NIBIR SS - The Journey Of Love (Epilogue part B up pg 95)*10/1* - Page 51

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Posted: 8 years ago

Thanks anju 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awww such a cutie update 😳
Muskaan & NIBIR scenes were just awww 😳
Update next part soon & sorry for late comment😊
Edited by Roopsha_98 - 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Roopsha_98

Awww such a cutie update 😳
Muskaan & NIBIR scenes were just awww 😳
Update next part soon & sorry for late comment😊


Thanks roops 😳😳
Tere comment ki kushi me le update 😉
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Chapter 10 (last part)



Kabir was woke up by jerk as bus stopped all of sudden, he was about to hit the front seat but couldn't as his savior put hand on him to prevent him. Kabir looked at hand then turned left to see nisha who's hand it was and from one hand she was holding kabir and from other muskan.

Are you alright..??" Nisha asked in low voice

Yeah fine... Thanks " he said as nisha withdraw back

Kab se uthe hui hai tu ?" He inquired

Bhout der ho gaya.." Nisha replied in low voice

What happened to you ?? Why are you talking in low voice ??" Asked kabir

Vo kabir..." She said and bite her lower lip while looking down, on the other hand kabir was just lost on her action, he don't know what happen to but he feel something not knowing what but her action effect him.

Controlling himself he asked again "wh...what ha.. Happ... Happen ??" He himself don't know why he fumble.?

Vo kabir... Umm hume Gondia me utrna tha na... Umm vo stoppage chala gaya sayad.." Said nisha being ready for a good amount of scolding as she know it was 4th time because of her they almost miss their train or stoppage.

Ohh..." He sigh and was face palmed thinking non sense in mentally "nisha mujhe Nagpur tak direct bus mil gaya tha toh maine usi me booking karwa di thi..." Said kabir smacking her

Nisha looked at him in shock them smack him back and said " phele nhi bata sakta tha tu"

Toh tu so rahi thi na... " defend kabir as he actually forgot to mention about this to nisha

Toh main uthi nhi thi kya..??" She said

Acha vo chodh kya time ho raha hai ?" Asked kabir diverting her mind

Kyun tere pass watch nhi hai kya ??" She Backfire again

Tu bata degi toh kuch chala jayega kya..?" He asked

Haan bhout kuch chala jayega... Jo tu topic change karne ki koshis kar raha hai na vo change ho jaye ga " she replied

Fine... main jaldi me bhul gaya tha tujhe batana " said kabir

Ab aya na line me... Abhi 2:45 ho raha hai.." Said nisha

Nisha... " he groaned and said " we'll be at Nagpur at 4 o'clock "

Ohhkk... "

Tune kuch khaya ??"

Nhi... Bhout ajeeb lag raha hai..!"

Kya hua..?"

Main jab bhi bus me travel karti hun toh bhout ajeeb lagta hai.. "

Vomiting ho jayega aisa lag raha hai kya ??"

Hmm.."

Ohh God..! Nisha.. You should tell me before I'll make another arrangement.. " he panicked

Kabir calm down.. Calm down.. I m fine.. Kuch hoga toh bataungi "

But... " kabir started but nisha hold his arm and make him keep quiet "Shh..."

After a while muskan too wake up with more energy to do lots of mischiefs. After waking up she did first was taking kabir specs and started playing with while kabir try to stop her but she didn't hear him. In that she broke his specs, both nibir looked at floor with shock as his specs was on the floor while muskan got scare by this and she started crying...

Kabir tu bina specs bhi acha hi dikhta hai yaar, mat chila bachi par " said nisha as she take Muskan on her arm to calm her down

Arey main kahan kuch bola...?? Tu dekh kahi muskan ko toh chot toh nhi aayi na ??" Asked kabir

Hmm use chot nhi aayi hai bas darr gai hai" said nisha

Arey yaar... Kuch kar na uska dhayn bata" said kabir

Kya karun main tu bata mujhe ?? Ek toh darata hai phir bolta hai kuch kar " said nisha

Tujhse toh baat karna hi bekar hai... " said kabir then ask to muskan "Muskan chocolate khati hai ?? Dekho toh mere pass ye chocolate hai Muskan kaheygi kya ? ?" He asked very cutely making Muskan to face him, he show chocolate to her as he brought for them (nibir) at morning only.

He take her in his lap and made her eat chocolate, after that trio had many fun as nibir talked to Muskan in childish way, play childish game, click selfie, which distract nisha from her not so good health and it also kill one and half hour.

After coming out from bus nisha did first thing that was vomiting. Kabir was behind her rubbing her back all the time, once she was done he gave her water, nisha take water and go some distance to calm herself down while Muskan parent too come and thanked them for taking care of their child.

Unko vomiting ho raha hai... Koi khus khabri hai kya..??" Asked Muskan's mother

First kabir looked at her shock then as usual blush hard which again misunderstood by muskan's parents. In this nisha too come there.

Aisi halat me jayada travel nhi karte " said Muskan's mother on which nisha shoot confused look.

Chalo ab hume jana hai humari train hai " said kabir while fake laughing

Okay thank you again" said Muskan's father and handshake with kabir and they left before that nibir kissed Muskan as a good bye kiss.

Kya bol rahe the vo log...??" Asked nisha

Time hone hi wala hai nisha... Hume railway station chalna chahiye " said kabir ignoring her question

Main kya puch rahi Hun tu kya bol raha hai ??"

Jaldi chal..."

Kabirrr "

Kya...?? Chal na jaldi..."



Kyun kar raha hai yaar tu mere sath aisa kab se puch rahi hun batana kya bole Muskan ke parents ?" Asked nisha as they make themselves comfortable on their train's seat

Train kitni khali hai na...?? Lagta hai humari seat confirm ho jayegi.."

Kabirrr..."

Nisha..."

Kya hai yaar kyun nhi bol raha hai tu.. Tab se tera dimag kha rahi hun phir bhi...! "

Kya tab se toh main bhi bol raha hun... Jhooti "

Jo main suna chah rahi hun vo toh nhi bol raha na "

Kya suna hai tujhe ??"

Kya bole Muskan ke parents ??"

Aacha tune apne Papa se baat ki ?"

Haan subha ki thi or bata diya sab kuch... Or tu topic change mat kar "

Tu topic mat change kar or apne Papa ko phone kar or bata hum kon se compartment me hai " said kabir and gave her phone. After detailing his father nisha hanged the call and again started eating kabir's brain with her same question "what Muskan's parents said " he gave in his demand and told her what they said which make nisha too bulsh and a awkward silence between them. To break this silence kabir said

Arey vo ladki humare sath bus me bhi thi " he points out at a girl, nisha turn to see whim he was pointing out as they were sitting on 2 window seat which was in front of 6 seats on train.

Yeah right ye thi toh or tujhe vo tab se ghur bhi rahi thi..." Said nisha with ting of anger while kabir was amused by this as she noticed this

Kabir tu ek kaam kar tu yaha baith aise vo tujhe nhi dekh payegi " asked nisha

Arey par... Sirf dekh hi rahi vo..."

Main Jo bol rahi hun na vo kar jayda dimag mat laga samjha " she said and they both exchange their position, nisha glare at that girl while she made frustrated face not seeing kabir.

Nisha tu aisa kyun kar rahi..?" Asked kabir

Kya kar rahi hun main..??" She asked back

Kyun j ho rahi hai ?"

Ohh please... Main j nhi ho rahi... Main bas tujhe bacha rahi hun"

Kyun ??"

Kyunki... " she lost word

Kyunki ka javab mere pass bhi nhi hai nisha... Jis din tujhe vo javab mile toh mujhe batana kya hai vo, main phele tujhse suna chahta hun " he said directly looking in her eyes, nisha didnt say anything just turned her face toward window and looked outer view
After a while their food came, which were ordered by kabir they had their meal silently as they had many things to say but speaking nothing don't know why. After completing his food he went on upper seat to sleep. Nisha too lied down and after a while she fall asleep due to medicine as kabir first take to a doctor then they come to station in mid way to station he change the plan. But kabir wasn't able to sleep as finally that day had come which is last day of nisha being with him.



I love you nisha... Yes I love you.. I love you this is true... Mil gaya uss kyunki ka javab... Kyun main viraj se jealous tha.. Kyun main Teri itni care karta hun... Because I love you... I just love you... " said kabir with tears to sleeping nisha while caressing her hair " you know what nisha sab Teri galti hai... Tu itni achi kyun yaar ?? Kyun tu sabka khyal rakhti hai ? " he paused then again continue " mere iss stupid question me hi mujhe mera javab mil raha hai.. Tere layak nhi hun main tu ek angel hai or main... Mujhe toh mere baap ne bhi nhi apnaya..." He said and cried "but.. But nisha I love you and will always love you only and this is truth of my life..." Said kabir and kissed her forehead and for a few minute he linger his lips on her forehead. Then back off after clearing his face he wake her up and told they're going to reach within few minutes.

Nisha was happy finally she is going to be with her family. As she had missed them but she was not feeling that much happy as she should be. Whenever nisha had went out for any trip from college she being super happy on return time as she love her family too much and can't anything against their will.
Finally train come to halt and end nibir journey here only.

Chal kabir main tujhe meri family se milati hun..." Said nisha holding his arm and pull him with her as soon as they come down from train

Bas nisha... Bas... Ab alag hone ka time aagaya hai... Humara sath yahi tak tha... Ab Teri zindagi se mere exit ka time hogaya..."

Kabirrr... "

Haan nisha hogaya ab.. Jaa apni duniya me wapas jaa.. Chal jaa..."

Nisha said nothing just look at him blankly.

Chachu ye rahi nisha " kabir heard this and left from there without saying anything, nisha just looked at him as he vanished into crowd.

Nishu..." Said Saurav and hugged her but nisha wasn't able say anything as she was lost she don't what was happening there? How her body had respond ?what other is saying ? Nothing just nothing..!

Last thing she know that she was in the palace room, which were booked by both the family. And crying sitting on floor.



I lost you.. Meri nhi ho skati hai tu... But I love you nisha only you..." Said kabir looking at their picture which were taken with muskan, he was sitting in train which will take him back to his world...

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Edited by Anmol333 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I'm super khush ki I got an update of this journey
Kaash Nisha meri zindagi me bhi hoti🤔 sar pe badi buri lagti hai yaar jab aisa hota hai sar thukta hai bus rukne se neend ki to band bajti hi hai sar ki baarat nikal aati hai 🤣mere saath ho chuka😆
Phir chut gaya stop🤣🤣🤣
Kabir 6th sense se fumble kar gaya😉🤣
Arey waah Banda to smart nikla pehle hi Nagpur tak book karli pichle incidents se samaj gya lagta hai😆
Vomiting waali problem mujhe bhi hai🤔 isliye medicine rakh leti hu jab travel karti hu to😊
Bas krupa hai Bhagwaan ki mujhe aisa kuch nai bola koi🤣
Kabir beechara jisse vo padhaku lagta tha vahi chashma toot gaya
Topic change ho rahe hai baar baar🤣
Nisha j😆
This dialogue is Amazing: "Kyunki ka javab mere pass bhi nhi hai nisha... Jis din tujhe vo javab mile toh mujhe batana kya hai vo, main phele tujhse suna chahta hun "
Kabir realized that he has fallen for her😊
but it was really on an Emotional front 😭
Kabir and Nisha last conversation very very touching
😭😭😭
Chali jaa humara saath yahi tak ka thaa😭
Sad for both😭😭😭
Dono separated😒
Kya climax hai Anmol👏 now it would be the best to know how Nisha goes to Kabir or vice versa😃
Kabir use to chod k jaa chuka thinking she cannot be his cz she's supposed to get married to Viraj
Similarly, Nisha too who is crying on the floor what will happen when she realizes her feelings for Kabir?
Would she still marry Viraj thinking about her family's reputation or would she dare to call the marriage off?
Would Kabir come back to her? Would Nisha be able to contact Kabir? Would she be able to meet him again?
So many questions! !😲
I'm sure you would answer each with your next superb update 😃😳

Beautifully put down Anmol!!👏
Loved the update so much ❤️
It was mixed emotions update hasaaya bhi aur rulaaya bhi...Enjoyed their banter and sad about their separation...
Bestam best update 👏👏
Journey of love is finally about to reach towards it's end😭
But you know Anmol for me, train naa up-down and down-up dono chalti hai aur journey kabhi thamti nai hmmm
Yaar Anmol this story really creates magic on me... I don't know why...just it does...or you've got a magic wand I don't know... I still would want this journey never to end if that could happen...
Waiting for next part
Edited by aNibirFan - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Updated... Last part please ignore mistakes..😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Anmol..!! Not fair yar
U actually made me cry..
Ek to starting mein hi u mentioned dat it z d last part wich made me sad but still wid d hope of a happy ending I read it wid all cheerful mood but still nibir r separated last m..!!
Though u hav written xtrmly well..all d scenes..but m not happy
Want to c Nibir United..please
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Posted: 8 years ago
Unres just after your update
Please unite them soon :)
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nibir😭awww kabir's last line😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
jaldi usse unite kardho...
train scene was awesome
beautifully written anmol...just loved it .muskan to sweet and her parents same like us😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
Anmol😲😭😡
Last part matlab... epilogue baki h na ???? Plzz say yes 😭
Edited by poornima_15 - 8 years ago

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