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Posted: 8 years ago
#11
nothings brings note happiness than a NiBir story...
loved the concept...NiBir and their two monsters...
and the prologue was niceand coming to second part...it was 👏👏
love it to the core...cont the soonishh
Edited by cutie_ammu - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: Anmol333

Very very nice update...

Introduction part 😃😆
Loved it ❤️
Kabir and Avni are same chubby chubby 😆
Nisha kitne ache se samjhti hai na kabir Ko
Baby bird wala part cute tha 😃
I'm really eager to know what had happened yesterday, why kabir was scared...
Update soon

thanks anmol 😊
yes kabir and avni both are same and so does nisha and adi ...😆
Jada wait nai karna padega Next part me pata chal jayega ki what happened😆

Will try to update soon😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: cutie_ammu

nothings brings note happiness than a NiBir story...

loved the concept...NiBir and their two monsters...
and the prologue was niceand coming to second part...it was 👏👏
love it to the core...cont the soonishh

thank you soo much 😊 will try to continue soon 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#14
Hey Poornima😃
Bade dino baad mauka mil rha hai mujhe comment karne ka cz my exams got over😆
But exams k baad aur jyada lazy ho gyi hu😆
Isliye Res 😊
Would unres asap but I want the next part soon cz my res doesn't mean that I haven't read😉
Just my fingers are so lazy to type beecharo ne khoob likha hai naa papers me thoda aaram chahiye unko🤣

Continue soon

Unres😃

Ha to sabse pehle bhai title bohot daraawna tha honestly
When I read it, my first thought was like you know 'without her' so Nisha hai nai ki kuch ho gya use
phir jab 'A Day' par dhyan gaya then saans me saans aayi😆

Bachche log are superrr cute😳 and naughty also😉
But what makes them so is how you wrote it actually👏 Their pronunciation depicted the bestt👏👏👏 and that only made me to go all awww😳😳😳

Kabir papa handling them by smartly sitting on chair good idea👍🏼😆

But the star was the birdie's part❤️
And the gifts to Nisha that was also so light hearted and that whispering too👍🏼
Nisha understood that there's something which should be told😊

Overall, I never thought that I would read such a graceful OS but you made that true😳
Amazing!!!👏
Baccho ne to dil jeet lia ji❤️

Continue soon, waiting..



Edited by aNibirFan - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#15
Nice update😆
Adi and avni are cute and naughty also.
update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: aNibirFan

Hey Poornima😃

Bade dino baad mauka mil rha hai mujhe comment karne ka cz my exams got over😆
But exams k baad aur jyada lazy ho gyi hu😆
Isliye Res 😊
Would unres asap but I want the next part soon cz my res doesn't mean that I haven't read😉
Just my fingers are so lazy to type beecharo ne khoob likha hai naa papers me thoda aaram chahiye unko🤣

Continue soon

Sabse pehle badhai ho exams khatam hone ki khushi me 😉
Will be waiting for your comments ... And haan apna laziness bhagao ... Because mujhe bhi update chahiye😛😆
Will try to update soon😃
Edited by poornima_15 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: rishita91

Nice update😆

Adi and avni are cute and naughty also.
update soon

thank you😊 will try to update soon ... Asli naughtiness next update me milege 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Forum Ko kya ho gaya hai😕🤢
Ek Maa ki takleef bata raa hai aur doosra Pati ki😕😆
Just joking.
Awesome one.
I am really loving the whole concept.
The way you portrayed Kabir's love for the children and then for Nisha obiovusly 😉😳
I am really loving it.
Please update soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: 357159pikachu

Forum Ko kya ho gaya hai😕🤢

Ek Maa ki takleef bata raa hai aur doosra Pati ki😕😆
Just joking.
Awesome one.
I am really loving the whole concept.
The way you portrayed Kabir's love for the children and then for Nisha obiovusly 😉😳
I am really loving it.
Please update soon.

@ bold true🤣
kidding😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: poornima_15

Sabse pehle badhai ho exams khatam hone ki khushi me 😉
Will be waiting for your comments ... And haan apna laziness bhagao ... Because mujhe bhi update chahiye😛😆
Will try to update soon😃

@bold dhanyavaad😆
unres done
mere updates ko thoda tym hai🤣

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