NiBir SS- The Journey of Love - 2 (Completed)*2/5*

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

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Posted: 7 years ago

#181

That was the funniest Anmol

Loved it

Nisha and Kabir are treat to read

With a chapter like this it makes it more beautiful

Scenes were nicely written

Waiting for more

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 😊

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Anmol

@Anmol333

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#182

Originally posted by: roaiba
Eeh I've been waiting for this one too! Loved this part haha, Nisha ka chehra dekhne layak tha 😆 but yeah please update soon cause I don't want to forget what the story is about and have to read over and over again 😛 keep writing 😳

Thanks roaiba 😃

I completely understand you point. Even I read previous chapter before writing but you see I have 3 stories ongoing, writing each update make some gap. And I have studies too, I just had exam last week. I can't leave studies but else I can leave this all stories abruptly. And I know no one wants that. So please understand my situation too. I'm not doing this deliberately it happens because of situation.

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Anmol

@Anmol333

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Posted: 7 years ago

#183

Originally posted by: aNibirFan
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What was funny in this chapter I thought it's most boring chapter an ever 😛

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Anmol

@Anmol333

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Posted: 7 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: aNibirFan
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Superrr!!!!!

But thanks 😃

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Anmol

@Anmol333

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#185

Originally posted by: aNibirFan
God 😆😆😆
Hehe
Laughed like mad after months
Awesomeeesttt update yaar👏👏👏
JOL HAS ALWAYS BEEN MY FAVOURITEST😃😃
And You have made the fun multiplied⭐️

So, yeah first about that tickets🤣
Poora saaman khol diya and very funny and imagery description of how the scenes unfold yaar👏
Kabir is so unorganized and vo pizza ew 😛😆
I would react the same as Nisha finding such a guy😉😆
And vo khaane ke baad yaad aa jayega wala😆😆
Also the unison scene! My eyes could get a picture painted all through the narration!!

And that Umesh Aman twist😳
Awww how Nisha is shocked and frozen😆🤣
This is certainly the best update I've read in JOL2👏👏
It has all NiBir Things as in the show and lot better 😆
Fun! Twist! Whispers!
And the writing style
You have made me sooo much happy today❤️ love you lotsss🤗

Thank you neeru 😳😳😳

After long time I'm too smiling reading such a lovely comment.

You really made me happy by this lovely comment!

Ab tickets may be Kabir ke bag me ho sakti thi iss liye pura saamn hi toh kholenge na.

Kabir being always unorganised. Or pizza khane ka talent bhi sirf Kabir ke pass hai 😆😆

Tum kya koi bhi waise hi react karega 😆

Chapter 4 aagaya toh socha ab Raaz se parda hataya jaaye iss liye hope you get it what nibir was doing 😉

Abhi Nisha frozen hui hai ab Kabir ki baari 😆😆😉

I'm glad you liked it and happy too!

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Anmol

@Anmol333

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Posted: 7 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: LOVE.GOLD
That was the funniest Anmol
Loved it
Nisha and Kabir are treat to read
With a chapter like this it makes it more beautiful
Scenes were nicely written
Waiting for more
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon 😊

Thank you Goldie 😳

And I'll try to update soon!