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Posted: 7 years ago
#51
Truth be told, the very first update was such a refreshing update. All those memories of the show came back so easily, flowed in smoothly, courtesy your story.
I loved loved loved binge reading these five updates 🤗
Every update maintained the NiBir equation. Add it Viraj ko jalaoing and this turned into an adorable read 😆

Everything was too good, be it Nisha opening up to Kabir, trusting him in less than a fortnight, kissing him impulsively or defending him.

Kabir ki toh kya baat kare. His assurance given to the Gangwals was a very beautiful scene <3

The kiss and the aftereffects were perfect! Kabir's confession was uber cute.

And of course, the fact that Nisha realised without any stubbornness 😆

The GM was 🤣

Aur yeh PDA pyaar ka faily ailaan kabse ho gaya 🤣


I enjoyed every bit of it Niyu 🤗 Never really expected a PM for NiBiral anymore. You gave me something pleasantly surprising :)


Waiting for he update,
Krishi (agar mera naam bhul gaye ho toh :P)
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Posted: 7 years ago
#52
Awesome part ...
The misunderstood talks 😆
Their slow steps getting closer to each other😳
Kabir roaming shirtless ...😆

And bb still has doubt that they are pretending😆😳

Update soon😃😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#53
Oh she did moved on. ...
Shirtless kabir gave me too much ideas... N i can't help my giggles reading this update...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: Black_Maniac

Truth be told, the very first update was such a refreshing update. All those memories of the show came back so easily, flowed in smoothly, courtesy your story.

I loved loved loved binge reading these five updates 🤗
Every update maintained the NiBir equation. Add it Viraj ko jalaoing and this turned into an adorable read 😆

Everything was too good, be it Nisha opening up to Kabir, trusting him in less than a fortnight, kissing him impulsively or defending him.

Kabir ki toh kya baat kare. His assurance given to the Gangwals was a very beautiful scene <3

The kiss and the aftereffects were perfect! Kabir's confession was uber cute.

And of course, the fact that Nisha realised without any stubbornness 😆

The GM was 🤣

Aur yeh PDA pyaar ka faily ailaan kabse ho gaya 🤣


I enjoyed every bit of it Niyu 🤗 Never really expected a PM for NiBiral anymore. You gave me something pleasantly surprising :)


Waiting for he update,
Krishi (agar mera naam bhul gaye ho toh :P)


Damn , I have been waiting for your comments Lady! 🥱
The fact that we all craved this quick confession in the show is what made me write an instant and straight confession 😆
Iss update se hi PDA has become Pyaar ka Daily Ailaan 🤣
Even I was surprised that I actually am writing on NIBir after sooo long 🤣
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Posted: 7 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: mansi_as18

Oh she did moved on. ...

Shirtless kabir gave me too much ideas... N i can't help my giggles reading this update...


Abhi toh aur IDEAS aayenge 😉 😳 🤣
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Posted: 7 years ago
#56
I hope previous part ne Sab ka GM activate kar diya hai 😳
Because this one is having a little more ahem ahem' content 😳
Kyunki chingari laga gai hai; bas aag jalna baki hai 😳
Enjoy the next part 😳

Part 6


Nisha had come back from market after buying some ice creams for her cousins she called Kabir but didn't get a response. Keeping the things in the kitchen she walked to their bedroom.

" Kabir, kitna time lega jaldi aa na Sab aate hi honge " she complained

" Haan aaya... Kabir Walked out of the shower only in his tracks and there were water droplets on his bare chest. Nisha just ogled at him and he smirked. He took steps in Nisha's directions that made her step back

" Kya hua wifey?! Kuch kuch ho raha hai kya?? He asked seductively. Nisha opened her mouth to speak but failed to utter a word and shut her mouth again. Kabir's smirk grew bigger as Nisha's back hit the wall and he pinned her between him and the wall. He kept looking in her eyes and bent a little. Nisha closed her eyes and parted her lips, she was anticipating a kiss that never came! Kabir whispered in her ears in a husky voice " Mujhe shirtless dekhni ki addat daal le, because aise Kai Mauke aayenge Jab Main... aur tu ... dono shirtless honge ... you know what I mean right??! "

Nisha's opened her eyes in shock and looked into his eyes! His intentions scared her but at the same time gave her cold shivers of excitement. She bit her lip and looked in his eyes, all of a sudden she felt bold and she didn't realise that what was meant to be in her head was spoken out loud " I don't think I can wait for that to happen "

Now it was Kabir's turn to gasp, he faked an expression of shock on his face. Nisha blushed heavily and smacked him. He laughed openly pulling her in a hug, and without caring that he was wet or what Nisha his her face in his bare chest and just then the door bell rang.

" Aagai puri toli, Tu jake inka welcome kar, Main T-shirt daalke aata Hun bahar.. he winked at her and started rambling through the closet

As soon as Nisha opened the door the entire group hugged her. Kabir came out of the door and ran to them to join them breaking the hug after a minute he spoke

" Aww, kitne pyaare hai mere Sasural wale... Sunday ke din aagaye apni Nishu bro ke saath time spend karne...

Nisha glared at him while Aman replied to Kabir

" Kya Karen Kabir, tum humse humari Nishu ko Bhaga ke le aaye na issliye hum aaj usska Badal lenge...

" Agar isse Bhagana hota toh Mount Abu Main bhaga leta, wapas Jaipur aata hi nahi iske saath. Main toh Haq se isse apna bana chahta tha... saying so he pulled Nisha's hand and took her in his embrace. ( Imagine, MishRi Signature pose )

" Chalo Sab andar chalte hain Nisha changed the topic and walked inside with everyone.

Viraj who had been looking at this family bond had a bittersweet smile on his face because he realised that he officially had no family. After Bua ji's betrayal he had no one except Daadji in his life whom he could address as family.

While everyone was taking their seats Kabir pulled Nisha to sit along with him on the side sofa from where there were diagonal to Viraj's window. Kabir was sure that Viraj would keep an eye on Nisha. He knew that Viraj had still not given up on Nisha and he still assumed that Nisha was in love with him. Whatever he did was not just PDA, it was to prove Viraj that Nisha had moved on.

Sukku went to the DVD player and attached it to TV, he inserted a CD in it and took the remote as if he was holding a mic and spoke

" Toh bhaiyon, behano aur meri behan ke pati, aaj Hum dekhenge, humare ghar ka, Gangwal house ki Sab se historical journey! Nisha aur Kabir ke shadi ke videos

Nisha threw a pillow at him while others laughed, Kabir patted her shoulder and signalled her to let go. They started watching their Sangeet video. Since the TV was in middle of the hall, Viraj too had a clear view of the screen and he was not visible to anyone except Nisha and Kabir, but it was only Kabir who noticed him because Nisha was too engrossed in watching the videos and chatting with her cousins.

" Hayeee kitne cute laga rahe ho tum dono " Dolly commented while Nisha and Kabir's performance was being played in the clip

" Main toh Hun hi talented Kabir raised his collar and praised himself. Nisha folded the collar again and raised her eyebrows at him making him pout.

" Ek minute, ek minute, Sukku video pause kar, Haan abhi zoom kar zara... Kirti said and looked at Nisha and Kabir "Yeh tum dono uss pillar ke peeche kya kar rahe the...

Nisha gasped as she remembered that moment when Kabir kissed her on her cheek and their conversation

" Tell tell, kya kar rahe the tum dono wahan?? Dolly demanded

" Tum logon ko sacchi Janna hai ?? Kabir asked seriously. They nodded , "Okay

He placed a loud-wet-kiss on Nisha's cheek bringing her back to reality as she was still lost in the memories those moments.

"Hum yeh kar rahe the wahan... Kabir winked at everyone making them giggle and blush. He laughed at their expressions.

"Sirf yehi kiya tha ya aur kuch.. Matlab... you know... sirf cheek pe hi kiss kiya tha na?? Dolly teased Nisha who winched.


( Note: If you see the scene in properly when Kabir kisses Nisha on her cheek from other side of the pillar, it's just Kabir's face on Nisha's face )


" Actually your right, abhi toh tum Sab samne ho aur yahan baache bhi hai issliye exactly vo nahi kiya jo uss waqt wahan kar rahe the.. abhi sirf bataya ki hum kya kar rahe the... Kabir replied, Nisha covered her face in her hands making everyone laugh, Kabir pulled her in his arms to let her hide her face in his chest. Nisha wrapped her arms around his waist while Kabir placed his hand on her shoulder and that is how they watched the rest of the videos

" Pata hai guys, tum dono ko dekh ke lagta nahi hai ki tum dono ki Arrange marriage hui hai, I mean tumhari understanding aur Tumhara pyaar dekhe koi bhi kahega that tumhari love marriage hai Umesh complimented Nisha and everyone agreed to it

" Yaar Umesh, Arrange marriage Bol ke meri love life ko boring mat bana ... humari bhi love marriage hi hai. Yaad nahi uss din Dadu ne kaha tha ki hum sirf formalities puri kar rahe hai. Kyunki tumhari behan ne Mujhe usse pehle hi clean blow kar diya tha... he looked at Nisha and continued " Jab vo meri bahaon Main daudte hue hai, aur phir Jab Main isse Mount Abu Main wapas mila, uss waqt hi issne Mera Dil Chura liya tha... uss raat toh bas officially Main iska hua tha..

Nisha looked at him and tears had started forming in her eyes. Could he ever get enough of expressing his love for her? She knew he skipped a few details of their story but what was important was every minute he would confess his love to her in some way or the other. She didn't mind him getting close to her or kissing her in front of her cousins or Viraj, she felt happy that he wouldn't shy away from expressing his love even in front of people. And did she actually deserver a lover like him? Kabir shook his head as if silently saying her not to cry and she smiled at him.

The cousins were in aww of them and really happy for Nisha that she had found Kabir. They could tell that she was madly and genuinely in love with this guy. Kirti turned around to pick her open from the table and noticed Viraj at the window of his room. She smirked as she knew that he witnessed the entire scene. Viraj deserved to see how happy Nisha is without him in her life. Viraj caught her eye and ashen he walked inside, shutting the window. Kirti clicked a few pictures of Nisha and Kabir who were smiling at each other and were still lost in their eye lock

"Hmm.. Hashtag, Cute and Adorable Couple.. posted on my social media... akhir duniyaawale bhi toh dekhe ki humare NiBir kitne cute hain..

"NiBir? Everyone asked in union

" How blah... NiBir as in Nisha and Kabir ka Moniker... you guys don't follow celebs kya?? Aaj kal toh har pair ka ek moniker hai.. it's so boring and tedious to address them with their names in one sentence, issliye moniker better hain... so Nisha and Kabir ka moniker aaj se NiBir hai...

" How cutes Dolly giggled and clapped her had in glee and others chuckled at her. Nisha shook her head at her filmy sister and went to bring some ice creams for everyone. Kirti called Kabir to a corner because she needed to ask him something

" Jiju, I know you genuinely love Nisha, but you didn't say all those things just because Viraj was hovering over?

Kabir was little surprised that Kirti noticed Viraj, and he knew the best thing was to be honest with her

" Kirti, Maine jo bhi kaha that is exactly what I feel for Nisha and yes I did know that Viraj was hovering over and shayaad issliye I didn't shy away to say those things. Jab se Viraj yahan aaya hai vo ek hi raat laga ke baitha hai that Nisha loves him and she will go back to him. In fact usse toh Yeh bhi lagta hai ki maine aur Nisha ne jhuti shadi ki hai toh make him jealous! And I want to clear this thing out of his mind. Issliye main ek mauka nahi Chodta Nisha ke liye apni feelings express karne ka... so that I remind him constantly that I love Nisha he sighed and looked at Nisha who was smiling and serving ice cream to everyone. He too smiled looking at her

" And Nisha loves you. Hum Sab yeh baat confidently keh sakte hain Kabir, because humari Nishu tere saath jitni khush hai, jitna smile vo tere saath karti hai ussne Viraj ke saath bhi shayaad kabhi utna nahi kiya tha. And I am really glad ki Tu ek teer se do nishane maar raha hai.. Nisha ke liye apni feelings express kar raha hai aur Viraj ko uske kiye ki Saza de raha hai.. he deserves this pain because ussne Nisha ko isse bhi zyada pain diya hai and now he should see how happy Nisha is without him Kirti smirked at Kabir and they hi-fi-ed each other and joined everyone. After a lot of fun, teasing and chit-chat the cousins bid a goodbye to them. Kabir pinned Nisha to the nearest wall and without a warning he started kissing her and Nisha reverted the kiss with equal passion, "Tonight will be special! He winked at her and kissed her again!

~~~




Comment Karna mat bhulna 😆
Part 7
Edited by Niyati_T - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#57
Res
Unres😳
Firse first comment karne mil raha hai. Bada accha lagta hai 😆
I loved the update Niyu 🤗

Nisha's confession had me😲
Haye, this keeps on getting better😳
Their little moment.

The idea of watching their video was amazing.

And of course, the teasing and Kabir doing PDA 😆
I was smiling throughout😳


Viraj bechara😆
And the Kabir-Kirti bit was adorbs.

You know, there were things that has shifted to the back of my mind, lile Kirti's How Blah and Dolly's english. It is too good to come back to all of this

Thank you so much for that PM. I don't think I would have got to feel this way for them again otherwise.😳

Continue soon😉
Edited by Black_Maniac - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#58
Ufff... Ab mai to kuch keh hi nhi sakti... Tonight will be special k baad... *fainting spree*
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Posted: 7 years ago
#59
Kuch toh ho raha hai 😉 ahh I love to see Viraj's jalan and cousins support. This one was so cute!! and the hotness you created in the beginning and towards the end.. Ab toh aur wait nehi hoga, jaldi update karo 😆 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
#60
Very nice update!
Cousins Masti and all was good!

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