La Proposta Nibir TS Epilgoue updated

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I am not sure if you guys will be satisfied. I am trying to right some sort of without fight shot for the first time. Do let me know how it is.

PART A

Bhopal is a beautiful city embraced by nature, helped by a large lake and with a calm and quiet environment, MOSTLY. But there was one house from where shouting voices could be heard. That was the Sharma house.

There was a young girl in the room have a heated argument with her father. Well the girl, Nisha, the father Ramesh and his wife Laxmi were all in the same room where Laxmi was standing silently in a corner and the other two were constantly fighting.

Ni- (angrily) Dad, why don't you understand! I really don't want to get married.

Ra- And what would be the possible reason?

Ni- I really don't need to tell you! (sarcastically)

Ra- Nisha, I really don't know what she (pointing at Laxmi) has taught you but you are meeting the guy today. (sternly) And remember you are not being asked here.

Ni- First of all, Mr. Ramesh Sharma don't you dare speak any anything ill about my mother because that won't really be good for you. (pointing a finger at him) And its better that you remember that I you cannot force me for doing anything for I will not restrain myself for filing a case against you.

Ra- (staring at Laxmi) This is what you have taught her! To send her own father to jail!

Laxmi kept her head down with tears in her eyes.

Ni- If you think that you are my father then why didn't you teach me?

Ra- Because I was busy in my work.

Ni- There you go! (taunting) Sending her father to jail! Trust me I would love to.

"Nisha" they heard someone shouting from the door.

Ni- Yeah! (sarcastically) There we have his savior! Come on! Join in! you were only left, Mr. Saurav Sharma.

Sa- Nisha, papa hain woh tere. Izzat se baat kar!

Ni- I would have agar woh uss layak hote toh! But trust me he isn't.

Ra- Nisha!!!!!!!!

Ni- What haan? Kya?

"Suniye ji! Ek baar unse kaaran toh sun li jiye!" they heard a melodious voice coming from the door.

Sa- Will you please shut up Sanvi!

Ni- You had shut your mouth long back. Now you shut Bhabhi's as well. Good going bhai!

Ra- (sternly) Nisha I really don't want any arguments now. Go and get ready. Those people will be here anytime now. You will or else that won't be good for your mother. I hope you know what I mean.

Nisha was about to speak something when she got reminded of the last time. The last time she did opposite to that of what was asked from her, his father hit her mother with his leather belt and her mother didn't say anything. Nisha was going to the police but her mother stopped her with her kasam. But this time it was about her life. She decided to pay back in the same way.

After some time the might be groom's parents arrived with the guy. Ramesh, Laxmi, Saurav and Sanvi went to greet them behaving like one happy family.

Ra- (to the guy) So what is your name?

Guy- It is Kabir Mehta!

Sa- (to Sanvi) go and call Nisha please Sanvi.

Sanvi went inside while the others were talking. Nisha was ready in a white crop top and white and cream skirt accompanied with the perfect long earnings and having open hair and wearing high pencil heels.

(IMAGINE HER LIKE THIS, the photo is not coming)

Sanvi- (shocked) Nisha ji, what is this?

Ni- (turned and got up) Bhabhi please do not ask anything or say anything. It is high time I speak up in their style. Please! I promise I won't let bhai even scratch you a bit but please bhabhi this is about my life. Please!

Sanvi and Nisha came out. Everyone was shocked. She went and stood on the corner of a sofa. Nisha gave a smirk to her father and brother who were sitting on the sofa beside. Finally the guy's mother broke the silence.

Vasundhara- (Shocked) Is she your daughter?

Ni- (Smiling) Yes aunty! (mumbles) unfortunately!

Saurav- (trying to cover up) Actually aunty she believes in telling what she really is rather than being someone else. She wears western clothes and she wanted you to know what she is like so that you do not like someone else in her.

Ramesh passed a smile to Saurav while Saurav smirked towards Nisha. Nisha cursed him in her mind.

Ra- Why don't the two of you go and talk alone to know each other better!

Arjun (Kabir's dad)- Good idea Ramesh ji! Go Kabir beta.

Kabir was still shocked by seeing a girl dressed up in typical western clothes when her might be groom came to see her.

Sanvi took them to the terrace. It was a pleasant weather. Nisha was just smiling till Sanvi left but as she did Nisha sat normally without acting to be feeling shy.

Ni- I am Nisha, Nisha Sharma.

Ka- I am Kabir Mehta.

Ni- So we should know about each other before we think about each other, don't you think?

Kabir nodded.

Ni- So what job are you in?

Ka- we have a family business and I work as the chief engineer there.

Ni- do you get salary?

Ka- I do. 1.25 lakhs per month.

Ni- because of family?

Ka- Because of my qualification.

Ni- and what are they?

Ka- I am amongst the top 10 students from IIT Pawai.

Ni- and still you chose the family business?

Ka- Yes because I want my family to be happy. About you?

Ni- I have got my degree from NLIU Bhopal. I have a chamber of my own. And also I have got various cases pending.

Ka- Great! So I can do crimes now.

They laughed. Kabir was drinking water as he was feeling nervous.

Ni- Well now Kabir, tell me the truth, kitni girlfriends reh chuki hain tunhari?

Water almost came out from Kabir's mouth but somehow Kabir drank it in.

Ka- (shocked) sorry?

Ni- Haan, kitni girlfriends hain tumhari ya kitni ex hain?

Ka- I haven't been in any sort of such relationships.

Ni- Tum kitne boring ho yaar.

Ka- Tumhare?

Ni- Hey! I am straight. (they chuckled)

Ka- I am talking about boyfriends.

Ni- Ek tha but usne mujhe propose kar diya.

Ka- So are you two committed in that relationship? I mean kyat um usse shaadi karna chahti ho?

Ni- Nahi isi wajah se toh usse dump kar diya.

Ka- Matlab?

Ni- Look, you seem to be a nice guy but I am not a nice girl. I do not want to get married. I hate marriages because mere papa ne meri mammi ko dominate karke rakha hua hai. He thinks that whatever wrong is happening is because of my mom even if she has got no hand in the same. Aur yeh meri dadi ke time se chala aa raha hai. Dadi papa ko manipulate karti thi and dad did as was asked. Mere papa was just a guy jinko maa ke pallu mein apni puri zindagi guzaarni thi and because of that he tore my mom into pieces from inside. (tears were brimming her eyes) Unhone meri maa ko leather belt se... just because I said that will go to work outside.

Kabir didn't know how to react. Moreover he was shocked as for how she told everything about herself in the very first meeting. Wasn't that too early? But those tears of hers was pinching him somewhere.

Ni- (wiped her tears) Kabir, tum soch rahe hoge na kaisi ladki hai ye, pehli mulakat mein hi sab bata diya. (Kabir nodded in a no, Nisha smiled) Kabir I don't know why but you have some assurity in your eyes. As i talked to you i felt you are trustworthy. Kabir main nahi chahti hoon shaadi karna. I really don't want to get married kyunki mujhe har ladke mein papa jaisa hi aadmi hi nazar aata hai. I really feel unsafe with guys.

Kabir understood what she meant. He got up and started moving downstairs. Nisha came behind hoping to hear a no from him. They went in front of the elders.




End mein Ts hi banana padha. i really cant write an OS.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice start 👍🏼
Nisha was fighting with her father 😕 kitne bure hai ramesh 😡
Saurav bhi 😡
Nisha trick failed 😆
Nibir meeting 😆 cute plus funny 😃
Totally loved it 😊
Continue soon and update other stories too...
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PART-B

Kabir understood what she meant. He got up and started moving downstairs. Nisha came behind hoping to hear a no from him. They went in front of the elders.

Ramesh was about to ask Kabir but Arjun interrupted and asked Nisha first.

Ar- Maaf kijiyega Ramesh ji lekin hamaare ghar mein ladkiyon ka zyada laad hota hai.

Everyone chuckled except Nisha and Kabir.

Ka- Dad I am sorry to interrupt but main aapko apne decision ke baare mein pehle batana chahta hoon, please?

Dad nodded.

Ka- I think we need some time to know each other better. (Nisha was shocked) Can we get 3 days for knowing each other?

Everyone smiled as they saw some hope. Nisha looked at Kabir.

Va- Nisha, kya tum bhi yahi chahti ho?

Nisha didn't know what to do. She couldn't trust so much on a stranger she just met. But then she remembered that she just narrated her life to the same stranger. She didn't know what to do. Her mind was saying NOT TO DO and her heart was saying JUST GO ON WITH IT. Nisha just spoke up randomly.

Ni- I will just go on with it.

Everyone couldn't understand what she meant at first but then they did. They exchanged their phone numbers. Kabir and his family had food and left. It was night by then. Nisha went to her favorite caf, CCD beside the bus stand. She ordered her favorite coffee and was thinking about Kabir's decision and then hers. She couldn't really understand what she did and why. Just then she heard a beep from her phone. It was a message from Kabir.

Hi Nisha,

I wanted to talk to you. Can I join you?

To which Nisha replied,

Do you know where I am?

Kabir replied back.

Just turn around and you will get all your answers.

Nisha turned around and saw Kabir sitting on the table behind her.

Ka- May I?

Nisha nodded. He came and sat in front of her.

Ni- (teasingly) Are you stalking me?

Ka- (sarcastically) Yeah Because that would be super!

They laughed.

Ni- Waise ab tum mujhe poori story bataoge?

Ka- Your wish is my command. Actually Nisha, jaise tumhe laga tha that I am trustworthy mujhe bhi laga that um main kuch toh baat hai.

He started remembering the way he was staring at her when she was telling her story.

Ka- Nisha, I really don't know why but I felt comfortable with you. When you came in the western dress I understood that there is something about you.

He remembered him being shocked when he saw her in the western dress.

Ka- I just felt that I need to help you. I know you are not a Damsel in Distress but Nisha neither am I a Prince Charming! I just need you to get that fear out. Har koi ek insaan ki parchaai hon zaroori nahi. You have to open your eyes up. (Nisha was about to speak something but he interrupted) Main yahan pe lecture jhaadne nahi aaya hoon. Main toh bas ek dost banana aaya hoon. Wanna give it a try?

Nisha nodded. They smiled.

Ka- Vaise ab humein ye nodding game band kar dena chahiye, don't you think?

Nisha smiled.

Ka- I was planning to go out with you today only if you feel the same and if you feel comfortable.

Nisha was not sure.

Ka- Leave you fear Nisha, its high time.

Nisha agreed. Nisha called her bhabhi and informed her about the same. Kabir had already told his parents about his plans. They went to Shaurya Samarak in the beginning. Nisha was explaining him all about the place.

Then they went to the DB mall. Nisha being a girl, was busy finding things while Kabir was sulking for having the worst idea ever. Nisha also tried to buy things for him but he denied. Kabir took a pair of shoes after insistence.

They went to the food court for a break.

Ka- So Nisha, aur kya tumhare Bhopal mein?

Ni- Itna kuch hain ki aankhein thak jayengi. (teasing) Vaise tumhari aankhein toh thak chuki hongi.

Ka- (confused) Matlab?

Ni- Maine dekha tha you were staring at me many times and then stealing glances. Toh aanhkon ka thakna toh laazmi hai, don't you think?

Kabir was blushing.

Ni- (astonished) Oh My God Kabir! You are blushing.

Ka- No I am not!

Ni-Chupa lo! Main toh jaanti hoon.

They laughed.

Ni- Vaise mere khayal se aaj ke liye itna kaafi hai we can have our lunch and then meet at Takeri.

Ka- Why don't we go from here only.

Ni- Kyunki Mr. Mehta itna dhoop mein aapka bharta ban jayega!

Ka- (teasing) Aap khayengi toh hum interested hain!

It was Nisha now who was blushing.

Ka- (mimicking her) Oh My God Nisha! You are blushing.

Ni- (mimicked him) No I am not.

They laughed again.

Finally they decided to leave now and meet later.

Days went by. It was the third day rather night. The last time they would be meeting each other because the next day they would reject the proposal. From the very first day they were attracted towards the other and somewhere they knew it. Identifying feelings is as difficult as hell, this is what they believed. Nisha never believed in the concept of love and Kabir never hated it but was never truly attracted towards it. They didn't know what they felt for each other. Nisha felt safe with him and Kabir, well he felt happy and comfortable.

Kabir was in the hotel room looking at the moon all lost. Arjun came in there and sat beside him.

Ar- What is it my son?

Ka- Dad, I don't know why but I feel happy with Nisha. I feel like I am comfortable with someone after you. I have always feared friendship but dad her friendship took all my fears away. I have made so many friends here. Even there is a dog whom Nisha feeds biscuits every day. I could even befriend him.

Ar- Could you get her fear out?

Ka- I am not sure dad but I feel like I did. Aisa lagta hai jaise woh bhi mere saath comfortable feel karti hai.

Ar- So whats the matter? Go and talk to her about this.

Ka- Kya boloon that I don't know but I feel something for you.

Ar- Nahi! (putting a hand on his shoulder) That you LOVE her.

Ka- No dad I don't.

Ar- Yeh padh! (handing over a paper to him)

Ka- Yeh kya hai?

Ar- I proposed your mother when I was in college because I realized I love her. This is what your Grandfather gave me.

Kabir read it- SYMPTOMS TO KNOW YOU ARE IN LOVE?

Ar- Yes! He was a bit insane but was the biggest help to me in my love life specially. Read it thoroughly. I am sure you will get your answers as well.

Kabir read it. And that was when he realized that he actually feels for her. He loves her.

Ka- Dadaji ka meri love life mein bhi bahut bada yogdan hai.

He smiled at his own thought. Actually smiling was an understatement. He was dancing and jumping and laughing. It seemed like he got insane. Arjun came in.

Ar- Ho gaya realize?

Ka- (jumping, excited) OH god! Dad I love her! I love Nisha!

Arjun was also happy seeing his son so much excited.

Ka- Dad par main usse boloon kaise?

Ar- I have an idea. Yeh maine try karna chaha tha but I couldn't dare to.

Arjun shared his idea.

Ka- Nisha ke liye itni daring toh dikha hi sakta hoon.

Ar- I am coming with you along with your mother. Main bhi dekhna chahta hoon mere bte ka proposal.

They went to Nisha's house.

IN NISHA' house

Nisha was sitting on the terrace thinking about all that happened in 3 days and her attraction towards Kabir.

Saurav- Toh ho hi gaya pyar.

Ni- (angrily) Mujeh aapse koi baat nahi karni hai.

Nisha was about to leave when Saurav held her hand. Nisha galred him.

Sa- Nisha I know maine sabko bahut hurt kiya hai but I have always been weak.

Nisha went in front of him.

Sa- Nisha I love you. Main tujhse bahut pyar karta hoon. Tujhpe ek aanch nahi aane dena chahta hoon lekin Nisha main darta hoon. Main darta hoon kisiko hurt karne se.

Ni- Jo aapne kiya hai. Aapne mujhe, maa yahan tak ki bhabhi ko bhi hurt kiya hai.

Sa- Nisha I cannot be forgiven I know but please give me one chance. Shayad main apni laakhon galtiyon mein se ek sudhar loon.

Ni- You can't because mujhe jo hurt kiya hai uske liye toh main aapko ek baar maaf bhi kar doon but what about maa and bhabhi.

Sa- Nisha, maa sab jaanti hain. Mere darr ke baare mein bhi. She always knew it and just kept on forgiving me.

Ni- Isiliye aap me itni himmat aa gayi hai.

Sa- Nahi Nisha, it is not like that. And about your bhabhi, main Sanvi ko bahut pasand karta hoon. I really like like her. But Nisha darr lagta tha ki main usse hurt na kar doon.

Ni- kiya hai! Hurt kiya hai aapne bhabhi ko, bahut hurt kiya hai.

Sa-I know Nisha but what shall I do now? I have lost her! (he started crying)

Ni- (sternly)Yeh magarmacch ke aansoon mere saamne useless hain.

Sa- I am really sorry Nisha. (crying) Mujhe maaf kar de. Please! Iss baar main apne darr ko overcome karke rahoonga. Please one last chance Nisha.

Nisha got an idea.

Ni- Ek shart par.

Nisha told her the idea. He had to agree to get this chance and moreover this was the thing that he wanted to do. Sanvi was working in the kitchen. He dragged her to the hall and called everyone.

Sanvi- Kya hua? Aap mujhe bhi kuch bataiye na?

Everyone gathered there. He stood in front of Sanvi.

Ra- Kya hua beta?

He sat on one foot in front of Sanvi in proposing position. Saurav held Sanvi's hand.

Sanvi- Uthiye! Aap yeh kya kar rahe hain.

Ra- Beta, ladkiyon ke saamne hum nahi jhukte hain uttho!

Sa- (angrily to Ramesh) Yeh wohi galti hai jo aap itne saalon se karte aa rahe hain. Par ab main nahi karoonga. Bahut darr liya main lekin ab nahi. Aap yeh galti karte rahiye main nahi.

He looked in Sannvi's eyes with tears.

Sa- Sanvi, maine tumhe bahut takleef di hai. Maine tumhare papa ko promiose kara tha that I will never hurt you or let others do anything to you. But maine toh tumhe khud naukraani ki tarah rakha. I am really sorry.

Sanvi was about to interrupt to ask him not say anything but he continued.

Sa- Main bura nahi hoon Sanvi, bas dara hua tha. I am really sorry. Iss baar maaf kardo, please.

Sanvi just nodded. He was about to get up when Nisha coughed.

Sa- (cutely to Nisha) Woh andar nahi bol sakta?

Nisha glared him and he got his answer. He sat back.

Sa- Sanvi sabse important baat. I love you (smiled) main tmse bahut pyaar karta hoon. Himmat hi nahi hui aaj tak batane ki but I love you. Do you?

Sanvi had tears in her eyes. he got up and was about to leave thinking that he has hurt her.

Sanvi- Aap firse darr rahe hain. I love you too.

They hugged each other. Sanvi was crying in his arms. Laxmi had tears in her eyes. Nisha clapped for them. Nisha went in front of Ramesh.

Ni- Aap haar gaye Mr. Sharma. You have lost. Nahi kar paaye aap hum sabko dominate. Aur shayad ab toh aapne apne bahu bte bhi kho diye hain kyunki apni beti toh aapne saalon pehle hi kho di thi. Toh congratulations with your dominance.

Ramesh was angry and left. They all sat for dinner but Ramesh was not there.

La- Inka wait kar lete hain.

Sa- Zaroorat nahi hai maa. Aaj aap bhi himmat dikha hi dijiye, (looking at Nisha) meri behen ki tarah.

Ni- Mere toh pet mein haathi daudh rahein hain.

La- (To their servant) Ramu, jaa yeh khaana sahib ke kamre mein le jaa.

Ramu went. Nisha, Saurav and Sanvi smiled at their mother's love.

Nisha was having her food when she hear some dhol sound coming from outside. She went out along with her family and saw Kabir dancing in front of the house. Not only she but members of most of the houses were out.

Nisha ran downstairs. Kabir gestured the dhol waalas to stop.

He asked a little girl to play the karaoke he had edited.

Ka- Thoda ghisa pita hai but abhi fashion mein hai.

Ho.. tu hi mera sach hai re
Tu hi mera khwab re
Mere iss khayal pe
Tera kya jawab re
Dil nahi toh dard hi
De de behisab re

Kabir started singing the song and expressing his feelings.

Tere dil mein kya hai tu bata re
Tere dil mein kya hai tu bata re
Naino se karde tu ishare
Tere dil mein kya hai tu bata re

He kept on singing the part standing in front of her or moving around her.

Ab toh intezaar hai
Bas tere jawab ka
Milta hai khayal kya
Tere mere khwab ka
Mera dil toh ho chala
Ek khuli kitaab re

Nisha didn't say anything or did anything.

Tere dil mein kya hai tu bata re
Tere dil mein kya hai tu bata re
Chain mera aisa na chura re..
Tere dil mein kya hai tu bata re

Kabir sat on his knees and sang this part of the song. Waiting for her answer. The music stopped.

Nisha went to him and asked him to stand up. She saw everyone almost jumping out of htier balcony and some girls doing AWWW' which annoyed her.

Ni- (held his hand) Andar chal.

They went inside with Arjun and Vasu. Nisha was angry at him for the moment though somewhere inside she could feel butterflies in her stomach. They were standing in the main hall where Nisha was glaring angrily at Kabir. Everyone stood back. Even Ramesh came down.

Ni- (annoyed) Kya tha woh sab?

Ka- Nisha I wanted to tell you what I feel about you. I really love you Nisha.

Ni- Tu jaanta hai na Kabir that I don't want to get married. Tumhe itni baar bol diya tha. (taunting) Ab mujhe samajh mein aaya woh dosti kyun because you wanted to marry me by hook or by crook, aint I right Kabir?

Ka- Nahi Nisha, ek baar sun toh le...

Ni- (interrupted) really kya? Tumne basically use kiya meri dosti ko. Kabir even after this you say that I should listen to you. I trusted you because I felt that you were different. I really like you Kabir but not in that sense. I don't want to get married. But you won't understand because you are just like other men who want to use women by making their wives and then treat them as slaves.

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Originally posted by: Anmol333

Nice start 👍🏼

Nisha was fighting with her father 😕 kitne bure hai ramesh 😡
Saurav bhi 😡
Nisha trick failed 😆
Nibir meeting 😆 cute plus funny 😃
Totally loved it 😊
Continue soon and update other stories too...


Thanks a lot Anmol.
Actually this OS (now a TS) was basically written to depict my feelings about what i feel about the ladies who never speak up against wrong.
@bold Saurav bhi ainvayi nahi hai😆😉

Thanks again and really glad you liked it.
Haan main update karoongi baaki stories bhi just need some time.
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Awesome part 👍🏼
Nibir haaye kite cute hai
Nibir ka starting me conversation bhout acha laga 😊
Kabir ka realization 😆
Saurav ab acha laga mujhe 😊
Poor kabir 😔 ab kya hoga nisha toh mana kar di 😒
Continue soon...
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PART C

Ka- (angrily) Bas bahut ho gaya Nisha. Mujhe tumhe yahi batana tha. Nothing more! I know you don't want to get married because you are afraid but you know what Nisha, tumhare saath rehke I overcame my fear of trying to make less friends and becoming an extrovert but you... you could never... (Nisha was about to speak but Kabir interrupted) No Nisha, now listen to me. Maine socha tha shayad mere saath rehkar tumne bhi apne darr ko mukammal kar liya hoga but I was wrong. You never trusted me. Mere saath ghoomna and all was a lie to show that you trust me because if you would have na Nisha, toh tum aaj mere pyaar ko aise nahi bolti. You think that I want to use you?! Har ladka tumhare dad jaisa hon, it is not necessary. I am way too much different. I actually love you. I don't know how or when but I do. Mujhe aaj realize hua isiliye batane aaya tha but clearly tumhe mere pyar ki sirf beizzati karni hai. Nisha tumhe mere baare mein jo bolna hai bol lo but not about my love because it is as pure as love can be. Agar kal ko humaari shaadi ho jaati hai aur tum kaho that you don't want to get close to me ever I will never even touch you. (teary eyed) I just want your love. I want your care. I want you forever Nisha. I just want your love. I don't want anything else and that's it. (to his parents) Let's go!

Sa- Arre Kabir rukko na!

Ka- Please Saurav I really don't think it is the perfect time.

Kabir and his family left.

Sanvi- Nisha ji, chale jaaiye aur rok li jiye Kabir ji ko. Warna shayad aap apne aap ko maaf nahi kar payengi kabhi bhi. Woh aapse bahut pyaar karte hain.

Nisha was still shocked. She didn't know what to do. And that's when she realized what she feels for him. Her bhabhi's words haunted her. What if Kabir leaves forever?

Nisha ran outside without thinking but realized that Kabir has already left. Then she saw her scooty. She turned back to get the keys but Saurav already had them.

Sa- (throwing it to her) Run for your life Nisha!

Nisha smiled, took the keys and drove the scooty. She took a shortcut since she knew where his hotel. She reached the hotel and was happy that she could manage it before them. She went and sat in the waiting seat with the same music player. She was waiting for him to come.

And then she saw him come in with mixed emotions of anger, pain and above all hurt. She could never forgive herself for causing him so much pain. She played the song. Kabir looked here and there and found her. She went near him.

Ni- (smiling) Yeh bhi ghisa pita hai.

Mujhe ishq se rehna tha door
Gham iske bade jo hain mash'hoor
Par ye dil hai ki bilkul mana nahi
Mujhe kheench kar dekho le aaya wahin
Jahaan ishq hai, bas ishq hai
Haan ishq hai, bas ishq hai

She couldn't sing so she just did lipsing but the song perfectly expressed her emotions. She was afraid of loving or getting married to anyone but now she doesn't and all thanks to him.

Yaariyan ve.. Yaariyan ve..

Iss dard-e-dil ki sifaarish
Ab kar de koi yahaan
Ke mil jaaye ise woh baarish
Jo bhiga de poori tarah (x2)

She smiled and sang the song. Kabir was annoyed with her for saying such things and Nisha knew it.

Tu jo mila to zindagi hai badli
Main poori nayi ho gayi
Hai be-asar duniya ki baatein badi
Ab teri sunu main sadaa

She went near him and with an eyelock sang the part.

Kya hua asar tere sath reh kar na jaane
Ke hosh mujhe na raha
Lafz mere thhe zuban pe aake ruke
Par ho na sake woh bayaan

She tried exaplining what stupidity she did when he proposed her in front of everyone.

Dhadkan tera hi naam jo le
Aankhein bhi paigham yeh de
Teri nazar ka hi yeh asar hai
Mujhpe jo huaa..

She sang as if complaining to him for making her fall in love with him.

Iss dard-e-dil ki sifaarish
Ab kar de koi yahaan
Ke mil jaaye ise woh baarish
Jo bhiga de poori tarah (x2)

Kabir was melting. Nisha sang the last para of the explaingnig her love.

Kabir didn't even budge. He wanted to hug her then and there but also wanted to play some pranks with her. He was dancing from inside but on the outside he was harsh.

Ka- (annoyed) Ho gaya!

He was leaving when Nisha spoke.

Ni- Kabir!

Kabir turned and was pleasantly surprised by the scene. Nisha was sitting in the same position for proposing.

Ni- Kabir, I know shayad main uss layak nahi but I really love you. And I am sorry. Tumhe itna hurt karna meri kabhi chahat hi nahi thi. I really love you Kabir. Bas main thodi badi dhakkan hoon jo itna late ho gaya realize karne mein. Please mujhe maaf karde.

Kabir went and stood in front of her.

Ka- Dhakkan toh tu hai! But tujhse badad dhakkan main hoon.

Nisha couldn't understand. Firstly he called himself a DHAKKAN and then he used the word TU'. What was on?

Ka- Aur tujhse bada dhakkan main hoon jo tujhse se itna pyaar karta hoon.

He made her stand up. Nisha had tears in her eyes. he held her by her shoulders.

Ka- Yaar ye tum ladkiyan bhi badi ajeeb hoti ho. Khushi hoti hai toh roti ho aur dukh hota hai toh double roti ho.

Nisha didn't say anything. She just tightly hugged him. She didn't care of the surroundings. Kabir was astonished at first but then hugged her. They were hugging each other so tightly that even air couldn't have passed. Then someone's cough brought them back to land. They were none other than Arjun and Vasu.

Va- (teasing) Beta, kuch shaadi ke baad ke liye bhi chod do.

Nisha and Kabir were blushing hard.

Ar- Nisha beta, kaafi raat ho chuki hai. Ek kaam karo aaj ke liye tum humaare kamre mein thehar jaao.

Ni- Nahi uncle, ghar par sab intezaar kar rahe honge.

Ar- Pehli baat you can call me DAD now that it is confirmed about you two. (Nisha smiled) Aur doosri baat I will talk to Ramesh ji about it. I am sure he won't object. Wait!

He called Ramesh and narrated him the incident and also asked if Nisha could stay.

Ra- I am sure that I don't really need to worry when Nisha is with you.

They hanged the call.

Ni- Uncle but I don't think that is right, I mean...

Va- Nisha if you are not comfortable with Kabir's room don't worry. I will come to your room.

Ka- But mom main dad ke saath nahi sounga.

Va- Toh tum couch par so jaana.

Kabir snuffed while Nisha chuckled only to get a death glare from Kabir.

Ni- Nahi aunty uski koi zaroorat nahi hai. Jab yeh aap logon ke kamre mein couch par so sakta hai then why not in his room?

Nisha smirked.

Ka- (monologue) Kabir beta, sona toh tujhe couch par hi toh better hai Nisha ke saath soja.

Ka- Okay mom!

Ar- Vaise bhi Vasu main yeh Kabir ke kharaate nahi jhel sakta.

Ka- Dad main kharate nahi maarta hoon. Aap maarte hain. You can ask mom.

Va- Chalo Nisha beta! Let's go. I am really tired. Aur yeh dono toh ladte hi rehte hain. Get used to it.

Nisha laughed. Kabir and Arjun were still fighting and after sometime when they realized that the ladies have already left they also left but not before giving each other looks.

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Thoda Romantic stuff almost like pehli baar try kara hai. Sorry if couldnt meet upto your expectation.

Epilogue

As Kabir entered he saw Nisha on the bed watching some movie on television.

He went and sat beside her.

Ka- Toh kaunsi movie dekh rahi hai?

Ni- (annoyed) Pehle to mujhe ek baat batao, What's with this tu and all?

Ka- Zyada apnapan lagta hai!

Ni- Mujhe aisa apnapan nahi chahiye.

Ka- Acha ji! Theek hai! Fir Sarika ko hi bula lunga.

Ni- (shocked and annoyed) Who is Sarika? Dekh Kabir mere saath double games mat khelna warna (pointing her finger on his face) you won't live to see the next day.

Ka- (Teasing) Oho! Toh jealous haan!

Ni- (looking the other side) I am not jealous. Why will I be?

Ka- Sarika toh hogi if I tell her about you.

Ni- (pointing her finger at him again) Dekh Kabir agar tune firse uss ladki ka naam liya toh main uska aur tera dono ka muh todh doongi.

Kabir was happy for he could see this Jealous Nisha. He was staring at her lovingly.

Ka- Pehli baat, I don't know any girl named Sarika. Main sirf teri firkin le raha tha. Then secondly, I really love every part of you, even this Jealous Nisha. And thirdly, tub hi abhi mujhe TU karke hi bol rahi thi because you also felt that apnapan, aint I right?

Nisha looked down. Kabir and Nisha were quite close now. Kabir held her chin and made her look into his eyes.

Ka- (huskily) Hey Nisha! Tujhe meri koi baat buri lagi kya?

Nisha just hugged him. She didn't know how to express her feelings.

Ni-(still hugging, teary eyed) I love you Kabir! Tujhse bahut pyaar karti hoon main. I really can't see you with anyone. Main tujhe khona nahi chahti hoon. Tujhe mujhe jaise bulaana hai bula le but mere alava kisiko mat bulana.

Kabir understood what she felt. He forcefully broke the hug because didn't want to show him that she was crying. He cupped her face.

Ka- Nisha, I love you. Main tere alava aur kisi ke baare mein soch bhi nahi sakta, forget about going. And Nisha, (teasing) Bulaunga toh main tujhe TU karke hi.

Nisha smiled. He left her.

Ka- (teasing) Nisha, vaise tu mere liye itni jaldi itna possessive ho gayi that you will beat the girl who would try to get close to me.

Ni- (smirking) Haan! Woh to hai. (wrapping her arms around his neck) Kyunki tu sirf mera hai.

Ka- Arre wah betaji! Aap toh kaafi fast nikli.

Nisha left him and looked down. She was hell embarrassed and was blushing hard. She got up from the bed and was about to leave when Kabir held her hand. He got up and hugged her from the back.

Ni- Kaun keh raha tha that he won't touch me ever in his life if I say NO to him.

Kabir immediately left her because he felt that she was uncomfortable. But actually she was shy and nervous. Nisha understood what he felt. She turned to face him.

Ka- Nisha I am sorry. I made you uncomfortable, right? Main sone jaata hoon on the couch. Tu jab tak nahi kahegi tab tak I won't.

Kabir was leaving when he heard Nisha's voice.

Ni- And if I say yes?

Kabir turned towards her. Kabir understood how hard he try he cannot lie to her. He wanted to get close to her but not without her wanting so. Kabir went towards her.

Ka- You don't need to do this.

Ni- (face palmed) Tu gadha hai. You say that you understand me. (annoyed) Saamne se invitation de rahi hoon but you "YOU DON'T HAVE TO DO THIS." Idiot! Tujhe samajh nahi aata ki I want...

Nisha realized what all she spoke. Kabir was smirking and smiling.

Ka- You want? Wait, let me complete it, you want MEEE. (he emphasized on me)

Nisha looked down.

Ka- Don't you think it's a little bit too early?

Nisha sighed and was leaving to sleep giving a ISKA KUCH NAHI HO SAKTA' expression when Kabir held her hand and pinned her to the wall beside the bed.

Ka- (huskily, teasing tone) So you want me?

Ni- Kabir, mera matlab... woh main...

Ka- Woh... main... umm... rehne de! Sab jaanta hoon but yeh nahi jaanta tha kit u itna bold bhi ho sakti hai.

Ni- Kabir main woh...

Kabir interrupted by kissing her on her lips. Firstly Nisha was shocked but then she also responded. They broke apart after some time. (Aage ka scene Yeh Hai Aashiqui ki tarah hua tha but I cannot write it. I am really not capable of writing that. Sorry.)

Kabir picked her up in his arms and made her lie on the bed when Nisha looked the other way. Kabir understood that she wants to say something.

Ni- Kabir, mujhe tujhse kuch baat karni hai. Don't take me wrong pelase.

Kabir got just a bit away to make her feel comfortable. Nisha sat on the bed. Kabir was looking at her.

Ni- Kabir, main chahti hoon ki jab hum ek hon... it should be special. Can we get closer after marriage.

Ka- Nisha you are actually right. We will make it special. (teasing) Vaise tab tak main itne se kaam chala loonga.

Nisha blushed.

Ka- Cha lab soja. I am also going to sleep.

Kabir was about to leave when Nisha called him. He turned and gestured What was the matter?

Ni- Tu yahin par soja. Palang kaafi bada hai. I can control myself. Couch par peeth akad jayegi.

Ka- (teasing) Par main nahi kar paunga na!

Nisha looked down.

Ka- Arre I am just joking. Chal andar khisak. You can take the left corner and I will take the right one.

They laid down accordingly but just within a few minutes Kabir rolled to her side and hugged her from the back. Nisha smiled. That is when Kabir got sleep and so did Nisha.

The next day Nisha woke up and found herself almost on top of him. She started staring him, how cute he looked while sleeping. She couldn't get his eyes off him. She kissed his forehead and then his eyelids and then his cheeks. She was about to give a peck on his lips when he, without opening his eyes, said "Apni hawas ko control kar."

Nisha got shocked to know that he was awake. Kabir smiled. He wrapped his hands around her waist.

Ni- Tu jaga hu hai?

Ka- Jaga toh tab jab tu mujhe kiss kar rahi thi. Koi bhi jag jayega yaar. Vaise tu badi ajeeb hai kal bol rahi thi ki humein usse zyada close nahi aana hai aur ab...

Nisha was blushing and flushing while Kabir was enjoying teasing her.

Ni- Main nikalti hoon.

She tried to get up but Kabir didn't let him.

Ni- Kabir chod na!

Ka- Sach bata tu sahi mein chahti hai main chod doon.

Ni- Kabir! (glared) Late ho jayenge.

Ka- Time dekha? 6 baj rahe hain abhi. Yeh toh late ke aas paas bhi nahi hai. Jabki yeh toh Before Time se bhi pehle hai.

Ni- Kabir...

Ka- Kal raat jitna toh kar lene de.

Nisha looked down.

Ka- Accha theek hai baba! Sorry! Bas tu udas mat hua kar.

He released her. Nisha went to washroom to freshen up followed by Kabir. Nisha ordered 2 coffees. She was waiting for Kabir to come out.

Ka- Arre wah! Coffee bhi mangva li!

Ni- (annoyed) Tu ladkiyon se bhi zyada time lagata hai nahane mein!

Ka- (teasing) Toh tu andar aa jaati mujhe bulaane.

Ni- Dekh faaltu ki baatein mat kar. Aur coffee pee le.

They had some gala time. Arjun, Vasu and Nibir for Nisha's house to talk about marriage. Arjun and Vasu went on a cab while Nisha and Kabir went on the scooty which Nisha was driving and Kabir was distracting her. They reached Nisha's house. The elders had a talk and with the help of the pandit, they decided the wedding date which was a month later. So the Mehtas decided to leave for Jaipur for now.

They were at the airport where Sharmas also came to see off the Mehtas. Nibir took blessings of the respective partner's parents. The flight announcement was made. The Mehtas had to leave now. Arjun and Vasu were leaving when Kabir was staring at Nisha. The elders understood what they wanted. Arjun and Vasu went for security check.

Ka- So...

Ni- So...

Ka- Main chalta hoon fir...

Nisha had tears in her eyes. She wanted him to stop but she couldn't as couldn't have asked him to leave the job for a month. She looked down.

Kabir hugged her tightly. He knew this is what she needed. Nisha hugged him back so tightly as if her life depended on that moment and started crying. She was crying like a child whose favorite chocolates are being snatched and she can't help it.

Ka- (while hugging) Bas bas! Kitna royegi. Stop crying. Vaise bhi main ek mahine mein aa hi jaunga. Fir hum dono hamesha ke liye saath hi rahenge. I promise.

But his words weren't helping as Nisha couldn't stop crying. Kabir was rubbing his hands on her back.

Ka- (consoling her) Arre Nisha! Agar tu rona band nahi karegi toh main jaunga kaise. Aur agar main jaunga nahi toh main lautkar kaise aaunga.

Ni- (crying) Toh mat jaa na. yahin ruk ja na. lautkar aana hi nahi padega.

He forcefully broke apart, cupped her face and wiped her tears.

Ka- Main agar gaya nahi toh baarat lekar kaise aaunga?

Nisha nodded like a small kid.

Ka- (teasing) Vaise tu bahut cute lagti hai rote hue!

Nisha started hitting him and they hugged each other. This time even Kabir had tears in his eyes.

The announcement was made again. The broke apart.

Ka- (cupped her face) Chal ab main chalta hoon. Apna khayal rakhna. Aur haan ghar jaakar rona mat varna mom aur dad mujhe bahut daantenge. Tujhe chahiye main daant khaau?

Nisha nodded in a no. she was acting like a small kid.

Ka- Okay! Bye then!

He was leaving while Nisha smiled and waved her hand but after sometime looked down again. She was about to turn when she felt a hadn on her cheek. It was Kabir again.

Ka- Neeche dekh kar bye nahi bolte. And remember I love you.

He pecked her lips and ran away. Nisha chuckled and they waved hands till they were out of each other's sight. Kabir sat on his seat remembering her. Nisha was standing out of the airport to his flight take off. None of the Sharmas spoke anything because they knew she needed it. Then her phone beeped. It was Kabir.

Chali jaa warna tan ho jayegi. Mujhe tu waisi bhi chalegi but prefer yeh waali karta hoon.

Nisha giggled and replied back.

Main jo bhi rahoongi, jaisi bhi rahoongi tujhe mujhe jhelna toh padega. Aakhir pyaar kiya hai tooh nibhana toh padega.

Kabir

Vah Nisha! Meri sangati mein dialogues woh bhi mujhi par, not bad. I like it.

Nisha

I Love you too. Bol nahi paayi thi when you were leaving

Kabir

Paagal maar daalegi kya apne pyar se?

Nisha

Dobara aisa bola na toh sahi maar doongi!

Kabir

Accha baba, sorry! Love you!

Nisha

Love you too

Kabir

Chla ab flight take off hone waali hai so phone flight safe mode par daal raha hoon. Apna khayal rakhna, rona mat aur call karna. Ghar pahunchkar tujhe call karta hoon. Roz raat ko tujhse baat karoonga aur skype bhi karoonga. Chup chaap aa jaana. I love you. Bye.

Ni- (smiled) Idiot!

Edited by 357159pikachu - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing loved it to d core
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Haaye kabir's anger 😃
Kitna sahi bola vo...
Nisha has to create blunder and Saurav is always there to clean her blunders 😆
Really liked that part...awesomely done 👏
Nibir confession 😳
Ohhho bachi badi ho rahi hai 😛 😆
Nibir romantic parts were nice...really really good 😳
Aww poor nibir kuch time ke liye alag ho rahe.. Vo scene bhi cute tha 😃
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Superb story ... Beautifully written... the proposal and yha scenes🤪

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