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Posted: 7 years ago
#21
Yaar mujhe samajh nehi aa raha ki mein khushi se roun ya hasu 😃 😭
niyu di!!!! Aap mujhe jaante nehi ho but I'm a huge fan of your nibir stories and keep coming back to them even after all these years haha 😛
aur sab log di bulaate hai is liye I think you might be older than me so that's why di... 😳
anyways mai bata nehi sakti ki how happy I am to see you back here writing stories like before!! 👏
Trust me I'm so happy someone's keeping our K khaandaan alive!! 😭
I am also publishing this year but aap ko yaha dekh sach mein khushi hui.
I can't wait to see what you have in store for us ❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
#22
Such a lovely update... waiting for next update eagerly
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: roaiba

Yaar mujhe samajh nehi aa raha ki mein khushi se roun ya hasu 😃 😭
niyu di!!!! Aap mujhe jaante nehi ho but I'm a huge fan of your nibir stories and keep coming back to them even after all these years haha 😛
aur sab log di bulaate hai is liye I think you might be older than me so that's why di... 😳
anyways mai bata nehi sakti ki how happy I am to see you back here writing stories like before!! 👏
Trust me I'm so happy someone's keeping our K khaandaan alive!! 😭
I am also publishing this year but aap ko yaha dekh sach mein khushi hui.
I can't wait to see what you have in store for us ❤️


Hum kamine rote nahi logon ko rulate hain so laugh 🤣
Chalo koi nahi abh Jan pehchaan kar lenge 😆
Aww. I am obliged 😳
I'll try to update soon 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Niyati_T


Hum kamine rote nahi logon ko rulate hain so laugh 🤣
Chalo koi nahi abh Jan pehchaan kar lenge 😆
Aww. I am obliged 😳
I'll try to update soon 😃


Haha sach kaha! Rulate toh woh hai jo dil dukhaate hai par aapne toh khush kar diya haha 😆
Jaan pehchaan ho gaye already 😛
Can't wait for the updates 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
#25
Mammmaaa🤗another wonderful update😳
I loved how u added pilani incident diclosure in this part as everyone of us wanted this to be disclosed to Kabir in the show by Nishu itself and here u did the right thing at right time and that too in a BEAUTIFUL WAY...!!!!!!!👍🏼 👏 It was painfully beautiful I must say and I loved how Kabir controlled Nishu's fear and make her feel comfortable and make her sleep peacefully in his arms and made him a mental note to protect her every single time HAYEE DIL LE LO FOR THAT PART WONDERFULLY WRITTEN❤️

And fav moment came when he was adoring her at morning😳

I want to giv u tight jhappi for next two fav moments...🤗It was super chakka frm U Mamaaa

1. When Kabir gave back to Viraj "Insaan ko Janne aur pehchanne mein farak hotha hai, aap Nisha ko jaanthe zarror hai par pehchante nahi" 👏

2. Kabir again gave back to Viraj "Aaj Nisha ko chai nahi coffee pasand hai jaise kal aap the aur aaj Main hu "👏


I loved how Nishu back hugged Kabir and Kabir made BF for her😳 Confess karthe karthe ruk q gaye and Actually Both knew they r falling fr eachother and its actually very interesting Mammaa waiting fr next part to knw kab tak n how they will control their feelings fr each other frm confessing 😆

Sorry fr super late comment again🤣
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Posted: 7 years ago
#26
Dil tham ke baith jao kamino Yeh update aisi waise nahi hai I hope ki Sab ko full on NiBir feels aaye[$]
So not wasting much time and just updating the next part and as always not proof read. Enjoy 😳

Part 3



Nisha and Kabir had arrived at Gangwal House for lunch as their were summoned by Dadaji.

Yaar Yeh log kahin Hume Honeymoon pe bhejna toh nahi chahte na??' Kabir exclaimed, Nisha just gave him a deadly stare and parked the scooty outside her house, Kabir shrugged and walked inside holding Nisha's hand in her. The entire family was sitting in the veranda with serious expressions on their faces.

Aao baitho, abh hum jo puche, uska sach sach jawab dena...'

Nisha and Kabir looked at each other and nodded.

Viraj Singh Rathore tumhare ghar kya kar rahe the??'

Kabir's eyes popped out in surprise while Nisha looked shocked.

Yehi soch rahe ho na Hume kaise pata chala?? Association ke Mr. Patel wahin Pados Main rehte hain unhone hi bataya hume... aur agar tumne jhut bola toh sach Hum unse jaan lenge... isse behtar hai ki tum hi Hume sach bata do..' Dadaji concluded.

She knew that if her family comes to know that Viraj is their new landlord they will force Nisha and Kabir to stay here and leave that house. She was about to signal Kabir to keep quiet but he blinked and assured her

Dadaji, Viraj ne humara ghar khareed liya hai.. abh vo humare Naye makan malik hain aur issliye vo humare saath hi reh rahe hain...'

Everyone gasped but Ramesh was fuming in anger

Pata nahi Yeh Viraj ko kya dikkat hai, Kyun Hume Shanti se nahi rehne deta Yeh...' he muttered

Theek hai, toh tum vo ghar chod do, Hum nahi chahte ki Viraj abha ur koi pareshaani Khadi kare..' Dadaji commanded, Kabir smiles at him or rather chuckled.

Mujhe laga hi tha ki aap kuch aisa khayenge Dadaji... Main aapko ek sawal puchun? Bura mat maniyega...'

Dadaji modded and encouraged Kabir to continue

Aap mujh pe yakeen nahi karte kya?? Aap ko nahi lagta ki Main aapki beti ka khyaal rakh sakta Hun?'

Nahi nahi Beta aisi koi baat nahi hai...' Laxmi said Humne aisa nahi kaha Kabir. Hume pura yakeen hai tumpe...'

Toh Bas Maa... Dadaji, aap vo ghar Hume issliye chodne ke liye keh rahe hain kyunki aapko darr hai ki Viraj Nisha ko hurt na kare... and main aapki Yeh chinta samjhta bhi Hun...'

He caught Nisha's hand and continued

I promise you ki Main Nisha ko bilkul hurt nahi hone dunga... Viraj ho ya koi bhi, Main kisi ko bhi Nisha ko Zara bhi tang nahi karne dunga...'

He looked at others to see if someone could support him. Ramesh and cousins nodded at him and he continued ...

Aur agar Nisha ka Viraj ke saath ko past hai toh uss main Nisha ki koi galti nahi hai... Main janta Hun Nisha ke saath kya hua hai aur Viraj ke saath kya hua... lekin Iss main uski kya galti hai, galti sirf Halaat ki thi aur kisi ki nahi... aur Main nahi chahta ki Nisha apni puri life kisi ke darr se bityaaye... main jis Nisha ko janta Hun vo fighter hai aur vo hamesha Jeeti hai...' he looked at Nisha and for a minute Nisha thought that he is talking about her past and not just her past with Viraj but also what happened in Pilani.

While Nisha and Kabir were lost in each other's eyes, everyone felt happy for them, especially Dadaji, he smiled to himself thinking that finally his Nisha had found the right match for herself. He cleared his throat to get everyone's attention

Theek hai Jaisi tumhari marzi... lekin yaad rakhna, Agar baat aage badi toh turant yahan aa jana... abh khana kha lo aur phir Sab kaam pe chalte hain..' everyone nodded and followed him to the dinning hall.

Before this small meeting, Laxmi was worried about Nisha and was about to ask her if Kabir treated her properly but now her question was answered on its own. She knew that Kabir will always protect her daughter and treat her like a queen.

After lunch Kabir went to the shop with everyone while Nisha came back home. She found the door open and she shook her head, she knew that Viraj was home but she didn't want to talk to him. She had been avoiding this in the morning as well because she was agitated at Viraj's behaviour. Inspire of being so mature and responsible, he took such low step just to create trouble in her life. At the same time she was thankful that she had found Kabir as her partner who understood her so well and was ready to do anything for her. She came out of her thoughts and walked inside the house to the kitchen to have some water.

Viraj who was sitting on the sofa watching television got up and followed her

Nisha... please humari baat suniye...' he called her out but she didn't respond to his call

Nisha.. aap iss tarah Hume ignore Kyun kar rahe hain.. Akhir galti kya hai humari...' he asked. Nisha faked laughter and spoke

Aapko sach Main nahi pata Mr. Rathore ki aapki galti kya hai?'

Nahi.. hum nahi jante ki humne aisa kya kiya hai ki aap humare itna naraz hai...'

Main aapse naraz nahi Hun Mr. Rathore, kyunki naraz hum kisi apne se hote hain aur mera aapse koi Rishta nahi hai...now please excuse me because I don't think I owe you an explanation' Nisha gave him a cold stare and started walking towards her room when Viraj caught her by her arm and Nisha hissed because of his strong hold. Viraj immediately left her hand and said

Please Nisha.. humari baat toh sunnye.. aap issliye naraz hai na ki hum yahan aapke saath rehne aaye.. lekin uski wajah Yeh hai ki hum aapke saath aapke paas rehna chahte hain.. aur aapko batana chahte hai ki hum aapke liye sahi hai vo do kaudi ke Kabir nahi...'

Kabir who was about to walk in heard Viraj hell his name.. he stopped in his tracks and just peeped inside. He saw Nisha fuming in anger. He was worried that she would loose her temped thus walked in quickly but halted as Nisha started speaking ...

Jaban sambhal ke baat kijiye Mr. Rathore, aap already bohut badtameezi kar chuke hain.. pehle aapne meri insult ki, Maine kuch nahi kaha... apni meri family ko insult ki lekin phir bhi unhone aapka maan rakha... lekin abh aap mere husband ki insult kar rahe hain Aur Yeh Main tolerate nahi karungi...' she took slow steps in Viraj's direction and pointed a finger at him

Kabir nahi balki filhal aap Mujhe do kaudi ke insaan laga rahe hain... jo iss hadd tak chale gaye ki meri shadishuda zindagi Main problems create karne aagaye...'

Viraj laughed and faced the other side, he saw Kabir standing there and mocked him

Konsi shaadi Nisha, hum jante hain ki aapki Yeh shaadi ka sach kya hai...'

He looked at both Nisha and Kabir simultaneously.

Hum jante hain ki aap dono ne contract marriage ki hai and teen mahino main Kabir aapko chod ke London chale jayenge... aur phir toh aap humare paas wapas aa hi jayenge..'

Kabir wanted to wipe off that smirk on his face thus his took rapid and furious steps in his direction. Kabir was about to punch him but Nisha caught his hand..

Ek aur galtfami Mr. Rathore? Aapko nahi lagta ki aaj kal aap kuch zyada hi galatfamiyaan paal rahe hain?? Aapko yehi lagta hai na ki Main Aaj bhi aapse pyaar karti Hun aur Kabir ke saath maine sirf ek contract marriage ki hai..theek phir aaj aapki Yeh galat fami bhi Door kar hi deti hun..' without a warning she caught Kabir's face and turned her towards her, bending his head a-bit she stood on her toes and placed her lips on his.

Both Viraj and Kabir were taken back by Nisha's action. She looked at Viraj with the corner of her eye and slightly patted Kabir on his cheek to bring him back to reality and signalled him, Kabir taking a cue of what she meant, placed his hands on her waist and pulled her closer to him. They both smiled in between the kiss and broke after what felt like an eternity to all of them.

Nisha rested her head against Kabir and tried to calm her racing heart. Kabir cupped her face and hugged her. He looked at Viraj and raised his eyebrows. Giving him a sour look Viraj went towards his room as Kabir crashed on the sofa with Nisha on top of him. Nisha wrapped her arm around his neck and Kabir's hands were wrapped around her waist. They sat on the sofa breathing heavily with their eyes close trying to understand what just happened ...

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Kaisa laga??? Comment karke batana zaroor next time Agar PM chahiye then Buddy me 😳




Part 4
Edited by Niyati_T - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Reswaa aftr soo longgg right after U mammaaa feels soo soo soo gud
Unres😆

Mujhse next part ka teaser padhke raha nahi gaya mamaaa☺️ 🤪 SO main aa gayi unres karne🤣

Okay It was a Blashing Update aaa☺️ Nishu ne toh Kabir ke saath saath mereko bhi "O" kar diaa apne Kisswaaa seee☺️ 🤪

Viraj aap plss jaavoo nah N Hamare NiBir ko akelaa chod dooo😎

I really loved how Nishu stood up for her hubby just like Kabir Made her family understud How he is capapble of protecting her frm all the khatras including viraj👏 Lovely update mamaaa👍🏼


Waiting fr Next part😳 And Haaan Teaser to ek dammm ☺️ ❤️ cheee😈 🤣
Edited by SaruSenan - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#28
Res ..
The way kabir made nisha's family believe that he can take care of herself was nice ... Also directly indirectly indicating nisha that she can fight like she did in the past was touching ... 😊👏

And then the argument with viraj and the beautiful outcome shocked everyone😳😳😳

This made me blush 😳😳😳

Waiting for the next update ... 😃
Edited by poornima_15 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#29
Dekho Kamino.. jaldi jaldi comment aur unres karo, next part bhi ready hai 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
#30
AYIII!!! Holy f***!!! Mummaaa yeh kya tha!? Sh** I can't handle this omg I need to frickin breathe!!! Wait I'll be back-


I am telling you. This was a full on total blushing wala update and I kid you not, I'm sitting on my bed and smiling like a complete fool and having troubles breathing

Only NiBir can do this to me and now you did!!! This update was AWE-SOME!!!

Ab kyuki aapne bola next is ready, please update now!!!! I can't wait

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