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Smiles-20

@Smiles-20

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Wow nice another FF!! Thanks so much.

Like the character sketches KR married aww!

Part 1 was good uh oh Angel and Susan lol!

Waiting for part 2 please update us soon.

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joe_arhi

@joe_arhi

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Hey story is interesting and i liked the character sketch too. Its a relief that KR are married. Yen VL'ku mattum kalyanam panama vachirkinga? Namba vishnu paavam pa 😆. Karthik'ku ivlo poottiya? Karthik paavam oru perfume'ke ivlo muraikrava indha vishayathla epdi sanda poduva 😉. Waiting eagerly for next update.

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hopper_ocean

@hopper_ocean

Alumni

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

NOTE : i am using some creations which is posted in the Creation gallery buddies. So credits are to the creators 🤗

Chapter 2

Vishnu walks in and notices Raji kadu kadu. Mind voice "enna raji inji thinna kurangu madhiri irukanga..." he stops when Raji throw danger look at him.
Vishnu : Ennaga Raji ippadi kobama pakurenga ..
Raji : Ippo ennai enna nu sonnenga?
Vishnu : naana 😲 ungalava? eppo? 😲
Raji : ippo nenga sollulae inji thinna kuranga madhiri naan iruken nu.
Vishnu mind voice : idhu enna raji ku mind reading laam teriyudha
Vishnu : adhu illa raji.. rombha kobama irukerenga nu taan..
Raji : Mudhalae inji thinna kuranga pattarakarengala?
Vishnu thiru thiru mulachufies and thinks if his the menu of the day for Raji 😆.. suddenly answers him mobile which never ring 😲
"hello macha.. yes macha.. coming idho ippo varen daa macha.." and continues to talk while he essu from Raji Raji looks towards Susan room and wonders what is going on and debates if to go and peek or not .. but what reason can she give to enter Susan room? Edhuvadhu sollalam .. thinks Raji and starts walking towards Susan room when suddenly Karthik walks out from the room. Raji immediately turns back 😆

Karthik walks and stands behind her. Raji could feel him .. so much of love she can feel yet deep down Susan is disturbing .. she tries to maintain that she is upset but one line from Karthik who whispers from back into her ears ... love you raji 😳
Raji melts starts walking towards her seat. Both sits and looks at each other

while Vishnu returns back to his seat observing them .. closes his eyes
mind voice Vishnu Yabba sammy thangalae da romanceuuu
indha ponnungalae ippadi taan pola. Konja nerathu minnadhi Raji kadu kadu nu irundha
ippo 😲 something wrong 😕 😆

Vishnu : Dei machaaa adungu daa..
Karthik : Nee tungalaiya macha
Vishnu opens his eyes and moruchufies at him. Karthik laughs and gives him and wink
Vishnu puts back his head and close his eyes while Raji Karthik continues their romance 😆

Angel walks in .. goes behind the cabin and leans on Karthik table ..

Angel : Hi Karthik ... enna da ennodhu email ku note ku badhilae varalae...
Karthik moves away little ...
Karthik : enna note?
Angel : unnaku note kadikalaiya .. 🤔 Raji.. naan Karthik table mela tannae vaichen
Raji is kadu kadu unable to show the note to Karthik feeling ashamed. Angel gives her villi smile turns to Karthik and says its okay. She will email him in detail. Laksh comes there. Angel walks away same time giving Vishnu a good pat on his head 😲 .. Laksh moruchufies Vishnu and he goes "haiyoo lakshmi ennaku teriyadhu avala taan touch pannitu pora..." Laks walks away annoyed. Karthik laughs. Vishnu turns and moruchufies him..
Karthik : dei macha, ava appovae appadi, ippo sollava vennum. Edhakum konja usara iruda vishnu 😆
Vishnu : advice ku nandri. Unnaku pakkathlae irakaravangalae mudhala nee samali
Vishnu walks away. Karthi turns in time to see Raji giving him anger look. Rombha casualla Karthik ask about the note that Angel left for him and pretends like searching on the table. Raji throws the note at him and walks away from there. Karthik smiles and reads the note and continues to laugh ...

Everyone gathers for a meeting in Susan room. Raji ask Laksh enna meeting nu. Laksh says not sure but Kausi and Angel will joining them too. Raji mind voice "onnu samalikava mudiyalae idhulae rendhu peerum same room aa..." and looks over at karthik. She tries to look around but cant find Angel ..

Thodarum

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anithu

@amrithatec

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Thats a nice and gr8 update ratna with apt picture visualization..loved it

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Daffodilee

@Daffodilee

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

great update ratna
enjoyed it vishnu rocks.

aha sathya as angel ahh superuu apadiye prakash um koopitu vanga if you can.
waiting for next part

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kalabhas

@Hanamisuki

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

zvery nice update rathna..

this office is full of energy and fun,i loved it❤️

raji's over possessiveness,karthik's cool attitude both are so cute...

karthik saying love you to raji was like wow,me blushing😳😳

omg'!ivlo cute ah angel irundhaa raji insecure ah feel pannaama yenna pannuvaa😆

aamaa indha karthik yen ,ivlo pretty aana angel ah vittutu indha azhu moonji raji ya pudichaan?😆

i think angel will create problem in KR's personal life,using raji's suspecious nature .

continue the great work rathna👏

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suhasini

@Suha95

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

wow ratna akka ..
nice part...

karthik saying i love you raji ..to raji ...suha blushing..😳😳😳

raji why always kadu kadu...😡

waiting for next part..!!!

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sathyakrs

@sathyakrs

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

very nice update ratna...🤗

i pity karthik..pavam...iva ipdi sandhega patutae irundha avan epdi ivala samalika porano...

as kala said...ivlo cute aana angel ah vitutu ivanuku epdi raji ya pidichudhu...adhaan love is blind nu solranga pola...😉

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mey_mey

@mey_mey

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

I really really like this story. I think i've read it twice already! Amazing. Seriously, most of you are very talented. Well done and do keep it up 😊

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joe_arhi

@joe_arhi

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Lovely update. Vishnu's mind voice chance illa 🤣. Raji forgetting her anger on karthi when he says love u was cute... Visualization of the scenes'lam were apt. Edhuku indha meeting? Im also waiting with raji to know.. Update soon.

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