NIBIR SS - The Journey Of Love (Epilogue part B up pg 95)*10/1* - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
res
unres
cousins scene was the best part😃loved it
mujhe aisa lag rahi hai ki yeh shaadhi nahi hoga and rathode kabir nahi hai😛
nisha condition was well written 👏waiting for next update and nibir meeting😃
thanku sooo very much for new story😃so sweet of u😊thanku yaar😃
sorry for late comment and bina bhoole pm bhejne ke liye thanku😃
waiting...mr,rathode aap koun hai😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
interesting. cousins bonding too good.⭐️ nisha's inner turmoil expressed very well.
amazing start👏
eager to know what happens next n curious to know who is Mr Rathode😉
continue soon pls😃


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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
Very nice prologue..
Do continue soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: Anmol333


Mera toh kaam hi hai confused Karna😆 may be next update clear your doubt 😉😉😛

I jst hope Mr.Rathode Vhi ho jo main chahti hu
Nyways waiting Yar
Bdw wanna kno wats ur name lyk ur friends call u anmol only??
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: Snow12345654321

interesting. cousins bonding too good.⭐️ nisha's inner turmoil expressed very well.

amazing start👏
eager to know what happens next n curious to know who is Mr Rathode😉
continue soon pls😃



Thank you sanju 😳
Well may be next update clear your all doubt 😛😆
Mr Rathoor kon hai bata de 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: itzanya32

Very nice prologue..
Do continue soon..


Thank u anya 😃
Yeah will update soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: tani_0209

I jst hope Mr.Rathode Vhi ho jo main chahti hu
Nyways waiting Yar
Bdw wanna kno wats ur name lyk ur friends call u anmol only??


Next update will clear your doubt may be 😉 mujhe nhi pata ok

And yeah my real name is Anmol only 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: Sujayricky

Mera bhi res 😈

Ab unres bhi hogaya 😉
Superb start 👏

Mujhe kyu lagta hai yeh arrange marriage pe story nahi hai 😉

Nisha and cousins scene was nice
Specially sukku ka dhamki wala scene 😆

Mr rathode mai kuch toh gadbad hai 🤣

Ab tu bas update kar de i am ready 😈


Thanks sujay 😛
Sare raaz next update me hi khulenge 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anmol333



Thanks sujay😛
Sare raaz next update me hi khulenge😉


Tu raaz 5 bana rahi hai kya 🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
Please ignore typo error and I know this is quite short part but hope you like it 😳

Chapter 1

Kam se kam ab toh shrma le nisha... Bas kuch akhri pal hai tere Jaipur me phir toh tu apne pati ke sath rahegi " whisper saurav

Chup kar sauro warna bhout maar khaega " whispered back nisha

Aaa saurav needs helps " said dolly

Ja coolie tera bulava aagaya " said nisha smilingly to saurav on which give her playful glare and went toward dolly to help her..

Nisha tu yaha aram se baith ja " said vimla

Ji taiji " said nisha

Arey " a shriek hear by everyone.. Making them startled

Kya hua lakshmi ??" Asked a worried ramesh

Ramesh dekho na vo jo kanthhaar dhule ko chadta hai vo ghar me hi reh gaya Maine purse me dala tha mera purse hi ghar me reh gaya hai " said a hyper lakshmi

Arey ye kya kar diya lakshmi tumne, train bas aane hi wali hai " said rupan

Abhi adha ghanta hai train aane me or ekk hi jo itne kam time me ghar se lakshmi ka bag leke aa sakta hai " said viren

As nisha is going to marry Mr. Rathoor in next 10 days in Mumbai so all relatives of hers' is going Mumbai by train.. They were at Jaipur station waiting room when lakshmi realize she had forgeten her purse at home..

Yes main jaungi Ghar " shouted nisha in happiness

Sukku chabhi de " said nisha as it was nisha's last day at Jaipur so she demanded that she will go station by her Scooty..

Nishu di ye lo ghar ko chabhi " rukma

Soon nisha zoomed out to her home as she had to come back to station soon..

When nisha reached at her home she become all emotional, and why not, this is the place where grown up, this the place when she 1st time walk, this is the place she talked 1st time, this is the place where she had grown from a child to a young lady who is ready to leave this house which was hers'.. The beautiful memories of her life was here.. Now she had to leave her home for a stranger to whom her heart is not ready to spent her entire life.. she don't know when huge amount of tears started rolling down from her eyes.. Remembering her beautiful memories of this house.. She know may be this will be her last time where she can see her house.. As her would be husband live in London and his home town is Mumbai, that's why they are going to Mumbai, may be these are her few days in India..

She cried out her heart out as no one was there.. The tear she was holding from the time her alliance, were out now.. After good five minutes her phone rang.. Giving her warning that she is getting late.. She picked up the phone..

Nisha jaldi aa train bas aane wali hai 20 min. me" barked sukku at phone as lots of noise was coming from platform

Haan haan sukku main aa rahi hun " said nisha and immediately cut the call

Hello hello nisha " said sukku then looked at his phone and realize she had cut the call..

Then an announcement made.. Sukku hear that and sigh in frustration..

After that anyhow nisha collected herself and took the purse.. About to close the door when she take a last look of her house then closed the door with blur view as tear again made his way in her eyes..
She hugged her house spreading her arm around the wall and mumble will miss you.. Go back to station by her may be last ride of scooty...

She enter in the station saw that train was about to leave, train was about leave what it was started running but as it leave platform it have slow speed.. Nisha immediately ran catch the train and safely she had climbed the train..

S5 seat no 23 " she mumbled then moved to her destination

She was in S4 so she go to S5 looked for her seat and she found it.. But she got shock by coming there as there was an old couple at their late 70.. Two young boys hardly 15 or 11 and one lady may be near her 40s.. But her seat was empty so she moved to her seat everyone looked at her shocked.. Seeing their shocked face nisha also pass a confused look.. The old lady was about say something when her husband may be stopped her and said something in her ear.. She smiled looking at her and say nothing..

Here nisha was hell confused as she know the timing of Mumbai train was this and she was at right seat then where is her family members.. She was thinking this when she heard a person was shouting there

Pota gir ke marr jaye koi matalb nhi Jaipur ki kachori khana hai inne vo bhi garama garam " the guy shout at old couple..

Lo le aaya main, thoosn lo.." He said moved his eye on other side saw a beautiful girl was sitting at his seat.. But he was hell angry that he didn't notice much her..

Excuse me.. Madam vo meri seat hai " the guy said.. Adjusting his specs.. But the girl didn't turn.. she was looking out from window

Ohh hello blue suit.. " now nisha turn and looked at him as she was wearing light blue suit with silver work done on them and a diamond necklace... (Arey bride hai thoda toh tayaar ho gi na) He continue " vo meri seat hai "


To be continued...


Edited by Anmol333 - 9 years ago

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