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Posted: 17 years ago
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This story is really interesting...can't wait 4 nxt chapter... 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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What a interesting episode Usha😃

Iyyao Now i have starting to be like Ambi starting to eat each of my finger or Nallu fiinget one by one...........post next chapter na😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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oh oh this story is really heating up,whats next ush??

i like this mythili really smart 😉

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Mythili is really smart naa 😳 😆 Story is getting really interesting now. Came fast Usha 😆
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Now If my PC had not died I would have posted the comments earlier.This is a change from the usual romance. You have a little bit of everything which will appeal to most readers - James Bond,Scotland yard,The Saint etc. Mythili is a good Bond girl - I can't forget her fat rubber thighs! Indeed Usha, where did you learn to write like that......

Carry on Girl......you already have a steady following....
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Posted: 17 years ago
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mmm... already another undercover with JB ( this initials remind me of Anbe Vaa 😃 ) Great going Usha!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Nice story Usha, waiting for the next episode 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey thx for the comments most apprecipated.

@ Hosanna, LOL! I dont how, but many stories come from my own little day dreams I have.

@Giri, yeap, just I like to be a little realistic.

@ Netra, Nallu, Vani and Nathini keep enjoying.

Next chapter I decided to go a very passionate scene. If you find it unacceptable please be open.

Chapter 6

Meanwhile at A's place. He was fuming when BJ gave him a call to be alert of M and S who have come to enquire about his dealings with A. However, A was relieved when BJ had just done the right thing of not spilling the beans about their dealings. Otherwise, they will be hot potatoes on fire. Unknown to them the undercover security guard had heard of this and snipping took an hour break. That he used the opportunity to head to the police station.

"Mythili." Called the undercover security guard
M smiled, "Yes! Any good information."
"Yeap! BJ have been lying to you." Under cover cop said, "They were discussing about how A should be careful of you."
M smiled, "That's so funny. He's just scared of me."
"I know. However, for your own safety he has a game plan with you." Undercover cop explained which, he explained about beginning a passionate affair. Then make you rot to death. M was shocked to hear this and told the cop to return back to his job and keep on spying on them.

This evening, M headed off back to A's home very glamorously. She wore a black sleeveless sari. She was shocked to see his home as; it wasn't what she taught to be. A big house, large swimming pool and many cars parked in his house. In fact, it was an ordinary apartment with a small balcony.
Just about M knocked the door, it opened with astonishment she couldn't believe the house was simple. Mythili asked, "I didn't expect this from a criminal."
"I may be a criminal in the world but I prefer to live simply." A told M as he came behind touching her skin.
Mythili was shocked, "Seriously, it's a shocker. I taught you will live in a big house. Yours is a small apartment with expensive display items."
"I know darling. Anyways forget talking about my house. I just want to cherish a life with someone special." Adithya told her.

As they kept on talking M was about to leave until, A came towards her and hugged her. M couldn't believe this was happening and couldn't resist his hugging and continued but pulled away. She walked to the entrance of the door until, grabbed her lovely fingers and took her to a room. Alias, it was his bedroom it was a double bed. The candles were lit on either side of the beds until A asked, "So…"
"So…" M whispered shyly, "I love it. It's wonderful."
Adithya smiled as he kissed her lips, "I love the way you speak. You are cunning."
As he kissed her he wanted to go deeper and deeper. Just then Mythili spoke while touching his face, "Common on! Bring on the passion."
A was delighted to hear this. Then, he spins her to the opposite way and slowly expose her clothes one by one. He was stunned at her wonderful and feminine body and started hugging her inside the duvet. Both started kissing each other. Poor M didn't realise the trouble that lies ahead of her. A was enjoying every moment of this affair. The candle kept on glowing smaller and smaller as time passed on.
Edited by usha_pooja - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i am first again & it was very well written 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey guys thx for the comments but please all silent readers post something. If you can.

Anyways here is my next installment:

chapter 7

It was early morning M opened her eyes in shock to discover that she had just begun a passionate affair with a criminal with no heart. A was still sleeping peacefully and was looked at the room to see it was in a state. Her clothes was lying around the floor with A's clothes lying on top of it. She tried to move until, her hands were held tightly by A opens his eyes and asks, "Hey Mitu! Why do you look upset?"
"I am ended in this situation." M said
A asked, "What situation? Sleeping with me. Actually, you must be lucky as it's my first time I slept with a gorgeous girl like you."
"Oh Adithya just shut up! This relationship is dangerous. Don't you understand? What you are going to do when you see a child growing in my stomach." M grabbed him
" I see that when time comes?" A tells her and kisses her head
M complains, "Time! Sheeze! Grow up! You are a criminal and I am a police officer. This ain't good for the station."
"Come on sweetheart! Stop talking about this and let's enjoy the last moments before we go our ways." A smiled, "We can meet again tomorrow."
M remained silent.

Later on, M at the police station recalls about A's case but she's feeling very uneasy about the previous night. However, she took all of this aside and continued with the case. Then the undercover cop comes and gives evidence which, refers to their latest dealings. M is happy and decides to call in BJ for an enquiry.

M comes to BJ office and knocks on the door. He was displeased to see her, "What do you want now?"
"I'm here to arrest you?" M smiled
BJ laughed, "How could you arrest me? You have no warrant?"
"Oh yes I have and a search warrant." M looked at him and shows the evidence.
All the other officers are hunting around the house.
A police officer then comes and shows him the evidence. M tells BJ, "I am going to arrest you on possession of keeping drugs."
BJ didn't look pleased and was fuming.
Edited by usha_pooja - 17 years ago

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