Vennila - Part 2 Updated Comment [Page 2]

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Vennila

Character Name - Actor
Vennila - Meera Jasmin
Aravinthan - Madhavan
George - Tom
And other minor characters.

Vennila - Part 1

Scene 1: Leelai saree store

Aravinthan enters.
Aravinthan: Yaaruda unga muthalali?
Leelai: Naan thaan muthalali, ena venum?
Aravinthan: Aiyaa vera sonaaru.
Leelai: Vara mudiyathunu solu..
Immediately Aravinthan points his gun at Leelai. The store is deserted.

Scene 2: Vennila's house

Vennila: Appa, naan poitu varan.
Thenkasi: Paarthu kavanama pomma.
Rajeswary: Avala paarthu pora solaratha vittitu, avala vera yaar koodavavathu vambukku poha venaan-nu solunga.
Thenkasi: Yaendi panurathellam nee, ana ena ava kitta eduthu sola solaria?
Venila: Amma, naan varan.
Vennila leaves the house.
Thenkasi: Parthiyadi.. Padicha thimiru.. Ponnu konjam padicha pothum-nu sonen kettiyadi.. Paithiyakkari. Poi kaafee-ya podudee.
Rajeswary: Sareenga.
Rajeswary leaves. Thenkasi is displeased by Vennila's attitude.

Scene 3: Chennai, Leelai saare store.

George: Hello? do you know where this street is? (George hands out a small piece of paper containing an address written in tamil)
Leelai's son (Anbu): Arthorath theru.. Ippadi neraa poi peethankai pakkam thrumbina oru murugan kovil varum.. Appuram..
Mano (friend): (interuppts) Dei, velakaarankita poi thamizh-a persuriyedha?
Anbu: poi, vennila-va kootitu vaa.
Mano leaves.
Anbu: Wait panu.. Wait.. Wait..
Leelai's son, Anbu, said that a few times to ensure that George understood what he was saying. George waited and Anbu prayed to his dad photo.
Anbu: nee poi oru varumsam adyiduchu.. Ana antha pavi innumu uyiroda than irukkan. Innum evalavu naaliku irukkaanu naanum parkiren.
Mano enters.
Anbu: Engada Vennila?
Mano: Vennila itha kudukka solichu.. (he handed a small paper note to George with all the directions)
George: Thanks.. Thanks.
George leaves.

Thodarum.

Edited by ~*Thamizhan*~ - 17 years ago

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Ahaaaa shri..................Mega serial season'la mini serial.................interesting..........keep it up 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Interesting 👏 👏 Good start. Wait, hold on. Netra is confused now. Is still real serial or you'r writing one for us?? Netra really confused naa 😕 😆 But starting really good 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks, kadhambari😃

Originally posted by: netra_rama

Interesting 👏 👏 Good start. Wait, hold on. Netra is confused now. Is still real serial or you'r writing one for us?? Netra really confused naa 😕 😆 But starting really good 👏


Thanks. It's my own mini serial.😃
Edited by ~*Thamizhan*~ - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice start thamizhan 👏 👏 interesting so maddy is anti-hero or villain?
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow superb serial Sri. U have numerous talent.
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Originally posted by: usha_pooja

wow superb serial Sri. U have numerous talent.

Agree. And you have the courage to try out. Not many does 👏

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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow Sri...you are back with ff..I mean mini serial 😃
ladies...dont forget Sri used to write ffs earlier on before he got busy with studies 😉

I dont think Maddy is playing a negative role...but let us wait and see what Sri has in store 😃

keep it up yaar👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks for the encouraging comments!! btw, Madhavan is definitely not playing a negative role!!😃 And sorry keeping everyone waiting..

New Character
Chinna - Prakash Raj

Part 2

Scene 1: Chinna's House
Chinna: Unakku evalavu thimir iruntha enoda Arvainthan-ai patri police kita complaint koduppa? Itho paaru nee nadanthethe mattum courtla sonna.. unnoda aatam close-u!!
Leelai: Naan solama irunthalum Kasi solama iruppana? Unga rendu perkkum ippove ahaathu.. muthala avana adakka paarunga.
Chinna: Arvintha, avana poi oru thatu thatinaa ellam sari verum.
Aravinthan: Chinna, avane epavo pottirukanum aana neethan pulla kuttinu vida sona, ippa parthiya?
Chinna: Dei, avana pottu thazhlinaa, police straight-a inga than varum. Nee poi rendu thattu thattu avan sola mattan. sola mattan.
Aravinthan leaves immediately.

Vennila was walking down the hill and was daydreaming about how her featureless lover should look like. Suddenly, she bumbed into Aravinthan and she opened her eyes slowly, she saw her featureless lover becoming personified with the features of Aravinthan. But Aravinthan didn't waste any of his time admiring the beauty of Vennila. It took Vennila few minutes to come back to reality, then she made her way home. She was fully contaminated by the distinctive features of Aravinthan.

thodarum.

Edited by ~*Thamizhan*~ - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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so u r back

venila knows he is a rowdy then how she will fall for him??

good chapter 👏 👏 👏

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