#2 NIBIR FF - Ek Main Aur Ek Tu (chap 33 up pg 54)*9/7* - Page 34

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: ananya2010

Awesome update.

Loved it.
Nisha handled Kabir rightly and took a decision.
Let's see what Kabir does now.
Continue soon.
Waiting for the next update.
Thanks for the PM dear.


Thanks Ananya 😳
Will try to update soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Thanks dear 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hey Anmol thanks for the PM
I will definitely read it, when I get some time 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: msdfan

Hey Anmol thanks for the PM

I will definitely read it, when I get some time 😊


No problem dear take your time 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome update
Kabir wants to gift nisha a pearl necklace
So cute
But again sab kuch gadbad hogaya
Now nisha needs to teach kabir a good lesson
Update soon
Sorry for late
Edited by rishita91 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: rishita91

Awesome update

Kabir wants to gift nisha a pearl necklace
So cute
But again sab kuch gadbad hogaya
Now nisha needs to teach kabir a good lesson
Update soon
Sorry for late


Thanks rishita 😉
Yeah he loves her alot but many times behave impulsive, which lead him to this situation in which he is today 😆
Nisha kya karlegi? Kuch nhi ab jo karna hai Kabir Ko karna hai 😆
Will be updating soon 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
Why kabir always do like this ... Everything was so beautiful and going so nice ... And his insecurities took it all again ...
The best part was nisha repilied very nicely , he should be taught a lesson for better ... And the next step she took was perfect , she went without informing him ...

Hope he understands and won't repeat the same
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: poornima_15

Why kabir always do like this ... Everything was so beautiful and going so nice ... And his insecurities took it all again ...

The best part was nisha repilied very nicely , he should be taught a lesson for better ... And the next step she took was perfect , she went without informing him ...

Hope he understands and won't repeat the same


Kabir is like this only, he is damn possessive.
How can he handle happy moments, he had to spoil it by this or any other way 😆
Hope her reply fill some sense in his mind.
Will be updating shortly.
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Posted: 7 years ago



Chapter 31



Nisha please pick up the call " Kabir let out his frustration over phone, he was calling her from the time he reached to Mumbai.

After their conference, their flight scheduled late night. After having dinner with DoSa Kabir started calling her only to hear dial tone again and again. He couldn't call her in flight but as soon as they land to Mumbai, his constant calling session got started. Only to hear her dial tone.

At a time he find that her number was busy with other call. It was more than one hours but still the call was on from nisha's side. He was frustrated. But he can't give up also.

Kabir was calling her and doing house hold work too. After cleaning he went to his room saw time on wall clock, it was 5 in morning, he wonder whom Nisha was talking. He was lost in thought when his phone ring waking him up from his daydream.

He was pleasantly surprised, he don't only received voice call from nisha but video call from her. He immediately pick up the call. No hii, no hello, rather where she is, he directly asked her whom she was talking few minutes ago.

Nisha chuckled bitterly at him, she sighed deeply. Then got up from her bed and said.

Hey Kabir good morning! See this is my room. I'm staying in a hotel, far away from you. I'll show you whole room okay! " She said make a round of room while Kabir looked at her with confusion

Nisha what the hell ? Why you didn't come to home ? And what excuse you give to dolly ? " Kabir was frustrated badly

Did you see the washroom?" Nisha replied as if not heard him.

What the hell Nisha!! why are you ignoring my questions ?" He asked still looking at screen of phone

Well I had called you Kabir have little faith and patience I had called you for a reason. " Nisha retorted at him

Kabir looked her blankly, but confusion was still covered his eyes.

After showing her whole hotel room, she come to back to her bed and said " I know you are wondering why I'm staying in this hotel, I'm here because I don't want see you, but if I don't tell you where I'm now then you'll think rubbish and would think that I'm cheating on you. So Mr. Kabir Singh Rathore I want to be away from you, far away from you. I need to calm myself down.
If I go to dolly house, you would come there. And I don't want to see your face. So I give that excuse to dolly and asked her to not reveal it infront of Karthik.
And last, this is last time I'm calling you, after this I'll switch off my phone because I don't want you to trace my number and come to me. And I was talking to sukku at that time, he's in Italy." Nisha said angrily gritting her teeth which make Kabir shocked at words

Nisha let's so..." Kabir tried to talk her but Nisha cut him off by saying " humare beech sirf ek topic pe baat hoga vo hai tere insecurity ke baare me, if you say I come right there, right now but I know you won't talk about this so let it be Kabir. Or kuch main sunugi nhi, tere insecurity ke alwa hum humare break up ka baat kar sakte hai or kuch nhi "

Break up ??" Kabir choked hearing break up word

Yeah... Okay so tell me what did you choose ? Shall I come there ? You have courage to talk about your insecurities ? Tell me ?" Nisha asked closing her eyes for a moment as she was burning in anger at him, she wants to beat him but this time she had to use others way to tackle him

Nisha... I..." He fumble again

Good bye kabir... Mood hua toh call karungi ya Jaipur jane se pehle " Nisha said and cut the call and as she said she switched off her phone

While Kabir was shocked her sudden move. He again tried to call her back but as she had told him she'll switch off her phone, he only only hear voice message saying her phone is off.


Nisha's POV

Why can't he trust me little bit, he never asked me how I'm ? But only concern about whom I was talking. He is an asshole!

Omg I'm literally cursing him. Why can't he understand me ? God when we'll able to sort out this. When this time will be over.

Shh nisha! Forget about that jerk and enjoy this time without him. " I mummer to myself and slept again

After few hours I spread my arm to hug kabir, but grabbed only duvet which had covered my lifeless body without Kabir.

I never realised that tears started build up in corner of my eyes. I'm missing him badly, I want him now, I love him. But couldn't go to him. His possessiveness making me choked, I can't breath properly. He need to understand us.

I never realised that I spend my whole day being useless on bed. And being crying for him too.

'That's it Nisha you should get up and enjoy your privacy, why are you wasting your time him, he is still taking you for granted forget him and enjoy yourself' my mind told me to do so.

Actually she is right I shouldn't waste my time here, I know Kabir well he will put all force together to find me, I know him better he couldn't trace me by my phone but he had his other way to trace me. Before he could find me I should enjoy my freedom.

Making that mental note I ordered those food which Kabir always stop me from eating, which has more calories and not good for health.

After completing my food I need some fresh air. I went to balcony of the room as my room is in 12th floor. My balcony was opened to back side of the hotel where a big swimming pool was situated.

I couldn't hold my desire to swim, Kabir never let me do that because of my swimming dresses, I used cover my whole body by wearing frock style swimming suit but he always had problems, because other people or mostly boys stare me when I go to swim he use to say that and tried to stop me many times.

But today he's not here and it's night too so I can go swim freely. Without wasting my other second I rid off my cloths and went to check on wardrobe for swimsuit but my bad luck I didn't packed any for Goa trip. I looked my self down I'm wearing lace inner wears, definitely can't go out.

I dropped idea of swimming now, but tomorrow after shopping I'll definitely gonna swim for long time. For now I must sleep.

Next day as I have planned that I'll go out for shopping and after that I'll go to swimming. But it was noon and many people around swimming pool so I dropped idea of going now but in evening I'll definitely be in swimming pool.

Rest of the I spend thinking rather planning how to spend this days without him and way to stop thinking of him. Suddenly an idea pop in my mind I immediately called dolly by hotel's phone, I switched on my phone to take dolly's phone number. I know Kabir had put his men on work to find me, then I immediately switched it off. I called her and told her same about my idea. I know she'll agree instantly and yes she did.

After making plan with her, I cut the call and realise that when I switched on my phone I received many missed call from him, my baby was still calling me but I'm no mood to talk him now.

In evening I went to swimming pool wearing two piece swimsuit. And I know I looked literally hot in that, if Kabir were here he would be burnt seeing me.

Kabir was right I grabbed many people's attention rather I say boys attention towards me. But today I'm here to enjoy only forgetting about rest of the world. I don't give damn to them and continued my swimming.

I know many boys go mad after seeing me such a way, drooling over my hot body, but I care less. After a long while I come out of pool, wearing my robe I headed back to my room to get ready for amazing night out. In between many boys approached me who had seen me pool. I told them clearly that I'm taken.

I know right now I'm angry on Kabir but I can't cheat on him, but if he continue his behaviour then surely we will have a break up rather I will break up with him. Then I can do whatever I want.

I got ready for night hurriedly, and went to the location where dolly had mentioned. Tonight will be girls night out at Liza's family club. Yes I was surprised when dolly told me that Liza's family owned a club in Mumbai. Basically Liza is Christian and they had big chaib of their own club. We'll surely going to get huge discount.

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Kabir's POV

Oh god, what should I do to her? Why she don't understand my situation ? Nisha is behaving so childish. When she'll grow up ?

She cut the call before I could say anything. "Nisha yaar I love you! I can do anything for you but not this which may break our relationship, I know after hearing my fear you'll left me, I'll die instantly" I spoke out to this 4 wall.

Nisha I'm also not going to give up soon, I'll get you soon and bring you back to our home. I take oath in mind. And called my most trusted man in Mumbai, whom I have hired long back, he helped me alot at the time of Rishabh case. Now when I shifted to Mumbai he is also in Mumbai. He's my personal spy and bodyguard. He's so trust worthy, in the earth after Karan, he only know about my relationship with Nisha.

I dialled Vihan number, I filled him with details and asked him to find out about Nisha as soon as possible. He get into the work of finding Nisha.

Nisha is way too intelligent, she never switch on her phone so Vihan could trace her, in evening I got call from Vihan and he told me about that his failed attempt to trace Nisha.

Right now I'm burning in anger, just one time, just one time I'll get hold of Nisha then I'm surely gonna teach her a lesson. I thought myself then moved to bed for a sleep which was far away from my eyes

I'm feeling so alone in this house without Nisha, my thoughts revolves around her only. I never realise I spend my whole day thinking about her. It was night when I landed on bed where I used to cuddle her. I'm dying to touch her now. My thoughts revolves around those beautiful night where she was in my arm and sleeping peacefully, I use to stare her gorgeous face.

I'm feeling alone, I'm going through what Nisha had gone through. I'm ready to tell her everything but what if she left me?

Next day I woke up, I'm missing her! I still dialled her number in hope she would pick up the call. But no.

"Nisha baby come back to me" I mumbled again. Rest of the day was blur as I was still in dreamland with my Nisha.

At after noon I received call from Vihan saying he traced nisha. He told me she had switched on her phone for few seconds. Then tell me her location which was near Juhu beach. I laughed little as it was few minutes away from our home.

She's smart, I may be search her whole Mumbai but never near areas to our house. Ohh I love her so much.

I wasted no time and went to the hotel near Juhu beach, it takes us both evening, we are still searching her.

Our hard work results was in front of our eyes, as I saw Nisha going back in hotel she was wet. Why?

Damn! My eyes pop out when I realise that she went to swimming pool.

I run to grab her but I was little behind her so she was in lift when I enter into that 7 star hotel. She didn't saw me.

I went to reception and asked about her "may I know in which room Nisha gangwal is staying ?" I asked her politely not showing my frustration after seeing Nisha wet.

Wait a second sir" she told me and check in something in her computer then after few seconds frowning at me she told me that there is no women name Nisha Gangwal staying in this hotel.

She's smarter then my thoughts. I can't believe Nisha changed her name to stay this hotel. 'You gonna pay alot nisha, let me just hold you once' I thought then smile at the receptionist

"Actually can you make search of Ananya singh?" I asked her it was nisha's fake id. I know about this. I know this hotel wouldn't take person who don't have id, I'd Nisha hadn't shown her real id which means she had shown her fake id obviously.

Yes sir! Her room number is 1212" she informed me "sir shall I tell mam she had visitors"

No need I had talked her already " I refused her politely.

After that I went to her room, found it locked. What she had seen me ? No ways I remember clearly she had not seen me. Then where did she had gone ?

I come back to home being hopeless. I had saw her but couldn't hold her. I'm really upset from myself.

"Nisha I'm sorry come back. I'm ready to tell you everything" I mumbled again

I grabbed my phone and opened gallery to look at her pics. My network data was on and I'm receiving continuously message from Saurabh. I was frustrated as in every second the phone buzz. I was irritated, open his message, it immediately brighten my face as I saw nisha with dolly.

Saurabh told me that girls went out for party, and dolly had post those pictures in her insta account. Dolly or any other girls not told about this plan to any other their bf.

Seeing photo I realise that these girls are our colleagues. Which includes liza, dolly, kritika, Nisha. Ohh I guess there bonding get strong in that Goa trip.

I called Saurabh and told him to come to same club as soon as possible with other boys too.

We were searching for our respective girls, they had come to very high standard club, this is one of the famous club of the Mumbai. Getting here passes is very difficult. Yes I paid double amount for all to get in.

We are still looking here and there when people screamed rather guys of the club at one side. I moved toward that area. What I saw, it made my blood boiled right there.

I saw Nisha was dancing on pole and other were cheering for her, rather eye rapping her. This girl is out of her mind ?

She immediately stopped seeing me there, I know my this look may scared her as I'm damn angry. If something touch my body it immediately get burnt, I'm that angry now.

She instantly got down and went to dolly. She's is not good company for Nisha. I will make sure that dolly should stay away from Nisha. Dolly many times encouraged Nisha to go wild and do crazy stuffs from her childhood.

By the time Saurabh too spotted dolly and other girls we approach to them. They were displeased to see us. Especially Nisha, she was shocked, scared, upset and angry at same time after seeing me.

Other guys engaged their girl with them, leaving me and Nisha alone.

Come near " I spoke I don't what was in her mind she flinched hearing me or may be I was loud and my anger reflected

She took small step towards me and come near. Still being hell scared as she was holding her hand tightly.

She was drunk, yes I knew it, I called near to check whether she was drunk or not.

What are you doing here Nisha? And why the f**k you were doing stripping pole dance ??" Anger was reflected, she is wearing skin tight crop top, paired with shorts which barely come to her mid thigh with long boot. And wearing such dress she was doing pole dance ?

She is so dead, I won't leave her today. "Kabir I can explain" Nisha said slowly still looking down.

Now you're not going to say anything, now I'll tell you rather I will teach you a good lesson" I said as I grab her and take her to her hotel room to teach her a good lesson.

To be continued



Edited by Anmol333 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Itna chota update kyu likhti hai? Let it reach a conclusion at least.
Phir uske Baad bolegi ki likhne ka Mann nahi karta.
Kya Karu main tera?
Jaldi se next part bhi likhke update kar.

Good update, btw. Loved it. But what are you turning Kabir into? A full-fledged, creepy, psychotic, asshole? I can't see Kabir like this. It hurts. Next update jaldi karde behen. Saalo saal tarsaati hai ek update keliye :|
Edited by -DrunkenMonk- - 7 years ago

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