Nibir os : Fate of love... It happens when it have to ..!

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Fate of love.. It happens when it have to

Finally iam here, actually it is not becoz of the physical distance but mentally its really difficult to reach here, it took me a full week to prepare my mind to take this decision and now iam ready to execute it .. I reached the edge of the terrace nd closed my eyes to take a deep breath but all i could see was the flashback of the terrible morning i faced 1 week ago..

The face of that man who slammed a divorce paper on my face when i was feeding our 2 yr old daughter , my cries nd wails for giving a 2nd chance to our 3 yr old marriage but in return what i got was only abuse both mentall nd physical . .my daughter's face was scared seeing all this but that man never cared of it... .he just took my sign on those doc nd warned me that in some time he will snatch my daughter from me too .nd tomrw is the day of custody, due to his contacts i never got a lawyer nd now i have lost all my hopes. .i cant see my amaira going away frm me . .she was the only sole reason for my existence nd now she will too leave . .. .

In this whole weak in sleepless nights the only thing i could do was to blamemyself for accepting this forced marriage by my parents . ..
I never wanted to exist in this relationship with a stranger but one day when we both were drunk . .we took our relation to the next stage becz of which i got a reason to survive in this marriage ie amaira. .
I never loved abhay, nor he loved me but amaira made our relation to survive for 3 yrs. .

In these 3 yrs we never had that husband wife relationship but due to amaira we still had talks which a mother nd father do for their child.
Anyways. .wats the use of remembering all this.. Everything have ended now !
As i opened my eyes nd took a step to jump, i heard cries of amaira first i thought that its just my love for her which is stopping but when the cries got louder nd someone making her calm reached my ears i turned nd their i saw my love amaira in the arms of a guy who was neither a stranger nor a friend. .."are u sure u wanna take dis step nd leave ur daughter like this, in the hands of a man who just treats her like a trophy which he want to win tmrw"he shouted , he was true but wat can i do to save her. ."wats the use to discuss it now, idnt have anyone in my support , not even my family ". .i shouted back with tears in my eyes nd turned again to jump but his words again stopped me " its ur mis conception nisha, iam wid u " i turned with hopes nd confusion both brimming in my eyes.. "wat do u mean kabir, hw can u help me nd btw why will u do , afterall u r a friend, oops best friend of abhay" i asked looking in his eyes

Kabirs pov
"Becz i.. I. .knw hw much u love amaira nd as i lawyer i only take side of wats right" i answered back not breaking the eyelock . .i never dared to say hw much i love her nd so cant let her go like this but this was nt the right moment to confess

Nishas pov
I could see nd feel from his eyes that he really mean wat he said nd so i took my steps back nd went to him to take my daughter who was still crying, i calmed her down nd silently went to the hall wid him. .i dnt knw why i believed him but my heart said to just put all my efforts in the last hope given by kabir to save my daughter from that cruel man who never loved her like a father nd considered her a burden. .he just wanted to ruin me completely nd so he wanted to win the custody . .!
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Kabir and nisha settled down on opposite sofas after making amaira sleep in her craddle. .
"So wat did u say at terrace? "
"I said that i will be your lawyer nd help u in getting ur daughter back"
"But why do u want to help me , u are not even my friend "her words pricked kabirs heart
" I told u before too that i support wat is right! Nd wat abhay have done was nt at all right , i just hate him for doing this to "
"To me? " she asked confused
"I i mean, .. To amaira" he tried to cover up
" okay ! So wat is the probabilty that i will win this custody?becoz as u knw. ."
"That abhay has many contacts and he can do anything to win the custody but i will not let him do that , law never supports the wrong " he cuts her off while nishas confidence nd hope boosted up a little
"See icant live without my daughter , do watever u want but plz save her " tears welled up in her eyes which kabir cant bear nd so said
"Just trust me , i will not let anything happen to amaira, she will remain with u only" he assured her while she nodded .
"Thankyou ! " she said getting up
"Needless " he answered before taking his steps towards the exit door
"Kabir" she stopped him nd he turned
"Friends? " she asked forwading her hand while his heart danced hearing that word from her nd without a second thought he shook hands "friends forever" he replied nd went

The next day arrived
It was a big day obviously. .it was the day which will decide the existence of nisha
Kabir came to pick them up nd they headed towards the court . .nisha had a blank expression while kabir was fully focussed. .. Suddenly nisha broke the silence

"Kabir kal raat ko maine tumhe apni or abhay ki marriage ka pura sach bta diya tha , tum jaan chuke ho ki inn 3 saalon mei maine kya kuch jhela h sirf apni beti ke liye. .maine toh jeena chod diya tha bas amaira ko dekhke muje ek jeene ka maksat mil gya.. Agar ab meri beti bi mujse door hogy na toh i will. ." kabir hushed her by holding her hand , his touch was comforting.. He made some round patterns with his thumb on the back of her hand which was soothing. .when she looked at him he immediately jerked it away nd looked outside the window while nisha closed her eyes praying silently with amaira in her lap

Finally they reached court. .
Abhay was outside discussing some details with his lawyer when nisha nd kabir along with amaira came their. .both saw each other angrily. .. Abhay tried to get near amaira but kabir came in between .. "See you in the court" nd he went inside wid nisha nd amaira while abhay glared at them with red eyes

In the courtroom, the proceedings began wid amaira being in nishas arms nd abhay staring at them angrily
Abhays lawyer gave reasons that he is financially stable nd can take care of her more than nisha as she doesnt have any support of family or job.. He was just stating reasons of financial stablilty nd kabir was listening to it very interestingly . .which shocked as well as angered nisha. .. When abhays lawyer felt shortage of reasons nd felt weird that kabir didnt intrupted him . .he started fumbling. .nd thats when kabir spoke up

"Ok are u done? " abhays lawyer nodded
"So my lord .. I agree wid mr. Khanna that abhay is financially stable. ." it shocked nisha while abhay smirked
"But. .is he mentally stable? "
"Wat r u saying mr. Kabir? " abhays lawyer spoke up
"Mr khanna, aapne bol liya na ab muje bolne dijiye"
"So my lord, i agree ki abhay amaira ko vo sab kuch de sakta h jo shayad nisha na de paay par jo pyaar unhone apni 2 saal ki bachi ko aaj tak nahi diya ab kya gurantee hai ki vo uski custody ke baad use denge"
"2 saalon mei inhone kam se kam 10 tour kiye h nd acc to it yeh kuch mahino tak toh gayab hi rehte the"
"Inhone aajtak apni biwi ko theek se treat tak nhi kiya. .he used to abuse her badly nd then he decided to divorce her becz of an affair wid a foreign girl" he almost shouted
"Kya aisi environment mei vo 2 saal ki bachi safe rahegi? "
"Jo aadmi baap ka pyaar nhi de paya kya vo ek maa ki kami ko pura kar payga?

Nisha was shocked at the revelation of affair. .her eyes welled up wid tears. .but she wiped them off when kabir looked at her . .
The proceedings continued with kabir stating all valid reasons nd his behaviour towards nisha and amaira , hearing all this abhays face got covered with sweat . .

"In the end i would just like to say that my lord , usually custody of a child below 5 yrs is granted to the mother , so acc to law as well as in the case of providing safe environment , miss. Nisha should get amaira's custody " with this he sat on his seat nd assured nisha through his eyes while she nodded ..

After some 10 mins
"After hearing both the sides, the court have decided to grant the custody of amaira to miss. Nisha gangwal untill the child attains tender age of deciding with whom she wants to live"
Nisha's happiness knew no bounds she tightly hugged amaira while kabir's happiness got doubled seeing her
After some formalities when nisha was heading towards the car abhay came their nd tried to harm nisha when kabir saved her by coming at right time . ..

In the car
Nisha thanked kabir many a times for saving the reason of her existence.. Tears of happiness were not stopping nd she kissed amaira again nd again .. Amaira too chuckled nd smiled as if she knew wat is happening

They reached home nd as they reached the main gate they saw that their was a lock nd some bags were also their
Kabir nd nisha were confused nd kabir took sleeping alia from her arms so that she can open the lock . .but to her surprise the key didnt fitted the lock ..
"Miss. Nisha yeh lock ni khulega" they turned nd found abhay their with a girl. .
Nisha looked at them shocked
"Shayad tum bhool chuki ho ki hmara divorce ho chuka hai or yeh ghar mera hai, so ab tumhara yahan koi kaam ni h, yeh rahe tumhare bags{he pointed towards the bags} nd get lost". .he shouted the last sentence nd pushed her . .she was going to fall when kabir holded her by her shoulders nd shot an angry look at him , abhay smirked nd moved towards the girl handing over the keys to her
They were opening the lock while nisha's eyes welled up wid tears.. Abhay closed the door wid a thud which broke nisha's trance , she looked at kabir who gave amaira to her nd went to pick up the bags .

"Kabir yeh tum kya kar rhe ho"
"Tumhari madad" he said calling the driver to put the bags in the car
In the car
"Thanks kabir for the help aisa karo tum hume kisi dharamshala mei chod do " she said with breaking voice
Kabir didnt said anything, nisha looked outside the window, her tears have dried up but her heart was still crying
The car stopped nd nisha stepped out , she looked around
"Kabir yahan pe toh koi dharamshala nhi hai"
"Kisne kha tum dharamshala mei rahogi , tum mere ghar pe rahogi, mere saath" he said standing beside her nd pointing towards a bunglow
"WHAT? Kabir tumhe samajh bi aa rha hai wat r u saying"
"Han i very well knw wat iam saying but tumhe pta h ki tum kya keh rhi ho , 2 saal ki bachi ke saath tum ek dharamshala mei rahogi? Are u out of ur mind"
"Par how can i live wid u , i barely knw u"
" mai tumhe hamesha ke liye yahan rehne ke liye ni keh rha, its just that jab tak tumhe koi job ni mil jaati or financially stable ni ho jaati , tab tak bas"
"Par kabir. "
"Par var kuch ni tum or amaira yahi rahogi thats final" nd he headed towards the house taking amaira in his hands
Nisha didnt knew wat to ans as he was also right , living in a dharamshala is quite risky for amaira nd somewhere her heart too agreed to this
Also becz kabir have helped her in the most difficult time when everybody left her nd above that he was a gud human both by heart nd by nature as much as she knew when he used to visit their house to meet abhay nd today too he proved it

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nisha's pov:

Its been 3 months me & my princess Amaira are living with Kabir. Actually not my princess...I should say Kabir's princess. In these months Amaira has come pretty close to Kabir. Kabir luvs her as if she is his own daughter...wait Nisha...what r u thinking?? Amaira Kabir's daughter?? How can even I think that?? I can't think like this...I can't...I can't...I can't... but I really dunno how will Amaira live without Kabir when we will shift to our new flat...
Yes our new flat...finally I have got a job 2 months back n I have already bought a new flat for me n Amaira. Afterall we can't live with Kabir for our whole life. Now he lives alone but someday he'll obviously get married n then...urrgghh...I cant understand y it hurt so much whenever I think about Kabir's marriage...his own family...no no no Nisha u have to control urself...u cant ruin his life just bcoz u luv him...LUV...yes I luv him...I luv him so damn much...but I have to control my feelings...n I have to talk to him asap about the new flat...yes I have to...U can do it Nisha...u can...
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Nisha was thinking all this when suddenly Amaira started crying after she got up in the morning. It was a fine Sunday morning. Nisha took Amaira in her arms n started to pat her back to calm her down. When suddenly there was a knock on the door. Nisha very well knew who was it.

"Common Nisha...aaj Kabir ko new flat main shift hone k bare main batana hai tujhe." thinking this Nisha went to open the door. As soon as she opened the door Kabir came in n calmly whispered, "Hey princess."

As soon as Amaira heard Kabir's voice she stopped crying n started throwing her hands towards Kabir. Kabir immediately took her in his arms.

"Good morning princess." Kabir wished her n gave a peck on her chubby cheeks.
"Good Morning Nisha...tum fresh ho jao...tab tak main hu princess k paas...maine maid ko already bol dia hai breakfast banane ko." kabir said with a smile.

"Ok Kabir...breakfast k baad mujhe tumse kuch zaroori baat karni hai." said Nisha nervously.

"Ohk cool...tum fresh toh ho jao pehle." kabir said while Amaira started making faces as Kabir was only talking to her mother.

"Sholly my princess. Abhi mera pura attention tumpe. Khush??" kabir talked to Amaira in a childish way n then poke her nose making Amaira laugh.

"Pata nhi Kabir kaise react karega." Nisha thought n went to the washroom.

After the breakfast Kabir was bzy playing with Amaira in his room as every Sunday was always dedicated to only his princess. When Nisha came in.

"Kab...Kabirr...mujhe kuch baat karni thi tumse." Nisha was hell nervous n as well as sad.

"Nisha...idhar ao...betho yaha...itna nervous kyu ho rahi ho??" kabir asked confused.

Nisha sat in front of Kabir n took a deep breath.
"Kabir...I ...I have bought a new flat n withing 2-3 days I'm shifting there with Amaira." Nisha said in one go.

Kabir was numb.
"New flat?? Tum aur princess vaha shift?? How...how is that possible?? How will I live without princess n..." Kabir stopped in between n his eyes started to get teary.

"Kabir isme itna shocked hone vali kya baat hai? Main aur Amaira zindagi bhar toh tumhare sath nhi reh sakte. Hum tumhare kon lagte hai akhir?? Kii nhi...u helped us alot Kabir n thank u so much for that. But now hume new flat main shift ho jana chahiye...Amaira ki baby sitter ko bhi maine keh dia hai k abse usse new flat main ana hai...maine sara intezaam bhi kar lia hai... bas 2-3 din ki hi baat hai then hum chale jaenge... aur tum..." Nisha stooped in between n looked at Kabir n what she saw broke her heart into thousand pieces.
Kabir was crying n he was looking at her with hurt n pain in his eyes. There was some more feelings but Nisha ignored them.

"Nisha...isit ur final decision?" Kabir asked n wiped his tears.

"Yes...yes its my final decision Kabir." Nisha said controlling her tears.

"Ohk then fine. U can do whatever u want...its ur life...Amaira is ur daughter...u can take any decision. Who am I to say anything??" Kabir said with hurt n pain in his voice.

Then he got up n started to leave from there when Amaira started crying n started to throw her hands towards Kabir indicating him that she wants to go in his arms.

Kabir was just going to take Amaira in his arms n stopped when he remembered Nisha's words.

"Apni beti ko sambhalo Nisha. Ab usse mere bina rehne ki adaat jo daalni padegi." Kabir said n left the room crying.

Nisha took Amaira in her arms n said, "Sorry princess...mumma took away ur happiness from u...I'm sorry...I'm so sorry." n then Nisha staryed crying.

As Nisha said within 2 days she shifted to her new flat with Amaira. In these 2 days Kabir did not even talked to her n when Nisha was at home he did not even come to Amaira. But Nisha very well knew that these 2 days Kabir had spent alot if time with his princess when Nisha was at office. Nisha was feeling guily for whatever she had done but she felt helpless.

On the other hand bcoz of all this if their was someone who suffered the most...was Amaira. Her mumma was with her but still she was feeling alone without Kabir's luv. She was not able to understand that where Kabir had disappeared.

It was not even 1 week they had shift to their new flat, Amaira got ill. She has 102 fever. Nisha was feeling helpless, feeling all alone. The doctor came n she gave medicines n said Nisha to take care of Amaira. She also said that Amaira had fallen ill bcoz she was not happy.

Nisha was sitting beside Amaira who was sleeping bcoz of the medicine's effect, when Amaira's baby sitter came there.

"Umm Nisha mam...kya main ghar ja sakti hu??"

"Oh...ya ya sure Aarzoo...u helped me alot today. Thank u so much."

"Ohk by mam...n take care of Amu. Tomorrow morning I will come early."

"Ohk thanx again...bye." said Nisha n locked the main door.

"Sorry mam...I dont know main ye sahi kar rhi hu ya galat...but Kabir sir ne mujhe keh dia tha k kabhi bhi koi bhi problem ho main unko bata du...thats y main unko call karke sab batane vali hu...I hope aap gussa na karo." thought Aarzoo n then she called Kabir n told him everything what happened today.

At night at 1
The doorbell rang. .nisha with sleepy eyes opened the door... Nd was shocked to see kabir whose eyes were red nd was looking restless
N:kabir tum yahan itni raat ko
Kabir didnt let her continue nd barged into the house pushing her aside. .
He rushed into amairas room nd sat beside her placing his hand on her head to check the fever , he calmed a bit as her fever looked normal ..
Due to the touch amaira woke up nd her face lighted immediately with a 1000 watt smile seeing him .she started gigling nd touched his fingers.. He smiled nd took her in his arms nd hugged her tightly.Tears which he had holded finally escaped nd he started storking her back calmy while amaira recirprocated the love he was showering with her cute laughs . ..
Nisha stood at the door nd adored the two.. From the time they had shifted . .she soo missed amairas smile nd giggles. .kabir was also not in the city so he too didnt visisted her nd it was the only reason why she have not called him in this situation ... This thought broke her trance
"Hw he came here if he was nt in the city or ise kaise pta chala ki amiara bimaar h"
SHe stepped towards kabir who was making amaira sleep by stoking his hand on her head..

Nisha placed her hand on his shoulder but he immediately jerked it away shocking her .. .nisha was about to say something when he signalled her through his hand to stay quite.. Nishas eyes got teary seeing anger nd hatred in his eyes for her.. ..

Amaira slept peacefully nd after
placing a soft kiss on her forehead "princess i will be back tmrw". .he stood up to go. ..
Nisha stopped him in the mid by holding his arm. ." kabir why are u so angry with me ? "
Kabir angrily loosened her grip nd again started to go .. But this time nisha came in between
"Kabir i want the ans, what have i done that hatred is dripping from your eyes for me "
Kabir shot an angry look to her
"Nisha get aside i dont wanna talk to u at all.. Nor right now niether in the future"he said pointing sternly at her nd as he stepped forward nisha hugged him tight

" kabir plz. . plz.. dnt do this to me. Are you angry becz i didnt told u abt princess's health but kabir u were not in the city or mai ni chahti thi ki hum tumhari life mei kisi bi tarah ki interfernce bane .. U have already done so much to us .. i didnt wanted ki ab humari vajah se tumhari life ya career mei orr problm ho... Im sorry if i hurted u .. But plz dnt hate me.. Plz.. I dnt have anyone in my life except fr u nd princess plz... "She cried in his arms but this time her cries didnt melted him infact her words pricked his hard more nd raised the level of his anger . .he detatched her from him nd holded her by her shoulder.

"Kyu na karu mai aisa nisha. .. Tum muje ek call kar deti . .mai bhaga chala ata princess ke liye..
Par tumne toh muje iske layak samjha hi ni .. Tumne toh kabi muje apna frnd mana hi ni dammit. ..
Thnks to Arzoo jo usne muje sahi time par call karke bta diya. .varna muje toh kabi pta hi ni chalta. .par Nisha tum meri ek baat ache se samjh lo ki tum princess ki maa ho toh iska matlab yeh ni ki jo chaho karogi samjhi?..mai princess se bht pyaar karta hu or agar aisa hi chalta raha na toh yeh na ho ki mai ... " he stopped .. "Bolo kabir chup kyu hogy .. Say watever u want to say im listening". .she said with breaking voice .. Tears were not stopping.. .

Pain was both inside nd outside.. Inside as kabirs harsh words were stabbing her heart nd outside due to the tight hold of him
On her shoulder

"I just hate u nisha... I hate u for doing this to princess.. .to me. .ur behaviour have hurted me a lot today. .. I didnt expected this from u . ".. He left her shoulders.. From heart he didnt meant these words which were shooting from his mouth endlessly but at this moment he just didnt cared abt her or his feelings for her. All he could see was nisha's fault... Nd it was necessary to make nisha realise that now he is too a part of her life due to amaira
Nisha stood their like a statue. ." i hate u nisha" ringed in her mind again nd again ... Her face expressions turned from emotional to angry one. "how could you say this". .

Nishas pov
I turned him with all my force which was left in me nd pinned him to the door slamming my glossy lips on his warm ones , i could feel his shocked state through his increasing breath but in just a mili seconds he turned me nd now i was trapped b/w him nd the door.. . he almost pressed his hard body against mine , nd i could feel myself shaking.. My arms reached up nd tangled around his thick , strong neck for support while his hands started to move down my back . .the kiss was revealing his agression while i was trying hard to match his pace, his tongue tracing my bottom lip begging for me to open my mouth.. . I opened it slightly nd felt his tongue on mine.. Our tongues mingling nd tasting the sweetness of each other. .i was the one to start but he became the dominant. .. The kiss became more harder nd intense, our lips moving in perfect sync and becoming more passionate by the second.. .it was like he had put all his pain nd annoyance in this kiss nd i deserve this.. .after sucking nd nibbling over my lips, the kiss turned sloppy., slow and soft, comforting in ways that words would never be. His hands now rested below my ear, nd thumb caressing my cheek as our breaths mingled. .. It looked like his pain was subsidising. . In moments the soft caress has become more firm nd he was just savouring my lips ...

But now my knees were giving up ... My heart beats were increasing fierlessly... My hold got tighter around his neck due to which he realised my state nd broke apart , i kept my forehead against his trying to get hold of my breath nd nerves which were still flushing with heat , my eyes were still closed with fear. .fear of seeing his face. .his reaction.. .the kiss was enough to reveal how much he love me but will he still love me after wat i did today..nd as soon as a tear escaped through my eyes, he pulled me in a bone crushing hug, wrapping his arms around my shoulder nd stroked my arms gently, he then started caressing my hair nd placed his head on the crook of my neck

His warm gesture made me want forgiveness even more. .. So the words that could only escape through my mouth was apology nd confession.. "Im sorry kabir. .i love u .i love u kabir. .plz dnt leave me alone. .plz. .scold me hw much u want.. I wont stop u. .. but dnt stop talking to me. .plz..from the time u have come into my life. .all the mess have gone from my life, i was just a lifeless soul who was breathing just for amaira but ur endless love nd care towards us have given me a new life which is full of affection, Ur love for amaira have transformed into my love for u .. Ur princess love u . .i love u . .plz forgive me.. .plz".. Nd the tank of tears got broken again.. ..

Kabirs pov
Hearing her confession i just couldnt explain what i felt. .from 3 years i waited for this nd i almost lost all my hopes after what happened today... I thought that she dnt even consider me a part of her life...But i was wrong . .the kiss . .the confession. .It seemed like if iam transferred from a nightmare to a fairy tale but then i felt her trembling body ,i tightened my hold nd was letting the happiness soak into my bones nd heart. ..
I hushed her by stroking her back nd slowly her sobs subsidised. .

Then Placing a soft wet kiss on her neck i replied "i love u 2 nisha. .i love u 2.. Jo hua so hua .. Let us just live in this moment. ."as i said , i could feel her smile against my chest..
End pov

Kabir slowly breaks the hug nd cups her face..nisha opened her eyes nd looked in his dark brown orbs.. ." shhh bohat hogya rona dhona.. Give me a smile". .. Nisha smiled but blushed too remembering what she did some moments ago. .. She didnt thought that she would confess her feelings like this
"Nisha ..u knw wat .. I fell in love wid u from the moment i saw u ..when i used to see u crying.. I thought that u r not happy with abhay but .when amaira was born . .my all hopes got shattered but 3 months ago they arised again.. I was going to lose u today too but its our fate of love. .it happens when it have to. .nd iam soo happy that it did"
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nisha was shocked at this relevation . .but more than that. .she was overwhelmed that she got her love. .now she would get a perfect family in which their would be only love nd no sacrifice.
Kabir again pulled her in hug.. "So will u marry me? ". ." ofcourse is that a ques to ask" nd they giggled
Their moment got broken due to the cries of amaira. .. They broke the hug unwantedly
"Yeh lo shaadi hui ni ki beti ki interfernce shuru.. Jao sambhalo apni beti ko "nisha said
" oye meri princess ko kuch matt kahiyo samjhi.. "nd he went towards her taking her in his arms while amaira giggled
" YA YA sure... Mai coffee bnakar laay". .nisha was abt to go but stopped hearing "mumma". .she turned with moist eyes nd saw amaira patting beside as if asking her to sit. She sat beside her " kabir isne abi kya kaha? ". .she asked over excitedly " han nisha u heard it right . .she said her first word".. He said holding her hand. .. "Papa".. Amaira said pointing towards kabir. .. Nibir looked at each other happily nd kissed her cheeks from both side whie amaira giggled due to the tickling sensation

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Edited by tanya119 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wonderful os Tanya wonderful 👏 👏 👏
Loved every bit of it ❤️
Nibir relation was very well described 👏
Amira is so so cute 😳 😳 love her
And nibir confession was awesome 😃 😳
Edited by Anmol333 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely OS Tanya!
Amaira is such a cutie!
Kabir supporting Nisha throughout and helping her gain financial stability was nice.👍🏼
The confession and the last scene between the trio was so cute!
Very nice OS,
Do write more. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome... amaira and kabir's bond was lovely and the way nisha confessed her feelings to kabir was beautiful... 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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it was awesome one of the best actually
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful os diii.. Thank you so very much for d pm.. I loved it.. Best story ever read
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice os tanu... awesome concept... just a little piece of advice make spaces or some kind of barrier btw POV's and third point of view... it will be easier to read 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb os 👏
Totally loved it
Do write more
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb os...
Kabir is very caring...
Amaira...
Thanks for do pm...

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