Nibir TS - FORGOT ME NOT(part2[b] updated on page24) 7/1 - Page 14

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Posted: 8 years ago

Kuch mat bol bas update de 😛
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Anmol333



Kuch mat bol bas update de😛




pehle mujhe thik to hone de...
Posted: 8 years ago

HEY EVERYONE...first of all a very HAPPYYY NEW YEAKR.. ❤️
I m back with an update finally...
So without wasting anytime in talkings..
Here u go...

Forget me not

PART 2(b)
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FBI office
8 days after the incident of kidnapping happened...
At 11am

The head of police was talking to an officer...
"It has been 8 days now!! Still not a single clue about those kidnappers?"
The officer remain silent and looked down
"look at me officer .. I m talking to u!! Answer me!! What are u all doing from last 8 days?"
"we are trying our best sir but those kidnappers didn't leave a single clue for us!! "
"You are not any normal officer, U r in FBI ... How many cases we have solved till now! Then what is the problem with this one?? Why Can't u find out anything"
Officer didn't have any answers to give him
"it's abt now our county's prestige!! We have to solve this case and save that indian girl anyhow!!"
He thought for while then said..
"Only he can solve this case now!!"
A guy of 23 or 24 was shown listening to music wearing his headphones
Which attached to his mobile onlyy.. But his face was not shown...
That head officer dialed on phone and asked "Where is officer Kumar?send him in my cabin now!!"
"but sir he is on leave today"
"Call him now and ask him to come asap!! "
"ok sir"
He hanged the call
On other side
That guy... He smiled... Only lips shown
He smiled listening to the lyrics of song may be
"Sir .. Who is officer Kumar? I m working here from a long but never heard his name!! An indian officer in FBI? "
"Officer methew , He is indian but He is living in New York from 15 years! he have citizenship of New York!! And moreover He deserves to be in FBI .. and about u not knowing him is because he is a secret officer!! We call him only for some special cases which are not getting solved but He will solve it and leave again before u can even understand wat happened and how he solved the case!! We need officers like him.. "
Officer Mathew didnt liked listening all his praises but remained silent
"U may go now"
"Ok sir"
He left thinking who the hell is this Kumar and lets see how will he solved the case which we can't
On otherside
His half face(eyes were shown which were closed )
A frown came on his forehead
He opened his eyes
That Hazel brown eyes
He looked at his phone
It was a call from office
He picked
Someone informed him that he is been called to FBI head office immediately
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A guy of same age as Nisha was sitting beside her bed on a chair
Nisha opened her eyes
Slowly slowly
Her head was still paining
She looked around and found her self at some unknown place
"Ye konsi jagah hai?where m i?"
She mumbled in slow voice
Then she remembered what happened with her
"those goons ... Kids..oh my god .. Where r the kids ??" she panicked and opened her eyes fully
And then realized someone's presence near her .. On her right side..
He was sleeping putting his head down on a corner of bed
But bcoz of movements of Nisha his sleep got disturb and he open his eyes and saw up
"Tum..." nisha shouted
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FBI Office
2pm in afternoon

Someone was coming inside... Walking...
"Where is officer Kumar?didn't he reached yet?"
"Sir .. " before she could continue she saw him coming
"He came sir... Reaching ur cabin soon"
"Ok"
The call was cut
In few mins there was knock on door
"come in"
He opened the door
with a smile on his face
He was non other than...
Kabir
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To be continued...

A/N : Lo aa gya kabir ab kbush?? 😆
first part se sab Kabir Kabir chilla re ho 🤣
Guys i don't know anything abt FBI or new York k rules citizenship or anything!! So plzz forgive me and ignore if i hav wrote anything wrong and and i have wrote this part in my filmy way 😆
pehle hero Ki smile dikhayi
phir eyes 😉 and last me face 🤣
I hope sabko samjha hoga meine jaisa b likha h😃 plzzz imagine it!!

Edited by ___Neha___ - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Ek dum filmy update tha 😆😆
8 days poor nisha kidnapped hai
FBI agent Kumar ki tarif se hi pata chal gaya tha hero aagaya hai
Jo koi nhi kar sakta vo sirf kabir kar sakta hai 😳😎
Kise dekh ke chilai thi ? Why create suspense ?🤔
Ab aghe kya hoga ? I want to know soon so update soon 😃
Edited by Anmol333 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Kabir's entry...
Interesting...
Eagerly waiting for your next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
lovely update
thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
"Tere saamne aa jaane se ye dil mera dhadka hai
Ye galti nahi hai teri kusoor nazar ka hai"
Dedicated to Kabir's entry

Finaaally Kabir ko pakad k laayi ho tum😆
And as FBI Agent haaye speechless!!😳😳

mereko bhi ni pata New York ya FBI rules ka🤣
Par jis eshhstyle se tum dikha rahi ho like the entry of hero tops the update yaar !!😃
Entry of Kabir was very nicely *SHOWN*

Mai to shuru se ye sochti aayi thi ki Kabir is the boss who kidnapped Nisha par yaha to aur kuch hi ho gaya🤣🤣
Wonderful update 👏👏 actually made me wonder so much 😆😆
And pehle mujhe laga ki phir vo ladka jo Nisha k paas baitha hai Kabir hai🤣 kya karu itna to wait karaya hai Kabir ka tumne 😆
But who can he be? Suspense...😉
Plzz next update part 2 dena, no subpart please please
Continue soon
And yaar late ho gyi mai sorry
Happy New year '17 to you!!🤗

Thanks for pm Anmol😳

Edited by aNibirFan - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Filmy ldki..
Kabir ❤️
I loved d way u introduced him
Coolest guy 😳
Ok let's not go in his details 😉
But I really liked d update..
Cute but short tha yar
Still m glad u updated..
But neha yar Vo jo dosra story thi na kirti kabir ki gf thi Vo update krna nxt please
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Posted: 8 years ago
Filmy update loved it.
Thanks for the PM dear.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update
Thnku for the pm

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