NIBIR/SWARON STORY - A Valentine's Week (Completed)*2/1* - Page 9

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Posted: 8 years ago
#81
I loved it totally..!!
Like dere sweet Chotu date but saurav n kirti ka dance was more impressive
Hope to c some romance btwn nibir soon
Just keep ur updates coming
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Posted: 8 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: tani_0209

I loved it totally..!!

Like dere sweet Chotu date but saurav n kirti ka dance was more impressive
Hope to c some romance btwn nibir soon
Just keep ur updates coming


Thank u tani 😳😳
@bold shayad nhi hi romantic scene mile, budding love mile 😆
Kuch keh nhi sakte pata nhi main kya likhun 😉😉 but entertaining zaroor hoga 😳😉
Will update on 25 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: Anmol333


Thank u tani 😳😳
@bold shayad nhi hi romantic scene mile, budding love mile 😆
Kuch keh nhi sakte pata nhi main kya likhun 😉😉 but entertaining zaroor hoga 😳😉
Will update on 25 😊

For the entertainment value to m more dn confident..m sure it'll b entertaining...
Chalo let's c how u update..ready to read kuch rang pyar k aise bhi
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Posted: 8 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: tani_0209

For the entertainment value to m more dn confident..m sure it'll b entertaining...
Chalo let's c how u update..ready to read kuch rang pyar k aise bhi


Nibir hai jahan pagalpan hai wahan...😆😆
J kabir with kness ke sath 😆😆😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#85
Omg Anmol🤣🤣...kya update tha by god🤣🤣

Kabir,Nisha,Saurav,Kirti... charo k charo useless hai🤣🤣

Aur ye Tarun n Ashu🤣🤣
Ashu ko kitni bhook lagti hai🤣🤣

Nisha checking out another guy infront of Kabir🤣🤣

Saurav k sath selfies click karne k bahane Nisha Kabir k pix click kar ri thi🤣🤣

Oh god sab pagal hai🤣🤣

Very entertaining update 😉

Continue soon😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: Roopsha_98

Omg Anmol🤣🤣...kya update tha by god🤣🤣

Kabir,Nisha,Saurav,Kirti... charo k charo useless hai🤣🤣

Aur ye Tarun n Ashu🤣🤣
Ashu ko kitni bhook lagti hai🤣🤣

Nisha checking out another guy infront of Kabir🤣🤣

Saurav k sath selfies click karne k bahane Nisha Kabir k pix click kar ri thi
🤣🤣

Oh god sab pagal hai🤣🤣

Very entertaining update 😉

Continue soon😉


Thanks roops 😳😳
@bold single hai vo kuch bhi kar Sakti hai 😉

@blue ye meri friend ne try kiya tha or main Saurav ka role kar rahi thi means uske sath acting kar rahi thi 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: Anmol333



Thanks roops😳😳
@bold single hai vo kuch bhi kar Sakti hai😉

@blue ye meri friend ne try kiya tha or main Saurav ka role kar rahi thi means uske sath acting kar rahi thi😆


Matlab tu aur Teri frnd bhi pagal🤣🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: Roopsha_98


Matlab tu aur Teri frnd bhi pagal🤣🤣


Main toh pagal hun hi... Or pagal ki friends pagal hi hogi na 😉😆😆 jaise tu meri dost hai 😆😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: Anmol333



Main toh pagal hun hi... Or pagal ki friends pagal hi hogi na😉😆😆jaise tu meri dost hai😆😆


GTH🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chocolate day

It was chocolate day, who don't like chocolate ? Everyone just love all kind of chocolate. Kabir and Nisha crazily love chocolate, the chocolate day was lucky for kabir as his female fans give him lots of chocolate but this time he have to give one pack of chocolate to nisha also. Chocolate day for nisha is always amazing for her as every year swayam get lots of chocolate from his female fans as swayam is too handsome and charming, but swayam don't like that much chocolate, he would eat small amount and rest was taken by nisha.

So the day with TaKaShu as usual with confused kabir and making fun plus thinking about some plan ashu and tarun.

Guys mujhe sach much ye nisha ko dena hoga?? " asked kabir looking sadly at big box Ferrero Rocher

La de bhai main kha leta hun " said ashu

Chup kar... Main tujhe dene se acha khud hi kha lun..." Said kabir

Ek kaam kar kabir mat de nisha bhabhi ko " said tarun

Sachi...??" Kabir asked being all excited

Haan...mat de...tu pyar thodi karta hai use jo dega ?" Said tarun

Kya bakwas kar raha hai tu kameene ??" Asked kabir furiously

Toh kya bolun main...ek chocolate dena hai usme natak chalu hai tera...tera Mann nhi hai toh mat kar kuch bhi or hona uski shadi me shamil jab vo kisi or se karegi toh..." Replied tarun furiously

Aaaeee main kisi or se nisha ki shadi nhi hone dunga... Vo kya hai na mujhe bhi chocolate pasand hai na " kabir said with pout

Aaaeee ye sab chodo or samne dekho nisha bhabhi jaa rahi class room me " said ashu pointing toward front as they were standing in the corridor

Nisha sun..." Said swayam

Haan bol ?" Asked nisha

Vo ye tere liye...and happy rose day " said swayam forwarding 5 pink roses with silly smile on his face

Ab yaad aaya ki parso rose day tha ??" Asked nisha accepting the roses

Sorry na nishu main bhul hi gaya tha...but main har saal toh deta hun na tujhe rose " said swayam

Haan har saal...ya toh pehle ya baad me chor kahinka " said nisha, scare him by actioning she is going to hit him

Chup kar de toh raha hun...warna mere alwa koi tujhe deta bhi nhi hai..." Said swayam

Rehne de mujhe mila iss baar roses vo red roses " blurted out nisha

Hain kya ??? Kon diya ??" Asked a highly shocked swayam

Tu ye chod bata kaam kya hai jo mujhe ye flowers de raha hai ??" Asked nisha point

Nhi nishu koi kaam nhi hai...I love yaar main sirf fayede thodi lunga " said swayam with innocent face

Okkk whatever... And happy rose to you too" she said and give him one of the Rose from the roses she was holding

Abe ye toh main diya na abhi " said swayam

Toh ye mere hogaye ab main inka kuch bhi kar sakti hun " said nisha frowning

Okk " he said and accept it

Toh chal class " said nisha

Nisha ek kaam tha..." Said swayam with silly smile on his face on which who had turned to enter into class, suppress her smile as she know what he want

Mujhe pata tha...jab main phele puchi thi toh kyun nhi bola kuch?" asked nisha

Arey vo nisha..." Said swayam and scratch his back of neck

Jaa nhi karungi main kuch" said nisha try to ran into class but swayam was fast enough to hold her hand then drag her to the girls locker room for placing a box of chocolates in sharon's locker.

Kabir and his group was standing at distance nisha and swayam voice were not making any contact to their ear but nisha and swayam actions were making contact to their eyes. Kabir blood boiled seeing them exchanging roses then swayam draging her, all seen by hell angry kabir, his facial muscles clenched and his fists also. Ashu and Tarun had sensed the danger so they silently left to class before they become kabir's punching bag. Kabir angrily thrusted the chocolate box in his bag and left to class angrily. As usual he went and sit alone behind his friends. Soon nisha too enter in class and looked at kabir who give her a smile as his all anger vanished seeing her, on excitement she forgot to smile, which make kabir sad, sad turn anger as soon as he saw swayam sitting beside nisha who was sitting behind Sharon as usual. Tarun and Ashu did not talked to kabir as they saw him staring at nisha and swayam and they know there is no use of talking to him.

After a while teacher enter in the class and try to clam down fish market but no use as everyone was busy in their world. The teacher who enter in the class Mr. Rajpoot was very strict when he's angry, else he's very friendly and all students never anyone's request but Mr. Rajpoot's command were follow by everyone as students respect him alot. No one dare to go against his order. Today seeing class not paying attention to his word, he roar in anger which make class pin drop silent. Everyone sat straight and who was busy in phone instantly throw their phones.

Mr. Rajpoot scolded them, then he started changing everyone's seat who were busy in talking few minutes ago come in his eyes, nisha and swayam was one of them

swayam stand up and sit next to Sharon " he shouted as seat beside Sharon was empty, swayam immediately did what asked

You too nisha stand up go sit beside kabir " he ordered as he know NiYam were best friends, they must sit far away from each other to make peace class room.

Kabir put his head down on desk to hide his smile as it was giving him feeling like he had won lottery ticket. whlie nisha know she's going to die soon as butterfly in her stomach is doing all type of dance form not let her concentrate on anything. SwaRon state was not different from nibir's they were also feeling strange and butterfly doing their work effectively.

So you guys know where to sit ?" Asked Mr. Rajpoot after changing some more students seat

Yes sir...!!" Come reply of whole class

So it's my order no one change there seat even in other teachers class do you get me??" He asked again

Yes sir..." All choral together

Good...!! So let's start our today's topic..." He starting teaching them while everyone forget beside whom they are sitting and focus on the lecture.

Mr. Rajpoot's class ended, nisha put her books back in bag in that swayam called her and took her out of class. Kabir who was looking at her all the time, saw the same roses in bag and he become again mad. Ashu who turned to tease kabir saw kabir staring at nisha's bag.

Kya hua kabir ??" Asked ashu

Vo Roses hai yaha..." Said kabir

Nikal le usko or chal tukre tukre kar dete hai " said ashu

Hey what...?? No " said tarun

Good idea chal " kabir said and took out flowers from nisha's bag and crash it, he pluck up every petals of rose cruelty then throw it away in dustbin, ashu and kabir did all activities to destroy that 4 beautiful roses in cruelest way, no one pay attention on his deed except tarun as eceryone were busy in their own world, after that they come back to their seat before nisha could enter in the class.

On the other hand swayam and nisha were jumping in joy.

Main...kabir...Ke...sath...yaaa" said nisha jumping along with swayam

Yyaaa...main...bhi...Sharon...ke...sath..." Said swayam

Okk okk calm down " said swayam halting his jumping session and hold nisha too

Take a deep breath in...out " swayam said nisha followed him

After a long while they went inside, kabir had done his work was sitting silently as if nothing had happened controlling her abnormal breath she went and sit beside kabir while swayam's heart had taken oath that today he'll beat fast as fast it can.

Next teacher come and give her lecture to class after that there a was break for 30 minutes, all again started shouting, screaming and some went out or some went to canteen, Nisha sit at her place only while Sharon went out with her friends so swayam also went from there and poor kabir was fighting with brain and heart gathering some courage together to give nisha that chocolate box as in between last class he had talked to tarun and tarun had given idea to give nisha chocolates.

He took deep breath and looked at nisha who was resting her on desk and facing other side.

Nishaye chocolatetumhareliye mainesabko diyahaiyewala tumrakhlo " said kabir in one go making all three head to turn in shock and look at him disbelieve as they don't understand a word from his sentence

What ??" Nisha, Tarun and Ashu asked in unison, kabir looked at them in shocked, examine their faces he thought he spoke something wrong.

Kabir repeat please and slowly?? " asked ashu

N i s h a y e c h o c o l a t e t u m h a r e l i y e m a i n e s a b k o d i y a h a i y e w a l a t u m r a k h l o " he said offering chocolate box

What...??? Kabir ???" Asked trio in unison again

Bhai normal tarike se bol " said tarun

Nisha ye chocolate tumhare liye maine sab ko diya hai ye wala tum rakh lo " kabir said finally, nisha look at him with wide open mouth then recovering from shock she said " nhi kabir main kaise "

Arey please main sab ko diya hai... Kyun??" Asked kabir last line looking at his friends to which his friends nodded and forced nisha to accept it

Arey nisha tum iss liye toh nhi le rahi kyunki aaj chocolate day...ohh come on kabir ne mujhe bhi chocolate diye toh kya main uska girlfriend ho gaya nhi na.. Bas apne friends ko vo de raha " said tarun in mid of their convo

Nhi tarun phir bhi... I'm sorry kabir " said nisha with apologies smile

Please nisha..." Kabir tried his luck last time asked her with cutest puppy face.

Nisha heart skip several beat on his handsome yet cutest face she accept it blushingly which went unnoticed by kabir as his heart started dancing on the fact that nisha accept his chocolate. Nisha open her bag to keep that chocolate was shocked to reveal that her roses were not there, she started scanning her bag throwing out her everything from bag. Kabir and ashu got scared.

Mere roses...??" Said nisha almost verge of crying as pink is her favorite color and she love pink roses.

Kya hua nisha ??" Asked tarun eyeing at scared kabir

Mere roses... Koi aaya tha kya meri seat pe ??" Asked by girl who was tears

Nhi nisha koi nhi aya tha... Sayad tumne kahi gira diye ho ??" Asked ashu

Nhi maine dyan se apne bag me rakha tha " she replied still scanning her empty bag

After all attempts she didn't found her roses, she started putting all things back in bag while controlling her tears. After packing up she throw her bag and try to control her tear. Her every tear drowning kabir in sea of guilt. He was not even facing tarun also.

Kya hua nisha madam " said swayam entering in class she said nothing just wipe her tear.

Thoda kabir side de na main bhi baithunga " said swayam politely

Jagha nhi hai " kabir replied rudely as seeing swayam his angry young man was wake up again, tarun looked at him and nodded in no

Okay koi baat nhi " said swayam

swayam tu yahan baith ja " said ashu and move aside along with tarun to give some space to swayam, he sit down with back facing the desk.

Kya hua...bolna?? " asked swayam

Kuch nhi hua na..." She replied irritatedly

Acha toh chocolate kahegi mujhe mila abhi dher Sara " he said

Nhi khana "

Baba re...kya boli tu...aaj sun west se rise hua hai kya ??" He said as if he's being shocked

Dekh main abhi koi bakwas karne ke mood me nhi hun tu chala ja "

Kya hua vo kal vo ladka no. Dene se mana kar diya kya "

Nhi vo dediya no. and we chatted last night... Wait kon ladka? " she said first in absentmindedly then realized what he said

Ab nhi bach sakti tu bata kal kise baat ki " he asked laughingly

Nhi main kisi se baat nhi ki...tu kya bol raha hai" she said

Toh blush kyun kar rahi " he asked again

Kya bakwas hai ye main kahan blush kar rahi " she said laughingly

Acha... Hahaha " and he laughed nisha too joined him making kabir burned

Ab bolegi kya hua " he said

Mera rose kahin gir gaya " said nisha making sad face

Kaise tu mere samne hi bag me dali thi ?" Asked swayam

Pata nhi..." She said, swayam looked everywhere then said "koi nhi na"

Hmmm " she said sadly

Chal ye chocolates rakh...or sukku ko mat dena warna..." swayam couldn't complete as nisha continued " warna aaj uska party ho jayega Sara chocolate vo apni gfs ko bant dega "

Hmm ye le " said swayam and give her all his chocolate in this kabir stood up angrily with his bag and left from there as he can't tolerate anymore, seeing him going like this Tarun and Ashu too ran behind him to calm down him little. As soon TaKaShu left swayam said " kabir ne tere roses gayab kiya hai "

Hain ?? Kya ?? Shut up " she give him all reaction

Or nhi toh kya jab hum bahar gaye the toh kabir hi tha tere bag pass "

Tu kuch bhi bol raha hai swayam "

Nhi nisha..."
Nhi swayam... Tu aisa kyun bol raha hai vo mere bag me hath kyun dalega or chal dal bhi diya toh vo roses hi kyun lega "

Because he hates me "

Why ?? "

I don't know "

Tu na mere or kabir ke beech me darrar daal raha hai "

Omg... Kya lagta hai tera kabir ?"

Sab kuch " said nisha with intense voice

Ohh god.. Forget it..." He said and went back to his seat

This day start good but by end it was not so good. Kabir was hell angry, was burning with jealousy while his friends try to clam him down, on the other hand nisha and swayam fight again in same issue of roses. And at last Sharon was upset because today she didn't get much time to spend with swayam although she was happy that some small small steps are taken by destiny to bring them closer.

To be continued...


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Edited by Anmol333 - 8 years ago

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