which one i wud mention here??...the romantic dance sequences ..karthik regretting for his behaviour, their silent bike ride, birthday celebration at icecream partlour ... i enjoyed each and every part...andha gift la appadi enna irukumnu ennanamo yosicha, kadaisila ippadi comedy pannitengale...and raji looking herself at the mirror and saying oranguttan..LOL...raji right leg eduthu vaikunumnu karthik nineikiradhu..nice one..
theatre scene..raji bayapada poranu nineichen...din expect karthik wud be afraid of horror movies ..his fear and bringing out the kid in him ..and karthik looking out for raji and revealing his weakness..nicely captured..
your way of narration is very good...simply amazing i would say...it just relieved me of all the stress which was in my mind...no where we are feeling bored...pls don't underrate ur writing skills.. keep going...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful update Kala 👏

Gift - set of comedy DVDs... super 👏

Karthi wanting Raji to enter his flat with right leg... nice 😳

Karthi entering trial room and loosening her hair and Raji feeling his touch... ❤️

On seeing VLR laughing.. Karthik suspecting that she wud hav revealed and all are laughing at him... it's quite natural that anyone will think the same... thank god he himself spill it that they knew already nu... Vishnu is good at that... 😉

Both slept while talking on phone... (phone bill egiri irukkum 😆)

Again.. I visualized each and every scene of this part... great going 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
Dear Kala, another wonderful chapter. You have taken the story
to a new dimension. Very well narrated,
enjoyed every line of kr's conversation. Kudos to you Kala.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Kala, waiting for next update ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Kala,

I want to give you a big hug for bringing a smile to my face with your FF. I am enjoying all the chapters and the story. I can vision everything in my head with all the characters. Love the dialogues for Vishnu, they suit him so well and VR friendship shown here also is great. Karthik and Raji ooo la la, what shall I say...I can picture every scene you write for them with the descriptive adjectives you use. The dance, the birthday everything is nice. Looks like Raji has a big past behind her, can't wait to find out what it is. Thanks for the updates.

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