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CHAPTER TEN

Next Day :

Karthi and Raji at seat and Vishnu comes back.

Karthi : engada poittu vara.. ?

Vish : Laksh kitta kadala pottuttu varaen...

Karthi : Jaya place la irukkaalaa ?

Vish : illaye... innaikku leave nu nenakiren..

Karthi : yen ?

Vish : enna kettaa ? theriyala da... nethu doctor visit irukkunu seekiram kelambi poittaanu lakshmi sonnaa...

Karthi : (thinks... ennavaa irukumm ...)

Raji watches all this and still on kaduppu on Karthi who cares for Jaya.

Next Day :

Laksh comes to KRV workstation and discuss about some work given and the status.

Karthi : Lakshmi..

Laksh : sollu karthi...

Karthi : Jaya vandhuttaala... ?

Laksh : yaaru.. ? oh Angel ah ? On the way.. bus la vandhuttu irukkaalaam...

Laksh : enna vishayam Karthi..

Karthi : illa... ava vandi saaviya kudukkanum..

Vish : dei... adhu eppadi daa.. unkitta vandhadhu... ?

Raji : (interrupts) adhu theriyaadhaa Vishnu... madam' vandi repair nu sir' dhaan drop pannaaru.. rendu perum jodi'yaa bike la ponaanga... neenga paakalayaa ?

Vish : adappaavi... enkitta kooda sollala...

Karthi : vishayam theriyaama pesaadha da.

Vish : enna venaa irukkattum... nee marubadiyum joint adichadha yen enkitta sollala... treat ketpennu dhaana... ? naan Jaya kitta kettukiren..

Karthi : appadiyellam onnum illa... konjam vaaya mooduriyaa...

Raji : unmaiya othukka vendiyadhudhaana ?

Laksh : hey Raji... avandhaan illanu solraan la..

Karthi : lakshmi.. first ivanga othukkanum ... ok va illa yaa nu... apparamaa... mathavangala pathi pesalaam...

Raji : (leaves from there)

Laksh : Karthi..kudu... keys ah naan Angel kitta kuduthuduren...

Karthi : illa.. naane koduthukuren...

Laksh : appo ava kettadhu correct dhaan pola ?

Karthi : yaar enna nenachaalum enakku prechana illa...

(he too leaves)

Laksh : enna Vishnu... Karthi yen ippadi nadandhukuraan...

Afternoon :

Jaya comes to Karthi's place and asks for the key.

He takes it from his pocket and hands over to her. Raji gives a look.

Vish : eppadi irukka Jaya ? Laksh sonnaanga doctor kitta ponadhaa...

Jaya : perusaa onnum illa... ippa ok dhaan.

Jaya says Hi' to Raji but she just says hmmm' and gets up and pretends calling someone and walks away.

Jaya says bye to karthi and Vishnu and leaves. While moving from there, she notices that only one keychain is there.

After few mins, Raji comes back to her seat.

Raji : Vishnu... gavanicheengalaa? avala paatha odane evlo sandhosamaa aayiduraanu..

Karthi : Raji.. chummaa...scene create pannaadha...

Raji : ippa kooda paaru... avala pathi pesunavudane... kovam varudhu...

After few days...

Lakshmi says there is going to be office day celebrations in coming week.

Vish : haiii Lakshmi... annaikku vela seiyya venaam.

Karthi : ippa mattum enna ? nee vela paakuriyaa... ? sari.. adhukku yen lakshmi ippadi yosanai yaave irukkeenga ?

Laksh : illa... annaikku welcome dance ku yaaraavadhu classical dance pannanum... yaara kettaalum theriyaadhunu solraanga...

Karthi : Jaya kitta ketteengala... ? avalukku ella dance forms um theriyum...

Laksh : unmaiyaavaa ?

Karthi : pinna naan yenna summaavaa solren...

Vish : pinna... avandhaan pickup drop laam pannirukkaan... avanukku theriyaadhaa ?

Raji : ohoo... ella dance-um aaduvaangalo... ? enga oorla kooda dhaan... thiruvizha appa... vidhavidhamaana dance aaduvaanga..

Laksh : hey Raji... enna pesittu irukka... ?

Raji : pinna enna ? ennamo avangadhaan ellaa dance-um aaduvaanga laam...

Karthi : naan onnum appadi sollala... Lakshmi kettadhukku sonnen..

Raji : adha sollumbodhu... orey peruma iyyaavukku...

Laksh : nee yen eppa paathaalum Jaya va pathi pesumbodhu kaduppaagura...

(Raji gets up and leaves)

Karthi : paarunga lakshmi.. eppadi pesittu poraanu ?

Laksh : pinna... neeyum appadi dhaan panra. Angel la edhunaa sonnaa unakku appadi kovam varudhu...

Karthi : neengalumaa Lakshmi ?

Vish : enna laksmi ippadi pesureenga... ? avanga rendu perum eppadi love pannaanga nu theriyumaa ?

Laksh : adhaan pirinjuttaangala...?

Karthi : pirinjuttaa... avanga nenappe irukkaadhaa... ?

Laksh : enna solra karthi ? nee solradha paathaa... thirumba seradhukku chance irukkura maadhiri pesura...

Karthi : adhula ennanga thappu...

Vish : aamaa lakshmi.. ippa Raji ya ivan paakkama irundhirundhaa kandippa adhu nadandhirukkum...

Laksh : enna Karthi amaidhiyaa irukka... ? appadiya...

Karthi : ennanga sollanum..

Vish : ippo nee Raji ya paakala nu vachukko...

Karthi : sari

(Jaya passes by that side... tends to hear their conversation... from this point)

Vish : ippavum nee Jaya va verukkala... correct ah ?

Karthi : aama da... adhu eppadi da mudiyum... 1^st love marakka mudiyumaa... ?

Vish : ippo Jaya chandru va marriage pannikkala... adhu enna reason ku nu namakku theriyala...

Adhu ennanu therinjukittu nee marubadiyum ava kooda seralaam la daa..

Karthi : ennanu theriya vendaam...

Vish : ennadaa solra...

Karthi : yerkanave naan avala sandhegapattadhaala dhaan naanga pirinjom... marubadiyum andha thappa naan seiyya maatten... avalukku ok na enakkum ok dhaan...

Laksh : Karthik...

(but he leaves)

(Jaya becomes happy on hearing this and she also leaves)

Laksh : enna Vishnu... nee vera avana yethivitta... un friend kaaga nee ippadi pesura..

Vish : nee un friend Raji kaaga pesumbodhu... naan en friend karthi kaaga pesa koodaadhaa ?

Laksh : naan un friend nu sonnadhu... Angel ...

(After she leaves... Vish goes on thinking mode)

Vishnu-Jaya conversation : (some days back)

Jaya : enna en mela over akkara kaattura...?

Vish : illaye... appadi ellam onnum illaye... naan yeppavum ippadi dhaana..

Jaya : poi sollaadha Vishnu... unakku ellaa vishayamum theriyum... illanaa... ellaar maadhiriyum neeyum kovamaa dhaan irundhiruppa... karthi ya vittu naan US ponadhukku... saadhaaranamaa pesuranaa.. kandippa unakku therinjirukkum nu guess pannen... adhaan Divya kitta ketten... unkitta ellaathayum sollittadhaa... ava sonnaa...

Vish : adhu vandhu...

Jaya : vidu Vishnu... sari... Karthi ku theriyaadhula... theriya vendaam..

Vish : yen Jaya... therinja... neenga rendu perum easy ya serndhidalaam la..

Jaya : adhaan Vishnu... enakku adhu venaam... appadi nadandhaa... adha relationship la... unmaiyaana love irukkumaa nu theriyala... adhu edhuvum theriyaamalaye... innum avan enna virumbi serndhaa dhaan life nallaa irukkum... Please avan kitta solla maatten nu sathiyam pannu.

Vish : promise ah solla maatten Jaya.

(flash back ends)

Now..

Vish : (thinks) idhu therinjadhunaa... Jaya evlo sandhosha paduvaa... ellaam nallabadiyaa... nadandhaa sari..

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