NIBIR/SWARON STORY - A Valentine's Week (Completed)*2/1* - Page 33

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Posted: 8 years ago

😆😆😆 pata tha mujhe yahi bolegi 😆
Ab slap day me kya romance hoga 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: 357159pikachu

Rose Day

First of all mujhe Swaron Saurav aur Kirti se zyada pasand aa rahe hain. I love Sharon being the typical girlfriend and Swayam being the pratadit boyfriend. 😆
Now about the update,
Your humour is amazing and i am a die hard fan of it. especially that SHANTILAL line and the songs sequence.😆 Nisha bhi koi doodh ki dhuli nahi hai😆
Kabir ka crush kuch zyada hi hai. 😉 he is too damn jealous of Swayam.
But i couldnt understand Swayam itna chidta kyun hai jab Nisha usse bhai bulati hai?😕
Nisha sleeping wala part bhi bahut humour tha. Sorry Nisha thinking about some plan for Swayam. 😉😆
DJ WAALE BABU 😆🤣
Laila O Laila 😆 And Toota jo kabhi tara😆 Hey bhagvan Kabir gone crazy😕 Kabir is truly a Nautanki.
You have got the humour it seems.
Kabir really poora plant utha laya!😲😵 IDIOT😆


Yeah mujhe bhi swaron jayda pasand hai 😃
Thanks pikachu 😳😳

@bold ab koi ladka jiski ek hi female bestfriend ho toh bhai kyun bulwayega vo bhi iti hot ladki se 😃😆😉

@ blue actually giving a plant is better idea than roses, ek din toote hue phool murjha jayenge or pheka jayenge par ek rose plant kabir ki mehnat show kar raha hai, or usme naye naye rose denge or kabir ki yaad dilate rahenge 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: 357159pikachu

Propose day

The hafta line🤣
i really couldnt stop laughing on that line. I really loved Tarun and Ashu's conversation when Kabir was asking Nisha out. its was hell hilarious.🤣 🤣
I really loved Swaron dance sequence😳
Bhukkad Ashu and Nishu. Shaadi ke baad Nisha bhabhi ki Ashu devarji se bahut pategi!
😉😆
Kabir bahut zyada jealous hai and i really love it. 😈
I dont know if i should say it but i feel like Kabir gives Maya's vibes (Beyhadh) I am sorry if i have hurt you unwillingly.
But I love Kabir more than I could ever love Maya.😉
And last but not the least, Nibir 1 hour scene. Haaye aise moments bahut acche lagte hain. Please koshish karna ki further parts mein ye aur daal de.
Really loved the update.


Thanks pikachu 😳😃
Ashu or nisha ka toh khub Pat hi raha hai 😆😉

@bold... I'll love to read your views, and I don't feel bad about it and feel free to share your views 😊
And about kabir, he is way way better than Maya 😉
Let's see aghe ke updates kaise honge... Sab ko cute cute hi moment hi chahiye 😳😊
And thanks again 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: 357159pikachu

Chocolate Day

Even i love chocolates so i can truly understand Kabir's state because aapke saamne chocolate hon aur aapko maaloom padhe that you cant have it and moreover you yourself have to give to someone is the most difficult task. 😭
Vaise toh Rab jodi banate hain, yahan teacher ne jodi bana di😆
Kabir ek line sahi se nahi bol sakta Dhakkan!😡
Pehli baar mujhe Ashu aur Kabir par gussa aa raha tha. 😡 Yaar unhone roses thod diye nisha ke. 😭
Nisha ko no bhi mil gaya😆
Sahi mein yaar end tak sabka day kharab ho gaya😭 but i loved it still.😆😊


Mujhe bhi chocolate share karna pasand nhi 😭 but unfortunately karna padta hai 😭

Teacher equivalent to God 😉😆
Kabir bhout darta hai nisha se iss liye nhi bol paya ek line 😆
Kabir is j iss liye rose tod diye😆
And thanks pikachu 😳😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Anmol333



😆😆😆pata tha mujhe yahi bolegi😆
Ab slap day me kya romance hoga😆


slap vala romance 🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Roopsha_98


slap vala romance 🤣


Ye kya hota hai 😆😆😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Anmol333



Ye kya hota hai😆😆😆


pata Ni🤣
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Slap Day



Kabirrr...kutte kamine... Sale..." Swayam entered into rehearsal hall by cursing kabir, when kabir heard this he laughed and tunred to swayam

Hass kyun raha hai manhoos ??" Swayam asked angrily

Tujhe pata chal gaya kya ? " kabir asked laughingly

Tu kitna bura hai kabir...aisa kyun kiya mere sath " Swayam asked

Aise hi...par maza bhout aaya " kabir said and laughed more

Kabir ke bacche main tujhe chodunga nhi" said swayam irritatedly because of kabir's laugh

Arey yaar... Nishu ready nhi hai abhi...tu ek kaam kar kuch saal baad aana phir mere bacchon ko ache se pakadna " replied kabir to which swayam's face palmed

Remember the fight between swaron just sloved last day, that fight because of kabir. Kabir told rubbish about swayam by giving some fake proves to sharon which lead a big fight between them. But yesterday swaron talked to each other and clear their misunderstanding and that when swayam got to know about kabir false statements. And next day means on slap day swayam come to kabir for fight.

Ho gaya tere ??" Swayam asked irritatedly as kabir was still laughing

Nhi abhi bhi bacha hai " kabir said and continued laugh

Bas na ab... Kabir tu bhout galat kiya hai...main kuch bigada hun tera jo aisa kiya mere sath...??" Swayam asked with sad and hurt voice

Bacha kya hai tere bigadne ke liye...??" Now Kabir asked in hurt voice

Sorry ??" Swayam asked confusingly

Never mind... " kabir replied

Kabir what you want to say ??" Swayam asked being fed up with him

Nothing... Jaa tu yaha se tu mere level ka hi nhi hai Jo main tujhse baat karun " kabir said in disgusting tone

Abey main vo hun jo ek minute me teri duniya idhar se udhar kar sakta hun " replied swayam angrily

Abey jaa bey fattu... Hath lagane ka toh aoukat nhi hai baat karta hai " said kabir with anger

Tu bhul raha hai main na teri GIRLFRIEND ka BESTFRIEND hun... Main bolunga na toh laat maar ke vo tujhe apni life se nikal degi... You see laat... Kick ?" Said swayam

Hahahaha you think so...?" Kabir asked between his laugh

I know so... You want a trailer...let me show you then " swayam said while taking out his phone and called nisha with in 3 rings she picked it up

Hello " nisha said and that could be heard by both kabir and swayam as swayam put it on loud speaker

Kya baat hai nishu... ?" Swayam said teasingly

Kya baat hai motu...bolega ?" Nisha asked being confused

Arey kabir ke sath bunk maar ke... Romantic day out n all...hmm " teased swayam

Abey kutte main abhi ghar se nikali hun or tu kya bol raha hai " asked nisha

Arey jhooti main abhi dekha tu or kabir uski bike me kahi jaa rahe the " acted swayam

Kya bol raha hai tu main toh just abhi nikali hun kavya ke sath " said nisha

Vo bike 100% kabir ki hi thi nisha... Tu bol rahi hai ki tu nhi hai toh phir ??" Swayam acted as he was thinking hard being confused

I'll talk to you later swayam " said nisha and hanged up the call

Swayam who was having hard time to control his laugh now he laughed freely at kabir who was hell shocked is an understatement as he couldn't believe what just swayam did eating own medicines is very difficult for kabir, and to his more shock he received nisha's call instantly. Kabir picked up and swayam gesture him to put it on loud speaker.

Hello... Good morning " nisha started

Hello nisha..." Kabir replied with great difficulty

Kahan hai tu abhi ??" She asked

College me hun kyun ?"

Sachi ?"

Toh main jhoot bolunga ?"

Tu gussa kyun ho raha hai...? College me nhi hai toh bata de na main kuch thodi bolungi "

Nisha main sach me college me hi hun "

Pakka na ? Aaj bhi chutti toh nhi maar raha na ?"

Nisha main sach me hun yaar college me.."

Theek hai baba main aa rahi hun bas thodi der me..."

Nisha tujhe mujhpe bharo..."

Wait... Swayam call kar raha main baad me call karti hun " said Nisha and hanged the call in order to attend swayam's call, when nisha said this kabir turned to swayam as kabir was talking with nisha at distance from swayam, kabir come closer to hear NiYam's talk.

Arey nisha gadbad hogayi yaar..." Swayam said

Kya gadbad... ?? " asked nisha

Arey tarun tha jo kabir ki bike le gaya " said swayam and nisha's face palmed hearing this

Gadhe...ullu...pagal..." Started nisha but couldn't complete as swayam stopped her by saying "kabir se jaghda ho gaya kya ? Sorry yaar..."

Chup kar... Main kuch nhi boli use... College bas aane wala hai... chal main rakh rahi bye " said nisha and hanged up

Kyun kabir kaisa laga ??" Asked swayam sarcastically

Tu kyun kiya ye sab... Kamine ??" Asked kabir angrily

Tu kyun jooth bola tha Sharon ko... Kyun hum dono ke beech fight karwaya tha ?" Asked swayam

Tu nisha se dur reh bas...tu bhi khush main bhi khush " said kabir irritatedly

Meri best friend hai vo... " shouted swayam

Meri girlfriend hai...nhi ache lagte ho tum dono saath me " Kabir too shouted

Kabir main tum dono ke beech kabhi bhi nhi aaunga...Tu kyun itna insecure hai ?" Swayam replied keeping himself calming down

Beech me nhi aaunga... Abhi kya kiya tu... Nisha or mere beech phoot daala " said Kabir holding swayam's collar

With this swayam too lost his control and they fight with each other means literally maar pit wala

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Nisha kon tha...?" Asked kavya looking at Nisha's tensed face

Kuch bhi my bestfriend..." Said Nisha and irritated face to which kavya laughed

Waise kavya... Session end hone ki aagaya hai or tum abhi admission le rahi??" Asked Nisha

Arey mere papa miletery me hai na...toh Abhi retire hue hai, maine bola tha ki kuch time hai, main hostel me reh lungi par nhi mane or yaha le aaye " told kavya

Ohh good... " Said nisha

And within 5 minutes they reached to the college. Nisha started showing whole college to kavya, as they reached 30 minutes before time of classes after 15 minutes kavya asked to go to class as it was a big university to roam around and Nisha only had shown half of their department and kavya was tired. So on kavya's request nisha take her into their class where lecture was going to held. Nibir sit at last bench just like previous year. So Nisha took kavya to her sit and made her sit there. Then she noticed that nor swayam and nor Kabir was in the class, she texted them and went to search kabir.


Kabir and swayam was still fighting with each other and in search of them Nisha comes to rehearsal hall and was shocked to view infront of her eyes. Due to fighting kabir and swayam had tore their cloths means their shirts and they were at very wired position which made Nisha to shrink out loud. Kabir and swayam both were on floor, swayam lie straight on his back and Kabir was on him, Kabir's one leg was between swayam's legs and both were holding each other almost teared shirts and it seems like they going to kiss each other and that's why nisha screamed. Hearing her scream both boys looked at Nisha then at each other and stood up fastly they can.

What the fu** was going on here ??" Shouted nisha at them

Nishu kuch nhi...vo..." Started Kabir, but couldn't complete as nisha cut off him

Are you guys were romancing ??" Asked nisha

What... No !!" Both the boys shouted

Dekho kuch hai toh bata do... Aaj kal ye common hai " said nisha

Tu pagal ho hai hai kya nisha... Kuch bhi bol rahi hai...main or swayam lad rahe the " replied Kabir

Ohh thank God... Wait what... Why you guys were fighting??" First nisha sighed then got angry at both of them

Dekh na Nisha me..." Swayam started telling her real story but Kabir started speaking in between "arey nisha... Main or swayam tere birthday ko leke lad rahe the... Ye bola ki nisha uske sath rahegi or main bola ki nisha meri gf hai toh mere sath rahegi "

Kya ho gaya hai Kabir tere talent ko... bahana bhi ache se bhi bana pa raha..." Said nisha irritatedly

Main bahana nhi bana raha hun nisha sachi" said Kabir

Acha mera birthday kab aata hai ??" Asked nisha

December me " replied kabir

Or abhi kon sa mahina chal raha ??" Asked nisha again

February...shit..." Said kabir and sigh in irritation and his face palmed as he know he was caught

Arey nisha abhi se ladenge tabhi toh tere birthday tak decide kar payenge " said swayam try to cover up

Haan Haan...Sahi bola ye " first kabir was shocked as swayam supported him but recover soon and agreed with swayam

Dono mile hue ho...Mujhe pata hai nhi batoge mujhe " said nisha by nodding her head on their drama

Btw class ka time ho raha hai chalen ?" Asked kabir

Aise jayega ?" Asked nisha and indicated towards their half torn cloths

Both looked at themselves and cover their half naked body by their hands.

Wait main tarun se tumhare cloths mangati hun..." Said nisha and turned to call tarun by the time swayam and Kabir got chance to talked with each other

Dekh swayam main nhi chahta ki nisha ko hum include kare...Vo hum dono se gussa ho jayegi...last time yaad hai na pure ek month tak baat nhi kari thi humse " mumbled Kabir slowly

Hmm Sharon bhi muh fula leti hai... toh theek hai girls ko include nhi karenge " said swayam

Hmm but war is on swayam..." Said kabir with attitude

Haan or tu marega... Main tujhe chodunga nhi " said swayam in anger with attitude

Tu kya karega bey...??" Asked kabir furiously

Ho tu kiya... Nisha jab tujhe laat maregi na tabhi mujhe chain milega...dekhna tu..." Said swayam

Tujhe sharm nhi aati vo teri bestfriend hai..." Said kabir, as he was lil bit scared of fighting with nisha as he loves her alot and don't want to lose her

Ab yaad aaya ki vo meri bestfriend hai... Or Sharon bhi toh teri bestfriend hai toh uske sath ye sab kyun kiya " said swayam furiously

Dekh..." Kabir couldn't say as nisha come and start "tarun do minutes me aa raha hai"

Okay... " Both replied in unison

Tum dono sach me jhagad hi rahe the na ?"

Nisha ab tu ye baat dobara boli na toh main marunga tujhe " Said swayam irritatedly

Oye... Kya ?? " Asked kabir furiously and try to beat swayam for saying that he will harm his nisha, but nisha come between them

Kya hai kabir...??" She asked angrily and freed swayam from Kabir's grip

Ye kya bola haaan ?? Vo bhi mere samne ?? hath toh lagake bata meri nisha ko. " Said Kabir possessively

Ohh god... Vo maar diya kya ? Vo bas bol raha hai na " said nisha being fed up with him

Tu hamesha uski side kyun leti hai...??" Kabir asked

Tu kyun hamesha bewajha isse hi ladta rehta hai??" Nisha backfired him

Nisha main be wajha nhi ladta hai " said kabir defenceively

Tu hass mat..." Said nisha and slapped swayam without turning with back of her hand, seeing this Kabir started laughing as swayam hold his face in pain as all the time when nisha scolding Kabir he was teasingly laughing at Kabir

Nisha slapped Kabir too for laughing "tu bhi mat hass..."

Happy slap day kabir..." Teased swayam

You..." Kabir said and run behind swayam who run away from nibir

And they again started fighting, nisha try to stop them but they continued their fight as nisha was not enough strong to push them apart, to her good luck tarun come to rehearsal hall and help nisha to stop Kabir and swayam's fight. Nisha holded swayam and tarun hold kabir.

Kya kar rahe ho tum... Class bas start hone wali or tum dono... Pakdo ye or chalo jaldi" said tarun and give them shirts to wear.

Both swayam and Kabir give each other look and wore the shirts and before they again start bikering tarun take away kabir. Niyam was left.


Kabir and tarun enter in class and Kabir was shocked to see a girl at his place. He went to his seat and observe that girl. Who was wearing a small kurti along with jens and specs. Kabir thought he had seen this girl somewhere but was not able to remember it. So he directly asked

Ummm sorry it is my seat... N btw hum pehle bhi mile hue hai kya ??" He asked

Ohh m sorry... Vo nisha mujhe yahan boli baithne ko... Haan kal hi toh takraye the " replied kavya smilingly

Now kabir get it who is she. So he spoke further "ohh kavya right... Nisha ki new neighbour...right??"

Yeah... Par tumhe kaise pata...?" Kavya asked

Pata kaise nhi hoga... Aaj tumhari wajha se hi meri morning kharab hui hai " said Kabir sitting on his side

Excuse me ??" She asked confusingly

Kabir couldn't reply as teacher enter into the class. But he give a look to kavya and thought "or nhi toh kya... Aaj teri wajha se main Nishu ko lene nhi jaa paya...Or mujhe nishu ne good morning bhi nhi bola... Itni badi ho gai hai college nhi aa sakti kya or tere parents toh or mahan hai... Jabardasti tujhe chipka diya nisha ke sath... Ohh kaise bhul sakta hun tere papa ko kal kitna chila rahe the..." he frowned upon his thoughts and made kavya confused.

On the other hand

Dekh swayam tu sach me Kabir ko pasand karta hai toh bata de main or Sharon hatt jayenge tum dono ke beech se " said nisha by walking to the class

Tu pagal ho gayi hai nisha..." Said swayam making

Arey tu darr mat... Main pehle dosti nibhaungi or apne pyar ki kurbani de dungi" she replied in melodramatic way

Chup kar... Kisi ke sath hona hi hoga toh Kabir hi kyun " said swayam irritatedly

It means you are a gay ??" She asked being shocked

What the...shut up..." Swayam said while smacking her back

Nhi swayam ab sach tere muh me aagaya hai...bata mujhe kispe teri gandi nazar hai ??" Asked nisha teasingly

Sharanjeet pe..." Said swayam smirkingly at her to which nisha rolled her eyes at him and they reached to their class. After seeking permission of teacher they enter into the class. And went to their respective places.

Nisha went to her seat and there was already Kabir and kavya sitting, nisha try to sit between them but seeing nisha approaching to them kavya moved in between and give nisha to sit on side of the bench and kavya sit between nibir. Nor nisha and neither Kabir liked it but don't say anything because lecture was going on. There teacher was teaching and here nibir was irritating each other.

Kabir pen dena toh mera nhi chal raha " asked nisha to which Kabir don't reply to her and continued writting notes

Kabirrr...???" Nisha called he looked at her through corner of his eyes then turn his face other side and kavya notice everything silently

Abey...Tu gussa kyun hai ?" She asked to which he gave her a deadly glare

Arey ghoorta hi rahega ya bolega bhi ?" She asked being irritated with his behaviour

Tune mujhe thappad mara..." He said cutely and pout

Toh tu bhi toh natak kar raha tha na... And btw aaj slap day hai na...toh happy slap day " nisha said surpassing her laugh at his pouty face as at her reply he pout more

Acha chal tu bhi slap day mana le..." Said nisha and put her head on desk by showing her cheeks so he could slap her

Pakka ?" He asked smirkingly

Haan pakka chal maar " she said and closed her eyes in fear as Kabir rise his hand indicating that he'll going to slap her. Kabir smirk at her and take his down slowly then pinched her waist to which nisha covered her mouth as a scream is almost threatened to escape out and Kabir laughed turning his head to other side and kavya too chuckled. By the time nisha made herself normal she punched kabir on his shoulder.

What...??" He asked getting a good punch from nisha and slap her arm back

Maine bola tha slap me not pinch me " said nisha slapping his arm back

What the..." Kabir said and again slap her arm and nisha did the same till they realise that their slapping game was making huge noise, they looked at each other and laugh more by hiding their face from teacher.

Kya kar rahe ho tum dono ??" Asked tarun their noises

Arey kuch nhi...tera dost hai na pagal..." Said nisha sitting straight and snatching pen from Kabir's hand

Tum dono bhi na...sudhar jao..." Commented tarun

Btw aaj Ashu kyu nhi aaya tarun...Or Sharon bhi nhi aai " asked nisha

Ashu or Sharon dono ka tabiyat kharab hai..." Replied kabir

Kaise ?" Asked tarun

Kal barish ki wajha se shayd" said kabir

Hmm chalo classes ke baad hum sab milne chalte hai un dono se " said nisha

Haan good idea..." Agreed tarun with nisha

Nisha... Papaji ne kya bola tha yaad hai na " said kavya hesitatedly

Arey haan..." Said nisha remembering kavya's father words

Kya kya... Nisha ??" Asked kabir

Arey kuch nhi bole the ki college ke baad direct ghar aana kahi mat jana" said nisha sadly

Arey uncle tujhpe kyun rook took laga rahe???" asked kabir furiously

Arey kya bolun main... Aaj bhar ka baat hai kal se kavya ko jaldi jana ho toh jaye main nhi jaungi " said nisha

Arey toh aaj ka program cancel ??" Asked kabir

Haan...Tum dono chale jana na..." Said nisha politely

Hum toh jayenge hi par tu bhi chalti toh Ashu bhout khush ho jata... Tere sath kitna patari khata hai uska..." Said tarun sadly

Haan dono bhukad " commented Kabir

Or phir bhi mota tu ho raha hai" taunted nisha

Chup kar... " Said kabir

Tu chup kar motu..." Said nisha

And that was it for now nibir to fight again. With that they spend rest of day in college fighting with each other and after college nisha went to her home to drop kavya and Kabir went to ashu's house along with tarun. On the other hand swayam spend whole day in college missing Sharon and he too went to her house to spend remaining time with her.

At night both couples talk to each other. Nibir talked with each other whole night, show their eagerness to be with each other as today they didn't get any chance to romance with each other as on valentine's day Ashu was there with them and today on slap day kavya don't move stay in between them, but Kabir promised her that next day will be only them, there will be hurdle or hindrance between them. They will celebrate next day as their anniversary day. While Sharon fall asleep soon due to medicine and swayam kept the phone on whole night to hear her breath which give him another level of satisfaction.

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Ye banner bhi Roops ne banaya... Love you roops🤗
Edited by Anmol333 - 8 years ago
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Swayam aur Kabir ki fight🤣🤣
Kya fight Tha by god🤣🤣
Due to fighting kabir and swayam had tore their cloths means their shirts and they were at very wired position which made Nisha to shrink out loud
ye part Kya Tha🤣🤣
Chee🤣🤣

Kavya😕...Nisha ki new neighbor 😕...vahi ladki Jo Kabir SE takrai thi
😕...NIBIR k beech Beth gai😕😲
STRANGE 😕

Ye Swayam aur Kabir pata Ni Kya Kya Kya karenge 🤣🤣

Update soon😉
Edited by Roopsha_98 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome
loved it
thnx for pm
cont soon

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