NiBir OS 'I love you ❤️' (COMPLETED)

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Hey guys. My name is Roaiba and i'm quite new to this forum and also a NiBir fan! 😉 I got if long ago only to be able to read those "Members only" posts lol. 😆 But... now recently i've been reading a lot of NiBir stories and also wrote some of mine.. so i thought why not try and post one here.. so what say? Do you guys want to read it? If so please comment and all.. 😃

PS: The OS is thoda sa mature content towards the end iss liye i'm hesitating to post it since i'm new to all this. I'm not really a writer.. i just thought to try something out so don't be mad at me if it's bad aur haan zyada kuch expect mat karna lol. Iss bachhe ko baksh dena plzz.. aur haan i don't know much about if and all this res/unres. As you can see, mai anpar gawar hoon lol. Iss 16 saal ki bachhi ko aap logo ki madat chahiye 🤪 Okay, ab bas ho gaya mera bakwaas. Bye all and i'm waiting for your replies ❤️
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Do post dear waiting for the os...
And res means reserved 😊
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welcome to paagal world😆
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Yeah! Post as many stories as you want!😃 We have no problem with them! Why are you even asking!? 😆
We are always ready for Nibir stories!😉
And welcome to the forum, Roaiba!🤗
I hope you'll love it here!
This is Annie!
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Waiting eagerly for your OS!😳
Do update soon!
And mature content doesn't matter, just make sure that it doesn't go on extra details, though we don't have a problem with that too 🤣 , but the MODs may take you into notice!😛

P.S. For any query regarding IF , do not hesitate to PM me! Always there! 😊
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Hey Roaiba..😃
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Please post the os asap...
An if u wanted to post more stories than u r alwayz...welcome..
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Plzzz update it soon...😉
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Hey Roaiba!
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NiBir OS: I love you

So, hello my pyaare nibirians! Itna achha reply maine expect nehi kiya tha tbh. I couldn't wait for long so i decided to just post it today! Hope you all like it. Thank you so much each one of you for the sweet words and such a warm welcome. I already know some of you 😉 because of your stories or probably because of your famous comments 😆

So anyways, here is the story and it's pretty much just an example of a proposal. I've had many ideas regarding NiBir's proposal and here's just one of them i've penned down. Hope you all like it 😛 Plzz, do send reviews. Critics are accepted. I would love them actually. Abhi mera bak bak bandh aur yeh lo tumhara hopefully *good* story. Enjoy!

I love you

It has been 4 months of their marriage. Kabir had made a promise to Nisha and Dadaji in front of the whole family the day he got released from jail. He had promised to stay. He had promised to never hurt his wifey ever again. He had promised to take care of her no matter what. Nisha was elated on hearing this. She felt like she was on cloud nine but.. her happiness didn't last for long as doubts started to form in her mind. She believed Kabir was doing this out of guilt, not because he loved her.

It was now 4 months of their marriage and they still hadn't confessed their feelings for each other. They were staying overnight at the GH since it was Nisha's birthday and Kabir and the cousins had surprised her. After having a fun cake fight, opening presents and chitchatting, NiBir headed to their room to rest.

Nisha was in the washroom while Kabir changed his clothes and started settling the bed. He heard a knock at the door and got confused. "Who could it be at this time?" He thought and went to open the door. There stood his dadi with a cute smile playing on her lips. There was a box in her hand. "Dadi? Aap iss waqt? Kuch chahiye tha? Aap mujhe bula leti, aap ko takleef karne ki kya zaroorat thi?" He asked in one go. Dadi giggled and walked inside. She looked around in the room and slowly turned to Kabir. She frowned and asked him: "Nisu kathhe gayi?" Kabir made her sit down on the bed and replied: "Woh washroom mein hai, shower lene gayi hai" "Ke? Iss waqat?" Kabir smiled at her. "Haan, uss ne saara din kaam kiya, bahar thi aur phir yeh birthday party.. iss liye fresh hone gayi hai. Cousins aur maine mil kar cake bhi toh lagaya tha na.." Dadi nodded and smiled in response.

Kabir looked at the box in her hand curiously. "Vaise dadi..aap yaha? Aur yeh box?" "Je maari bachhi ke liye taufa, janamdin ke vaaste. Bohot sambhal ke rakhe manne." "Ohh" he smiled in response and asked her what was in the box. Dadi opened it and showed him. There lay a beautiful chain. It was pretty simple with nothing on it. "Dadi, it's beautiful. I'm sure Nisha ko pasand ayegi. Bilkul simple hai, ussi ki tarha." Dadi noticed his expressions while talking about Nisha. She could see how much he loved her and felt happy for choosing him for her beloved granddaughter. "Tanne ke laage hai, je maari poti pe kaisi lagegi?" She asked curiously, trying to understand his feelings. Kabir smiled brightly at her and replied: "Yeh uss pe bohot achhi lagegi. Aap ki poti hai hi itni beautiful aur yeh chain toh bilkul ussi ki tarha hai, simple and beautiful." Dadi smiled and nodded. "Aakhir poti kiski hai?" She said and laughed. Kabir laughed along.

They hadn't noticed Nisha's presence in the room. She had just come out of the washroom, right in time to hear her hubby call her beautiful. She smiled brightly and blushed. "Kya baate chal rahi hai?" She interrupted and composed herself. They smiled at her as she sat between them. Dadi handed her the box and wished her again. Nisha happily accepted it and her eyes filled with adoration when she saw the chain. "Wow, yeh toh bohot pretty hai, dadi. Thank you so much!" She exclaimed happily and side hugged her. "Dekha maine kaha tha na isse zaroor pasand ayegi." Kabir replied looking at them both. "Manne bato hai, maari pasand humesha sahi hove hai. Jaise tanne pasand ki thi iss ke liye vaisi yeh chain. Dono iss ko khub pasand ayi. Kyu?" Dadi said teasingly and nudged Nisha.

Kabir was just staring at his wifey and noticed how her expressions changed. Her cheeks were turning red and she was trying to hide it. He felt amazed but happy that he had this effect on her. The hope in his heart about her maybe loving him back was slowly growing day by day. She had been jealous and acted possessive when a girl tried to flirt with him and even lashed out on that girl. She was extremely caring and worried for him when he had high fever once. He would even notice how she turned nervous whenever he was close to her. Maybe she did have feelings for him after all.

His trance got broken when Dadi spoke up. She handed him the box and asked him to make Nisha wear the chain. He agreed happily while she tried to protest. She didn't want another reason to embarrass herself in front of Dadi or Kabir. She didn't want her cheeks to redden more than they already were.. but seeing Kabir's and Dadi's expressions, she couldn't deny.

He grinned sheepishly and put the box aside. He put his hands on her shoulders and turned her back towards him. She silently prayed to god to not let his touch affect her like always but it was already too late. He had already started to push her hair aside, his fingers slightly brushing against her soft skin as she felt chills running down her spine. Flashbacks of the first day of their married life started to come back to her. She remembered when Dadi had gifted her a necklace on the terrace and forcefully made Kabir to make her wear it.

Back to present: Kabir took the chain in his hands and opened the clasp. Putting his arms on either side of her shoulders, he put it around her neck and proceeded to close the clasp. His touch was electrifying to her as he was struggling to close it and his fingers were rubbing her skin roughly in the process. She let out a sigh of relief when he was done, realizing that she was holding her breath. Dadi smiled in contentment before bidding good night and left.

Nisha smiled at him awkwardly and walked to the dressing table and let out a sigh. She tried to open the chain as she didn't want to sleep with it on. It would be highly uncomfortable for her, even though she is used to wear the mangalsutra to bed. She wanted to save that chain for special occasions anyways. She let out an irritated grunt since she couldn't get it off.

Kabir watched her every move and moved closer to her until he was standing right behind her. She sensed it and looked up to meet his eyes. He smiled at her and offered to help her to which she nodded reluctantly. Again the same process followed. His fingers brushing against her soft skin, shivers running down her spine as she tried to breathe normally, him enjoying every bit of it as he could sense what his touch did to her. When he was finished he let the chain slid off slowly and she closed her eyes for a second to open them again and get lost in his eyes.

They were looking intensely at each other through the mirror, their hearts longing for each other and nothing more. It was as if they were trying to portray these feelings through their eyes. He soon moved away to get ready for bed. He changed and came back and found her near the balcony as she was opening the doors over there to let some fresh air in. The heat these days were just too much to handle.

He went to drink some water from the bottle beside the bed and when he turned around, he bumped into her. To save her from falling, he wrapped his arms around her waist and body while she involuntarily wrapped hers around his neck. They stood bent like that for a while when suddenly his gaze fell on something and he helped her stand straight, feeling hurt and shocked. She noticed the change of expressions and got confused. "Kabir.. kya hua tujhe?" She asked with concern in her voice and put her hand on his shoulder. Kabir looked into her eyes and she could see some unsaid emotions in there.. which looked like hurt? Fear? But why?

She nudged him and raised her eyebrows in a questioning way. Kabir looked everywhere except at her and asked: "Ni..Nisha..tune apni man.. mangalsutra k.. kyu utaari? Tu kahi mujhe chod ke toh nehi jaa rahi?" He stammered, his voice a pitch higher than usual. Nisha felt awed and surprised at his behavior. It was kinda funny seeing his tensed face. He looked so cute, so nervous. She let out a chuckle and walked to the dressing table and came back with the mangalsutra in her hand. "Pagal hai yaar tu Kabir. Meri itni majaal ki mai apni hubby 'The Kabir Kumar' ko chod doon? Are yaar ab panga kar li hai toh nibhani toh paregi na. Yeh wifey toh puri zindagi apni hubby ka picha nehi chodegi." She said cheekily and showed him the mangalsutra. "Yeh dekh. Mai jab nahane gayi thi toh isse utaar diya. Varna yaha waha baalon mein atak jaata aur mujhe bohot irritation hota." She could see him relax and smiled to herself. "Lekin tu toh isse kabhi nehi utaarti. Phir shower mein kyu?" He asked mock curiously. Now Nisha got a little irritated and frowned. Before she even realised it, she blurted out: "Are, phir bhi ise paani nehi lagne de sakti hoon mai. Soch agar yeh kharab ho jaata.. mai ise thodi na kharab hone de sakti hoon. I want to be able to wear it na, so that people can know I'm your wifey and I only belong to you.."

She was walking away from there but he pulled her by her arm and gripped her waist, pulling her close to him so their noses were touching, their lips only a few inches apart. She gasped at the sudden proximity, her breaths quickening as his eyes bore into her soul. He smirked and whispered huskily: "Ohh toh tujhe duniya ko dikhani hai ki tu sirf meri hai?" and raised his eyebrow slightly, leaning in to her ear he whispered: "Par mujhe kyu nehi dikhati?" Nisha gulped down in nervousness as she realised what she had said. "Woh.. woh.. woh.. mai.." she stammered trying to find words but failed miserably. He smirked and released his hold slowly. "Relax" he said and blinked his eyes in assurance. Nisha just stared at him in bewilderment. "I wouldn't do anything against your will." He assured her but then of course his kpanti just had to kick in.

He smirked and put his arms around her neck. He then leaned in slightly and said with a teasing voice: "Unless you don't want me to act like your hubby.." Nisha gasped and hit him on his arm lightly. "Kabiiir" she whined like a baby and turned around, trying to control the hardcore blush that began to creep on her cheeks. He chuckled at this and wrapped his arms around her waist from the back. "Achha baba sorry. Aaj tak aisa mazak nehi kiya hai maine jiske liye mujhe pachtana naa pare" he said and unwrapped his arms and held his ears while apologising.

Nisha smiled and giggled at this. "Pagal" she mumbled and handed him the mangalsutra. "Ab aise hi dekhta rahega ya pehnayega bhi, cute act ki dukaan.." He grinned at her and made her wear it. "Oh god. Why did you have to create all these opportunities for him to touch me? You know na what happens to me? I get so affected and he even notices it..." She thought and didn't even realise he was done with his job and was staring at her amazed, watching her lost in her own thoughts. He snapped his fingers in front of her eyes to which she got conscious and they both smiled at each other before going to bed. Nisha drifted off instantly while he sat in the darkness and contemplated over his life with her.

"This is getting too much yaar. I'm trying to understand her feelings but she just makes me confused. It's clear she feels something for me, everyone says that.. but why doesn't she? Her actions tells me there is something but then her words.. ugh why is this so hard? It's so frustrating. I just want to get rid of this confusion, that's all." He mumbled to himself and then turned to look at his angel. "Nisha.. bas ek baar, bas ek baar bolde ki tu bhi mujhse pyaar karti hai.. dekhna mai tujhe duniya ki saari khushiya doongi, I promise. Mai tujhe itna pyaar karoonga ki tu apni saari dukh bhul jayegi wifey.. I'll promise, I'll keep you happy.. i love you so much nishu.. bas ek baar keh de ki teri dil mein bhi mere liye jaga hai.." he said to the sleeping figure in front of him and cried bitterly.

He wiped away his tears and was just about to turn around when her voice came and startled him. "Toh tu bhi toh bol sakta tha na, Kabir" she said, tears brimming in her eyes as she switched on the light and sat up. He looked at her shocked and she started hitting him, rambling on about how much she loved him and why he didn't tell her earlier. "Duffer, gadha, ullu ka pathha. Tune agar pehle bol diya hota toh aaj aise biwi se maar nehi khaani parti" She huffed as he gripped her around her wrists, stopping her from hitting him. She glared at him angrily but then let her head fall on his chest as tears made their way through her eyes. He released her hands as she threw herself in his arms and sobbed uncontrollably.

He immediately came out from his shock and wrapped his arms around her petite body. "Shh, shh. Dekh, everything's fine na. We're together now. It's alright, stop crying na jaan." He said sofly and broke the hug, wiping away her tears and kissing her forehead. She put her hands on his that were resting on her cheeks and smiled. "I love you, Kabir. Mai tujhse bohot bohot bohot zyaada pyaar karti hoon. Tu mujhe kabhi chod ke toh nehi jayega na?" She said cutely. Kabir laughed at her cuteness. "I love you too meri jaan. Aur mai tujhe kabhi bhi chod ke nehi jaunga. Panga kiya hai na? Toh chodne ka toh koi chance hi nehi. Pakka promise." He replied sheepishly and winked at her. She blushed on his statement but especially on the word jaan.

They hugged again, feeling content. Once they broke the hug, Kabir looked at her longingly, his gaze shifting between her eyes and lips, a desire awakening in him.. something that he'd buried down long ago. She noticed this and shied away, putting her gaze down and fidgeting with her fingers nervously. He lifted her chin up with the help of his fingers and looked at her lovingly, asking for permission to proceed further through his eyes. She blushed and closed her eyes.

Taking it as a yes, he used his right hand to tuck some hair strands behind her right ear while his left hand pushed away the hair from her left shoulder. He leaned in and placed a feathery kiss on her collarbone. As his lips came in contact with her skin, she felt sparks in her. Some unknown sensations ran in her body. She fisted the sheets as he proceeded further by brushing his lips against her skin, from her bare shoulder to her neck. He then traced the same path by placing wild kisses all over there. She gasped as he placed a wet kiss on her swan neck and her hands automatically made their way to his shoulders and clutched his tshirt tightly.

He smiled and started placing feathery kisses all over her face. He placed a kiss right on the corner of her lips, his lips lingering there as a smile crept on her face. He then leaned back and looked into her eyes, his thumb tracing her soft luscious lips. He asked for permission through his eyes and she smiled shyly while biting her lip nervously in response. He beamed at her before leaning in and sealing his lips with hers.

At first the kiss was slow but it soon turned passionate as she started responding with the same love and passion. His hands roamed all over her back and her hands roamed in his hair, pulling him closer and pushing him more onto her. This made him go wilder, he started sucking and nibbling on her lips harshly. She was flustered, it was her first kiss after all. She didn't mind, she had wanted him for long now and this was just another wish coming true.

He licked her lower lip and soon bit down causing her to let out a soft moan. Taking the opportunity, he probed his entry in her mouth causing her to gasp but she soon began battling for dominance. The kiss just turned wilder and wilder and soon they fell back on the bed, with Kabir laying on top of Nisha. He supported his weight with his hands and she crossed her arms around his neck, pulling him down on her. The intensity in the moment just increased with their desire for each other, the longing that they both felt for one and other had now finally been answered.

His hands roamed over her body and then found their way inside her top and gripped her bare waist tightly. She gasped into his mouth at the sudden touch but she didn't mind and let him do whatever he wanted. She just took in the pleasure and roamed her hands in his hair freely. Their tongues fought with each other, knocking the air out of them.. Soon they had to break apart due to the lack of oxygen and panted for air. With their foreheads together and their fingers intertwined, they looked at each other with reddened cheeks and smiled. "I love you" she breathed out. "I love you too" he replied before taking her in for another wild kiss.

So there you go! That's the story. I hope you liked it ...aur uss last line ke baad i assume your GM's must have been activated 😉 Do send me reviews, critics are welcome. And that's a wrap from me! 🤪 Big hugs to all 🤗❤️


Edited by roaiba - 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anmol333

Do post dear waiting for the os...

And res means reserved 😊


Hey Anmol! Your wait is over, the os is up! Enjoy :)

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