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Ramya05

@Ramya05

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Raji: " Po Karthik... unakku puriyala.. first cut code mudijuduthu.. We can show a demo to Lakshmi, Susan and swetha... "

Padhu:" Haiya... inime namba free-ya?"

Karthik: " Dei.. idhu first cut da... innum neraya irukku... Anyway.. ippodhikku un seatukku po"

Padhu:"Yenne?"

Karthik:" Ippo en pondattikku chocolate kudukka poren.. ava konjmavadhu sapdanum illa? adhukkuthaan" and smiles at Raji...

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Smiles-20

@Smiles-20

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Padhu: "Okay okay" and winks at Raji and leaves. Karthik gives a chocolate bar to Raji and she takes it and opens it. She breaks it in half and gives half back to Karthik. He takes the other half and eats it. Raji is eating her chocolate bar and looks at Karthik. "We eat too much chocolate Karthik...we should try for something a bit healthier." Karthik stops eating the chocolate and gives Raji a look.

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Ramya05

@Ramya05

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#43

RK and P give demo to the team and start working on review comments... Swetha says," hey guys... Good news... They like the first cut of the work... We might get some part of the money... They are sponsoring a team lunch... Let's plan it for tomorrow..."

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Ramya

@ramyvijay

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Vish : dei... super da... eppadaa naama treat ku porom?
Karthi : poromaa? nee ellaam kedaiyaadhu.
Vish : nammellaam ore team dhaane?
Karthi : aanaa.. idhula work pannadhu naangadhaane... venumnaa Target work olunga mudichu... Susan kitta treat kelu..

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Ramya05

@Ramya05

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#45

R: ennadhu, enga Anna illama oru treata... Naanum varalapa...
V: thanks thangachi... Ippo ennada sollara...
K: vandhu Tholai... Aana oru condition ...

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Rajee71

@Rajee71

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Vishnu : enna Machan adhu

Karthik : adhu onnumilla - unnoda bill - neethan pay pannanum - (he laughs like Vishnu)

Vishnu : dei - yenda - and gives a serious look

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Ramya05

@Ramya05

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Next day, KRVL, Swetha and Madhan leave for lunch...

R: Moraikadha Karthi.. romba veyilla irukku.. Let me come in the car...

K: seri... un ishtam... Naan Angel varalannu ketkaren...

R: Ayya.. Rombathan... kochukaadha.. Let me come with u...

All of them leave to have lunch at...

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muthucheenu

@muthucheenu

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#48

KVRL, MS leave to have lunch at Basera on the ECR.

KR in bike and the rest in Vishnu's car.

As usual, KR are having an enjoyable bike ride...in their own happy world talking sweet nothings.

Suddenly R feels someone noticing her very closely. She looks around, but couldn't see who it was.

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muthucheenu

@muthucheenu

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#49

K notices her worried face through the mirror and asks her what happened. R responds saying nothing, but she feels her heart filled with some confused emotions suddenly. They've almost reached the restaurant by then, wait for VL and MS. R's phone rings and its her dad. 😕

Edited by muthucheenu - 11 years ago

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muthucheenu

@muthucheenu

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#50

R: Appa, eppadippa irukkeenga? Meesai: Naan nallaa irukkema...engemma irukke? R: naan, naan... inge office-ku keezhe vandhirukken pa, friends-oda. Meesai: oh...appadiyama, sari appuram phone pannumma. vaichidaremma

R: Getting worried, she feels something is wrong.

KV and MS arrive, they all get on with having a nice lunch.

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